SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15

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_Sapphire_

@_Sapphire_

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Just wonderful! Right thanks to you I am off to Ishra fantasy land again. Bye see you again when I wake up from my dreamworld nonsense. 😆

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Since I can't say it was sweet 😆 I have to second Sai. Such a topic is really difficult to write given its nature, and even more difficult to write in such a classy manner, which you do so well! Such a good job, Uzma!! I especially liked the ending. Now that was super sweet. 😊😉

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

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Uz just when I think this cannot get hotter and better it does 😳

And whoa does it ever... I love how you have written this part its sexy, its erotic and yet... its so aesthetically written. You know it so easy to go overt in scenarios like these but you have kept them so refined here and yet so passionate, so in the moment its beautiful and I cant wait already for the next bit already 😊

Beautiful job my friend, simply amazing 👏👏

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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drooler

@drooler

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

loved the update

I would like to thank you for writing this SS and nikki _ titli for giving her this punishment

please continue soon

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_Sapphire_

@_Sapphire_

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: drooler
loved the update
I would like to thank you for writing this SS and nikki _ titli for giving her this punishment
please continue soon

Well said! Nikki it's was brilliant punishment that benefit us all 😊 I like your tactic Nikki 😉

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

FINALLY my long over due comment... My health had taken a toll thus was away from IF for 2 days...

Read the 3rd part and YES, you should come with the 4th as well... I have OCD so I hate anything that ends with an odd number...I hope this is a good enough reason for you to come up with the 4th part...😆

First and foremost, all I wanna say is I'm PROUD of you babes... The moment I saw "Agent Provocatuer", I knew where this story was heading too...

The moment Ishu drenched herself externally WET..I was wondering the INTERNAL conditions of them both... I clearly needed to see the Doc and true enough I did...LOL

I LOVED how you BOLDY portrayed Ishu especially in your 3rd part...

Women NEED it, WANT it as much as Men do...I guess that statement was justified well...

I LOVED how you gave IMPORTANCE to alot of minor details here and there which completed ISHRA's Unison...

P.S. Though the PIPE was subtle, I got the HINT honey...😉

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: pomegranate
Agent provocateur has amazing lingerie, Raman has good taste.😳
really good part, I was sweating throughout it.

hehe another one person hit by KK ka asar lol.. glad you liked it and yes AP has some hot stuff😳 Btw whats your name?😊

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omggg am LIKE this nw...readin ur part 3..

totally happy n CONTENT...

most most sizzling super duper hottest part this ws...🤪

i BLESS MYSELF for tht moment where i gave u this punishment..😆😆..its only coz of tht today i am able to read this from u...🤪🤪🤪

Hai by using that srk gif you've made me a very happy girl😃 I'm glad and relieved that it met with your expectations 😆🤗

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sai14
Uz, i know i said it before but i am gonna say it again :P This SS is so hot and romantic and yet it is just so graceful. It has so much passion in it but you portray it in a beautiful way. Hats off to your writing skills 😃
i love how you mentioned that Raman sleeps peaceful now. Ishita is his peace. love it.

and yes i want part 4 😛

Thanks Sai- means a lot coming from you. Yeah with the 'action' I didn't want to lose focus that yes this is about the physical aspect but its because they are so entwined with each other emotionally that this is an extension of those feelings.

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Good Lord Girl...

I shouldnt have read this when I am trying to sleep:)
it was tastefully written, as much as one could write about such a premise. So, good job on that :)

Gnite Uz, if u r able to sleep, that is :)

I should have a new disclaimer - not to be read if you want to fall asleep and dream about the fairies😆

Thanks for saying it was tastefully written 😳