Mehbeer ff: The Revenge For Love chp 3 till 30 (Completed) - Page 2

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Chp 6
Flashback continues:
The trio have a group hug. Nisaar comes and says:
"U r doing group hug without me"

He fakes sadness.
Abeer: no bro, come u can join us.
He takes him in their group hug.
Nisaar: (whispers to Abeer) ladki milgai he he
Abeer glares at him. They break the hug.
Nisaar: Shalini, tell me one thing, what made u befriend Abeer?
Abeer glares at him again.
Shalini: vo...he saved me from those bad boys and protected me when I was scared yesterday as I was wearing this dress sent by him.

She stammers.
Nisaar whispers to Abeer: ladki beautiful kargai chull
Nisaar: didn't u felt uncomfortable
Shalini nods no. Abeer changes the topic.
Abeer: tumlog ko college nh Jana kia?
Shalini: oh han Jana hai, m going bye.
Abeer blocks her way.
Abeer: not alone, m coming with u.
Nisaar: han bhai ja, sambhal k chhorna kahin Teri wali faraar na hojaye.
Abeer ignores him while Shalini feels weird. She stumbles. Abeer holds her and his hands slides down his bare waist as she was still wearing the same dress. Nisaar fakes a cough and they straighten themselves and go from there.
Nisaar: abhi 2 din hue hai us se mile, or itna pyar
Sasha giggles.
Fb end.

Meher: Maa m so sorry meri waja se aap sab pareshan hogaye

Suman: nh, me soch rahi hoon k agar use tujhse itna pyar tha k usne tujhe marrne se bacha lia, to phir usne tujhe ghar se nikala q? kahin usey kisi ne manipulate to nh kia?

Meher: mujhe nh pta, agar kia hai or vo uski baato me agaya to uska trust itna kacha tha, kesa pyar tha ye uska
Tunnu: uska Jo hona hai hojaega, filhal hum khana khaein? sabne kuch nh khaya jb aap gai to
Meher nods yes

They sit to eat and someone rings the doorbell.
Meher: I should hide, pta nh kon hoga
She goes to her room and hides there. Suman opens the door and it was Madhvi. Suman gets annoyed seeing her.
Madhvi: m sorry for ur loss.
Suman: what sorry? first u trick my daughter, then u kick her out of ur house and she was about to die because of u people.
Madhvi: Marrne wali thi mtlb? vo zinda hai?
Suman realizes what she just said.
Suman: kese zinda hogi vo?
Madhvi: abhi aapne he to kaha
Suman: no I didn't mean that, I meant that she died
Madhvi gets suspicious but soon brushes off her thoughts.
Madhvi: even m mourning for her death, Abeer ne use bachane ki koshish ki thi, manti hu Abeer se galti hogai, pr aise apki beti wapis to nh ajaegi na...hosake to maaf krdena
Suman thinks: wapis agai hai or jald tum sab se badla legi
Suman nods yes. Madhvi leaves, Meher stands outside her room teary eyed as she heard the whole convo.
Meher's POV:
M sorry aunty I have to hide like this, u showed that u never wanted to make me out of house and that u loved me, but I can't show my face to anyone till I take revenge.
I went downstairs just after she went.
"Maa don't be afraid n be careful next time, they will doubt us if we say so." I said worriedly.
"I said by mistake, I don't think there will be a next time when we meet." Maa replied.
"But I will have to take revenge from Abeer, he has hurt me more than I deserve, but what should I do to take revenge?" I asked her.
"Maybe Sneha can help u." She replied and I smiled in return.
End of POV

At Abeer's house, in Abeer's room, Madhvi and Abeer were sitting together talking.
Madhvi: aaj main Suman ji se mili to unho ne yun kaha k meri beti marrne wali thi, I found something suspicious, I think Shalini is alive.

Abeer stands up from the bed.
Abeer: how can it be? She was laying dead in front of me.
Madhvi: ek tareeka hai Jan ne ka, jis doctor k pas tum legaye they hosakta hai vo humari help kre.
Abeer: OK

Meher and Sneha meet in a cafe.
Sneha: r u really Shalini?
Meher: yes
Sneha: yakeen nh horaha, but y this death drama?
Meher: I want to take revenge for what he did.
Flashback continues:
Few days later, Shalini and Abeer's frndship turned into love and they also confessed it to each other. Shalini was sitting in her room when she receives a message by Abeer. It said come down, its important.

