Dil se Dil ka Rishtha - Part 13 - Page 14

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Part 13 - Page 14

Part 1

Raman and Ishitha were unusual couples. They were never like other couple. Their nok jok was the unique love between them. They were eqully possive of eachother and yet very egoistic to accept their love to each other.


Raman had helped during her mom accident expenses. He also got Romi in front of the family to defecd Bala and Mihika. Isitha truly felt he is a good man and really has a loving and careing heart unlike what she assumed him to be.


On the other hand Ishu had made Romi realize his mistake about cheating in his studies. He was a transformed person. Raman was amused by the love and affection she has for each and every one.


Thre was a mutual admiration but still their ego was not letting them realize this and they were fighting like cat and mouse all the time. Their taunts were the distorted form of their love.


It's a business party Raman has to attend with his Spouse. Mihir had also informed Mihika and was getting her. He informs Ishitha


R: Oye Moti, aaj ek party me jana hai. Toh woh business party hai. Dress code formal hai. Please kapdo ki than math lapetna. Kuch western pahana. ( Fatty , today we have to go for a party. Please wear western wear and not your saree) I know whatever you will wear; it will not make you look slim. But at least don't embaress me with your kapado ki than. Because we are allowed to take spouse in the party and you will look like my mom in a saree.


I: Was fully furious. Mai tumhare saath jane ke liye mar rahi hu kya. Mujje nehi jana. Iam not coming. (Iam not dying to come with you. Iam not coming go)


R: Mujje kyna sa shok hai tumhe le jane ki. Who tooh mera naseeb karab hai , mujje tumhe le jane pad raha hai. Patni jo ho. (As though iam interested. Its my fate that I have to take you. You are my wife right)


Ishitha is iritated and walks out of the room. She sends him a message from her clinic saying she has an emergency and joining him for the party. She is not having any emergency. She is irritated with Raman's continuous taunt on figure and doesn't want to go with him.


Raman is super irritated that she is not joining and he needs to be alone.Raman is muttering to himself. Kya yaar, isko bhi hamsha emergency aa jathi hai. Hai tooh dentist, ayse bolthi hai hi koye heart surgeon hai. Bewakoof aurat, ajj socha tha ki ujska sexy roop dekne ko milega. Meri futi kismet. Chaal beta Raman akele chaal.( Always she gets some or the other emergency. She is dentist and feels as though she is a heart surgeon. I thought I will get to see the glam doll version of her, my bad luck). Since he need not pick Ishitha up, he leave from the office. He had asked Mihir who would be going to pick Mihika up to get his cloths.


At Akash ganga housing society, Mihir has come down to pick mihika. They are in iyer's house. Ishitha has come to handover Raman's cloths. Mihir is flirting with Mihika


M: Are meri theki mirchi, aaj tho tumpe see anke hatane ka man nehi kar raha. Ek kiss too de do. Saying so he is trying to hug Mihika( My hot chilli, Iam unable to take my eyes off you. Give me a kiss na)


Mi: Mihir, chi po, chodo mujje( Leave me)


M: Are hone wala pathi hu mai tumhara, asise kya keha rahi ho. (Iam your fianc , how are you telling me this)


Mi: Toh Pathi nehi ho na, hone vale ho. Yeh sab Shadhi ke baad kar lena (You are my fianc not my husband. Do all this after marriage)


M: Arre sagaye ho gaye to, adhi gar wali ho. Yeh sab allowed hai.( We are enaged, you are half wife to me now)


Mi: Please Mihir chodo na, late ho rahe hai. Jiju ko dress be dena hai. Late ho jayege. (Leave me we will get late. We need to give Raman Jiju his cloths also)


M: Accha hua Raman ki yad dilade, nehi toh mai tumhare addavo me fidha yehi kada rahatha. Saying so he plants a kiss on her cheeks and realses her from his embrace.( Thank god you reminded me of Raman, else I would have simply been looking at you only)


When they come out they see Ishitha at the door step and feel embaressed. Ishitha more than teasing them, is in her own thoughts. She hands over Raman's cloths and leaves. Mihir calls her out, Bhabhi aapka koye emergency than a, fur aap ghar me( Bhabi, you had an emergency, how cum you are at home)


I: Who mera kaam katham ho gaya. (My work was over)


M: Fur app bhi chalo. (Then why don't you come with us)


I: Nehi meri tabyat karab hai. Iam tired. (No iam feeling tired)


M: Ok Bhabi take care. Bye.


They reach the office hand over the dress to Raman and tells him that Bhabhi is at home. Raman mutters to himself. Appne appko Miss Universe samaj rakka hai kya. Mere saath nehi aye. Ghar me hai bahana banake. Cheep Madrasan. (Is she thinking herself to be Miss Universe, she didn't come with me.)


