Happy Birthday Raman OS Last Part pg 19 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
reallyy awesumm.. esp the confession part n bed broken n pinch of romi's hollywood dialougess!! lolll :P amazingg yaarr
keepp continuingg.. eager to read moreee.. pls PM me.. thnkuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Omg u write so nicely it was very nice and romantic tge bed tootne wala part was very funny waiting for the next update plzzz continue soon and pm me and convert the os into ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Superb story so far... :) plz continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

Raman and ishita smiled at the blunder they just made.

Ishita : Ab kya karein ?

Raman : Kya karna chati ho ? he smiled

Ishita : Ramannn

Raman : What ishitaa ? Look what you have done . It would have been your best night . Because you would be with me ! Now you spoiled it .

Ishita : Haan Ap to aise keh rahe ho . ke apko to koyi maza hi nahin ata.

Raman : Mazaa kaisa mazaa ? Chiii Ishita u have such dirty mind.

Ishita hit him in his chest . and said Shut up Raman .. !!

Raman : Chi chi chi ... So jaein . Pura mood karab ho gaya .

Ishita : Haan but kahan .

Raman didn't know what to respond. Yes they have confessed their feelings but was Ishita ready for the next step ? "Tum couch pe so jao ill sleep in the living room " he said .

He took his pillow and went close to her .

He kissed her cheeks. And said Good Night Mrs Bhalla. Another Night to test our patience ... !! Tomorrow morning ill order a new kIng size bed . and winked at her.

She wanted to stop him . But he already left .

Next Morning ... !!!

Ishita got ready and Raman was still sleeping in the living room . She went to the living to wake him up .

Ishita : Raman utjao !! Suba hogayi..

Raman whispered in his sleep : Ab yeh raat kab hogi .

IShita: uto baba !!

Raman opened his eyes and saw ishita with her hair still wet. With no Make up . She was looking angelic.

He grabbed her hand and pull her closer.

Ishita : Raman kya kar rahe ho ? We are in the living room .

Raman : SO what ? You are my legal wife... and mere ghar mein sab open minded hain.

Ishita : Leave me Raman .

He pull her even more closer.

Raman : I want a kiss. You have to compensate for last night

Ishita : Raman...

Raman : Pleasee...and he made a puppy face

Ishita approached her lips to his . and just when she was about to kiss him . Romi made his entry .

Romi : Bhaiii Bhabieee Sorry maine kuch nahin deka.

Raman whispered under his breath : Abe yaar . Isne bhi abhie entry marni thi. BEWAKOOF.

Raman : Romi . Ek min late nahin a sakta ta ..

Ishita blushed and went to her room.

Romi : Bhai , Kal raat ki kassar nahin puri huyi abhi tak .

Raman remembered last night and he took his phone and ordered a new bed.

Raman : I want the delivery for the evening . Yup .. Thanks

Raman got ready and came to the dining table .

Ishita was serving the breakfast.

Mrs Bhalla : Happy . Bohat kush lagraha hai ?

Raman : kaak kush hoon he whispered.

Mr bhalla : Raman , tumhari maa bata rahi thi ke kal raat tumhare room ka bed toot gaya . Kaise ?

Mrs bhalla : Apko sharam nahin ati , Kaise sawaal pooch rahe ho bachon ko . Mr bhalla was still confuse . Mrs Bhalla winked at him . then he understood.

IShita was hell embarrassed and she said she will go to meet amma.

Ishita went to Iyer house. Mihika was waiting for the update of the night .

Mihika dragged ishita in her room.

Mihika : akka BATAO kya hua kal raat ko ?

Ishita : Kuch nahin ... With a sad face .

Mihika : Stop lying haan akka. Jiju to door pe hi shuru te. Imagine in the room .

Ishita : wahi too .

Mihika looked at her with an eyebrow raised: what ?

Ishita : Hum room mein gaye. And before ke kuch hota . ... She takes a pause. And continue Bed tuth gayaa.

Mihika was about to fall from the bed. She was laughing like crazy.

Mihika still laughing : Bed tooth gayaa. Hahaha akka.

Ishita : Shut up haan Mihika . I was so disappointed. Me and Raman were so ready for it .

Mihika : Hawww .

Ishita : chal mein chalti hoon... and she left Iyer house .

Next part will be last part and ishra hot update ( well ill try to make it hot ) .,,, nOT good at these stufff ... :P


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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
wow...
its really nice update...
eagrly waiting for the next update...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
awww...so romantic...bechaare bed toot gaya aur saare sapne mein paani girr gaya!
cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Damn man!! IshRa's romantic night had to be postponed and on top of that Romi had to walk in right before Raman could get his good morning kiss from Ishita. Lol on Mihika's reaction when Ishita told her what happened.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Wow nice 1
updt soon plzz
tnx 4pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Aww lovely update but too short...u got to compensate for this in ur next 1😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
too short yaar...but it was superb...

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