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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it. I'm happy finally they opened their bitter past n shared with each other. They had a heart felt conversation .It'll lead them to a stronger relationship . Waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice. Loved how caring and patient Raman is with Ishita.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love romantic Raman !! The way he keeps hugging Ishita from the back was so sweet !! I'm happy that Ishita took the step to show Raman that she's ready to move this relationship forward. What she did to surprise him was beautiful !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4 & 5 are very nicely written, love to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Very we'll written.
I liked how you showed them going thru the various stages and what helped them transition.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Loved it !!!!!!
and Vandu and ishita talk !! haah !! Loved it !!
Tips that she used with Bala !! lolll

Continueee soon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6 - the new dawn:

It was a very memorable night for both of them. It was first time for Ishitha and she was little hesitant about things initially. Raman nicely progressed with his moves and slowly made her comfortable. Raman made her so comfortable that she started responding to him passionately. With her Passion, Raman started being violent with her unable to resist his feelings. After all it was 6 years since he made love with a women.And he was doing it this time with a woman who had made him realize what the meaning of real love is. And for Ishitha it was the first time and she was acting as though she was desperate for this for years. Ishitha did enjoy his violent love and responding to him with same vigour. Raman was actually tired that day, and wanted to sleep. But with the twist of events he was not able to sleep. She was in the ecstacy of his love and so was he. They were very happy about what they were going through that night. They were up for very long that night and finally they didn't realize when the slept.

It's was a new dawn. It was 8 AM in the morning and the couple with the amount of passion they had last night were still cuddled with each other in a deep sleep. That's when Ishitha's phone rings. This disturbs both Raman and Ishu. The call was from Vanditha. She had put it on speaker. Bala, Mihika and Mihir were also listening to their conversation. Apparently Mihir had come down to meet Mihika and learns about Ishitha's discussion with Vandu yesterday. All four of them are all set to tease Ishu & Raman.

R: Kyan hai yar subh Subha. Kyan call ker raha hai.( What is this who is calling so early in the morning)

I: Patha nehi dekthi hu. The phone was to Raman's Side and she rolled over him to pick it up. Raman was still holding her tight.

V: Hi Ishu, Kya kar rahi hai( What are you doing)

I: Akka, iam sleeping. Why did you call me so early?

V: Early kya, its 8 Am my dear sister. What Raman didn't let you sleep last night or you dint let him sleep.

I: She tries to get up after knowing the time but Ravan kumar is holding her so tight that she isn't able to get up. When she sees him shirtless, she comes back to her senses and remembers their last night. She smiles. She quickly checks if she is wearing something and realizes that she is wearing nighty which Raman had gifted with the saree the previous day. She smiles seeing it again.

V: Ishu are you there, or else you guys started romancing again.

I: She gets back to her senses and tells akka, aap bhi na. Kuch be bolthe ho. Mai tode der me call karthe hu.( Akka you tell some thing or the other. Will call you back) Saying so she hangs up the call.

When they are not able to get their way with Ishu, Mihir calls Raman. Raman gets up to pick his phone and in the process leaves Ishu. She settles herself to other side of the bed.

R: Mihir ka phone, isko kya hua hai, Ha Mihir Bol.( Its Mihir's call. What happened to him)

M: Bhai, Who Mr Mehtha wali file appne sign nehi kiya. That has to go today. When are you coming to office? (You have not signed Mr. Mehtha's File)

R: kyan sa file, Sare kaam to kal hi nipta diya na.( What file, I completed all the work yesterday only)

M: Hah bhai, abhi apko Kam ki yad kui ayegi? Pichle 2 gante see bell baja raha hu, koi darvaja kol nehi raha hai. Merko bi samjna chahiye, Ghar me koi nehi hai too Husband and wife busy honge na.( Yes Bro why will you rmember work now. I have been ringing the bell for past 2 hrs now. I must alo understand, there is no one at home husband and wife will be busy na)

R: Tujje tooh mai abhi ake tapad Martha hu. (I will slap you now)

Saying so he walks out of the room with his pant alone (doesn't realize that he is shirtless) to open the door. Ishu sees her lip marks on his chest and back and tries to call him, but he closes the door and leaves.

He opens the door only see Bala, Vandu, Mihir and Mihika ready to pull the leg of bith husband and wife.

The women become embaressed to see Raman shirtless and turn around that's when Raman realizes his state and quickly grab a towel to wrap it around him. The women leave to Ishu's bedroom to see Ishu while the men catch hold of Raman.

M: Bhai, Apke Gal me kise love virus ka attack lag raha hai. Pura red hai.( Bro your cheeks has had a love virus attack, its all red)

B: Nehi yar mihir, isse Virus attack nehi love bites bolthe hai. ( No Mihir this attack is called love bites)

Raman is getting embarred and trying to go to his room, but the two men catch hold of him with Ishu's lipstick marks on his back and her ear rings struck on his hair. They also see Ishu's nail marks on his chest. They start teasing him to death. Finally Raman manages to escape the two and with immense embaressment he quicky gets into the bathroom to have bath. Mihir and Bala laugh hillariuosly.