In the party many are with their spouses. Mihir and Mikha continuously flirting with each other and Raman really feeling uncomfortable. He is missing Ishu badly.


To add fuel to the fire, Shagun comes and instrigates him. Raman becomes heavly drunk feeling neglected by Ishu as he knows she is at home making some excuses not to have come with him.



Part 2:


Raman reaches home in a tipsy state, the bed room is dark and he sees Ishitha next to the window and is crying

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update. ..plzzz do continue soon. .😛 Eager to know what happens next. .😳
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Nice start. Waiting for the next update.
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ur story is interesting update 2nd part
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Amazing
Please add OS or SS to ur title so everyone knows
And good start update soon :)
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Great OS
Loved it
Update soon
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Nice. waiting for your next update.
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With the current too much drama wanted to write some Ishra moments. Hope you ppl like it. Apologies for any grammatical or spelling errors

Part 2:

Raman is very heavily drunk. He slowly moves to Mihir and informs him that he is going home. Mihir and Mihika are worried seeing Raman's state. He has not been drinking these days at least not to this state. Mihir also wanted to leave the party and said it's not safe for Raman to drive home. All three reach home and Raman gets to his bedroom. He opens his room with a huge noise. There is no light and he sees that isitha is standing near the window. She doesn't turn back hearing the noise also. He is all the more irritated. He switches the light on and moves tright towards her to turns her around.

To his shock he sees her in tears weeping. Ishitha with the sudden jerk gets back to her present state.

R: Kya hua kyo Ro Rahi ho ( Why r u criying)

I: Aap ne pi rake hai kya ( Are u drunk)

R: Hai thoh, tum kon hothe ho mujje rokne walli. Meere saval ha javab math do bus saval pe saval pucho. Kyu ro rahi ho. Bolo( Yes, who r u to ask me, you don't answer my questions but expect anwers from me. Tell me why r u crying)

I: Hah wahi toh mai puch rahi hun, app kun hothe hai mujje puchne wale ki mai kyu roo rahi hu. ( Yes iam also asking you the samething, who are u to ask me)

Raman gets really irked and moved forward and pulls her hand and turns her around and holds her in an embrace and tells her

R: Tum meri Biwi lagthe ho. Mrs Raman Kumar bhall ho. Abb mujjse jaban ladane ki himmat mat karo aur kaho kya hua. Kisne kya kiya. ( You are my wife, Dnt dare to answer me back and tell me why are you crying)

I: Raman mujje dard ho raha hai, Chodo mujje. Aur kab se mai app ki Biwi ho gaye hu. Mai tho srif Ruhi ki ma hu na. Apke liye Moti hun. App ko mera kya fikar.( Raman its aching, leave me. Iam only Ruhi's mom, why will you be bothered about me)

R: Kya Fikar , ka matlab kya hai. Tumhe lagtha hai ki mai tumhara fikar nehi kartha. Hya Fikar nehi kartha, mere kam se be tumhi aise he lagtha hai to padi raho. Rothe rehna, mai ne hi puchtha. Saying so he leaves Ishitha's her hand and is about to fall and sits in the couch. (What concern? You feel I don't care abt you. Even my actions you cannot understand be like that only. Keep crying)

Ishitha immedietly rushes to help him sit. He brushes her away and doesn't take her help.

I: Jab tumse handle nehi hotha ethna sarab, kyu pithe ho. ( When you cannot handle, why do you drink so much)

R: Mane kaha na, its none of your business. Biwi ke har jimmedari to nibathe nehi ho, fur Biwi ke thara lecture kyu sunna rahi ho. ( I told you, itys none of ur business. You don't fulfill the responsibility of a wife, then why do you want to give me lecture like a wife)

I: Kya, mane Biwi ki jimedari nehi nibaya? Kya nehi kiya bolo. ( I dindt fulfill the responsibility of a wife, tell me what didn't I do)

R: Ajj tumhe saath kuch accha waqt bithane chahatha thai. Issiliye party me bulaya, Par tumne emergency ka bahana aur gar me ruk gaye. Waha party me har koi apne lady love ke saat the liken mai akela. Akir tumne bi prove kar diya aurat jat mardo kay srif fayda utathi hai. Mai kithna kush tha en dino, Apne apke dil pe jis nafrat ka jutta divar banaya tha use tumhari achaee see tumne tod diya. Mai tumse pyar karne lagatha.Mujje lagtha tha ki tum be mujshe pyar karthi ho. Liken mai galath tha. Tum mujjse pyar nehi karthi. Issiliye toh tume mere saat wqat nehi bitha chathi ho. Kya yeh Biwi ki jimedari nehi hai kya, Pathi ki dil ko samje. Are ayise mujjme kya kami hai. (I was egar to take you out today, so that I can spend sometime with you. Everyone was with their loved ones, do you even realize how much did I miss you. You made an execuse of emergency case and stayed at home. Finally you proved that you women all are same, you take advantage of me. I was very happy these days. You broke the wall of hatred I had around my heart with your love. I was in love with you and belived that you were also in love with me. But you don't love me, if you do you woudnt have stayed back like that. Is it not the responsibility of a wife to understand husband's feeling, whats wrong with me)

Isitha is in state of amusement. He said, he like her she was dumstruck with a perfect "o" of her lips.

