SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: happenstance

^^ im offended if you found it sweet🤣🤣

Ok are you girls sure? I'm going to unleash part 3🤣



just POST IT damn it...😡😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Isma_A

OMG, Uzma. 😳😳 Part 2: Well written and so sweet! 😳


Isma, SWEET?.. you are so cute 😛
Edited by sai14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
uz & isma chk my two comments for u two in pg 31 of my KK post
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Agent provocateur has amazing lingerie, Raman has good taste.😳
really good part, I was sweating throughout it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Hey everyone this is dedicated to my KK family- i have no idea what you have started here but well i just feel like i need to bring this to proper conclusion, so I'm sorry but theres going to be a final part to come after this..please let me know your thoughts as its kinda unchartered territory for me

As expected with anything i write its pretty short, but if you read to the end of this part you will get why i stopped where i did..

Part 3...


He awakens from his deep slumber. As he turns to his side he sees that even in her sleep she is smiling. A smile that he has not been privy to before tonight. She looks at complete peace. He begins to stroke her hair. His eyes fall on her lips once more and though she is sleeping he can't help but to caress her lips with his.

She stirs, he hadn't intentionally wanted to wake her but now that she is stirring..he wants her again. Her eyes open to her husband looking intently into her eyes. She sees a reflection of unwavering love, devotion and respect. She also sees something else. Something she had she truly only been acquainted with a few hours ago. She is in the mood to oblige.

She slowly begins to shift herself downward and starts kissing him at his navel and playfully running her fingers below. Within moments he has her pinned down and her asking for a release. He begins to plant a trail of kisses, the culmination of which leads her gasping for air. Their bodies are in union and they move seamlessly as one. Neither want to stop as they continue to explore each other over and over.

He falls by her side again and takes her into his embrace. He can feel the exhilaration that they both feel when they touch. She is nuzzling into his ear and her arms are in his hair again. This is bliss. She could lie like this forever.She smiles at him, he is beautiful to her, and he never ceases to amaze her. She goes to kiss him once more. Her kisses become more urgent and she readies herself again.

Somewhere in the scattered clothing on the floor, they hear his mobile phone continuously ring. He begins to move away but his lips remain on hers. "Kahan jaa raho hain aap" it is more a plea than a question. Tonight she has shed all her inhibitions and he is falling for ever all over again and the thirst is undeniable . "Kahin bhi nahi" He assures her and allows her to take him.

She doesn't know how long they have been asleep but the rays of sunlight emerging through the window arouse her. His arm is wrapped around her waist and their legs entangled. She wants to leave him in this sweet intoxicated state but she is mindful of the time. She tries to turn to reach her phone but he seems to sense the movement even though he is asleep and tightens his grip around her waist. She realises that there is no way that he will let her go. in the same way she had not let him leave her side a short while before.

She has watched over him as he has slept for a while now. Initially sleep was an elusive concept for him. However, recently she had noticed that he was sleeping better and tossing and turning less. It heartened her to see this change. In the early hours of this beautiful morning, her husband was contently sleeping and she was the reason.

Even though she and he wanted this night to never end, she knew she had to wake him. 'Raman', he did not stir in the slightest. She whispered him into his ear again and lightly stroked his ear. He awoke abruptly looking so sleepy she just wanted to kiss him back to sleep again but she didn't. "Raman, hamein kaam pe jaana hai ,please mujhe uttan ne do". He grinned at her "Sorry Ishita mein tume akele kahein bhi nahi jaana de sakta".

"Let me go shower Raman please" she kissed him lightly on his forehead and made another feeble
attempt to leave. This time he does not stop her, instead he holds onto her hand and follows her...


Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
omggg am LIKE this nw...readin ur part 3..



totally happy n CONTENT...

most most sizzling super duper hottest part this ws...🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪


i BLESS MYSELF for tht moment where i gave u this punishment..😆😆..its only coz of tht today i am able to read this from u...🤪🤪🤪
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Uz, i know i said it before but i am gonna say it again :P This SS is so hot and romantic and yet it is just so graceful. It has so much passion in it but you portray it in a beautiful way. Hats off to your writing skills 😃
i love how you mentioned that Raman sleeps peaceful now. Ishita is his peace. love it.

and yes i want part 4 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

OMG OMG OMG !! Uz have I told you that you are a PRO?? Nahi ... then let me tell you ... you are a PRO dude !! 👏👏👏👏👏

If part 2 was SULTRY... part 3 was SULTRIER !!!! .. and the part of both being able to sleep content with peace was well placed and written ...gave it a romantic touch too 😊
And you know the best part about your writing .. there is passion... there is thirst ...there is love...there is hotness... but in no way is it cheap or vulgar .. and that is due to you and your amazing writing talent 👏👏
Btw I am reading this before going to sleep. 🤪
Thank you so much for the dedication
Also .. I want to thank Nikki dil se for giving you this task/punishment 😃🤪😆
looking forward to part 4 😛
Edited by PreciousPri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Good Lord Girl...

I shouldnt have read this when I am trying to sleep:)
it was tastefully written, as much as one could write about such a premise. So, good job on that :)

Gnite Uz, if u r able to sleep, that is :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
this was...something.
I'm very impressed with how gracefully you wrote this given the subject matter, it takes a lot to write this type of scene without including graphic details. you did it very beautifully, while still keeping it very sexy. this chapter was more poignant then the previous two as well, which added a nice romantic element to it.

I'm assuming they have an en suite bathroom, it makes things much easier in moments like this.
Edited by pomegranate - 11 years ago

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