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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

mind blowingly awesome :)


Thanks Swati for your sweet comment. Also thanks for always reading and liking my work😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok guys so this is the fourth and final part of this SS- thanks for all the comments and appreciation. Given me the khimat to keep on writing and finish this.. so this is for you all (and the KKG's of course)
And yes I believe this is slightly longer than the previous parts😳 oh and theres a bit more dialogue too which I suck at so forgive me.


Part 4...



He taps gently on the shower screen, despite the gushing water she hears.

He is asking if the water is too cold for her. She pauses before answers as she knows what he really is asking. This is all so new to her but she can't say no to him and she doesn't want to. He has awakened her in a completely different way. She is realising how incomplete she really was until last night. She is now his in every sense of the word. He had her heart a long while ago. Initially she foolishly had fought tooth and nail with herself but to no avail. She is forever change, her love for him is completely embodied within all of her now.

He is waiting patiently, as patiently as he can.Now that they have become entwined completely he knows it and has pushed her to depths that perhaps she never knew possible. He knows that she isn't teasing him or playing with him right now and he is content in this knowing this. Well as knowing as possible, because within seconds he feels her hands around his neck once more . Under the cold water her soft kisses warm him to his core. He reciprocates by sweeping up her hair and finding his way behind her ear where he teases her with his tongue.

They remain under the water for what seems like an endless moment, one that neither wants to accept has to come to an end.As his arm brushes her waist he realises she is shivering. He attempts to entangle himself from her sweet embrace but she doesn't let up. He pushes her up against the wall and begins to caress her shoulders. He cares for her far too much to be this selfish. In one swift motion he switches off the shower and wraps a towel around her. He then holds her close to him caressing her with the towel.They are wrapped in each other's arms once more.

"Ishu, you would have caught a cold if we had stayed under the water a minute longer" he whispers into her ear. She is quiet but he knows her answer. Their love for one another knows no bounds, they are selfless and giving to each other. They will always be.

He leads her out and into the en suite dressing room and seats her down. She has a slight hue of a blush on her cheeks. In the light of the morning it is just him and her. They are both very aware of this undeniable truth.

He kneels down and takes her face in his hands. He then tenderly kisses her on her forehead. Jaan are you ok he asks? Tears start to fall from her eyes and she begins to nod. Words fail her again but she knows he understands. He hugs her and her feelings manifest into more tears. He lets her cry in his arms and in that moment he knows that she and him are bound in a bond sacred to only the two of them.

After a few minutes she realises that he is not dressed and his hair soaking. She tuts, she knows how easily he too will get a cold. She walks to the side and picks up two towels. He is still kneeling, she takes him up in her arms and begins to reach up to his hair and begins to dry it with the towel. He starts shaking his head around, and droplets shower them both. They look at each other and grin-both at moment reminiscing of what happened last night. She reluctantly takes the other towel and begins to wrap it around his waist. Each movement is deliberate and she is painstakingly taking her time, her fingers brushing against his back, waist and navel. His body reacts to each touch and as much as he wants her to stop, he wants her to continue too. As she goes to tie the towel around him, he attempts to stop her by placing his hand around her waist. He is now holding her tight and she sees a flash of desire in his eyes but he manages to exude the sweetest smile at the same time. She literally goes weak at her knees. In the bare sunlight and under the darkest skies this man is in her soul. he lives within her and she within him.

"Ishita I have something for you.." He tells her tenderly. She distinctly looks towards the bedroom where the discarded gift of last night lies. He sees a glint of mischievousness in her eyes. The look he became intimate with last night. He swiftly returns to the bedroom and comes back with another bag.

To her surprise, he removes a deep sea green kurta and jeans from the bag. However he does have another AP bag which he dangles teasingly in front of her- she unsuccessfully tries to take it from him. He shakes his head no and she knows she won't win this battle. Neither does she wish to.

Without a moments hesitation she turns her back to him and the towel drops to the floor. He takes the garment in his hands and begins to fiddle with the clasp. The metal clasp sends a shiver down her and she arches her back. He runs his finger from behind her neck to the base of her spine. She leans back into him for support as she is faltering. He then lifts her legs up off the ground and in one movement she is now adorned in black French lace.

