SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15 - Page 12

Uz this was gorgeously written, yep it went on a very different tangent than what I had in mind but I love the way you concluded this part and once again beautifully written. 🤗

Ressing Uz... have to catch up on the epi first... then will read and update my comments

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Uz, honey... I kid you not when I say that this was one of the more sensitively handled pieces I have ever read. If you wanted to make your last part appear hot, I dont hesitate to tell you that you failed miserably. At least thats my take away from this update of yours.

The 'morning after' is such a delicate subject to handle, almost as difficult (if not more) than the actual 'night' itself. You have done it so deftly, please do accept my sincerest congratulations on that. I am rambling on with appreciation, frankly because I did not think such a 'deep' and emotional ending was even possible for this story.⭐️

Thats not to say that this update was a pure and innocent 😆 it did have its devilish moments of sinful abandonment, and they were fun to read too 😳

and thanks for the bonus!!! nicely done...👏

and I am PROUD of you for increasing the length of your post this time. seriously, that got to me the most!!! you are taking us seriously now 😛

omg uzz..this was amazing..so hot😳..loved it..esp i lovedthe towel wala part..aye hayee so concerned about each othr 😉...i m imagining aisa kuch agar sach me hame dekhne ko mile with ishra..joke its not at all possible but i m just wondering what would b our halat🤣...itni bold ishu ...more than rkb usko maza aa raha tha..she ws telling him y did he dress her wn he already arranged an off for her..ayye hayeemaza aa gaya ishu is no less😆.. i hv to tell u uz u hv written it extremely well...its reallly difficult to write such type of os so beautifully😆..i enjoyed every part😃..sorry 4 commenting late

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sensualized the song !!
awesome writing
wat more could i say ☺️

dis is sooo HOT uz dii...soo ROMANTIC...LUVD IT...☺️☺️