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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
U r a fab writer yar. ...It was an perfect update. .romance. .passion. .teasing. .al elements were there. .plzzz update soon. . (Or I wld luv 2 read wat al happened in th bathroom according 2 ur pov. .so start 4m there itself. .he he)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Thank you all will update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
hahaha super funny !!
GODD THE EMBARASSEMENT !!!
Lolll
and by the way Jhappi in punjabi is hug no ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7: The New Journey

Ishitha now understands that it's not easy to handle Ravan kumar. She sweetly looks up into his eyes and smiles. Slowly moves her hand on his cheeks, Raman is clearly flattered by her looks.

I: Raman, Jhappi magrahe the na, Jhapphi too aap dee rahe ho na. Aap chodoge tho hi mai Jhappi de sakthi hu.( You were asking me to hug you right, you are hugging how can I hug you if you don't leave me)

R: Wah meri Janshi ki rani. Tumhari ehi baat se tho mai impress ho jatha hu. Tumme srif starting trouble hai, ek bar suru ho jathi ho to katham hone ka nam nehi lethe ho. (Gr8 my JSKR. I love this aspect of yours only. You only have a starting trouble; once you start you don't end.) Saying so he leaves her signng her to give him a hug.

Ishitha pushes him and runs out into her bedroom. Raman smiles seeing her shyness.

Raman is waiting in the hall reading news paper. Ishitha dresses up and comes out. She thanks god for her great life given. Raman is looking at her and smirks.

Ishitha brings him tea. They have a cute discussion and wonder when the other family members will come. They call up Romi to talk to Ruhi.

R: Hello romi, kase ho tum log

Ro: Bhai ham saab teek hai. Appa aur Bhabi kaise ho

R: We are good. Where is Ruhi?

Ro: Talk to her bhai.

Ru: Papa kaise ho

R: Mai tik hun, Ruhi iam putting the phone on speaker , talk to Ishi ma also.

Ru: Hello Ishi ma

I: Hi mera bacha, how are you? Dadi ko tang nehi kiya na?

Ru: Nehi mama, App bolo, app ne kya kiya. Papa bhut busy the kya. App bore ho rahi ho.

R: Nehi betta, papa ne too mama ko bhot entertain kiya. Mama too papa se bhout impress ho gaye. Pucho na, saying so he tickles Ishitha. She was astonished to see him talk about the last night to 6 year old kid. She was grinning at Raman

Ru: Sachhi papa.

R: Muchhi beta, Ruhi Promise.

Ru: I love you aap bhot ache ho. Ham see kithan pyar karthe ho. Kaise entertain kiya papa

R: who beta mama ko surprise diya aur dinner pe le gaya. Badme next day mama ne papa ko surprise diya. Bhot special or enjoyable surprise tha. Papa abhi bhi usse surprise ke bare mai soch rahe hai. Ishitha is furious on Raman.

Ru: Achha papa kya surprise tha, apne kya kiya.

R: Maine mama ko neya saree diya.

Ru: Toh mama ne kya kiya surprise me.

R: who beta, he was struck unable to answer her

I: came to his rescue, Beta mama ne papa ka favorite dish bana ya

Ruhi was very happy that she had lovable parents.She says they will reach by noon and hangs up the phone.

Ishitha is hittig Raman with the cushions for pulling her leg infront of Ruhi. They have cute nok jok. They wait for Ruhi and the family members.

Ishitha had made nice lunch for all of them. They have lunch and share their travel events with Raman and Ishitha.

Mihika and Mihir visit them in the eveing and all of them have got up after a deep sleep in the afternoon just then.

Ruhi tells Mihir that all of them were tired due to travel and they got up just now.

Ru: Chachu apko patha hai papa aur mama ne ek dusre ke saath bohut enjoy kiya. Surprise bhi diya. Phele papa ne diya bad me mam ne diya. Bhahut atccha tha. Pap bol rahe they. She says Raman papa and mama were also very tired. They also got up now only. Mihika and Mihir giggle hearing this.
Raman is gritting his teeth looking at Mihir and Ishitha out of shyness goes into Kitchen hiding herself.

Mihir tells them that since Ruhi is having holiday starting tomorrow. They have planned an outing for Ishu, Raman and Ruhi to Darjeling. They will have to leave tomorrow and share the tickets with them.

Raman and Ishitha smile looking at eachother and think of continuing their new journey started last night. They look for a gr8 honeymoon with their cute little angel Ruhi who is the basis of their love.

- Like a fairy tale they lived happy ever after.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nithya LOVED this SS of urs...once again another soulful beautiful SS..loved readin all updates...come back with ur new story soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Omg!! You are a amazing writing! Do scrap me your future works
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
I enjoyed while reading from the first part to till the end. Thank You. It was Very Nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awesome...Will be waiting for next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hehe, awesome teasing session by Vandu, Bala, Mihir and Mihika. Totally loved how they embarrassed Ishita and Raman. Raman and Ishita are so cute and I too am happy that they're finally starting their journey of being together, with Ruhi as well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is wonderful journey with your story

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