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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hi thank you so much for this reply😊

@bold -😳that is kind of you to say and more its coming up😳

@red - I love the book too😃Hosseini has a way with words and I idolize the man for the way he manages to make even the simplest words mesmerizing so its a huge compliment to me you saying I did justice to the words he used and I felt they suit Raman to the T. That no one looks you for the person you are, everyone just looks at the surface

@blue -☺️thank you

Btw may I pls know your name😳

You can call me Uz
Hosseini is one of my favourite contemporary writers and seeing a quote of his made me smile- so thank you! I love his style writing too it's so simple yet evocative. His books always leave such a mark on me great writer.

Going to go read chapter 2 now 😳 and will edit

Edited by happenstance - 11 years ago

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Loved the second part Aani😃.

You are always good with details and the words just flow through, but what I enjoyed the most here is Raman's recollection of his life with Shagun. Am delighted that you wrote about this (might have missed any other OS/SS where this was detailed but as of now, this is the one which focused on his past life with Shagun in detail).

His life couldn't have turned upside down immediately, after all the guy had 2 kids with Shagun. The small details which he saw but chose to ignore for the happiness of his wife and the people around him is written really well. He was innocent yes, but also a family man and thus chose to do anything and everything for his family. The hurt which he must have felt when Shagun left him despite all of this, must be astounding.

About the show -- I have missed a few initial episodes of YHM and the few snippets they showed of his life with Shagun clearly showed how the man was never valued or respected by Shagun (the kitchen hand burn scene especially tells a lot). The Raman of today clearly sees this difference between Ishita and Shagun in terms of the respect and value he received in each marriage.

Am really sorry to bring up the show in my comment 😳 ... but this track in your latest update is something that I have been curious about in the show as well :)

Can't wait for the next part ⭐️

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armd11

@armd11

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

i mean that was wonderfull each and every emotion word i loved it to the core plzzz continue.

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ARWA

@jojo1986

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON👏

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Nice chapter Aani! But so sly! I didn't even get a clue as to where this is heading😕

This chapter has one question that has been on my mind since I saw the Raman Shagun was married to. Shagun knows she is beautiful and is vain because of it. She is also a very calculating woman. She must have had dreams of getting married to a rich guy who can give her everything she wants and make her happy. And when a person is so beautiful, I don't think it is such a big task to get a well settled guy as I have seen it happen in real life. Then, what on earth made Shagun agree to marry this dorky looking guy?

I think you aptly described Raman's situation in all those years he was married to Shagun as if you were an eyewitness.😃😉

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sudhajo

@sudhajo

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Wonderfully emoted Raman's emotions...very beautifully written. It like watchin YHM all again

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

beautifully written...loved it :) plz upd8 soon :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Yet again a perfect insight to Raman's emotions!!

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Aani you've done a brilliant job in expressing Raman's past...

the show has shown tid bits of it...

but this part has given words to his awful past...

now i can really feel his pain even more proplerly...

thnx 4 writing such stuff...waiting for next part...

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Shona

@SilverGold

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Your welcome! I just can't control my mouth at times, so I can't stay silent for long...but honestly, the way you take out the emotions ans characteristics of each person is amazing...I was bowled over..

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