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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dev asks both of them to stop their angry and makes both to leave to their work stopping the fight.Both crosses each other with stares.Dev sits thinking about Dev been with her in the night and taking care of her .she cannot neither believe nor accept it as a truth.She sees the get well bouquet with smile in her face.She again thinks to call Dev but stops her instinct thinking that it may cause more problems.Dev sits in the office seeing the missed call from nivi's number."mmm I think I must call her but surely she is calling to fight with me ,mmm",he murmurs seeing the phone.

Menka completes the work,she goes in search of Dev to get his sign."mam,sir went with the suppliers to get seal,Rishi sir is in room"tells the peon .she thinks"oh god,need to talk with that ".she sees Rishi talking with someone over phone ,he waits in the entrance to get the signature of him in one of the paper before she could process.he sees her and signs her to come inside the room.She comes in.Rishi signs the paper and tells"OK,Menka you go now ,",she leaves without talking to him.

Dev completes his lunch outside the office .he finds Nivi messaging him" thank you sir ".he types" welcome ".and touches the send button and earses it.Nivi reaches outside the hospital waiting for the auto.she gets shocked.

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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"Sir,you are here but ", she stumbles on seeing Dev there with his car .He smiles seeing her diplomatically." I ,I just came to see you but where ?".she lifts her eyes with surprise .he continues"are you getting discharged ms.Niveditha".she nods yes and stands seeing his concern for her with a big surprise.he tells"if you wish,you can accompany me ,if you wish? ".she finds herself in a dilemma.

Menka sits in her house feeling so much sad unneccesarily.she feels really unhappy to work in the company where Rishi is working.Rishi tastes the pasta and feels the same about Menka,both of them murmurs" egoistic ".Rishi's aunty asks him to invite Menka for the puja which she is keeping.Rishi stops his thoughts by the idea of his aunty.

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dev takes Nivi in car and drives towards her hostel where she is staying .They remains silent for some moments.Nivi braks the silent by telling "Thanks sir ", he smiles in return and concentrates on the driving of the car.Rishi laughs " Aunty,she is not puja type,she is modern ".His aunty insists him to do as per her wish. Dev corrects his hair with left hand and corrects the hair falling on the face.

Dev:Ms.Nivi

Nivi:sirrr

Dev:you did your schooling with Menka?

Nivi:yes sir but not college

Dev:but.

Nivi:yes sir

Dev:but I haven't heard of her talking about you ,why?

Nivi: I don't have a idea about it .She is really good girl but

Dev(shocked)'what problem to her,anything ?

Nivi:her alliance broke in the day before wedding so only she came from there and living here to avoid the pestering questions.

Dev:I don't know about it,but why?

Nivi:why because he was a man,

Dev:it means that all men are bad

Nivi:not like that but Menka's ex finance was bad

Dev:you said ego of men

Nivi(stops her conversation)

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dev:is she still upset about it ?

Nivi:I .I actually have no idea about it.

Dev: are you still upset ?

Nivi:me,I cannot get you, sorry ?

Dev:you talk with very much anger in your words so only I asked.are you got over the anger.(she looks a bit sensible)

Nivi:not yet ,I hate people who leave others just for this idiotic society.

Dev:sounds great.(mmm interesting)

Nivi:I don't know why things are always complicated in life,why can't it be really simple.(he thinks like me)

Dev:its life Nivi. Always with some sweet and sour.it goes like that .(I feel like)

Nivi smiles seeing Dev,she sees the clouds moving from place to place with a happiness in her face"why can't we people go like this in the world,happily".he also see the clouds and tells "clouds are like a vision for our thoughts,if you think something and see it shows you the idea in visual form". Menka gets surprised to see Rishi's number in her phone ,she reluctantly picks the call.

Rishi:hello

Menka: hello

Rishi:is it ms.Menka(what the hell,I need to talk with her)

Menka:yaah its me(why is he acting innocent)

Rishi:my aunty called you to come to some puja in our hons,come if you wish .

Menka: why me?

Rishi: (she don't have sense)

Menka(why this saddu can't answer,)hello sir.

Rishi:I don't know why but she likes you very much,come here ,wven nivi stays here along with aunty.

() words in brackets are their mind voice.

Nivi gets down in front Rishi's house and goes in without talking to Dev.Dev thinks about Nivi and smiles.she smiles thinking about him.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

wow! Amazing. Dev is a goner for Nivi. Anything between Rishi and Maenaka? Thanks for PM

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow! Rishi and Maenaka's MV was hilarious

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: janani04
Dev:oh sorry for asking more private question,did she know?
Jain: yes she does.
Dev:your daughter is really a good worker uncle.
Jain: yes actually she is.
Dev sees the face of nivi with smile "you are really a angel to your dad,gifted " he murmurs,Nivi wakes up all of the sudden and sees no one near her.she sees a chit"call me"written,she identify it as Dev's handwriting.she gets surprised and calls the number.Dev baths in the shower and cannot hear the phobe sound.Nivi sees the card for one more time.Menka reaches the office and searches for Nivi and dev all over the place .Rishi and Menka collides and falls on the ground.Rishi scolds"go gave eyes not to put kajal but to see peoples ".Menka gets irked and gets up very much angrily.Dev comes inside the office with his phone and sees them argueing like cat and mouse.he controls his laughter and goes to pacify both.

