Happy Birthday Raman OS Last Part pg 19 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one

It was night time . and everyone h

eaded to bed so early cuz they were so tired because of their long day. College , outing etc... It was 11pm and everyone at the Bhalla household was sleeping . Gode (horse) bech kar . But ishita and raman were not feeling sleepy because they spend the whole day at home .

Ruhi once again was sleeping with her dadi in order to not disturb Raman . Ishra headed to their room. Ishita was damn nervous . She have confessed her love for Raman . Will things change between them ? She had no choice. She couldn't even make excuse to make sleep ruhi , she was already sleeping with toshiji . and after the kitchen moment , she was getting even more nervous.

Raman sat on the bed. And ishita came and took the cushion and headed to the couch .

Raman : Where are u going ?

IShita : Where I go usually .

Raman : Is that still necessary ?

Ishita didn't responded and went to sleep . Just then Raman screamed as if he was in pain . Ishita ran towards him . and ask him what happened ? He pointed his back and said he was in pain . She proposed to put balm to wich he agrees without argument .

Ishita helps raman to remove his shirt and he lie down . She applies the balm very carefully with love.

Raman asked her to stop because he was feeling much better. Just then ishita was about to leave but he grabbed her hand .

Ishita : Raman ! what are u doing ?

Raman : Stay here na !! I will feel better .

Ishita nodded. Both of them started to talk . While talking , Raman was grabbing ishita hands. And her heart was pounding . The he came close to her . Caressed her face . PuT the hair behind her ear and kissed her on the cheek. Ishita was hell shocked. Just then Raman come close and put his lips on hers but she moves away quickly , it was not that she was shy . it was something else.

Raman was disappointed. He felt bad . She didn't want him to kiss her he thought .
Raman : ishita Kya hua ?

Ishita : Kuch nahin ?
Raman : why did u moved then ?

Ishita : Do I really need to give an explanation ?

Raman : Well u just told me u love me ! Last night so I thought u would like it .

Ishita : Who said I didn't ? but don't u think something is missing

Raman : Well Relax babe !! that's just the first step . I can go further .

Ishita smiled and said : Not that ! Something else .

Raman COudlnt understand what she meant . Ishita went to the other side of the bed and said : Good Night Mr Bhalla . and she went to sleep . Raman was hell confuse. He didn't know . What was missing. He just decided to sleep and think about it tmr morning . and he was quite exhausted .

Next Morning :
Raman woke up and ishita was not next to him . He checked his phone it was 12pm .

Abe yaar ! ITNA soliya maine . he said to himself. He came in the living room .

Ishita was making lunch with toshiji . Mr bhalla was sitting and the rest were all lapataa.

Good Afternoon Raman said mr Bhalla .

How are u feeling now raman ? said ishita and she winked at him

Im feeling much better. Actually , im going to office today .

Mrs bhalla : Na mera putar !! Abhi tak tum puri tara theek nahin huye .

Raman : Maa ! Kya karoun mein ghar pe ? Pagal ho gaya hoon . Kuch karne lagta hoon to koyi log rok dete hain . and he winked back to ishita

He was Raman kumar bhalla and no one could stop him from going to the office. Raman called up mihir and told him that he is coming .

Raman reached the office but he was still thinking about what happened last night and why did she stopped him .

Raman focuss on work . he said to himself .

Yeh bhi to work hi hai he continued
Raman : what is missing ? Let me do an analysis.

So we met each other .

We hated each other .

Then we got married for ruhi

After we continued fighting .

Then we become better. We started to care for each other .

We became friends.

Then my accident . She confessed her feelings. And then I tried to kiss her . Abe kya missing hai is me !!
Yeh madarasan pagal hai kya ?

After few minutes, he must realised what was missing . He slapped his head from the back .

Raman to himself : OMG I Cannot BELIEVE raman !! U forgot that . kitna bada gada hoon mein. How can she let me kiss her ? I haven't told her that I love her too . and she thinks I don't . or I don't know

Raman : kuch soch.!!! Warna madrasan room se nilkaldegi ajj .

