Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28

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Sunshine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Another good one Aani!

Can't wait for the next one.

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FieryLioness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Aani i was waiting for this chapter since i read ur note where u stated the concept...

my GOD Aani and i can proudly say my fav part 👏👏👏

something i was craving to read and m dying to see in show...

this is what i want...

seriously i don't have words to appreciate ur talent... take a standing ovation from me *imagine m standing now 😉😳"

very emotional and beautifully written... loved it how he felt her pain widout her saying a single word... hats off to u for this idea 👏👏👏

i never bothered much abt Subbu's entry in show as every one wants it as jealousy track for Raman... something m just not interested...

but today i can say yes i want Subbu's entry, and this is the way i want...

to show Ishita is broken too... if not more but equally as Raman...

we have seen bitter past of Raman but Ishita we have yet to see her feelings...

Ishita can feel his pain... i remember after suicide drama.. when Ishu came to know, she said yeh Raman ke sath theek nahi ho raha, he don't deserve this...

wanna see same for Ishita too...

i don't know if m right or not, but it will be grt if before confession we will get to see this...

Raman have seen Ishita's caring side, her politeness and love for all... now time to know what Ishita feels... how her past effect her but still she manages to wear the mask...

Aani thank u sooo much for such an update which can please a reader to that extent...

love u for this🤗

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shalu79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Thanks for PM n this Sunday treat :)

Reserved :)

Once again brilliant Anni

seriously, I am in love with ur this talent of writing Anni.

👏👏👏

regarding this scenario of Subbu.

I too ve wondered many times what will happen if Raman comes face to face with Subbu what will be his reaction or what will Ishu do n read few OSes here too but nothing can match how u ve written here so beautifully.

Like the situation too in which Subbu visited Iyer's place seems realistic.

How Raman was so quick to identify change in Ishu n how he realised her pain was awesome.

At the end, loved how u expressed that Raman realises that both of them wear masks to hide their pain. We time to time ve peeked behind this mask of Raman. Seen n felt his pain.

but i seriously hope one day they we will uncover this mask of Ishu n she bares her soul in front of Raman. Don't know when it will happen, but i am ready to wait for that if they handle this issue with d sensitivity it deserves.

really wish CVs read ur OSes here.

Thank u n a big 🤗 For writing

Will be waiting for ur next update

Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

AWESOME... u write so beautifully yaar.. i had tears in my eyes while reading this part.. nice job yaar.. plz upd8 soon :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

I particularly loved the end part when Raman saw his reflection within Ishita's mask and realised then that she's also a heartbroken soul just like him.

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Aani, you beautifully expressed...

Coming of Subu has a very valid reason now for the show too...how did u time it so well, I guess u started this SS before amma's accident happened...

Ohh I just read in ur author's note , the spoilers gave way to this...i must say very well thought and timed...

this one just Wow , you think so deep...i am enthralled !!!
"The realization that masks are also worn out of selflessness is unsetting to him."

Hands down to ur writing talent👏

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

loved it.The akwardness aroused because of presence of subu was beautifully portrayed. 👏

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Hey Aani!

The next chapter will be the last? I am really curious to see how you are planning to end this.😆

In every post you make, be it a story or just your thoughts on something that happened in the show, I always find something new to learn.

When a person takes on life with a smile, hiding their sorrows and troubles beneath, the world calls it bravery and strength of character. But it is at the end of the day, a mask. I never thought of this. Thank you so much! Your words stimulate my brain.😊 Both Raman and Ishita are wearing masks. Yet, such difference between the two. Raman's mask is obvious to everyone but no one is aware that Ishita too wears one.