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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Security Reasons-Can't deny

Neel was CEO of his company which had dual identity. Actually that was an intelligence agency'.operated by Inter pole-India Military and Police's intelligence department. They mainly worked on the matter which may create threat for the country and world as well'.they all worked for Govt. of India and Inter pole'.they handled various matters which are related to the interest of their countries and world. And they also co- ordinated with other Govt. and Private intelligence agencies. But currently they were working on Mafia threats. Actually these Mafia's played a useful and compact role in spreading terror in all over the world. This time they have targeted some well -known busy cities like London, New York, California, LA, Chicago, Boston, Washington, Glassgow , Madrid, Paris, New Delhi and Mumbai.

"Why these sons of bitch always target New Delhi and Mumbai?? What the hell do they gain by doing this??" Neel threw his paper weight at the glass door of his cabin. His behavior told how much he enraged. His one of colleague tried to calm him.

"Hey dude they have targeted my city Chicago too. They have also targeted Washington DC'." But he was interrupted as Neel angrily said, "I know Steve. But the fact is you guys are prosperous and advanced from us by many ways. You have well trained and fortified police system. But New Delhi is secured but what about the other area of Delhi. These bustards are choosing to hurt us by every way by targeting the innocent people in bus stations, hotels, restaurants, shopping malls, schools etc. We don't have enough force to protect everything."

He looked highly pissed off. Everyone from this Agency which was disguised as an MNC of Software knew him well. He was a great strategist, have great knowledge in Software and hardware of any kind of security system. He was also a skilled commando''.and from his agency he was the only person who had marine, air and ground commando training. And he had also a rare skill- he could easily read and penetrate his opponent's planning and strategies. He also led his brigade in many secret operations and retuned successfully. And he also proved his ability by putting his life danger every time. In short he was a charismatic leader and fierce warrior in everyway.

"But Neel right now we are going through serious problem." Finally Derek said. Neel looked at him cautiously. He explained, "First of all to stop this Mafias we have to capture their next consignment of diamonds by hook or by crook. And then we have to arrest the master mind of behind this within same time. Because if he leaves London we won't get him by anyway."

Neel shook his head. He knew the whole things. These Mafias who earn their money from smuggling and gambling invest their money in spreading terror in all over the world. They lend these money to the leaders of terrorist groups who spend them for buying arms and ammunition that's too from them. By that way they earn double even triple profit. Right now a famous Mafia group are smuggling a huge amount of uncut diamonds from the mine of Kimberley and Pritoria and Johanesburg. These diamonds will be polished and then will be shown as white deal in papers and will be sold in high price to some billionare or trillionare. The money will be then used in training of some militant who will later destroy the target cities. And in this mission someone is helping tis Mafia group in their smuggling. He is custom of London and he will show this entire consignment in white by changing the papers. But if he ordered to arrest him the master mind behind this entire smuggling plan will be alerted. And then he will simply change his plan by hiring another personale of London Custom. But this time he decided to not let it happen. So he stayed inactive till now.

"But Neel there is another problem" Dean talked in between. He looked at him quizzically. He replied," we show our agency as software and hardware company which offers every kind of assistance in security field. Specially in big MNC's data securing programme. And sometime we offer our men to their security team for short time. We ensure them about their product's safety." He paused and Neel took over " so what's the problem?" he angrily asked. " Do you suggest we should stop running of this dummy company?"

"No. But here is a problem." Dean repeated again.

"W H A T?" Neel shouted.

"Ahh''Neel actually a company takes too much interest to buy our company." He said.

Everyone got shocked by hearing this news as they were discussing some urgent matter. But this news just gave a shake to everyone.

Neel wondered and asked, " Why?? I guess apart from our pay from our respective Govt. and Inter-pole we also achieved a lot as a company. Our turn over is damn good. And we have no crisis of funds."

"Yes..but as you know this company was founded by Joint partnership with a civilian. And now our civilian partner decided to hand over this company to them. As they have offered him a good money." Dean sadly informed.

Everyone again got a 440vt shock. Neel threw his fist against the table and in the reflex the glass of the table's top was broken. His knuckle was bleeding badly. He cursed the company owner.

"A nd she is on her way." Dean again said.

Neel lifted his face and asked, "Who?"

"Ah..some Miss Sinhania of Sinhania Group of Companies. Ahh,,,,,yeah her name is Aparna Sinhania. She won 4th time the best entrepreneur of the year in the row. She is a terrible combination of Beauty, Brain and Talent." Dean said.

Listening the very name Neel had a weird feeling. He couldn't able to talk further. Derek who noticed this sudden change took the charge and asked everyone to get back their work temporarily.

