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Cvs ko aise idea kyon nahi aate
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isra dailogue was so sweet.really raman" Hai toh, jo control kartha hai usske ko uska dard patha hai, bewakoof"LOL.death sentence.really?lagta hai tumne aapna pura bharas ek hi baar mein me nikal hai shagun pe?
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Thanks all, I was so frustrated with Shagun after last night's episode. the same is manifested in the OS. I really want a happy life of ISHRA. Ashok creating problems in business is also something Raman can handle, but he is a very emotional person. I dont like Shagun playing with his emotion at all. Sorry if it was harsh
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reallyy amazinggg.. lovedd it sooo muchh!!! keepp continuingg.. finally ishita out of danger.. sounds great!!!
eager to read the next update
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Part 10:

Raman was being summoned in the court. Ishu was with him. Adhi is being brought. Patak starts his side of the argument. He brings out the point that his mother had a live in relationship and was not married. He also tells that she is in jail now and this has to be sorted where Adhi will live. The judge calls for Adhi. He is in the trail box. The judge wants to know whom does he wants to be with. Adhi tells the judge that he would like to live with his dad. Ashok thinks he will say Ashok dad, but to everyone's surprise Adhi says Raman Dad.
Raman is overwhelmed to hear dad from Adhi's mouth. He holds Ishitha and tears roll down his eyes. Ishitha is also touched finally Adhi is giving Raman the position of a father to Raman.
The Judge declares the custody of Adhi to Raman and Ishitha. Raman goes to Adhi and wants to thank him for choosing him. Adhi is not talking o him and tells Mihir that he will take the basic necessary stuffs from his home and reach home himself.
Ishitha tries to speak to him, Adhi ignores her as well. Raman is hurt thinking he lost it again. Mihir goes with Adhi to collect his stuffs. Ashok is having some nasty confrontation with Raman. Raman is not responding, he leaves the place with Ishitha.
Ishitha and Raman are decorating the house for Adhi's arrival. Toshi and Ishitha are make food stuffs that Adhi like. All welcome Adhi very happily. Adhi greets his Dada, Dadi, Simmi & Rinky Bhua and Romi. But he is not talking to Raman and Ishitha alone. He goes to his room along with Ruhi. She gives shows him his things. Lot of games, books and cloths have been furnished in the shelves by Raman and Ishitha. But they are very depressed that Adhi is not talking to them. But Ishitha comforts Raman and tells him to give time to Adhi.
Its dinner time and all are happily having dinner and Adhi really likes the food Ishitha prepared for him. He slowly moves Ishitha and pulls her pallu( She is working in the kitchen turned around). Ishitha turns back and is happy to see Adhi.
A: Aap ke haath ka kana bahut acchha tha Ish Ish Ishima he says hesitantly( You have made nice food)
I: She is very happy to hear what Adhi said. She is not able to believe her ears. Kya kaha beta app ne.( What did you say Beta)
A: Ishima, Mai aapko iyse bula saktha hu na.( Shall I call you like that)
I: Ha beta, please
A: Mai uss din theme park me mama ke saath tha. ( I was also with mama on that day in the theme park)She planned to kill you, but she was not bothered that Ruhi was trapped in that mission. I was astonished that how can a mother be like that and how can a person who is not a biological mother love a kid ike how u love Ruhi. I was not able to face you. Thaws why I was not talking to you. Please forgive me and accept me as your son.
Ishitha hugs him and plants a kiss in his cheeks.
I: Beta appke papa bhi app se bhut pyar karhe hai ( Your father also loves you so much)
A: Pur woh to mujjse milne bhi nehi athe the. Ithene saalo me. ( But he never came to meet me for so many years)
