Mehbeer ff: The Revenge For Love chp 3 till 30 (Completed) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Interesting Part.😊
Meher and Madhvi conversation was so Interesting.😊
Meher said to Madhvi that she is Shalini,it was so Nice.😊
Meher feelings towards Abeer was so Interesting.😊
Meher wanted to go away from Abeer,it was so sad.😭
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Nice one
So abeer is in hospital
Meher phoned madhvi told her to come to hospital n in anger n hurt she told who she is
But now suman wants her to marry some akshat
Whilst she's planning to run
Will abeer get to her b4 she disappears or is the hunt on again
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Chp 10

Meher's POV:
M going far from here n will never come back. I thought as Maa asked me to marry Akshat and I agreed hesitantly. I slept without thinking further about this matter. Soon it was morning and the sunrays started disturbing my sleep but I took a pillow and hid my face with it to stop sunrays from coming on me.

Sometime later I woke up and went to freshen up, as I came out of washroom I wore some random clothes and packed all my bags after closing the door of my room of course. After I finished packing, I kept a note for my mother that I can't marry that jerk Akshat and that I will come back only if u cancel this marriage. I opened the door of my room and peeped outside to see if anyone is there, there was no one in the corridor but as my gaze shifted downstairs, I saw Akshat and his family. How will I go now?

I saw Maa coming upstairs, I quickly hid my stuff and hid under the bed not wanting to go in front of Akshat but to my bad luck Maa saw me and asked me to get ready soon. Oh God, plz save me. I helplessly got ready and hesitantly went downstairs. After a lot of talking, I and Akshat were asked to talk in loneliness, I took him in my room rolling my eyes in frustration.

As soon as we reached the room, he closed the door of the room, but why? Aisi konsi baat karni hai usko mujhse?? He pinned me to the wall while I kept hesitating.
Akshat: so r u ready to marry me?

He asked looking at me lustily.
Meher: no, I love someone else, and for ur kind information I m already married.
His grip loosened on me and he turned around, I knew he must be feeling bad so I quickly mouthed a sorry and was about to go out but he stopped me and pushed me on the floor, I got hell scared as to what is he up to?

He came on top of me and started removing my pallu, I asked him to stop but he didn't listen to me, and as soon as it was removed he started kissing my stomach, I started resisting and pushed him with full force from the top of me and I again pinned my pallu to the saree, I unlocked the door and started running downstairs.
Maa: kya hua?
Meher: kuchh nh Maa, uncle aunty, sorry but m already married and can't marry ur son
Maa looked at me as I said that and uncle aunty with Akshat went. Thank God m saved, he almost raped me.
Suman: Why did u say no? What was the need to tell all this?
She asked angrily.
Meher: Maa he almost raped me, I am not going to marry a rapist...N m already married, abhi meri divorce nh hui hai
Suman: divorce krvadu kia?
As she asked this, my heart skipped a beat from the thought of separation from my love.
Meher: I will think about it...right now I m going to see Abeer because his accident happened because of me, or agar meri waja se nh bhi hua hai to he's my husband and responsibility, I will be back soon

I went to change my clothes from saree to Salwar Kameez and went bidding bye. I went downstairs and went on the road to hire an auto, a car came and stopped in front of me, the window of the driver seat slid down, it was Kuber, I hope he doesn't knows my real identity. He opened the door of the car and came towards me. Oh God, how much difficulties will u give?

Kuber: Meher beta why r u standing on the road?
Thank God he doesn't knows.

Meher: uncle I was waiting for an auto.
Kuber: u can come with me if u want, I will drop u.
If I go with him, I can ask about his opinion about me, I mean Shalini.
Meher: OK uncle.
So I sat next to him in the car and told him I want to go to city hospital.
Kuber: why u want to go there?
Meher: to see Abeer of course, he's my best friend after all.
Kuber: oh, so he's ur best friend, I thought u r his girlfriend.
Meher: how can I be his girlfriend when he has a wife? What was her name? (she pretends to recall her name) Malini?
Kuber: Her name was Shalini...She died recently and so Abeer is in a shock because of her.
Meher: How was their bond?
Kuber: they were really good at first but then because of me they fought and one day Abeer kicked her out of house, her death happened by an accident.
Meher: I m so sorry for his loss, but how did it all happen because of u?
Kuber: I thought she is a gold digger so I made them fight.
Meher: oh, u shouldn't have done that.
Yeah u shouldn't have done that because that dead girl is actually in front of u stupid uncle, n u r my biggest target, I said this in my heart boiling in anger.
Kuber: m so scared for him.
Meher: me also, but tell me one thing, how's Abeer now?
Kuber: he's conscious now.
Meher: that's a good news.
I love u God.

We reached hospital, I came out of the car along with him, we went inside the hospital towards Abeer's room, first he went inside to apologize, but to his badluck Abeer shouted on him and made him leave, he went gloomily, now there was only aunty and me. I saw aunty sitting by his side talking to him, I looked at him through the glass. I saw he was sad and then his gaze shifted on me.
Abeer: andar ajao
I went in slowly and he signed me to come near him. I went glancing at his mom, he held my hand and kissed it.
Abeer: u finally remember me right?
Meher: I was stuck.
Abeer: where?
Meher: Maa ko kuchh kaam tha.