Just then mihir entered in the room and he saw his bhai .

Mihir : Bhai kya hua ?

Raman : Tujhse kuch share karna ta ?

Mihir : bolo bhai

Raman : Promise tu tease nahin karega , or hassega bhi nahin and help bhi karega . Nahin to tumhari or Mihika ki shaadi cancel .

Mihir : Okay promise bhai .

Raman : Wo mihir, Mujhe naa... and he blushed.

MIhir : Bhai app ki tabiat to theek hai .?

Raman : Ajj lunch kiya hai ? NAhin kiya to tappad kale

Mihir : Acha bhai bola na !! Im getting restless.

Raman : Tu kehta ta na ke ishita bohat achi hai . well I think , no im sure that ive fallen for her .

Mihir : KYAAA?

Raman : Yea mihir !! I love her

Mihir : omgg Bhai im soo happy for u !! Bhabhie ko pata hai ? and she loves u too na ? it was so obvious that day .

Raman : NAHIN batayaaa !!! Help kar ! ! Kuch plan karne mein

Mihir : Sorry bhai ! You have to come up with ur own creativity !! Or else bhabhi will know that it wasn't from u !!

Raman : BAHAAAR mein ja !!
Mihir got a call and he left the cabin.

Raman kya plan karu ? He remembered his confession for shagun and he was disgusted .

Ishita was thinking about Raman in her room and all the incident happened last night :

She regretted to stop him . She knows that he loves her but he wants to hear it from his mouth .

She received a text : Thinking about me ? it was raman

Ishita : replied back : Like always

Raman : Really ? Itni yaad a rahi hai

Ishita : WO to roz ati hai

Raman : Message pe tum sherni hoti ho or live billi .

Ishita : I can show u my sherni mode .

Raman : Well u know what I couldn't figure out what was missing .

Ishita sent a sad smiley L

Raman : But I have to tell you something .

Ishita : Really ? Bolo

Raman : itni jaldi nahin darling

IsHITA : TO kab ?

Raman ; Ajj raat if u let me enter the room

Ishita : Well , okay . only if u insist

Raman : Can u send everyone out :?

Ishita : What are u planning ?

Raman : Im planning something you dream of

Ishita : How can I send them ?

Raman : oh SO U want us to be alone too ? Not bad Mrs Bhalla ! Don't Worry ! Work is done !! They are going for late night movie .

Ishita : Im going along them .

Rman : Don't u dare. Ill pick u up from the theater. I cannot wait anymore .

Ishita smiled and said : Wait for what ?

Raman : Well , Ur mature enough to understand . See ya !

Ishita made a face : and said ayooo but she was happy ..


Thank u for ur lovely comments. Hope u liked the ishra convo
Raman confession on it way !! Thanks for ur lovely comments on the previous part !!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Ishita : Im going along them .

Rman : Don't u dare. Ill pick u up from the theater. I cannot wait anymore .

Ishita smiled and said : Wait for what ?

Raman : Well , Ur mature enough to understand . See ya !

Ishita made a face : and said ayooo but she was happy ..





ha ha ha ha...

i liked this...it was funny..yet romantic☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Can't believe that Raman actually didn't realise that he hasn't confessed his feelings to Ishita yet. Thank God he finally has a plan now. Can't wait for Raman's confession next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
plz update prt 5...m waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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{UNRES}Hey! 🤗First of all i'm so sorry for the delay i was a bit busy so didn't get time!😳
I must say this was just fab yaar!❤️
Loved it👏 It was a pleasure to read!
😆 Raman will tell her he loves her oh i wish this happens in the show
@Ty for the PM😉
Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Part 5 !!