I: Beta court ka order tha ki woh app se na mille. App hi ho jo unke dil ke bhut karib ho. ( It was court order, He must not even come near you)
A: Court ka order?
I: Han beta , woh apse door rehker hi bat kar sakthe the, aur uskeliye bhi unhe apke mam ki permission ki jarurat thi (even if he has to meet he must have sought ur mama's persmission)
A: Woh mujje nehi patha tha. Mama ne toh bola ki papa mujjse pyar nehi karthe. ( I didnt know that, but mama told me that papa doesn't love me)
Ishitha takes him to his room and shows the gifts that he has got for each of his birthday. She also tells him how much Raman loves him. Raman is looking at all this with tears in his eyes.
Adhi after listening to all this comes ahd hugs Raman. Iam sorry papa, I was carried away by mam's words. iam sorry. they have cute reunion and Raman looks at Ishitha as he hugs Adhi and tells her thank you. They have a cute smile. It was a very happy family moment.
Its bed time and Raman is very happy, he wants to spend sometime with Ishitha. They have not been able to spend a private night together after the one they spent for the first time.
Raman is muttering to himself. Eh janshi ki rani ne kamal kar diya, Adhi ko bhi pata liya. Aaj toh isspe mujje bhut pyar aaraha hai. Aaj rath ko toh mai usse nehichoduga.
Ishitha enters their bedroom with their kids. Raman is surprised and happy that they all will sleep togather.
A: Papa aap sofa me so javo, hum log bed pee so jathe hai.( You sleep in the sofa, we will sleep on the bed)
R: Hai , mai bhi tom logoke saath sounga na( I will also sleep with you)
A & Ru: Papa bed chotha hai na. 4 log nehi ayege usme ( The bed is small, al 4 of us will not fit here)
R: Toh tumhare Ishima sofa me sojayegi.( Ur ishima will sleep on the sofa)
I: Beta papa ko back pain hoga, iss liye aap unke saath sojana( Beta papa will get back pain)
A & Ru: Tik hai ishima, fur papa ko hamere kamre me jake so jane do( Ok then papa will go to our room)
Raman mutters to himself. Yeh JSKR meri he kamre se mujje nikal rahi hai. ( This JSKR is sending me out of the room)
R: Nehi mai sofa me so jatha hun.( No I will sleep in the sofa)
They all have some lovely family moment and the kids sleep. Raman is uncomfortable in the sofa, Ishitha sees this and comes to him and calls out Raman.
Raman gets up excitedly and holds her by her waist.
R: Ishu, tumhare bhi man tha kya, mujje patha tha. Fur bacho ko kui yehai laye, unke kamre me sulana tha na ( Ishu... u also felt what I felt. Then why did u get the kids here, you would have made them sleep in their room)
I: Kya man tha Raman, Appko uncomfortable ho raha hai na, app bed pe so javo. Mai sofa me so jathi hun. ( What did I feel, u will be unconfortable on the sofa so I came so that you can go and sleep on th bed)
R: Yeh bolne ke liye uttaya mujje. Tumbhi na yar, bhavnavo ko samjthi ki nehi ho. he tries to get romantic with her and cares her cheeks. Ishitha blushes and tries to get out of Raman's hold.( You woke me up to tell this, you dont understand my feelings)
I: Do bacho ke parents hai ham done, apko abhi bhi javane chadi hai( We are parents of 2 children, your still trying to be romantic)
R: Matlab kya hai tumhara do bacho ke bad pathi pathni pyar nehi kar sathe, sat sal me bhi mere jawani kam nehi hogi deekhna. Punjabi munda hu, dikavu kya appne pyar ka ranag. he gets close to her further and kisses her neck( What do you mean, after kids couples are not suppose to romance is it. Even at the age of 60 my romance will be intact I will show u. Iam punjabi boy, shall I show u my colour of love)
I: She is morning with a pleasure and longing, but says bache ut jayege. Please chodo ( Children will get up, leave me)
R: Kya yar, tum bhi na. Mere love life ki baja raki hai. Ek toh miskil se ek bar tumne mujje kareeb ane diya. Ujke baad toh mujje bul he geye. Please yar aaj mai bohut kush hun. Mujje laga ki duniya ki sare kushi mujje mill gaye hai. yeh kushi bhi de do na.( You dont understand my feeling at all. With so much difficulty u let me come near u, and after that u forgot me at all. i am very happy today. Please give me this pleasure also)