R: Aiyisa kya dek rahi ho? Bolo na, kui nehi pyar karthi ho. Mai chote height ka hu iss liye. Tumhe too tumhara Jija he smart lagtha hai na. Liken mere pee ajj bi bhut ladikiya marthi hai, pur mai jis ladki pee Martha hu use mai ne pasand hu. My fate. Tumhare choice sach me bekar hai aur tume andhe ho( what are you seeing, tell me. Why don't you love me, you always feel your Jiju is handsome na. Iam short so you feel Iam not handsome.But girls fall for me even now, unfortunately the lady whom I fall for doenst love me. Your choice is so bad, you are blind)

I: Pyar aur app, mujjse. Bat Bat pe mujje Moti app kehathey ho. Mai too kush thee ap ke saat javunge, liken Apne hi tho kha ki mai ap ke Maa lagthe hu. I didn't want to embaress u. Mujje adndhi kehne se pahale kudko deko. Apko mera pyar nehi diktha. Mene toh ek Bar jiju ko handsome bola, who bat apko bura laggaya. Pur App too, bar bar Shagun ke saat hothe hu, uske saat mere hi samne dance karthe ho that too very intimate, college ki ladkiye ke saath , apki Sheela ki Javani ke saath flirt karthe ho, mujje moti bolthe ho. Fir mujje laga ki app mujje pasand nehi karthe. App ke liye tooh mai reject hun na. Phele bhi apne bola tha.Aur kya expect kar sakthe hu ma appse, Hamne shadi be srif Ruhi ke liye he the. (Love you and me, you keep telling me that iam fat. I was happy that I will go with you. But you told me that I look like your mom. Before telling me blind, look at your self. Don't you see love and affection in me for you? I told Bala jiju is handsome only once, but you are always with that Shagun, you dance with her that too intimately. You flirt with college going girls, sheela ki jawani. You keep telling me that Iam fat. So I felt you don't like me. You only told me that iam a reject right. What else can I expect from you, we got married only for Ruhi right.)

Raman was equally shocked, he pulls her near him. Ishitha lands on his lap and her face is very close to his.

R: Pagal Majak nehi samjthe, Mujje apne Biwi ka sexy roop pasand hai, desi roop nehi. Isiliya bar bar tumhe western dress pehne ko khatha hu, apne style me. Tum too dafer ho yar. Shagun ken am see ethna kyu jall jathe ho. Mai srif tumhara hu, who meri kuch nehi lagthe. Yeh bath mai kis bhasa me samjavu. Wase mujje tum bhot pasand ho.I was married to Shagun for 6 years. I never experienced love from her, In fact Pyar kha matlab bi mujje tumhe see samj me aya. I love you my Janshi ki Rani. Toh tum bhi mujse pyar karthi ho na? ( Fool you don't understand that I was teasing you. I like seeing your sexy version not Desi version. So I keep telling you to wear western dress in my style. You are so hopeless. By the way why do you become so jelous the momemt you hear Shagun's name. She is nothing for me, you are my wife and I belong only to you. I like you a lot. You tought me whats love, I love you. Do you also love me.)

She is very uncomfortable with their closeness and simply nods looking down.

Raman slowly moves to her ears and wispers, muh kolke nehi bata sakthi ( cant you open your mouth and tell me)

Ishitha gets up from his lap and removes his hand from hers and says yes, and moves towards the window.

Raman slowly walks as he is not stable. He remembers that she was crying and asks her agin why was she crying. She says, she was offended by his statements in the morning and was crying thinking he will never love her. Listening this he smiles and says will tell her how much he loves her and tries to kiss her, but since he is heavily drunk, he doses off on her shoulders. She is closing her eyes and waiting for his moves, but sees him dosed off and smiles. He slowly moves him to the bed and makes him sleep. She hugs him and sleeps next to him.

Part 3:

Raman sees Ishitha sleeping with him and shocked. Ishitha also gets up and blushes, He is not remembering anything that happened last night.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice. Drunken Bhalla blurted out his feelings he felt for her unknowingly. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg he forgot everything.plz do continue.

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