Dil se Dil ka Rishtha - Part 13 - Page 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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U have weaved several emotions in this single part.jealousy,pain,frustration,concern,hurt everything.I felt bad for ishra.ishu thinks he no longer needs her n raman intentionally has to hurt her.Hope ishu don't misunderstand him in coming parts for hiding her pregnancy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one

Please update soon n pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic. I'm able to see a happy loving family in this os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant piece of writing!

poor them... I could visualize them in it...

updt soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Soo sweet Raman... Poor feeling bad!!! Happy for ishita bit even sad... Post soon
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Part 12

It's the next morning. Raman comes into the room to take his cloths. He sees Isitha sitting on the bed.

R: Did you sleep? Shall I get cloths for you, will have your bath and brush?

I: Humm, Raman I want to talk to you.

R: Ishitha if you are going to talk about what happened last night, Iam not interested. If you really respect me please leave it at this

I: But you have not left it, when you are clinging on something, its my responsibility to clarify.

R: Ishitha, I don't need your lectures. We need to go to the hospital to get some tests done for you. Get ready

I: iam not coming. I don't want to have any tests done

R: Ishitha don't irritate me, When I said we are going, we are going. That's it. Saying so he walks out of the room.

Raman had requested Vanditha to accompany Ishitha and him to the doctor. He felt Ishu must be more comfortable with Vanditha. Bala and Vanditha reach Bhalla house. They leave their daughter with amma and they are ready to go to hospital. Raman is ready and he wants to talk to Bala so requests that they go down in the society park while Ishu is getting ready.

Vanditha goes to Ishu. She is not ready. She has finished her bath and still not even draped her saree.

V: Ishu, ahy aren't you ready. We will get late

I: I don't want to come akka

V: Why what are you saying?

I: Ishu narrates the whole incidents and what she spoke the other day and she is in tears.

Vanditha realizes that Raman did to avoid an intercourse with her as everyone part from Ishitha know her current state.

V: Ishu, Raman is not like that. May be he is playing with you. Don't get upset.

I: No akka, I don't see his mad passion for me anymore. He always used to be after me. He never used to miss even a single chance to start his romance with me. Now when I am myself giving my hand forward he is avoiding me. And if we go to that hospital, I will have to see that gynec - my sutan. Earlier it used to be shagun, now her

V: Possessive.. hummm she says so to esen the situation

I: Why will you know, Bala Jiju is always behind you. You will not understand my feeling. Raman always takes the gynec alone and they keep speaking for hours. Don't know what they speak. And that lady does she dress up like a doctor. She dresses up as though she is going for a fashion parade. Raman always likes sexy stuffs. You don't know how I burn seeing them togather.

Vanditha is smiling about ishu's passiveness. Vanditha convinces her there is nothing like that and takes her to the hospital.

On the other hand Raman is crying his heart out that he hurt Ishitha last night and didn't know how to react to her. Bala feels bad for Raman and asks him to belive in god and this situation will end after today's test.

Before they leave to the hospital Mrs Iyer and Balla pray god and put tika on them and send. Ishitha is little surpised by sudden behavior of the family. Yet she is preoccupied with her Sutan's thoughts and leaves.

The Doctor does a sonography. Takes all the necessarytests. Raman is egerly waiting for the rests. Ishitha is not bothered about anything. Her eyes are fixed on Raman. She wonders why is Raman so perplexed. She senses something wrong. She thinks am I having some medical issue and is he worried because of that. She could sense that from the body language. That's when the doctor comes.

D: Congratualtions Mr Bhalla. All your effeort for this month and a half has been paid off. Based on the results, both mother and baby are healthy. The risk of 80% is uncovered and your baby is save 100%. Congratulations once again. This would not have been possible but for your care and love that you have for your wife. She turns to Ishitha and tells, Congratulations Mrs Bhalla. You are pregnant. Its 3 months now. Iam sorry I didn't tell you earlier as their were complications and probability of of kid surviving was less. Mr Bhalla didn't want to disturb you phsycologically so he requested me not to tell you. And I must say you are very lucky. You have got such a loving and caring husband. How did he take care of you. He browsed so many jurnels and used to give tips for our treatment. He had called on all the best gynecs in the world and ensured you and your baby is safe. He did all the possible medical interventions to ensure this pregnancy is safe. He deligently followed all our instructions. You must really thank god to have a husband like him.

Both Raman and Ishitha do not say anything only a tears roll down their eyes. Raman manges to clear his throat and reconfirms from the doctor

R: Doctor I hope Ishitha's health will not have an impact. Even if it will affect a little bit would prefer not to have the kid.

D: She reassures. No Mr Bhalla she is good and leaves.

Raman slowly comes to Ishitha nd holds her shoulder. She looks up at him. He comes to the front and sits on his knees and wipes her tears. So My JSKR congratulations. I want a junior Janshi ki Rani only. Don't dare to give me a baby boy. Saying so he kisses her forehead.