I: Raman please na, Adhi bada bacha hai. Uske liye chod do. Fir kabhi. Saying so she plants a kiss on his cheeks.( Adhi is a big boy. Leave me for him atleast)
Raman smiles and understand and goes to sleep with the children and Ishitha sleeps on the sofa.
Its morning, Ishitha and children have got, they are happily having they morning chat with the family members. Its a sunday and everyone is having fun. Raman is not yet up and Ishitha has bath and goes to her room. She is in a nice baby pink saree. She is drying her hair and lost thinking of the happy moments with her kids. She feels how satisfying is my life and thinks its all because of Raman. She rewinds her memory of the various incidents that have brought them to this part of their life . Raman wakes up by the water droplets. He is awestruck by her divine beauty. He realizes that she is lost and slowly moves to the door and locks it. He mutters to himself aaja Madrasan ab bachke kaha jayegi
He slowly goes behind her and hugs her from back
R: Mere bare me soch rahi ho( Are u thinking abt me)
Ishitha blushes. God morning
R: Ayise todi good morning bolthe hai ( Do u say good morning like this)
I: Fur, kya karna hai. ( How must I tell then)
Batha tha hu( I will tell u), he tightens his hug and starts his kissing spree. starts with her neck and moves above to her cheeks and he turns her around. Ishitha is losing control with his passion.
I: Raman Abhi nahake aye hun, cho mujje. Bachhe bhi uthgaye hai( I had bath just now, leave me. The kids are up)
R: You know, I like the morning energy wala love, aa javo na yaar. Please, bad me saath me nahathe hai. He continues his antics and Ishitha is also losing control of her situation.( Common na yar. We will have both togather later)
In no time they land up in the bed and the door is knocked by Adhi.
R: kud ke gar me biwi ke saath time nehi spend kar saktha. Kya museebat hai. Kyan hai( in my own house, iam not able to spend time with my wife. Who is it)
A: Mai papa
R: Kya hai beta,
A: Mama hai kya
listening this ishitha is about to get up,
R: He thinks and tells beta mama so rahi hai. tum badme milllo( Mama is sleeping, u meet her later)
A: Tik hai papa
I: Appa ne adhi joot kui bola.( U lied to Adhi)
R: Tum abhi so rahi ho. ( U are sleeping now)
I: Bechara bachha ka dil duka diya ( Poor kid, you hurt his heart)
R: JSKR kahi ki, edar mera dil duk raha hai uska kai parvah nehi hai kya( Here my heart is hurting, u are not bothered abt that)
I: App bhi na kabhi nehi sudaroge( U will never chnage)
R: Mai galath todo hun, sudarne ke liye. Pyar karna achi baath hothi hai.
Saying so he doesn't waste a single min to start what he had initiated.
they have passionate love and Ishu also responds to his passion. They smile at each other.
Ishu wants to get up, Raman is not letting her go
I: Please Raman, Chodiye na, kya hai yeh sub subh aur kai kaam nehi hai kya. Mere kapde do
R: nehi detha, mat javo. Aaj mai bhut kush hun. Tumse door jane ka man hi nehi hai.
I: Please bache wait kar rahe hai, tumhe to kabe bhi jawani chad jathi hai. No time frame, khahi bhi suru ho jathe ho.
R: Pahale bhi kahaa hai, tum meri ho, my property, mai jab bhi chahu kuch bhi kar satha hun
I: Mai non living thing hun kya?
R: Kya yar tum samjthe nehi ho, last time after we spent a happy night I almost lost you, mujje uske ki yad a rahi hai. Iam really not able to let you go even thinking abt that make me feel i will lose you.
I: Please Raman why are you thinking like this. That was an accident. saying so she gently places a kiss on his forehead.
R: Tik toh aaj ham charo lunch ke liye bhar jaye.
I: Tik hai raman jayege. Saying so she gets dressed and gets out of the room. She turns and smiles at Raman as she leaves.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just loved it!!! Thank you for giving me a chance to read such amazing story line
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LOvelyyy updateee!!! awesummm.. keepp continuinggg.. eager to read moreee
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Part 11

