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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is beautiful. very romantic and sweet!!
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wow it was awesome Why cvs always feed us daal roti kuch acha kyoon nahi dikhate like this
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Fabulous
cant wait for the next part
plz update soon
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Thanks you all. Your motivation is letting me write more and more. i have been so engrossed to YHM and enjoy writing more of Raman and Ishitha. Will update the next part soon.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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OMG it's so good
Plzz update soon
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Part 4 - First Date:

Raman and Ishitha reach the date Venue. Raman was so sure that Ishu will accept his date request. He had decided to make the evening very memorable for her. It was a roof top lounge and he had booked the whole venue for them. It was beautifully decorated with Orchids and roses all over. There was a dim light and decorated with scented candles. The very sight of the location was ecstasy to Ishu. Raman smiled at her. Ishu says the place is so beautiful Raman.

There was a lone table and chair in the whole lounge and mild romantic music that was being played. Raman holds her hand , and gentle takes her to the table and makes her sit. He pulls the chair which was placed opposite to her adjacent to her chair and sits. They don't talk anything and simply gaze at each other. Raman was completely impressed in her beauty and had no word to speak. Ishu was feeling shy by his looks. She couldn't ask for anything more.

Finally she breaks the silence, Raman have you been here earlier.

R: Yes for my business meetings. I like this place hence wanted to come here with you. You know this the same place where we had to come on the day we got locked up in house.

I: Woh which means your business meetings regularly happen here.

R: No no my sweet heart, that day also Mihir had planned a date for us. Even I didn't know, when it was getting late I called up the investors that's when I got to know it was Mihir who was playing around.

I: Why didn't you tell me then, I would have changed. I was it that stupid dress for so long.

R: DO you think Iam an Idiot, I was enjoying my wife's beauty. You were indeed looking so gorgeous on that day.

I: Raman, you were eying me from then.

R: What do you mean, you are my wife. I have every right to do it

I: But you never told all this earlier.

R: Ishu, I had a heart burn earlier because of love. I was restricting myself from love and created a barrier around me for all kind of relationships. I never expected to fall in love again. I was struggling between my small mind and heart. That's when you came into my life and opened my heart and crushed the barriers that I had in life. He holds her hand as he says that.

I: Raman, if I may know why did Shagun call you today?

R: Ishu are you jealous?

I: Yes off course, you are my husband.

R: She keeps troubling me every now and then. She really spoilt Adhi to the extent that's bad beyond correction. When she can make a 7 year old to lie in the court for her personal preferences she can do anything and everything. Iam fed up and doesn't heed to any of her things. She knows Adhi is my weakness and tries to capitalize that. Forget it why are we even talking about that lady during our first date.

I: She made Adhi lie? Whats that's Raman?

Raman tells her how she manipulated Adhi and what made her walk out of our marriage and how were they all those things. In fact they discussed minutest details of his failed wedding. From how they got into relationship until how they ended theirs.

Ishitha was in tears, to know what a kind of loving husband Raman was. Ishu held his hand and wiped the tears in his eyes. It had the pain of losing Adhi. She was feeling how a women could be like Shagun.

Ishitha tries to convince him. She gives him water. Meanwhile they get their soup and starters. She comforts Raman and feed him his soup. He is still in a state if grief and she mildly plants a kiss on his hand which she was holding. Raman looks up into her eyes. She is also in tears, she tells him Raman though I might not be able to give you a son, but I assure you that Ruhi is always with you and you bond together for lifetime. I will never let anything come between you. I assure you a relationship of trust, love, friendship and respect between us for rest of our life. I know iam not a complete wife, I can never give you a child but I will try till fill that void with my love.

R: Wipes his tears and drinks some water. Moves his hands over her cheeks and wipes her tears and says Ishu how dare you say that you are not a complete wife. You are the best women and wife that can be in this world.

I: Raman, please I know whats the truth. Subbu outright told me this and broke our relationship that we had from the age of 15 years. You don't have to be sugar coated to me.

R: Are you out your mind. Iam not trying to be sugar coated to you, I really mean it. What's making you think like this?

Ishitha tells him how she was in love with Subbu and their relationship. How he ended it when he got to know that she cannot conceive. She cries sharing the details of the past.

Raman comforts her. He tells her giving birth to a kid doesn't make a women mother. You are the best mom ever in this world. The love you give Ruhi cannot be given by any mother to her kid. Iam really proud of you. And Iam thankful to Subbu because he left you, I was able to get a wife like you. Both of them smile. They finally opened up their past to each other and a new bond of friendship, sharing and caring was blossoming between them.

Raman eyes a packet that's there on the table. He tells Ishu I forgot something.