Ishitha is in the horizon of happiness. The epic moment of her life. She was going to become a mother. She laughes and is in cloud nine. She almost jumps for the seat she was sitting. Raman hugs and controls her.

R: Ishu you are pregnant.Dyan rakna chahike( Need to be careful) .

Ishitha smiles and realizes that they are hugging in the hospital.

I: raman ,Hum Hospital me hai, saab dek rahe hai( we are in the hospital. Don't hug me like this . Everyone is seeing)

R: Toh Kya hua. Mai tumhara Pathi hun. Tumne mujje Baap banne ki kushi de hai. Mai tumhe nehi chodunga(So what you are my wife. You have made me a to be father. Iam happy. I will not let you go).

Ishitha is surprised by his behavior. It was 360 degree turn of what he was last night.

I: Abhi tumhe uss Rath ki yaad nehi aye, aab kyui hug kar rahe ho(Now you didn't remember that night, what makes you hug me.)

R: Jhskr kahi ki, tumhe na mere romance me pani ferna bhut achha lagtha hai na. Bewakoof. Tumne aaj prove kar diya ki tum paise deker doctor panni the. Doctor kha ho,dentist he ho na.( You always like to spoil my romance. You proved again that you are dentist and not doctor)

I: kya kuch bhi?

R: Kuch bhi, pagal aurat. Doctor bhothe ho apne apko, mensural cycle miss hua yeh bath bhi realize nehi hua tumhe ( You idiot, you ddint even realize that you missed your perid cycles.)

I: Who raman, patha nehi kyse nikal gaya. ( Oh ya, I dodnt know how did I miss)

R: Hah kyse yad rahtha, tumhara dimag toh kud hava kanne chala jatha hai na. Mai bhi kya kaha raha hun, phale Dimag ho toh na.( How will you remember, your mind is out to have fresh air. Oh what am I talking, when you don't have one how will you use it)

I: Raman, parashan karna achha lagtha hai na ( You always trouble me)

R: Kya pareshan, tumne merako pareshan kar rakha hai. Tumhara uterus be week tha. Dimag kha gaye app mere pass hi nehi athe ho. Pyar nehi karthe ho. Kaise kartha pyar. Kitha control kiya tumhe kya patha. Upar se sexy copade phenke bhi pareshan kiya na. silk smitha kahi ki. Tumhara kyal rakku ki kudo ko tumhare sexy tantrums se control karu?( What trouble, u trobled me more. Your uterus was weak. You ate my brain saying I don't love you. How could I do it. How much did I control myself, I only know. On top of it u tortured me wearing sexy outfits. Silk Smitha. Will I take care of you or control myself from your sexy tantrums)

I: Kui uska aur mere uterus ka kya sambad. She doesn't realize and she feels he was simly troubling her.( what has my utres got to do with you loving me)

R: Yeh loo, fir see prove kardiya na dentist kahi ki. Uterus is weak, how can I let any pressure on that. Bina pressure ke tumhare saath kuch karne merko man nehi karahtha na.Aur who passion bhi toh nehi hoga mereko majza nehi attha. Saying so he winks at her wickedly ( See yet again you proved. Without pressure I don't feel like loving you. It will lack passion na, I don't have fun doing that way)

I: Ishu realizes what she asked and is embaressed. Bala and Vandu are also with them. She mutters to Raman. Chi Raman , Abb bhi na bade besharam ho. Sabke samne aise bathe kar raheo.( You are so shameless, you tell all this infornt of others)

R: Toh kan sa unknown bath bol diya.Sabbe passion ke saath hi karthe hai. Kyu Bala tumbhi manthe ho na.( What did I say which is not know to others. Everybody does with lot of passion only. What do you say Bala)

Bala and Vanditha are laughing at Ishu's pliaght.

I: akka jiju app logi ko bhi patha tha. Kisene mujje kuch nehi bola.( You also didn't tell me)

V: Raman ne mana kiya tha.( raman asked us not to tell)

R: tik hai , baki ke jagade ghar jake karna. Sab ithazar kar rahe hai. ( Ok, lets go home. Everyone is waiting)

They leave home and are being reacived by the whole family very happily. Adhi and Ruhi give them a congratulations card. Adhi and Ruhi and drawn nice family pic in the card. They have also drew a baby in Ishitha's hand along with them and raman. Ishitha is overwhelmed and she tells toshiji and amma that she is going to become mother and has no limits to her happiness.

Part 13

Raman is pampering ishitha. She wants to eat Mysore bona and it's a day of strike. No hotels are open. She is telling Raman that she wants to have it today only. More than her the baby wants it. Amma is out to Vandu's place and Raman looks for the recepie in the internet and is making for her.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awww such an endearing update...LOVED IT nithya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is called pure love...awesome dear...
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Thanks you all for bearing me for 13 parts. Apologies for any typo , spelling realted mistakes. I hope you liked the whole story. This is the last part. Hope you all like it.
Part 13:

It was the happiest period of Ishitha's life. Raman was always adoring her and fulfilling each and every silly wish of hers. The children were around and Mrs Bhalla and the whole family was treating her like princess. Though she was not on bedrest now, she is still not let to do heavy work.