Wow wonderful updates. Continue soon

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dev:nice convo but still she is

(Inside Rishi's house)

Rishi:hello ms.Nivi,just come in.

Nivi:thank you sir.

Rishi:no need for sir,just call me Rishi.

Aunty:Rishi, help me to get this...

Rishi:aunty meet Nivi,my colleague

Aunty:hello ma,

Nivi:hi ,sir is just joking I am just a employee in his company.

Aunty:wait ,I will bring something for you to have

(She goes in)

Nivi:I haven't informed menka .let's message her.

Rishi:what doing?

Nivi: telling Menka about being discharged.

Rishi:don't tell that you are here,sjs will scold you

Nivi:no not like that,she is very Good.

Rishi:thanks for coming to my house.(gives her coffee)

Nivi:its a palace actually

Rishi:but no queens.(fakes feelings)

Nivi:(laughs)you must search .

Rishi:mmm yes,I am getting old

Nivi:don't ask your friends opinion before selecting wife,they will confuse.

Rishi:(sips the coffee)friends or any particular friend.

Nivi:friend.

Rishi:you mean Dev,he hate marriage

Nivi:OK sir,tell about the reason you invited me that day.

Rishi: changing the topic.

Nivi:no not like that but

(Her phone rings)

Nivi:just moment sir.(in phone)hi

Menka:hello,where are you,are you got discharged from hospital, how is your health?

Nivi:wait,wait,darling.

(Rishi signs her whether it is her boyfriend)

She smiles and put the call in speaker.

Menka:then where

Nivi: in my boss house.

Menka:ho(thinks whether it is dev or Rishi), how is dev?

Nivi:who is dev?

Both of them laughs

Menka:you said boss,I thought Dev then it means.

Nivi:no in Rishi's house.

Menka:mmm

Nivi:why are you talking without interest

Menka:how is your health?

Nivi:mmm fine.

Menka: he invited me for some puja in his house.

Nivi:who????

Menka:that ,(controls her anger),Rishi sir.

(Rishi sees Nivi with teasing tone)

Nivi tries to off the speaker but before that he takes the phone from her.

Rishi(signs Nivi to not talk)

Menka:sometimes he behaves like a idiot

Nivi:no you should not talk like that he is our boss.

Menka:not mine,but yours

Nivi:shhh

Menka:I have so much anger towards him.

Rishi:(whispers to nivi) respect. Vvvgood.

Nivi:OK bye.

Menka:tomorrow I am going to his house to attend puja, I want you to accompany me.

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nivi:but why me?call your bf.

Menka:who is my bf?

Nivi:Dev

Menka:mmm OK.bye.

Nivi: bye.

Rishi laughs seeing the embarasment in the face of Nivi due to the scolding of Menka about him.Nivi takes leave from them and walks towards the hostel where she is staying.Dev baths in the hot water and comes out of the bathroom in rob.he stands in front of the mirror and sees him happy than always with confusion.he tells "mmm you look handsome Dev" and smiles seeing the refection.Nivi reaches her room and sits in the bee thinking about her conversation with Menka and laughs loudly.she falls on the bed feeling so tired.

In the morning,Menka runs here and there very busily ironing cloths and preparing the food in the house.Nivi wakes up in the morning with tiredness.she sees the time nearly 8.00 am and shouts"oh my god,why am I being so lazy,I need to go the office soon,soon",she rushes to the bathroom with brush in mouth and dress to take bath.Dev sits in the dinning table sipping his morning tea and rusk.he sees the time and wobdwts"why Rishi haven't call me till now ?".Rishi sits near his aunt taking care of her as she is very unwell from night.Menka sees call from her brother,she messages"enjoy the trip to shimla withbhabhi,I am very much fine here,getting late bye ".and sits in the chair relieved.

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janani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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"Aunty,you please try to sleep,you look OK really very miuvh tired and having high fever" tells Rishi on checking the temperature with the thermometer. Dev reaches Rishi's house and calls him standing in the entrance."Rishi, are you fine"and stops seeing Rishi himself coming out from the room.Nivi reaches the bus stand and waites for the bus because she was late ,she missed the first bus.

"Come in" tells Rishi and pulls Dev to enter his house.Dev sits unwillingly in the sofa and asks "whether you have any idea to come to the office or not". With anger in his words seeing Rishi making hot water for His aunty in the kitchen.Rishi asks him to talk low without making much noise and tells" I cannot come because aunty is very unwell,so you don't want to wait for me".Dev leaves from there with anger.Menka reaches the same bus stop and calls out "Nivi". Both the ladies talk for sometimes and sees the bus coming.

Dev sees Menka standing in the bus stop and goes to talk to her and give her lift to the office.Nivi sees Dev's car ," Menka you friend has arrived,I will go by bus,bye"says to menka and begin to walk towards the bus.Dev thinks"why Nivi is going just when I enter,"and stops the car near Menka asking her to get in as it is getting late to office. "Shall we take Nivi with us if you don't mind " asks Menka with dilemma in her words .he agrees to the idea immediately.

Rishi comes out after making his aunty sllep and sits in the hall with the newspaper in hand.he feels very tired due to lack of sleep and thinks to have a nap for a while.Dingdong. he hears the bell and goes to see the person with tiredness .a not stands there and tells"madam asked us to bring all this items for puja".he settles money to him and thinks"ho god we have arranged for puja tonight and how could I manage it alone ".

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