SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15 - Page 10

Originally posted by: pomegranate

this was...something.

I'm very impressed with how gracefully you wrote this given the subject matter, it takes a lot to write this type of scene without including graphic details. you did it very beautifully, while still keeping it very sexy. this chapter was more poignant then the previous two as well, which added a nice romantic element to it.

I'm assuming they have an en suite bathroom, it makes things much easier in moments like this.

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Just wonderful! Right thanks to you I am off to Ishra fantasy land again. Bye see you again when I wake up from my dreamworld nonsense. 😆

Originally posted by: lourel24

nice

Originally posted by: Isma_A

Since I can't say it was sweet 😆 I have to second Sai. Such a topic is really difficult to write given its nature, and even more difficult to write in such a classy manner, which you do so well! Such a good job, Uzma!! I especially liked the ending. Now that was super sweet. 😊😉

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

OMG OMG OMG !! Uz have I told you that you are a PRO?? Nahi ... then let me tell you ... you are a PRO dude !! 👏

If part 2 was SULTRY... part 3 was SULTRIER !!!! .. and the part of both being able to sleep content with peace was well placed and written ...gave it a romantic touch too 😊

And you know the best part about your writing .. there is passion... there is thirst ...there is love...there is hotness... but in no way is it cheap or vulgar .. and that is due to you and your amazing writing talent 👏👏

Btw I am reading this before going to sleep. 🤪

Thank you so much for the dedication

Also .. I want to thank Nikki dil se for giving you this task/punishment 😃🤪😆

looking forward to part 4 😛

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

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Uz just when I think this cannot get hotter and better it does 😳

And whoa does it ever... I love how you have written this part its sexy, its erotic and yet... its so aesthetically written. You know it so easy to go overt in scenarios like these but you have kept them so refined here and yet so passionate, so in the moment its beautiful and I cant wait already for the next bit already 😊

Beautiful job my friend, simply amazing 👏👏

Originally posted by: drooler

loved the update

I would like to thank you for writing this SS and nikki _ titli for giving her this punishment

please continue soon

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

its beautiful

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Well said! Nikki it's was brilliant punishment that benefit us all 😊 I like your tactic Nikki 😉

Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

FINALLY my long over due comment... My health had taken a toll thus was away from IF for 2 days...

Read the 3rd part and YES, you should come with the 4th as well... I have OCD so I hate anything that ends with an odd number...I hope this is a good enough reason for you to come up with the 4th part...😆

First and foremost, all I wanna say is I'm PROUD of you babes... The moment I saw "Agent Provocatuer", I knew where this story was heading too...

The moment Ishu drenched herself externally WET..I was wondering the INTERNAL conditions of them both... I clearly needed to see the Doc and true enough I did...LOL

I LOVED how you BOLDY portrayed Ishu especially in your 3rd part...

Women NEED it, WANT it as much as Men do...I guess that statement was justified well...

I LOVED how you gave IMPORTANCE to alot of minor details here and there which completed ISHRA's Unison...

P.S. Though the PIPE was subtle, I got the HINT honey...😉