Raman made it a point to spend at lease 2 hrs in a day with her however important it was he used to ensure this. She used to spend time with Adhi and Ruhi help them study, read stories for them. She also used to baby sit annaya when Simmi was away for work. She was doing all good things all through her pregnancy. She used to read spiritual books, read through the various phases of pregnancy and the care that she was supposes to take. She was missing her clinic, Raman had strictly instructed her not to go for work nor do any heavy work at home. She used to spend time with everyone in the house.

Raman wanted Mihir also to stay closer to them. He had asked him to buy a house in the same society and Mihir had shifted. Their wedding was celebrated in a grand way. Mihika and Mihir were settling in their new wedding.

During the wedding Raman notices the growing relationship of Simmi and one of his friends Manjeet. He was a widower and had a son. Raman shared this Ishitha. Ishitha enquired about this to Simmi and she was not sure if the relationship has to carry forward. She was unable to decide that was love or not. She definetly respcetd and liked him. But was not sure. They discussed within the family and they decided to get Simmi wedded to Manjeet. They decide to do a simple wedding as it was the second one for both of them. Raman gifts Simmi and Maneet a house in the same socity. All the things were settling.

Ishitha was 6 months pregnent now. She has put of weight. Raman finds her growing beautiful day by day. It was his usual routine was to get up and see her for atleast half an hour. He used to talk to his kid, place a kiss and then get up to do his daily work. Ishitha was finding Raman very cute when he used to do it. When Ishitha had painful, sleepless nights, Raman used to tend to her and take care of her. He used to mock her with some stupid oneliners and make her laugh to forget the pain. He used to take her for regular checkups. He talks her for pre natal classes where she will experience the exercises that can help in pregnancy.

Ishitha used to have wild wishes and Raman used to fulfill them. She used to want to ride on bike with him. Raman was never agreeable of this idea as it's not safe, but he had to give away for her wish. Raman learnt to ride Romi's bike and took her. He used to take her to Tamil movies. He never understood the movie still used to accompany her for her satisfaction. She wants to wear the garden on her hair daily and he used to bring gajara daily. He also used to accompany her to temples once a week. Ishitha was in cloud nine. She couldn't have asked for more. A loving husband, adorable children and a amazing family. She had all in life.

One day Ishitha wants to have Mysore Bonda( a south indian snack) it is a Bandh day. None of the hotels are open. But she is pleedling like a child that she needs to eat today. Raman tries to check out from amma, but she is out and has gone to Vanditha's house. Raman looks for the receipe from the internet and decides to make it himself.

Iss Janshi ki rani ko bi yehi kana tha. Bewakoof, parate nehi kaha sathiti he mutters to himself and makes the dish. It doesn't come out well and Ishitha mocks him nicely. Then both Raman and Ishitha make the dish togather. Raman becomes very touchy touchy with her and starts his usual romantic antics. Ishitha and Raman and blushing and enjoying their cooking togather.The dish come out very well and ishitha enjoys it.

Months pass and she is in the final month. She is little nervous about her delivery and Raman assures her that he will be with her. Ishitha gifts him a nice card. She had made it on her own. The card has the below verses in it with a cute picture of Raman and his kids in the cover. It has a portaint of Ishu and Raman holding each other in the backside.

"You are a lovely husband anyone can have. Thanks for coming into my life and bring in the frangrance of a blissfull life in each and every cell of my body. I am not sure if will be with you for rest of this life as I don't know my destiny during my delivery. But I pray god that I get you in each and every life of mine. Love you Ravan kumar, Your Janshi ki Rani"

Raman is touched reading the card. He also senses her fear f the delivery and decides to take her to labour classes. She feels little confident after that. The day comes and Ishitha is in pain. Raman's heart is aching seeing he beloved in pain. He accompanies her in the labour room and gives her all the support and strength needed. She finally gives birth to a baby girl. Both the baby and Ishu are fine. Raman breaths a sigh of relif. The baby is just looking like Ishu. Has a big cute eye, fare complexion. The cute nose. Raman neets his daughter and wife in the room and tells her thanks for giving me a junior JSKR. He kisses her. She also thanks him for all the love he gave her in life. Ruhi and Adhi are excited to see their cute little sister. The whole family is very happy. They name the baby. Ishitha and Raman have decided on the name and they annonce it as "Ridhi" which is combination of Adhi and Ruhi. They feel the love that blosoomed between then is due to ruhi and then because of Adhi and Ridhi was the symbol of their love.

The kids are very excited listening to this. They have a happy family pic. The whole family is very happy and dancing. Vandu is calling mihika to danace and Mhir and Mihika refuses at a time and then others get to know that Mihika is also expecting. Their family was getting happier and this happiness was the epic moment and was definetly to be captured as a moment of the life. They have a complete family picture. They were looking forward for a great funfilled life ahead.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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realyy amazingg!!! lovedd itt soo muchh!!! keepp continuingg!!

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