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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Bee222

I feel for Veronica 🥺 you guys have fleshed her out so well ❤️


This Abhay ka baccha... 😒


I'm taking the next segment after Shibu then..

Thanks Bhree...now I am waiting eagerly to read yours..and how you'll take the story forward. I am blocking the next segment after you to write.
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
#32

Okay, seriously guys, WTF?! Get a good mfing director, this needs to be a series!!


Loved it! the perfect start, the fairy-tale and the truth breaking Veronica's perfect world!! Ooffff!! *Chefs kiss* kya mast likha hai!! 👏🥳

Enjoyed it.

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Mystery Masterminds

Posted: 2 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: WildestDreams

Segment 2 by Quantum-Dot

Segment 3 by DreamOfEndless


Segment 4 by Shibani


Segment 5 by Bee


Segment 6 by Simi

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Posted: 2 years ago
#34

Segment #4


12 January 2013

Dear Veronica,

Do you remember me? We volunteered for the Face Painting Contest at Conjura, our college fest in the first year. We were so bored of doing nothing that you ended up teaching me Flick Football and I won! But you said it was beginner's luck. Anyway, my therapist suggested I write my diary entries like I am talking to someone, and you are the one person who will never talk to me, so I guess you are the best person to write these to because you'll never care about me.

Done with his life,

Samarth


06 July 2014

Dear Veronica,

I walked in on you kissing Abhay today in an empty classroom. I felt jealous, but why? You are just some girl I know because of my classmate, and heck! I have a girlfriend! I shouldn't feel this way about who you kiss, it's not my goddamn business! I walked out of there as fast as I could, but the image is stuck in my head.

In pain,

Samarth


29 April 2016

Dear Veronica,

I have been writing this after ages, seeing you with my classmate has been painful, and I realized it was because I was harbouring a crush on you since the College fest and I was denying it. But now that I have realized my feelings, and acknowledged them, maybe I should stay away from you, it will only cause me to feel hurt.

Conflicted,

Samarth


04 August 2021

Dear Veronica,

It's been about a while since your wedding. I know it because I helped Shweta pick a gift for you. I saw him today, Abhay, at a hotel, with a woman. At first, I thought it was you, but then, it was some other woman. I didn't give it much thought until I saw them kissing. Did your marriage fail? Was he cheating on you? Are you ok? I wish I would have known. I wish I could move on. I shouldn't care about you, but I do, and it's the worst feeling ever, because I know, you don't care about me.

Wishing I could do more,

Samarth


18 December 2022

Dear Veronica,

I met you today. I saw you at your worst. You broke down and it felt like someone broke my heart and handed me the pieces and asked me to join them back together. I wish I had told you the truth ages ago, but who was I in your story, a nobody? A person you know because of your cousin and husband. You wouldn't trust me at all, anyway. I wish I could fix it for you, I am so sorry! Why has life come to this, where seeing you only bring me pain, guilt and confusion?

Guilty as hell,

Samarth

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Dear Mrs Veronica Abhay Mehta,

Please find attached your pregnancy results. We are pleased to tell you that the results are positive. Please contact us to schedule an appointment at the earliest.

Yours Sincerely,

Dr Afreen Qureshi

MBBS, MD (Obstetrics & Gynaecology)

Trinity Hospital

Edited by oh_nakhrewaali - 2 years ago
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago
#35

Beautiful update, Shibz 😍

So Sam was having one sided feelings for Veronica for quite a long time. He was also seeing a therapist.

Excited for the next segment!

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
#36

OMG!!! Now this is hitting the gut! The diary entries, well penned.

Vero preggo 😭 that was not needed. Loving the new conflict 👏


Ab aage kya hoga?!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#37

Credits for the therapist suggesting their patient to maintain diary entries goes to Naya

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Posted: 2 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

OMG!!! Now this is hitting the gut! The diary entries, well penned.

Vero preggo 😭 that was not needed. Loving the new conflict 👏


Ab aage kya hoga?!!

@bold, it will give the next few writers something more to explore, they can go with it in three days, so😅

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

@bold, it will give the next few writers something more to explore, they can go with it in three days, so😅

aree it was a compliment..for raising the drama quotient 👍🏼
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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago
#40

Wow, that's a very beautiful segment, Shibani. Loved it thoroughly. Waiting to know how you take it forward now, Bhree.

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