Neel looked at him and said, " Thanks." And left his cabin. Derek shouted from his behind, "Neel don't go anywhere Man. We have a meeting with her in next 30mins."

He just nodded and walked away. Derek could feel he had tears in his eyes. He sadly nodded his head and left his cabin too.


loving this more and more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWesome Update.. Rimi.. keep it up.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏wow, Rimi was waiting for ur update, very beautiful, amazing story, Ms. Sinhania is exactly like our MR😊. eager to know what happens next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Security Reasons-Can't deny

Neel was CEO of his company which had dual identity. Actually that was an intelligence agency'.operated by Inter pole-India Military and Police's intelligence department. They mainly worked on the matter which may create threat for the country and world as well'.they all worked for Govt. of India and Inter pole'.they handled various matters which are related to the interest of their countries and world. And they also co- ordinated with other Govt. and Private intelligence agencies. But currently they were working on Mafia threats. Actually these Mafia's played a useful and compact role in spreading terror in all over the world. This time they have targeted some well -known busy cities like London, New York, California, LA, Chicago, Boston, Washington, Glassgow , Madrid, Paris, New Delhi and Mumbai.

"Why these sons of bitch always target New Delhi and Mumbai?? What the hell do they gain by doing this??" Neel threw his paper weight at the glass door of his cabin. His behavior told how much he enraged. His one of colleague tried to calm him.

omg...neel looks really very angry!!😲

"Hey dude they have targeted my city Chicago too. They have also targeted Washington DC'." But he was interrupted as Neel angrily said, "I know Steve. But the fact is you guys are prosperous and advanced from us by many ways. You have well trained and fortified police system. But New Delhi is secured but what about the other area of Delhi. These bustards are choosing to hurt us by every way by targeting the innocent people in bus stations, hotels, restaurants, shopping malls, schools etc. We don't have enough force to protect everything."

He looked highly pissed off. Everyone from this Agency which was disguised as an MNC of Software knew him well. He was a great strategist, have great knowledge in Software and hardware of any kind of security system. He was also a skilled commando''.and from his agency he was the only person who had marine, air and ground commando training. And he had also a rare skill- he could easily read and penetrate his opponent's planning and strategies. He also led his brigade in many secret operations and retuned successfully. And he also proved his ability by putting his life danger every time. In short he was a charismatic leader and fierce warrior in everyway.

"But Neel right now we are going through serious problem." Finally Derek said. Neel looked at him cautiously. He explained, "First of all to stop this Mafias we have to capture their next consignment of diamonds by hook or by crook. And then we have to arrest the master mind of behind this within same time. Because if he leaves London we won't get him by anyway."

Derek..reminded my of GA😳

Neel shook his head. He knew the whole things. These Mafias who earn their money from smuggling and gambling invest their money in spreading terror in all over the world. They lend these money to the leaders of terrorist groups who spend them for buying arms and ammunition that's too from them. By that way they earn double even triple profit. Right now a famous Mafia group are smuggling a huge amount of uncut diamonds from the mine of Kimberley and Pritoria and Johanesburg. These diamonds will be polished and then will be shown as white deal in papers and will be sold in high price to some billionare or trillionare. The money will be then used in training of some militant who will later destroy the target cities. And in this mission someone is helping tis Mafia group in their smuggling. He is custom of London and he will show this entire consignment in white by changing the papers. But if he ordered to arrest him the master mind behind this entire smuggling plan will be alerted. And then he will simply change his plan by hiring another personale of London Custom. But this time he decided to not let it happen. So he stayed inactive till now.

"But Neel there is another problem" Dean talked in between. He looked at him quizzically. He replied," we show our agency as software and hardware company which offers every kind of assistance in security field. Specially in big MNC's data securing programme. And sometime we offer our men to their security team for short time. We ensure them about their product's safety." He paused and Neel took over " so what's the problem?" he angrily asked. " Do you suggest we should stop running of this dummy company?"

"No. But here is a problem." Dean repeated again.

"W H A T?" Neel shouted.

"Ahh''Neel actually a company takes too much interest to buy our company." He said.

Everyone got shocked by hearing this news as they were discussing some urgent matter. But this news just gave a shake to everyone.

Neel wondered and asked, " Why?? I guess apart from our pay from our respective Govt. and Inter-pole we also achieved a lot as a company. Our turn over is damn good. And we have no crisis of funds."

"Yes..but as you know this company was founded by Joint partnership with a civilian. And now our civilian partner decided to hand over this company to them. As they have offered him a good money." Dean sadly informed.

