Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 10

Very good man

Even last one was good

This shows your range is good

Earlier they were tragic

Now they are pretty normal stuff

Maybe comic next time

interesting and Different Loved it

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg yday only i ws discussin with BGDs wht all can happen when Ishu goes to conf to some other place...n here u r with os on SAME subject...

omggg i LOVED LOVED it..!! mujhe bhi toh YAHI IRRIATED SULKY BHALLA ko dekhna hai shw mein in Ishu's absence..😆...

so well written...n am equally excited to see Ishu's haal too as i knw it would be similar to her patidev...

Thanks Nikki 🤗

Seriously, you guys were discussing this??? I got the idea when Raman made that drama of complaining to his mother that Ishita ki wajah se uska khoon beh raha tha and all... maine socha bacchhu ek din Ishita paas nahin hogi to dekhte hain kya hota hai tumhaara 😆

@bold - thats my favourite one too😉

Ishu ka side aaj likhna start karti hoon...

yes lucky..v were discussin in fb..

n yes waitin for ishu's thoughs..

n write one more part plz where both will "half" confess their true state baaton baaton mein to each other,yet they will try hard to cover it n in the end both feel "kuch toh hai unn dono ke beech"..can u?😉

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Very good man

Even last one was good

This shows your range is good

Earlier they were tragic

Now they are pretty normal stuff

Maybe comic next time

Honestly, your comment on one of the earlier ones prompted me to take the plunge into this style... so thanks 😊

@bold... I thought a couple of them in the separation saga were funny... no??? 😆 I was actually proud of some of my RKB one-liners I will try more...

Genuinely appreciate your feedback 😊

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

yes lucky..v were discussin in fb..

n yes waitin for ishu's thoughs..

n write one more part plz where both will "half" confess their true state baaton baaton mein to each other,yet they will try hard to cover it n in the end both feel "kuch toh hai unn dono ke beech"..can u?😉

I promised a romantic one to Reeno, in honour of completing her exams... So I will do that as soon as Ishu's story is over 😊

I'm shamelessly grinning like an idiot at the moment 😆

I adored it! I love how you keep the character's nuances in your writing. I can totally imagine Raman holding onto Ruhi for reassurance as he grapples with the gravity of his feelings - literally that line of yours melted my already mushy IshRa heart.

Raman is just so endearing and the progression of his feelings and realization is just so heartwarming. You have such a gift! I'm looking forward to reading your next piece on Ishita's feelings.

Originally posted by: happenstance

I'm shamelessly grinning like an idiot at the moment 😆

I adored it! I love how you keep the character's nuances in your writing. I can totally imagine Raman holding onto Ruhi for reassurance as he grapples with the gravity of his feelings - literally that line of yours melted my already mushy IshRa heart.

Raman is just so endearing and the progression of his feelings and realization is just so heartwarming. You have such a gift! I'm looking forward to reading your next piece on Ishita's feelings.

Didn't miss your stop or anything no??? 😉

Thanks for the feedback... go write your mirror scene now. waiting 😊

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Honestly, your comment on one of the earlier ones prompted me to take the plunge into this style... so thanks 😊

@bold... I thought a couple of them in the separation saga were funny... no??? 😆 I was actually proud of some of my RKB one-liners I will try more...

Genuinely appreciate your feedback 😊

No worries

I meant crazy stuff

Most of your stories have a good emotions in it I can feel it

So try writing meaningless stuff like govinda film

Would love to read it

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Didn't miss your stop or anything no??? 😉

Thanks for the feedback... go write your mirror scene now. waiting 😊

Lol no today I made sure I was glancing up every few minutes 😆 planning on finishing Ishita's mirror in between meetings today- effective use of my time I think lol.