I can't tell him about remarrying thing and what Akshat did.
Meher: I m sorry, yeh sab meri waja se hua.
Abeer: no, it didn't, u proved u love me.
I looked here and there avoiding eye contact.
Abeer: man lo na yeh baat Shalini, mom too knows ur real identity, we will help u in revenge, plz manjao, I will kill myself.
A lone tear escaped my eye and I nodded in no. I bent down to him and kissed his forehead getting emotional.
Meher: I accept I love u.
Abeer's face brightened up listening this.
Abeer: yippeee
I giggled on his childishness.
Abeer: so stay with me from now, what say? Haina mom?
Aunty nodded in yes.
Meher: but uncle, Maa and others?
Abeer: leave that on us...won't u hug me?
I smiled and kept my head on his chest, he hugged me back.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Meher wanted to go away but seeing her mother,she didn't ,it was so Nice.😊
This Akshat😡 was Disgusting,How can he do like that with her.
It was nice that Meher escaped from him.😊
But Meher's Mother still asked her to marry him,it was so bad.😭
Meher and Kuber Part was so Nice.😊
Meher accepted her Love towards Abeer,it was so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Glad that Meher refused to marry Akshat.
Akshat is very cheap and disgusting.
Glad that Kuber confessed he made Abeer and Shalini fight.
Meher's confessed her love to Abeer was awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
I am shocked that akshat tried to rape meher.glad that meher got rid of him .will he come back?he needs punishment. How did kuber recognize meher ?when did kuber meet meher before? Kuber admitted that thinking that shalini is a gold digger he separated her from abeer.that means later he realized that Stalinist is not after abeer's wealth?does he regret separating them?how did abeer realize that kuber is the real culprit and shalini is innocent? Mehbeer patch up and hug were very beautiful. Loved it.waiting to know how they both will take revenge
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
amazing update👏👏
well done
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Nice update
So meher couldn't escape
Akshay nearly raped her
I think he got off too easy
Hope once better abeer learns what he did n punishes him
So abeers dad is feeling guilty for hurting his son but what about his dil no remorse
I hope abeer n his mom keep their promise n don't hurt her again
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Meher's POV:
As I kept my head on his chest, I felt immense feelings for him and that I can't be away from him for long. I was happy that Abeer is OK and now he is conscious too, but one thing was still bothering me. What about my family? What will I tell Maa? Will they let me stay with Abeer? My thoughts broke by Abeer's voice.
He: from which name should I call u?
I giggled a little on his question and answered him without lifting my head.
Me: its simple, call me Shalini when we are alone and Meher in front of everyone else.

He: hmm OK, by the way I have a plan from which dad will let us stay together.

As he said this I lifted my head with a jerk as I knew his plans are more like pranks.
Me: what is it?
He: its simple, u pretend to be pregnant with my child, make a fake baby bump and reports and it will be easy to convince him.

I bursted into laughter.
He: arey kia? What's wrong with u?
Me: wrong is with u? In his eyes, Shalini and I are two different people, he knows u love Shalini, I told him that u r my best friend, confusion will be increased.

He: yr plz ab koi or plan mujhe samajh nahi araha.
Me: we will get our kundlis checked by pandit ji.
He: but we are married na
Me: arey idiot, ur father doesn't knows m Shalini.
He: we will pretend to marry in Mandir and phir to unko accept krna he hoga.
Me: and what will I tell him when he ask about my family?
He: u tell u r an orphan.
Me: ok

Doctor came and discharged Abeer and we took him from the hospital to the car, he kept his head on my shoulder the whole journey and I kept humming to him like a mother does to her child. We reached and I took him inside the house to his room, I sat next to him and he kept his head in my lap.

He: when u went, I felt so alone, it felt as if I lost myself, now u came back I feel complete.

I smiled.
Me: ab na main kahin nahi jaungi, tumhare sath rahungi, OK done?
He: han OK baby done, yeh dekho humari stupid si pics.

He showed me our old selfies with stupid poses to which I smiled.
Me: we look so cute, do u like my new face?
He: no yr
I frowned
He: balke ab to tum muje or bhi cute lagti ho.
I smiled and kissed his cheeks.
Me: when u get fine, shave these hair from ur face, they hurt me while kissing.

He laughed, we talked and talked and he slept while we were talking, my cutie pie, how does he manage to look so cute even while sleeping? I went back to my house and saw Maa waiting for me, her back was facing me, I went and hugged her from back.
Maa: kahan gai thi?
Me: Abeer k pas thi
Maa: he did so bad with u
Me: Usne mere sath bura kia hai, PR vo pati hai mera, agar aap meri Jaga hoti to kia krti? Usko Marta hua chor deti kia?
Maa: nh, but be careful, kahin phir koi chaal na ho uski
I hugged her again assuring her.
Me: han Maa m careful, u should be happy that I m happy, meri ek baat manogi?
Maa: bol?
Me: I wana stay with Abeer
Maa: no, don't go, m worried for u, I can't see u crying again.
Me: maa main usko ek last chance dena chahti hoon, I won't trust him fully, aap hi to kehti ho aap har faisle mein mere sath ho

Maa: theek hai beta, koi prblm ho to btana
I hugged her the third time now and left to my room, I was so happy that I fell on my bed while walking n laughed, happiness it is
End of POVChp 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful update dear 👏👏

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