She asks him what. Raman opens the packet. It's a ring, Raman gets up and goes over his knees and asks for her hand to put the ring. She blushes and gives him the hand; he puts the ring on and takes her for a dance. They dance in the slow music and are engrossed in each other. After a long deal of passionate and initimate dance they finally feel hungry. Have dinner and leave home.

Ishu is nervous when they reach home. She is expecting Raman to take the relationship forward. Their no one at home and there was every possibility. In fact he wanted to do it in the evening before they left. Raman understands her state, takes his cloths to change and says you change here. I will change in the washroom and come. Don't panic Iam not going to take this forward at least today. I want you to be convinced. Just sleeping together doesn't make a relationship. I told you already. Iam ready to wait.

Ishitha smiles, he smiles back and leave. He comes back changed and says he need to go early tomorrow. He is going to have a heavy day tomorrow. However he will come home early. He hits the bed. Ishitha is taking the pillows and moving to sleep on the sofa.

R: Ishu, whats this why are you going there? Sleep with me.

I: You told me that you will wait and you are saying this now.

R: Why are you always so stupid? Bhagvan ne tumhe banathe wqat dimag lagana bol gaya kya.( When god created you , did he forget to attach a brain)

I: what Raman?

R: If you sleep with me on the same bed doesn't mean I will do anything of that sort with you. I just want to hug you and sleep. I hope that's not a great problem for you. This is for you. He hands over a portraint handpainting of Raman, Ruhi and Ishu.

I: She is delighted and says she will put it on the wall. But, Raman shall I sleep

As she is saying so. He drags her by her wrist and she falls on the bed. Whats this Ishu, I need to hug you today. I truly feel that I have obtained your love. This will give me that comfort. Please.

Ishitha is unable to refuse now as he is pleading. Ishitha lies down next to him, he hugs her from her back. He buries his head in her back and gently places a kiss. Ishitha was initially little uncomfortable and then they both sleep together happily. It was a new beginning for both of them.

Part 5 - The day of unison

Raman is surprised to see his room. It's all decorated for their suhag Raath. The atmosphere is so romantic his irritated mood is turning to romatic sensuous mood. The door opens and he turns around to see Ishitha, typically like a Punjabi Dulhan

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What Ishita and Raman shared during their first date must have been too deep but it was necessary so that they know each other's pain before they move on in their life. It was sweet how Raman wanted to just hug Ishita and sleep. Can't wait for the next chapter !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb... Continue soon...
well written..
u shoud write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5 - The day of unison

It's a new morning; the cute couple is sleeping entangled with each other. The orange rays of sun fall on Ishu through their bedroom window. Ishu wakes up and sees her Ravan kumar hugging her. She slowly removes his hand not to disturb him. He also gets up with the sound and holds her hand

R: Ithne subh Subh tum madrase yo ko kyi uttana hotha hai yar. Aur todi der so nehi sakthi (Why do u Madrase have to wake up so early. Sleep for some more time)

I: Chodiye Raman, Mujje kam hai. (Leave me I have work)

R: Kya kam hai yar. Who he Gas puz banana hai na. Todi der so javo. (What work do you have, you will make some greens that's what. Sleep na)

I: Apko Jaldi Jana tha na? Mai apke liye nastha bandethi hu. Sandwhich ya paratha kya banna vu. (You wanted to leave early na, what will u have Sandwhich ya paratha)

R: Tik hai fur, javo. Kuch bi banawo yar. (Ok then, make something)

She is making tea. He is turning to otherside and Raman comes from behind and hugs her.

I: Are Raman aap. Kya kar rahe hai. Chodiye, Adhi maid aa jeye gi.( Leave me , maid will come)

R: Koye nehi aayega. Mane Maid ko aaj chitti de di, taki mai tumhare saat freely romance kar saku. (I have given leave to the maid so that I can have a free Romance session with you)

I: Had hai, mujje kithna kam tha ajj. Mujje puche bina kyi chitti de. App be na irritating. ( I had lot of work with her. You would have aske me)

R: Kya yaar Ishita, subh subha accha kasa mood karab karthi ho.

I: Sorry, appka mood karab nehi karna tha. Who mai aaj app ke liye Chiken bana chathiti. Who rahe gi to help ho jatha. Tik hai koi nehi. Mai bana lungi. Lunch me box bejvangi.( Didn't want to spoil your mood. I wanted to make Chicken today. If she was there it would have been help. No worries I will manage)

R: No I have a lunch on meeting. Aur tumhe non Veg banana ki koye jarurat nehi. Mai non veg chod diya. ( I have left eating Non Veg)

I: Kya, but kui.( Why)

R: Tumhare liye. Mujje bura lagtha hai jab tum mere liye banthi ho. ( I feel bad when you make it for me)

I: I don't mind Raman

R: I mind. So don't dare to do it again.