Ishita was getting anxious after the series of messages she exchanged with Raman . He sent the bhalla's out . and he wanted her to stay . Wouldn't that look akward? What will everyone think? And after the parmeet fiasco, everyone knows they don't share such relationship . God save me !!! she said Shall I go with them ? she tought But she remembered raman words and she stopped herself. It was 9pm and the bhalla's left . They told ishita that they will be back after midnight . After the movie , they might go for ice cream shi cream . Ishita nodded and locked the door.

She waited for some time but Raman was not there yet . She was getting bored. She decided to call him . But he didn't answered the call . Log phone kyun rakte hein agar utana hi nahin hota she said to herself. She decided to call mihika. She didn't wanted to go and meet her because she would hold her for so long and then Raman would be angry .

Hello mihika kya kar rahi hai ? she said
Mihika : Akka phone kyun kar rahi ho , Ur just a few feet away.

Ishita : wo mein bore ho rahi thi . Koyi hai na ghar pe .

Mihika : Mein ajaooun :?

Ishita : Nahin wo !! mera matlab .

Mihika : Hawww !! Aisa kyun ?

Ishita : Wo actually Raman a rahe hein . and U know u both end up fighting and I get stuck between u both so please .

Mihika : Oh please akaa! Find a better excuse. After the engagement, me and jiju never fight . Just tell me why u don't wanan come or else ill come .

Ishita narrates the whole story to mihika. How after Raman's accident she confessed her feelings for Raman . and the kitchen scenario where he held her . and finaly when he was about to kiss her why she stopped him . Because he haven't confessed his feeling for her . and their text message convo of today .

Mihika : Akaa Itna kuch ho gaya or ab batari ho !!

Ishita blushed. And mihika giggled.

Mihika : But u did right. He has to confess. But Akka I haven't thought jiju would be so romantic wahh .

Ishita : Haan to tumne kya samjha raman , mihir ke jaise todi hai . He is special

Mihika : Please Mihir ke bare mein kuch nahin . Or else Ill .

Ishita : Or else u will ?

Jus then the door bell rang.

Ishita : Mein rakti hoon lagtaa hai Raman a gaye
Mihika : Itni betabi .

Ishita : sHUT up yaar .

Mihika : Achaa have fun !! and tmr I need the whole update .

Ishita : Gandi larki.. bye

She hung up the phone and open the door. It was not Raman , but subramanium .

Sub: Ma'am Ye packet sir ne diya hai . app ke liye .

Ishita thanked him . and he left . Ishita received a text: Ive personally bought this one . Please don't assume things with ur brain. Please Wear it !! Ill be home soon !
Ishita opened the packet it was a blue dress. She loved it .


She wore it and got ready . Just then the bell rang again .

Ishita said : Ab to raman hi honge. She checked the mirror once again. She looked perfect.

When she opened the door, She SAW A BIG bouquet of rose.

She thought Raman was behind but no . Again subramanium .

Ishita : Tumhare saab kaha hai ?

Sub : MA'am I don't know .

And he left. She looked at the roses . They were beautiful.

There was a note. TO my beloved wife ...

She opened I t: Well Ishita , Ab tak to tumhara gussa 8 asmaan pe hoga. But have some patience darling . Im on my way . Ill compensate for all the time you missed me . I promise.

She smiled looking at the roses.and said Ravan kumar and she hit her head with her palm Raman kumar.

Just then someone suddenly hugged her from the back . and whispered in her ears.: I missed you . did u ?

Mihika was closing her main door and saw this . She screamed : Jiju Door to bang karlo . :P

Raman and Ishita blushed.

Raman : Kaafi samajdaar hai tumhari behen .

Ishita faked an anger. U know its been 2 hours im getting bored at home. And you , where were you ?

Raman looked at her from top to bottom. She was looking absolutely gorgeous in that dress.

Raman : Ishita You look beautiful. I didn't know my wife was so beautiful.

Ishita blushed and said : and I knew that my husband is an hot land .

Raman held her hand and went on his knees.