She wonders what happened and goes downstairs and sees Abeer bent on his knees.
Abeer: I want to say something, since the first time I saw u, I started loving u, now my love is even more than before, do u love me?
Shalini smiles and gives her hand in his hand.
Shalini: I love u 2 Abeer.
He stands up and hugs her, she hugs him back.
From that day, they were always together, they finished their studies together and now their families met and fixed the alliance. After many ceremonies, their marriage was done. Shalini thought that she would be the happiest person on Earth after marrying Abeer, but little did she know that her life is going to be the worst. Few weeks of married life were really good. Everyone were really sweet to her, she loved their sugar coated behaviour being an innocent soul. One day, she was working in kitchen and Abeer came and hugged her from behind due to which the tea set in which she was filling tea broke and fell on her feet.
Shalini: ouch its hurting.
Abeer's father enters.
Father: what the hell? theek se grip nh krsakti kia? nuksaan kradia
Shalini who was hissing in pain starts crying.
Abeer: papa plz, can't u see she's hurt? aapko apne nuksaan ki pari hai, ye sab mujhse hua hai, stop shouting on her.
Father: Maine to pehle he kaha she's a bad luck for us, let's get her out of here.
He approaches Shalini but Abeer comes in between.
Abeer: Maine kaha na mujhse hua hai, khabardar Jo hath bhi lagaya usse
Shalini: sorry uncle
Father: shut up!
Abeer: just stop it!
He takes Shalini from there.

Next incident was much worse than this. Abeer's father Kuber just wanted to do something much more worse to Shalini so he poured oil with glass pieces in their room. Luckily nothing happen to her as their maid cleaned it before something happens.

One day Shalini was busy in doing house chores and she gets Abeer's call but her phone was left in her room so she couldn't receive it. That day when he came home, he was much angry. After dinner:
Abeer: Shalini room mein aao baat krni hai
She goes with him. The thing he did as they reached the room shocked Shalini to the core. He slaps her and she falls on the floor.
Shalini: Abeer
Abeer: meri call q receive nh ki? itni busy ho k apne husband ko time nh desakti?
Shalini is shocked with his behavior.
Shalini: lekin mujhe koi call nh aai
Abeer: oh let me show
He picks his phone and shows his call log.
Shalini: sorry pta nh call KB aai me to kitchen me thi
Abeer: ainda phone apne sath rakhna samjhi, else I will be worse my dear wife
He goes. Shalini cries laying on the floor.


Chapter 6Chp 6
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chp 7

Meher continues telling Sneha about Abeer's changed behavior.
Flashback continues:
Shalini cries laying on the floor. Abeer comes out of washroom and sees her on floor.
Abeer: will I have to give invitation to u for sleep? R u sleeping or...
Shalini gets angry.
Shalini: what's ur problem? I won't sleep what will u do?
Abeer comes towards her and pulls her up.
Shalini: I will sleep when I want to.
Abeer: just shut up, I can make u sleep forcefully
Shalini: do it, m not scared of u
He goes and brings a water mixing sleeping pill in it and forcefully makes her drink.
Shalini: krlia Jo krna tha? now just leave me alone
She goes pushing him lightly and stands near the window watching the stars. Abeer comes near her.
Abeer: u know what Shalini? some husbands beat their wives a lot more than I did, I m sorry plz forgive me.
Shalini continues crying. He turns her towards him.
Abeer: I said m sorry (he wipes her tears) does it hurts? (he asks touching her cheek)
Shalini: yes it hurts.
He kisses it.
Abeer: what about now?
Shalini gets irritated.
Shalini: m not ur slave, kisi ko command kr k tum maafi nh mang sakte.
She goes and lays on bed and soon dozes off to sleep.

Next day, she wakes up late and sees Abeer not there. Whole day went...when Abeer came home, they both got into a heated argument and soon she got kicked out of her in laws house.
Fb end.

Sneha: Abeer ESA kese krsakta hai yr? Don't he have any humanity?

Meher: I don't think so he has, the thing he did with me, I don't want it to happen with anyone else, u will help me na?
Sneha: of course...So the plan is...(she tells the plan muted)
Meher smiles: smart han, thank u.

They have a hug and soon leaves from there. Abeer and Madhvi goes to meet Shalini's doctor.
Doctor: why r u here?
Abeer bribes him.
Abeer: I want to know about the patient Shalini Malhotra.
Doctor returns his money.
Doctor: u already know shes dead.
Abeer: r u sure?
Doctor: yes, why will I lie?
Abeer: when a person lies, he can't do eye contact, same is with u, doctor pls its important, plz tell me, I will give u lot of money. (he again gives money to him) yeh advance rakhiye
Doctor recalls promising Meher not to reveal anything.
Doctor: aap jaiye or apna ye paisa bhi lejaiye, kia bataun tumko mein? pta to hai tumhe she's dead, didn't u see her dead body? pta nh kahan kahan se ajate hain...Security!

