Finally read all three parts in one go!! And I have to tell you I loved it..
Loved the first OS.. Using subbu to create jealousy was beautifully executed.. A tinge of jealousy always do wonders.. Knowing RKB's egoistic stubborn self and Ishita's prejudices, it was a good idea of bringing in Subbu.. Really beautifully penned scene..
Loved everything about second OS.. Start from the title aaj rapat jaye' till the end .. Loved each and every scene you illustrated.. It left me craved for more of IshRa.. The umbrella scene, car locking up scene.. and then the Dori scene.. Ahhaaa, what a romantic moment!! I like the way you build up emotions and express the confusions and tensions.. IshRa definitely have a complex relationship and you presented it so well..
Third OS/ part- I loved it the most.. Here RKB's emotions came out beautifully.. Loved how you show his restlessness, impatience.. The way he missed his Jhansi ki raani..' Such a beautiful kashmakash- Chhoopana bhi nahi aata.. jatana bhi nahi aata.."..The dialogues were so IshRalicious.. It has jab, bickering yet emotions and tenderness..
"No, this won't do. Samajhti kya hai woh apne aap ko? Seriously, she cannot even text me? Aisa kya conference hai uska ki ek minute ka break bhi nahin mil raha usse. Mummy, papa, Ruhi, Amma, Appa, Vandu, Bala sab ko phone ya text kar chuki hai. Shaayad Mihir se bhi baat kar li hogi paagal aurat ne. Bas mujhse baat karna zaroori nahin samjha" It was around midnight on the Thursday. He couldn't go to sleep. Ruhi had been very tired that night and had slept really early. He was left alone with his thoughts. He picked up his phone for the umpteenth time today, and finally decided to touch the green button.
I just love this para.. I could imagine Raman's peevish look and his grumbling.. and the last para was the highlight of the update.. you stole my heart with IshRa's reaction at the airport..
You did full justice to the entire scene.. I just loved loved loved it..Oky now, I am really eager to read the next update.. Where you're going to deal with ishita's emotions..Awesome story!! ❤️
Arjun
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