... Ishita I am not good at these things. U know im ur ravan kumar. And romance is just not my cup of tea. But I want to tell you that from the day u came into my life. Everything became right . You are a perfect human being, a perfect mom , and perfect daughter and perfect bahu , a perfect friend and most importantly a perfect wife. You are my Jhansi ki rani I just wanna grow older with you . I ... want to say that I that I that I he struggled. But continued.

I love you Ishita Raman kumar Bhalla. Will you be mine forever ?

Ishita was in tear. It was the cutest proposal ever. And she nodded. Raman hugged her and said : I love you wifey . and she replied I love you too.

After several minutes. They broke the hug.

Ishita : Raman , You had food ? Shall I make something for you ?

Raman held her hand and pull her close. And whispered in her ears: I want only you tonight and she blushed. He placed his lips on hers. And kissed her passionately . It was her first kiss. Their first kiss together. And they were responding with equal passion . When they were out of breath , they finally broke the kiss.

Raman : I loved the strawberry lip glosss .

IShita blushed.

Raman : Shall I taste it once again .?

Ishita : Shut up Raman and she blushed.

Raman : Waise tum to mujhe shermi mode dikane wali thi na .

Ishita : Raman. Raat baki hai .

It was passed midnight and the bhalla came back home.. Ishra entered their room hearing them.

Raman locked the door.

Raman : To tum kya keh rahi thi . and he kissed her neck .

Ishita pushed him. Raman was now back to the bed. AND ishita removed her heels. And she took few steps ahead . Raman was bowled by her naughty looks. He was just lost in her beauty. She took another step but she collapse on her stilettos and fall on Raman . And Raman fell on the bed with Ishita on top of her. They heard such a big noise. The bed was broken.

Ishra looked at each other. They were shocked. Just then they heard Mrs bhalla and Romi knocking at the door.

Ishita : Raman. Sab kya sochegein?

Raman : Wow wahi sochegein jo abhi hone wala ta.

Ishita : YeH KAISa bed hai tumhara ? Cheap.

Raman : Oh hello . Mere bed ko nahin pata ta. Ke uske upar ek over weight person girne wala hai . h

Romi screaming from outside: Bhai kya hua ? Itni awaaz ?

Raman : Romi kuch nahin ja sojaa.

MRS BHALLA : Raman darwaza kol

Raman : Maaa SO GAYE NA ...

Mrs bhalla nahin kol darwaza.

Raman knew he had to open the door. He opened the door and Mrs bhalla and romi entered. And she screamed: OYEEE yeh bed kaise tuta.

Raman and ishita looked at each other .

Romi : Bhai ! Us din Hollywood movie chal rahi thi . Ajj konsi movie 18+ chal rahi thi.

Raman : Tappad kayega. Pata nahin kaise tut gaya bed.

Romi : Bhai Kya kar rahe te iske upar, jo bed hi tut gaya.

Mrs Bhalla : Oyeee Koteyaa. Teri shaadi jab hoyegi to tujhe pata chalega.

She looked at Ishita all dressed up and understood the matter. And said : Chal romi iss romantic couple ko akela chor detein hain. And she laughed on them.

Romi : Bhai and bhabhie don't worry . Picture abhi baaki hai . Lage raho.

Raman closed the door as soon as Romi and mrs bhalla left. The couple smiled at the blunder they just made .


Guys i hope u liked it !! I didnt wanted to make Raman confession too fancy and out of Character. and for those who are waiting for the Suhaag raat. Point to be noted: Im not good in descriptions so dont expect so much .

thanks for the lovely comments on the previous part !
Love Ya !!
Pm sent !


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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Lovely update...
Raman confession was cute and beautiful...
Ohho..they broke the bed...
It was kinda embarassing for both of them to confront romi and mrs. Bhalla..
Update soon...with lots of ishralicious moments. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
OMG...Perfect...romantic...speechless..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
This was the ditto version of yhm
i could imagine everything
fab update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update.
specially the end was hilarious.
Romi was fab in his avtaar.
Thank u

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