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Posted: 9 years ago
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"No need for help fromv sir,you go along with him",walks away and boards on the bus.Menka comes back and gets into the car without any words." What she denied the offer,isn't it menku".Menka nods yes and sees outside without talking ".Dev suddenly asks menka" did nivi loved anyone ?".Menka sees him with surprise."mmm yes,she loved one of my friend on just knowing about him".Dev sees her with confusion.Menka said "I usually talk more about you so she likes you when in college but things changed now". Dev smiles thinking about it.
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Menka sees him with smile in face and tells"I know you are not ready to trust my words,I will show you",she takes out her mobile and searches for Nivi's number."what are you doing,no need for all this "tells Dev parking the car in the restaurant where some of the foreign delicates have been staying for a conference. Nivi gets down from the bus in the office stop and walks inside the office.she sees message from Dev" come to restaurant ".she scold herself for selecting this job and hires a auto to go to the restaurant.
" I will and I can manage everything in today's puja"murmurs Rishi and begin to make the room clean for it.he feels really tired after completing one work and sits in the sofa totally engeeyless.His aunty sees him struggling to work from inside the room."poor boy,I must help me but I am not feeling well,I can call someone to help her,may be Depaal kaka ".she mistakely calls Menka's Number
Menka receives the call from Aunty and attends it with confusion seeing the time in the watch.Nivi enters the restaurant totally tired due to the travel and enters the reception searching for Dev.they guide her to go to the room where Dev must be.She rushes to the room and collides with someone in the dim light.she apologises for her mistake and trues to go when the person says" for which mistake,there are many ",she shocks by the voice and stands shocked.Dev sees Nivi standing in the pathway and calls her" ms.Nivi".he comes there to see.Nivi turns to see the person but he leaves before that.
"Aunty,surely I will help you" tells Menka and cuts the call.she thinks to go to Rishi's house at least for Aunty. She sees Dev coming along with Nivi and both argueing about things and tells"oh OK,now they will manage "and she leaves from there to meet Rishi's aunt." I am feeling really worried "murmurs Nivi on sitting in the room of Dev waiting for tea." Why are you behaving like seeing some devil"asks Dev seeing her tension."no nothing "tells her.
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"Actually I " stops Menka on seeing the shock in Rishi's eyes."actually you,ooo I am sorry, please come in menka"tells him.he cannot believe his own eyes on seeing her there in the door of his house.Menka comes in and sees the arrangement going on in the house with a smile ,she sees every work being only half done.she controls her peering laughter and tells"I think you are trying very much hard to manage ".He feels like she is praising him" thank you so much actually all this work are very very simple".Menka sees him with gliterring eyes and tells"oh",she begin to laugh .
Menka: nice arrangement,aunty called me to help you but actually I need to do things properly here.mmm
Rishi: you mean that I did things wrong,how dare you?
Menka:why,you itself see things,half decorated hallway,half prepared flour for sweet.
Rishi:may be but I am trying,I haven't known about this in all thses years
Menka:yes ,its OK,let's do it properly.
They talk while working.
Rishi:I am actually doing this for aunty,I am not god fearing.
Menka:but why?
Rishi:because if he was there then,just leave it.
Menka:pass the cloth.
Rishi:Dev told that you used to be very good in singing in college.
Menka:yes but not very good,moderate singer
Rishi:oh,and
Menka:you know to sing.
Rishi:no I know to enjoy music and praise talents ,you just sing.
Menka(laughs):nice sir,(she sings)
Rishi:awesome.you are very humble,
Menka:thank you sir
Rishi:is Nivi your friend from school.
Menka:yaah,from eleventh.
Rishi:you haven't told about your family.
Menka:my family,me ,bhai,bhabhi and my parents that's all.
Rishi:mmm, my family is Dev and aunty.
Menka:why?(she bites her lips)
Rishi: why means its my family.