He lifts her arms up and the green kurta is now hugging all the curves on her body. He then buttons her jeans, taking just a moment longer than required as strokes her waist. He takes a step back and takes her all in. She looks ethereal but he is now very much acquainted with another facet of her. How looks can be so deceiving he thinks. He loves that she has the ability to surprise him and he looks o at her in wonderment.

"Kya hua Raman?" She asks. He is blocking the mirror so she can't see herself. Though through the look in his eyes she doesn't need to see herself. For the very first time she can see herself in his eyes. His smile reaches the depths of her soul. She feels at one with herself and everything around her.

"There's something missing Ishita" she looks down at herself, confused by what he means. Is it my hair Raman? She asks blushing. "Hmmm nahi I think this is what is missing..." And he brandishes her with a small green box with a white ribbon.

In an instant she is beaming with delight like a kid on their birthday. "Why don't you open it?" He asks her, desperate to know her response. She starts to unravel the ribbon and hesitantly opens the box. She finds a platinum band with two diamonds entwined within the design of the ring. He hears the slight gasp and smiles.

"Would you like me to put it on you?" He too is now beaming. She nods yes. He takes the ring from her hands and places it on a left index finger. He then kisses the finger and places a tender kiss on her lips. She looks down at the ring and then back at him. She plants a chaste kiss on his lips.

"Ok so you are all ready for work and you are going to leave me alone like this"he teases.

"Aapne to kaam pe nahi jaana"she asks? He is silent. "Raman I asked you something" she tries to probe him for answers. "Ishita I took the day off and ummm I also arranged for you to have a day off too" he now starts laughing.She is looking at him all confused. This man never ceases to amaze her and enthrall her.

" if you had made arrangements why on earth did you let me get out of bed" there's a slight hint of annoyance in the tone of her voice and he knows it.

" well we were awake and I wanted to shower and I thought you could give me company" he has a devilish smile on his face and his eyes are piercing through her. He has undone her again, and there's no point in even attempting to reason with herself. Because when he looks at her like that all reason goes out of the window.

" Ok baba teek hai but agar Hum ne kahein jaana nahi to phir why am I all dressed again? She now asks genuinely confused again.

"So I can do this again..." And he begins to advance towards her again his hands on her waist, she knows what this means. So she takes a step forward too. He too knows what this means.



Bonus 😳

...A few lines I also wrote for them

In the bare sunlight and
under the darkest skies
this woman consumes his soul
she lives within him
and he within her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its beautiful n well executed ..
Loved it ,
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter was so freakin sweet that I thought I will get diabetes. Morning after scenes are the best! I like that you toned down the sensuality and focused more on the emotional aspect, because that is important as well.
This was a very beautifully written,and you gave it a well deserved conclusion.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uz, I love it 😃 perfect ending to a perfect OS (even though as you know i don't want it to end but then you don't love me and you wanna add it 😭)

I love that he gifted her a ring. so sweet and adorable.

In the bare sunlight and
under the darkest skies
this woman consumes his soul
she lives within him
and he within her

Love these lines 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
aWNNN SUPERB os !!
Hell romantic !! :D :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay, NOW I can say this was SO sweeet!! 😃 Hawww. Lovely, Uzma! Hats off to you for pulling off such a subject in such an elegant and beautiful manner!!
So, when's the next piece coming? 😎😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
A brilliant ending! Thanks for providing a fourth part, I feel the ending is also justified 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi. I read all the four sections on one go and they were intense! At the same time, the whole piece was written tastefully, finding the balance between erotic and literary. I think pushing yourself put of your comfort zine worked for both you and Ishita 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uzzz...ufff...u BEAT me...in evry manner...in my 5 years of reading so many million stories on diff fav couples of mines..THIS..THIS has to be the most hottest story i hv ever read on any yet it still had its grace...their uncondtiional love for each other,i could feel it in evry update...n this one-BEAT the rest of updates..too too sizzling n epic romantic...am FULLY CONTENT uz...FULLY CONTENT...u passed my test in flying colors though u already knew i had already passed u,yet u completed this...THANK U...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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