The security guards comes running to him.
Doctor: lejao isko yahan se
Abeer: Meri baat to sunein
Doctor: nh...tum jao yahan se, nh sun'ni koi baat mujhe.
Abeer is thrown out of hospital.
Abeer: ab kia karein mom?
Madhvi: hum kisi or ki help lete hain, yeh receptionist humari help krsakti hai.
They go to receptionist.
Madhvi: we want the details of the patient Shalini Malhotra
She bribes her.
Receptionist: ESE krne se meri naukri jasakti hai ma'am, wese bhi main ziada kuchh nh janti
Madhvi: apki naukri nh jaegi
Receptionist: theek hai, aapko date yad hai?
Abeer: ji han
He tells her the date and she shows him the footage of that day.

Abeer is shocked. The video showed that Shalini was given a new face and doctor tricked him that she died.
Abeer: thank u
He gives her more money. They go from hospital and sits in their car.
Abeer: Mom Shalini chhup k betthi q hai?
Madhvi: pta nh, she was too much hurt that she did death drama.
Abeer: I will get her back Mom...arey WO rahi Shalini
He sees her face in a car mirror.
Abeer: let's follow her.

He follows her and she stops outside a pub. He goes out of car inside the pub. Meher was wearing a long blue dress...she looks around searching for the counter. Abeer comes in.
Abeer: Shalini!
Meher doesn't hears him and goes towards counter. Abeer follows her. Meher asks for a drink and keeps drinking till she loses her senses as the past was still haunting her. She walks around stumbling and falls in Abeer's arms.
Abeer: look at yourself, I will take u home.
Meher straightens herself and looks at him.
Meher: mm, do I know u?
Abeer is shocked at her question.
Abeer: yes u know me, m ur husband Abeer n u my wife Shalini.

Meher giggles: Shalini? who's she? I don't know any Shalini n m not married to be called anyone's wife.

Abeer: I know u r angry but plz come with me.
She turns to go but he pulls her back and her dress gets torn making his name's tattoo visible.
Meher: u tried to harass me?
She raises hand but he holds her hand, she raises another hand but he even holds that hand and twists it behind her back, her back faced him.
Meher: kia kr rhe ho? u tore my dress n now twisting my hands.
Abeer: u still love me Shalini, that's y u didn't erase my name's tattoo

He leaves her hands and caresses the tattoo.


Meher: WO kia hai na, main kbhi nh btaungi k main tumse revenge plan krne mein busy thi to bhool gai.

Abeer laughs.
Abeer: bta k bol rh ho nh btaungi, achha chalo let's go, enough arguments.

He picks her up in his arms and she hugs him tightly and cries.
Meher: do u know how much I was missing ur love, I badly wanted to hug u PR Maine socha k main mrrne ka naatak kru or tumhari life se humesha k liye chali jaun q k Jo tumne kia na mere sath, it hurts Abeer, it hurts here.
She points at her heart.
Abeer: but ab main tumhe hurt nh krunga, I regret my deeds, m sorry

Meher: I love u Abeer
She says in a drunk voice
Abeer: love u 2
He kisses her forehead and makes her lay on the backseat of car and sits in front seat driving the car.
Abeer: mom, Shalini agai
Madhvi smiles.

As they reach home, he opens the back gate of the car and takes her in his arms closing the door. Madhvi opens the door of their house.
Madhvi: arey Papa jagrahay hain
Abeer: I don't care, because of him I broke her heart.
He takes her inside the house.
Kuber: kon hai ye?
Abeer: Meri dost hai, m taking her to my room, she's drunk.
He goes upstairs and thinks:
Shalini, Maine ye sab kuch papa ki baato me aa kr kia, I will help u in ur revenge, u can even take revenge from me, I deserve it.
He goes to his room and makes Meher lay down on her side of bed.
Meher: humara room, mujhe yahan nh rehna, mujhe apne ghar Jana hai

Abeer: shhh, sleep, u need rest
He makes her sleep.