It was a perfect family. ISHRA with their kids. Toshiji was very happy that her son has finally completed his family and is happy. Days pass. Raman and Ishu fond of each other and kids. Ishu takes care of Ruhi and Adi's projects, school, HW, studies. She cooks food for the family memebrs sometimes, takes care of the whole family. Weekend they go out and spend family time. Ruhi and Adhi started doing well in studies. Raman used to help them out on maths and Ishu used to take care of remaining subjects.

Romi has become very responsible and learning very well at work. Bala and Vandu have given birth to a baby girl. Simmi had of late realized about Param and started leading an independent life with the support of the family. Often people had found Mihika and Mihir hugging and trying to romance and mocked them. Their wedding date was finalized.The whole family (Bhallas and iyers) play games as a family and it was really fulfilling life they started having.

Raman was too fond of Ishu that he never left opportunity to make love with her. Like Ishu always says, he used to get started anywhere (Kitchen, Bathroom, Bedroom, garden etc). He used to bump up anywhere and give her a kiss. He used to simply pull her infront of all and take her to their room. They were cought up by many people (Mr and Mrs Bhalla nd iyer, bala, vandu, simmi and sometimes Mihir, Mihika and Romi also) Thank god they were not cought anytime by their kids. Ishu used to feel very emmbaressed, but our shameless Bhalla never used to give up troubling her. He used to taunt her with his oneliners even when romancing.

Months pass. Ishitha is becoming tried very frequently and having lot of mood swings. She was getting irritated with Ruhi as well, which was unusal. One day there is no one at home and Raman finds Ishitha crying in the room when he is back from office. He is broken beyond limits and restless to know what happened.

R: Ishu, Kya hua. Kyu Roo Rahi ho. (Why r u crying)

Ishitha senses Raman is back and quickly wipes her tears and says kya, mai kha roo rahi hun. (Where am I crying?)

R: Ishu, mane tumhe phale bhi bola hai, tumhe jhut bolna nehi attha. (I have told u already, u don't know to tell lies) Whats troubling you? I thought we r living the best part of our life, did I hurt you in anyway

I: No Raman, you can never hurt me. Iam only having a feeling of being in complete. The greatest pleasure of being women is in motherhood, but god has deprived me of this pleasure.

R: Ishu you are already mother of 2 kids. Why do you even say this?

I: Raman you will never understand this. you had been a father not once twice. It's a great feeling to know that you are going to become a mother, carrying the child in your womb, Watch them crying, their first touch, first walk etc. You will never understand my plight.

Raman tries to convince her and to comfort her. To do so he hugs her from back and places a kiss on her neck. Ishu jerks him off .

I: Aapko hamesha isiki padi rehthe hai. (You are always thinking of that only) You don't understand me at all. Chodo mujje. And leaves the room. Raman is dejected beyond limits. He feels I wanted to comfort her and she feels iam longing to make love with her when she is so dejected. Does she understand this much only. He feels bad and starts drinking. Ishitha realizes having hurt Raman and comes to him. He doesn't speak to her.

I: Raman Iam sorry. She tries to hug him and be romantic to him to change his mood. But he is not interested in talking to her and jerks her off and leaves the place. He hands over a letter to her before he leaves.

The letter goes like this

"Ishitha, for me our relationhip is beyond physical relationship. I was married earlier, I had kids. But I knew what love is when you came into my life. My own kids to whom I was biological father were never close to me. Not even considered me as father and you made me their father. You would not have given birth to Adhi and Ruhi but you are the real mother of both of them. A mother is selfless, full of love and compassion. You had been that to them, so I have always felt that u are their mother. But still if you feel we need to have a kid for ourself I am ready to be with you. We have so many medical advancements these days and can try something. But Iam really hurt by your words. Do you think I am so mean that I would want to have a physical relationship with you when you are in a state of turmoil. Is it want you understand about me. Iam really hurt beyond limits because of this and will never forgive u for this"

Ishitha is in tears, she is almost going to faint. Raman is incidently walking into the room to pick something, he holds her in the right moment and tries to wake her up. He is unconcious. He becomes afraid and takes her to the hospital.

D: Mr. Bhalla, how long is since she finished her last mensural cycle?

R: Doctor, iam not sure

D: I think he is expecting, she is pregnant and it must be a month and half now. I guess she has some complications and this is a very mild feteous. If we care careful we can save the child and there is only 20 % probability of saving the child and 80 % failure chances. We will be able to give you a better picture by the 3rd month. After another month and half.

Apprently Ishitha was very dejected that she has not realized that she has not been having her mensural cycles.

Raman was in a state of shock. He didn't know how to react. Must he be happy or sad. He was not aware. He is dumbstruck

D: Mr Bhalla what happened? Arent you happy?