On the other hand Vandu and Mihika see Ishu in the nighty. She was about to change into her saree when the ladies got into her room. They see it's a sexy night gown and they start.

V: Mihika tumhe patha hai kissi ko kal bhot dar lagraha tha. Pur ajj deko puri sexy queen bane kadi hai.( Mihika do you know someone was very afraid yesterday but today she has became a sexy queen)

M: Akka I don't belive this. Jab ham log unhe sleeveless pehenne kye liye kahthey the tooh unhi bura lagtha tha, aaj. What a change. Jiju ka magic bahot accha hai.Jiju ke liye everything is ok.( When we asked to wear sleeveless she was feeling back,Jiju's magic is so good)

Ishitha is very embaressed. The room is in a state of mess. Their cloths were scattered all over. There were roses, Candles and Vandu and Mihika were commenting about all these things. Ishu was not even able to look up and see both of them.

Mihika notices Raman's teeth marks on Ishu's shoulders and neck. They start their teasing session in full swing and Ishitha looks very helpless.

She runs out of the room and gets into the bathroom and locks it. Raman in the jittery forgot to close the door. So both Raman and Ishitha land up in the same bathroom adding to further embaressment.

Raman and Ishu realize that they are in togather and others outside are having fun at their cost. Now it's getting really too much, Raman comes out and in his usual authoritative style asks Mihir so whats the problem. Now the women leave to iyers place not able to face Raman. He asks Bala, so Bala don't you do this with Vanditha whats your problem. Who can talk against Raman Kumar Bhalla when he is in his Ravan kumar mode. Now Mihir and Bala sobber down. Now Raman tells Mihir that if he has anything important he can get his signatures now as he is not coming to office today.

Mihir asks him why to which Raman responds saying he is tired. Mihir giggles for which Raman responds

R: abbe abb tune danth dikana band nehi kiya too yad rakna teri abbe tak Suhag Rath nehi huha hai. Teri Suhag Rath karab nehi kiya na mera bi nam Raman Kumar bhalla nehi hai. (If you don't stop laughing now, remember your wedding night is not yet over. If I don't spoil it my name is not Raman Kumar Bhalla)

M: Bhai sorry. Actually kuch kam pending nehi hai. App rest lelo. Saying so Mihir leaves with Bala.

Now Ishu mildly calls Raman from the Bathroom. Raman can you please give me a change over cloth, I have finished having my bath. I couldn't pick one because of Vandu akka and Mihika.

Raman smiles and mutters to himself yeh Janshi ki Rani dirty picture part 2 ke liye bula rahi hai. Muke pe choka marna hi chahiye. ( She is calling me for Dirty Picture part 2, I must not leave this chance) Saying so he moves towards the bathroom and knocks pretending to have her cloths. Ishu opens the door and he quickly gets into the bathroom and locks it.

She is drapping a towel around her with wet water droplets falling from her hair. She is shocked to see him & quickly turns around not to face him.

I: Raman kya kar rahe hai. Abbe too ithna der un logone hamara majak udaya. ( What are you doing, now only they were making fun of us). Please leave me.

While she is saying so Raman moves towards her and makes her turn around and hugs her.

R: Last night you were not saying all this.you were enjoying it. In fact you were not letting me sleep inspite of the fact that I was tired and now you want me to leave you.

Ishitha is feeling very shy and trying to remove his hold. Raman Please chodiye na.

R: Pahale ek jappi do. Punjabi me Jappi samjthe ho na. Us din toh bada Punjabi bol rahi the. (Give me a kiss first - he asks in Punjabi. Do you know what is Jappi, the other day you were speaking a lot of Punjabi. Now tell me)

I: Please Raman, Abhi abhi nahaya hai.( I had bath just now)

R:Dont worry, Lets have bath togather again now.

I: Please

R: Kal raath ko tho bade shirni ban rahi thi. Yeh lip bites ker rahi thi. Aur patha hai kithne jangli ho yar, deko mere chest me nakun ke nishan. (Last night you were giving me lot of lip bites. You know how violent you are. See the scratches of your nails on my checst)

I: app kunse kamm hao. App ke danth ke nishan deko Meri gaal me, shoulders me, neck me aur, she is about to refer to her b and stops.( Are you less, see your bite marks on cheeks, shoulders, neck )

R: He realizes what was she refreing to and asks her aur kaha Ishitha, dikavo na and tries to see her ...( where else Ishu, show me na)

She blushes and tries to het rid of him. Raman is in no mood to leave her and they end up with what I leave to your imagination.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
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Btw u wrote part 5 instead of 6 in this chapter

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*Heights of embarrassment * imagine seeing someone in a state just out of bed after spending a love night.
Those lipsticks and love bites. And moreover he even says he is tired. Ahem ahem. Now we know why is that so
But RKB back to ravan kumar and that is enough for everyone to get back to theirs homes.
really girl it was amazing chap. Romance, teasing, flirting and Besharam RKB.
Edited by florine_20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
today i read ur part 5 & 6 i loved both parts u have written very beautiful loved it wanna read more n more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤪mind blowingly awesome part.. plz upd8 soon :)

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