Saying so they take their tea and have some cute talk in the sofa of their drawing room.

Ishitha leave to have bath. Raman is working in his laptop in their room. Ishitha comes after her shower. The smell of the shampoo and soap is getting attention of Raman. She is in front of the dressing table and he goes to her. He hugs her from behind; you look so beautiful immedetly after shower. I love to see this awtar of yours daily. Ishitha is blushing. He is hugging her and she is getting ready. She is about to keep the sindoor. He stops her and he fills her mag. She is very touched. She turns around and looks into his eyes. He is seeing her rosy lips and wants to taste it. He pulls her tightly towards him and gives her a kiss. She is resisting initially and then gives in.

They have an intense kiss untill both of them struggle to breath. He leaves her and goes to have bath.

This Raman says he will give me time and does all kind of antics to make me fall in trap. Ishu you have to be strong. She is trying all his means to get you. She thinks. Her inner voice tells her aren't you enjoying all this. Do you really want to stay away from Ravan Kumar? She smiles and leaves to make breakfast.

Ishu makes aloo paratha for breakfast and he happily haves it. She greets him, he places a kiss on her forehead and leaves for work. She wants to vist her parents place, she was very happy today and wanted to lay down on her mother's lap for sometime.

She goes to her amma's place. To her surprise Vandu akka is there. They share a cute family moment. Vandu and Ishu go inside and Ishu wants to dicsuss her confusion with Vandu.

I: Vandu akka I need to talk to you about something very important. Iam very confused.

V: tell me Ishu

I: She tells about yesterday's incident and how she has started falling for Raman.

Vandu is happy hearing all this. Raman is a true gentleman. His approach towards things might be different but he a very good person. Iam happy for you. But what is the confusion. You must be happy.

I: akka he wants to take this relationship ahead. Do you get what am I trying to say.

V: So that's good, whats the problem. Enjay na, Iam sure you also want him to love you. Trust me it's a great feeling

I: akka its new to me , Iam very nervous.

V: Are you out of your mind. You have never experienced that feeling. But Raman has experienced it earlier in life. He will teach you. Don't worry. She teases her.

I: Akka iam worried here and you are teasing me.

V: Ishu there is nothing to be worried about. Like the rain fall in a natural thing husband expecting to make love with wife is natural. You are a matured girl, wise women but don't you understand this. Ideally you must have let him do it last night, after so much of romantic talks he must have longed to have that relationship with you. But you idiot disappointed him. See there is no one at home. Please don't disappoint him tonight. I will give you tips.

I: Akka iam afraid.

V: Just imagine about Raman Ishu, do you really want to be a good wife to him or you are saying it just like that.

Akka

Then be a good girl. I will give tips that I use with your Bala Jiju.

Both the sisters are blushing.

Ishu is busy decorating her bed room. Earlier during the day she had gone out for shopping and had bought a pink colour lehanga. She is very happy. Its 7 Pm and Raman is back. He is in a very irritated mood. Ishitha wonders what happened. She doesn't let him go inside the room and gives his dress outside the room and askes him to change. He changes and has dinner. He is not talking anything. Isitha initiates a conversation. She gets to know that Adhi and Shagun had been to his office and insulted him in front of one of a important clients and he was upset about it. She consoles him. He then brushes it off and starts watching cricket.

She cleans the kitchen and goes to Ruhi's room to get ready. Raman is tried and goes into his room to sleep. He tells Ishitha iam going to sleep. Come down once you are done with your work. Good night.

The moment he enters his room he is surprised by the sight of his room. It's all decorated for their suhag Raath. He sees the portrait that he gave her last night on the wall of their room.There was rose petels on their bed. Fragrance filled roses all over the room. Scented candles around. The atmosphere is so romantic his irritated mood is turning to romatic sensuous mood. He hears the sound of the door opening and he turns around to see Ishitha, typically like a Punjabi Dulhan in her pink coloured lehanga. She was absolutey beautiful and inviting. He is awed.

R: Isitha you look gorgeous and whats all this. Are you sure about this.

I: She is looking down and says yes.

He pulls her close to him and lifts her chin up. Look into my eyes and tell me

I: She is shy but tell him sure.

He is so happy and excited. He lifts her in his arms and takes her to their bed. He slowly removes her jwellary and then her cloths. She is resitent initially and slowly responds to all his actions with a lot of passion. He was surprised to see a wild Janshi ki Rani .They consummate their marriage and feel the most blessed couple during that night.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww wht lovely updates-totally loved loved parts 4 n 5..!!

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