Will the new Shalini/Meher ever forgive Abeer? or will she go from his life forever? Will Abeer be able to take revenge from his father for Meher? or will he end up getting manipulated again? How will Meher react finding herself in Abeer's room? Stay tuned, and guys I won't make it boring by showing romance between them, I will show revenge then their new lovestory. Love u guys.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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The flashback is about mehbeer mu. Both has heated arguments. Abeer forcefully made her sleep which resulted in Meher leaving the house. in an accident, her face changed. It was clever of Abeer and Madhvi to find about Shalini(Meher) and get her back. Will be interesting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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me 2nd
fabulous update buddy
thanks for pm
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happy new year buddy
Edited by Naazrt - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice update
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Flashback Part was so Interestingly explained.😊
Because of Abeer,Meher met with accident and her face Changed.😭
It was Nice that Abeer find out about Meher/Shalini,it was so Interesting.😊
Abeer and Meher/Shalini Conversation was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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After marriage kuber is insulting shalini so much.y did he conduct the wedding if he thinks she is a bad luck?It seems that abeer manhandled shalini.how could abeer hurt her for such a silly thing.never expected this from shalini.why were they fighting and what was the exact reason why shalini was kicked out?because of suman madhavi doubted about shalini bring alive.thats nice.abeer n madhavi are so clever to doubt on shalini being alive and tracing the truth. It was least expected. Mehbeer meeting and meher admitting the truth was really a surprise. Abeer took her home.waiting to know her reaction.will meher remember their conversation during her drunken state?it's for his dad that he hurt meher.but what did his father do?waiting to know the past.abeer is so nice to decide to let Meher take revenge on him too to teach his father a lesson.
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You have not changed the title. Its still 3 and 4
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Chp 8

Abeer roams around in the house looking for Shalini. He calls out his name.
Abeer: plz come out u r scaring me.
Shalini: m here Abeer
He turns around
Abeer: Shalini
He moves forward to hug her but she starts moving back.
Abeer: why r u moving back? r u still angry?
As she moves back with him approaching her, she starts vanishing.
Abeer: Shalini plz m sorry
She disappears. He shouts his name and wakes up from the bad dream. He sweats badly and looks on the other end of bed to make sure she's there. To his luck, she was sleeping peacefully. He gets relieved and sleeps again.

As he sleeps, Meher wakes up rubbing her eyes and gets shocked seeing herself in Abeer's room.
Meher: what am I doing here? what happened yesterday? First I went in pub, then I got drunk, then...then I collided with Abeer and fell in his arms, he called me as Shalini, but I reacted as if I don't know him. Then I don't remember.
She looks at her back in mirror and panics seeing her tattoo visible.
Meher: isne yeh dekha to nh? well whatever I will change my clothes and go, my clothes are here only, I didn't took them.
She takes some random clothes and quickly goes in washroom to change, she hurriedly comes out after changing and makes sure no one is awake. She goes towards the door of house but a hand pulls her back shutting her mouth and takes her to Abeer's room and leaves her. Its Abeer.
... ... ... . ... ...

Abeer woke up sometime later after Meher left to change and pretended to be asleep, later when she went to door, he rushed towards her and took her to his room.
...,...

Meher is shocked to see him.
Meher: who r u?
Abeer: Abeer Malhotra ur husband
Meher: u r mistaken.
Abeer: no m not
Meher: uhh let me go.
She runs past him but he holds her wrist and pulls her towards him.
Abeer: till when will u resist me? m ur husband yr
Meher: I don't have any husband, plz let me go
She tries to go again but is stopped by him. He pins her to the wall.
Abeer: m sorry Shalini, I told u once na, u can't lie, last night u revealed everything.
Meher: my name is Meher n not Shalini, let me go
She gets out of the trap but she's again stopped by him, he holds her making a puppy face.
Abeer: mujhe maaf krdo na Shalini, I really regret whatever I said to u.

Tears rolls down her cheeks, he kisses near her eyes.
Abeer: I love u plz come back to me

He kisses on her cheek, she closes her eyes and cries recalling past.

Abeer: I will keep u happy always.

He palms her face wiping her tears and hugs her, she holds him and cries. He runs his fingers in her hair.
Abeer: this is last time u r crying, I know u want revenge from my family n me, I will help u in it.

She pushes him away.
Meher: just leave me I don't know u

He makes her sit on bed as she cries.
Abeer: Shalini, I love u, plz give me a chance, I join my palms in front of u.

She looks at him and recalls begging him not to leave her.

Meher: why don't u go from my life? u want that I go away right? *sob* I will go, I m a burden on u, u deserve better, Shalini is dead, m Meher, n plz don't follow me wherever I go.

She runs out of the room crying and he too runs behind her, she goes downstairs and he calls out her name begging her not to go but what was the use? Her pleads were going in deaf ears. They reach the door of house and she goes out followed by Abeer. She runs on the road and runs behind her unknown of the truck behind him, he gets hit by the truck and screams falling down. Meher stops hearing his scream and turns around and runs towards him.
Meher: Abeer, wake up
She puts her head on his chest and cries. Screen freezes on this.

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