Dev sees Nivi very much disturbed after meeting someone on the pathway of hotel.Dev informs his friend to know more about that particular person within some time.and comes near her with two cup of coffees."do you need coffee,please have it ?"gives him insisting her.she sips a little and tells"I was really shocked on seeing him here "she talks to herself.Dev sees her with smile and sits opposite to her.
Dev:Nivi
Nivi(sees him with surprise seeing him calling her pet name):sir.
Dev:are you not comfortable with me calling you Nivi.
Nivi:no not like that
Dev:I feel like you are very much lonely
Nivi:no not like that actually sir,I happens to be like this from childhood, I am left alone .
Dev:so sorry,I didn't meant of teasing you or hurting you,I haven't seen you moving closely with anyone so only.
Nivi:its wasn't a mistake or offense so need for any sorry sir.
Dev:if you like,you can stay along with Rishi because even his aunt is there.she takes care of you well.
Nivi:but sir, I am comfortable in the hostel.
Dev:mmm no you are having lot of difficulty in coming to office and I know the hostel cannot be nice as home space.
Nivi:thanks sir,you
Dev:what me?
Nivi:I haven't heard of you talking about your family.
Dev: I am also like you,living alone from teens.
Nivi:sorry sir
Dev:not necessary.sometimes.
Nivi:I feel like,actually sir I feel like
Dev:we both are similar.
They sees each other with surprise.
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Nivi and dev attends the meeting and are in their way back to office."Dev sir,drop me near Rishi's house,I need to go to the puja there".Dev drops her there without telling anything and says"you must think about the thing which I told to you about staying here it's really very much nice to be a part of family".he leaves from there without talking anything to him as his answer.she tells"sir is really a different person,he is,I mean he can't be judged".
Menka sees Nivi standing outside in the road seeinvths moving vehicles with a smile.she goes to call her.
Nivi:when did you come here?
Menka:afternoon
Nivi:you said you don't like to come.
Menka:I came to help him.
Nivi:who?
Menka:Rishi
Nivi:(oh Rishi sir become rishi):why?
Menka:aunty was not feeling well so I came to help him in her insistence.
Nivi:thank you for helping Rishi.
Menka:mmm its OK
(They both comes in with laughter)
Rishi sees them coming inside
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Rishi asks both of them to come in first and then talk among themselves.Nivi likes the arrangement for puja and smiles a little seeing it."mmm really nice Rishi sir".Rishi's aunty sees everyone coming from the room and thinks"all the persons are here but".Nivi helps Rishi and Menka in making the puja thali ready.Dev sits alone in his house with anger and irritation on everything. He sees the photo of his parents with tears and throws it away angrily.Nivi thinks"everyone are enjoying here,we can invite Dev sir also",she messages him to come to the puja.Dev sees nivi's number and gets brighter and smiles happily.
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"Why am I really very much happy when its about you ,Nivi,you are something really special ", he murmurs and goes to change to go the puja in Rishi's house.Nivi sits in the dinning room able arranging the plats with sweets."I am sure that it's not love,I won't fall in love with anyone but what's this which making him look good in my eyes ".the TV plays with the following words and Nivi laughs on hearing it .Rishi's Aunty sits near her asking her the reason
Nivi:Aunty,are you fine now?
Aunty:yaah ma a bit better.
Nivi:take care of your health.
Aunty:why did you laughed on hearing the words.?
Nivi:all this love are just for namesake there are not true.its just lust here
Aunty:what?
Nivi:sorry if I hurt you but its my opinion.
Aunty:I feel like talking to Dev.
Nivi:mmm (laughs)
Aunty:Dev is a nice boy,good friend.
Nivi:but a bad
Aunty:he is not at all bad
Nivi:(smiles)apologize, sorry for argueing with you,now tell me, Will you give permission for me to stay here for few days
Aunty(thinks):sure
Nivi:I am calling you aunty,aunty,what's is actually your name.
They turns on seeing Dev standing in the entrance chatting with Rishi.Rishi gets so much shocked and surprised on seeing Dev coming to attend puja without any excuses." Is it true,I can't believe my eyes hope its my dream because today many things are going on like a dream sequences ".Dev pinch Rishi and they smiles happily.'this was my only prayers to the gos that this boys should me together in all problems".