R: Doctor iam not sure what is to be told. Will there be any complications to my wife due to this pregnenecy.

D: ideally no, but since the probability of the child living is low, she might get physcologicallly upset

R: Can you please do me one favour. Can you tell Ishitha that she is suffering from something and hide her pregnancy from her? I will ensure we follow all the instruction that needs to be followed.

D: Mr Bhalla, she herself is a doctor will she not know abt this. More so I guess it will be very difficult for you.

R: We will try doctor. If something happens to the baby I really cannot see her being hurt about losing her dreams.

D:Ok fine I will try to tell her something. First and foremoset, she is not a lady with normal pregnancy so additional care needs to be taken. She needs to be on bed rest. Regular medication etc. She will have lot of mood swings and you will have to bear it. One more thing you might have to refrine from having any physical relationship during this period. Even incase of normal pregnancy its true, but in case of ishitha , her Utreus is very weak and any pressure on it will cause fetal effects for the kid.

Raman carefully listens to her and meantime other family members also come. All are delighted about Ishitha's pregnancy. Everyone is instructed that they don't inform Ishitha about her pregnancy.

Raman takes Ishitha home and takes good care of her. He works from home most of the days to take care of her. He makes food for her at times. He is taking care of her so well. Ishitha also apologies to him for that night's behavior. He smiles and comforts her and they spend good time togather. Even children don't mind if Ishitha gets mad at them at times as Raman had told them its because of her health.

Raman is so good to her but when it comes to having an intimate relationship he tries to shy away. This hurts Ishitha. She starts feeling ignored when he refuses for making love time and again. Because of her mood swings she starts feeling raman doesn't like her anymore. She has put on weight and feels Raman never likes fat girls, so he has started losing interest in her. A month and half pass.

On the other hand the gynec who is taking care of Ishu is a hot posh girl and often Raman is found to take her alone and speak to her. Raman does so because he wants to hide Ishitha's pregnancy, but Ishitha starts becoming jealous of the Gynec. The Gynec tells him that they can do a test for Ishitha tomorrow and decide weather the child will be fine or not. After Raman sends the Gynec , he comes into the room. Ishitha starts tunting Raman for having an affair with the gynec. She tells him angrily. He smriks and ask her to chill and not feel jealous. Raman brushes it off as he feels it's due to the mood swings she has due to pregnancy.

It's the same night when they had this confrontation. Ishu and Raman are sleeping next to eachother. Ishitha is not slient today and initiates romatic gestures with Raman. Raman is startled by her behavior. She had never initated sex till that day, ya of late she has been orally asking him many times. It was always Raman who used to do it. Now Raman is in a fix and unable to push her off. He starts losing control because of her actions and is almost about to respond to her actions. He realizes her state with a suddern site of her medicines and jerks her off. Ishitha is feeling terrible about his rejection. She is hurt.

I: What is wrong with you Raman? Don't you love me any longer?

R: Ishitha, please sleep now. You are sick. Your body cannot handle this.

I: I know what my body can handle and what it cannot. Why are you lying to me?

R: Now he is not able to handle the situation and wants to cut it off with a taunt. What do you want to know, why am I not touching you? So then listen, you always felt that I only need physical relationship. So Iam proving you that I can be without that. I had been without that after shagun for 8 years. It's not new to me.

I: Raman, I apologized to you on that day. You asked me to forget that. But you didn't.

R: How can I Ishitha. You hurt my Ego. You meant that our relationship was only limited to sex, which hurt me. I can never forget that and forgive you for that. I don't think I will be able to touch you, at least in the near future.( He meant the pregnancy period) . Everytime I want to touch you, iam reminded of that night.

I: Raman Iam sorry.

He is unable to say anything more and leaves the room. Ishu and Raman both are found to be intears but for different reasons. Raman is cursing himself for hurting his pregnant wife and Ishu is cursing herself for her behavior on that night.

Part 12

Bala and Raman are speaking. Raman is crying his heart out for offending Ishu and expressing his helpless state.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey buddy its amazing update...
u portrait it very well...
oh...poor ishu n raman ..
hats of 2 u...u really describe their fillings...ramans dillema very well...
lovely
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awww... poorr Raman!!! cant see him like this.. awesum amazingg updatee!!! loved itt.. keepp continuingg... eager to read moree

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