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Posted: 9 years ago
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They will be tells Nivi to herself and goes to help Menka in arranging the items in hall.Dev smiles seeing Nivi and tells"Someone invited me and so I came here ,Rishi ",he winks his eyes on seeing Nivi.She smiles."Did you called Dev to come?" Asks Rishi to Nivi.Aunty happily does all the work.Menka smiles seeing Rishi argueing with Dev . after The puja starts and all of them sits praying to the god with folded hands.Rishi's aunt serves them prasad and comes to Dev at last."no need,for this food"and he gets up to leave."Dev why are you still angry with me?"asks aunty.
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"Will you please go from here and dobtvmake my day bad,please go" shouts him seeing her.Nivi hears it from duatajce."what would be the reason that Dev sir is behaving like this to aunty".Aunty goes from there with tears. Dev walks away from the place,he sits in the garden seeing the flowers.He feels someone's touch."What is happening now?"and sits Rishi next to him.He hold Dev's hand and says"its OK,now let's go to my room,come ".Menka sees Rishi's aunty cries vigorously ,she feels very much helpless. "why is she crying like this?". Nivi comes and sees her crying.both the ladies tries to stop her tears.
" I mustn't come here,It's all my fault".murmurs Dev sipping the wine in Rishi's room.He sees Nivi coming in search of him and hides the wine glass."Rishi sir,aunty is not feeling well,we need to take her to hospital now itself ".Rishi and Dev sees each other with shock. Rishi drives the car towards the hospital." You are responsible for this"tells Nivi to Dev in a mild but determined voice.He sees her with shock
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Guys please just give a comment ,I feel like my story is very bad,or at least tell about that.(tell me your ideas to make the story better)
Dev gets so much angry on hearing her blaming him for the situation of aunty ."You better don't comment on my activities "shouts him at her with so much anger in his eyes " please shut up,its emergency to take her to hospital "says Menka on holding Nivi's shoulder pleading her not to to talk more about the matter.they reaches the hospital.Rishi does the formalities ,he sits near Dev and hold his hand tightly.Nivi sits opposite to them with anger on dev.they stare at each other.
" Menka,please get something to drink,I need a coffee"says Rishi on seeing Menka coming after parking the car.she leaves after giving a nod to him.Nivi sees the doctor coming,and rushes to him.
"doctor,is she fine?" Asks her with tears and tension.The doctor sees Rishi and Dev ,"you guys please come to my room ,I need to talk about her condition".Dev leaves the place angrily without going with Nivi and rishi.
Menka stands near Dev with coffee mug."are you feeling bad ,but why is she blaming you for the state of aunty"asks her seeing his shivering hands holding the coffee."I didn't do anything,its all her imagination",Dev walks away from the place without talking things clearly to Menka. The doctor tells "She is suffering from paralysis, its initial stage and can be easily cured ". he says about her prior stage of paralysis to them.Rishi stands shocked and Nivi cannot believe her own ears.

Next morning,Nivi stands in front of Dev with her resignation letter ." What the hell is this?*shouts Dev tearing the paper into several pieces with anger.she says"I don't want to be a part of a cheap and ruthless person's company's development".she tries to go away from the room when Dev hold her hand from moving and says "I love you".
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"I love you" repeats Dev seeing her eyes.she moves away from him with shock."see you are getting so much tensed,I was just joking,and I want your resignation also to be a joke,understand ,you better understand ",he shows her the paper which she had signed during the time of appointment.and walks from the room leaving her to think in his room.Dev smiles sitting in the canteen remembering the shock in her eyes when he proposes to her.she sees the paper " I won't decide to quit the firm within 3 years".she angrily throws the paper in the table .
Rishi sees Nivi sitting totally angrily in the cabin and knock on it with smile in his face."why are you so much angry"and sits in the opposite chair.

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