Everyone again got a 440vt shock. Neel threw his fist against the table and in the reflex the glass of the table's top was broken. His knuckle was bleeding badly. He cursed the company owner.

oh neel...plz chill!! dont hurt ur self

"A nd she is on her way." Dean again said.

Neel lifted his face and asked, "Who?"

"Ah..some Miss Sinhania of Sinhania Group of Companies. Ahh,,,,,yeah her name is Aparna Sinhania. She won 4th time the best entrepreneur of the year in the row. She is a terrible combination of Beauty, Brain and Talent." Dean said.

Listening the very name Neel had a weird feeling. He couldn't able to talk further. Derek who noticed this sudden change took the charge and asked everyone to get back their work temporarily.

Neel looked at him and said, " Thanks." And left his cabin. Derek shouted from his behind, "Neel don't go anywhere Man. We have a meeting with her in next 30mins."

He just nodded and walked away. Derek could feel he had tears in his eyes. He sadly nodded his head and left his cabin too.


aah!! so aparna iz cmng now...hmm...plz upd soon yaar rimi..vry excitd fr the nxt upd.whn aparna nd neel will meet😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Rimi what a superb update. I was waitng for it. 👏. Please continue as I want to know what happens next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That Night

Aparna was utterly disgusted and enraged on 14th Feb. She had been haunted by the memories where her soul was killed. But she clearly couldn't remember anything about that day and the days after. What she could recall made her mad because that according to Aparna was impossible!!

When she came out form Neel's cottage she was very depressed. After walking some way she found that Neel was right. Gaurav was waiting for her. Gaurav Rathode was one of the billionare of the City. But that was not his true identity'.his true identity was he was a bachelor and his foes talked what about him was he was a well- known womanizer. But in spite of that Aparna got attracted by him. He was very charming and go getter personality which attracted women close to him.

"Hey Aparna'..I am ready see''so" he bent on his knees and stretched his hands.

"Ah''Gaurav'..can we do this later?" Aparna was not in very good mood. She wanted to be alone.

"Come on Babe'.I am waiting for this day since the December and now you are avoiding this.." his voice showed his disgust. He stood up on his feet and tried grab Aparna's hand but she pulled back her hands and turned her face another side.

Now Gaurav got really angry. He never saw any girl like Aparna who didn't allow him to become close to her. They were dating from last 1 month but she didn't allow him to hold her hand within him. And all time she kept chanting about her best friend Neel. Neel was a tough player, he was a brave fighter, he was very supportive etc. These constant praising of Neel sometime got rid on his nerve. But still he smilingly bore everything. He was trying to win her trust. But till now she didn't give him a chance to do so. Even he had been planning to propose Aparna on 14th of February, the Valentine's Day'.but there was no sign of hope. He bit his lips and tightened his fist'.. "I can't let this happen'.she will be mine only." He thought in his mind and asked Aparna'..

"Okay Honey'but what about our celebration? Why didn't we open a bottle of champagne on the night before Valentine's?"

"NO'Gaurav. You know this well that I don't drink as Neel doesn't like." She told as Neel didn't like to consume alcohol and so was Aparna. "Anyways Gaurav I get to go. Bye. I will try to meet you tomorrow morning." Saying this she got into her car and drove away.

"Ma'm we are going to land in next 20mins. Please fasten your seatbelt." An airhostess asked her. Aparna opened her eyes and looked at her. She was little stiff as she knew her Boss was very punctual and perfect person. And they were running already 40mins late.

"Okay'.." she nodded and started fasten her seatbelts. The airhostess left little surprisingly as she expected some cold rebuking from her Boss.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

After That

The doorbell rang repeatedly. Aparna felt disgusted as just some time ago Gaurav came over her flat and forcibly handed over the Dark Chocolates filled with Liquior. She loved that normally but that time nothing was right and normal for her. Her best friend who always cared for her, always protected her from every single trouble with all his affection and attention, who always respected and supported her ability, who loved her and to whom she blindly trusted and never judged her was breaking up with her. How could he say that he broke up their long friendship? How could he be so rude? She kept thinking while the doorbell rang again. She finally opened the door and '''..

"Neel'." She exclaimed in joy'she was very happy.

"Yes." He came in pushing her back. "I have decided something. Let us marry Apu." He said indifferently.

Aparna tried to figure it out whether Neel was kidding to her or not. " I am serious Apu." He turned to Aparna and held her close to his chest. " I was never so serious like now. I arrange everything. We will be marrying tomorrow at 8' clock at Church and after cake cutting ceremony we will head for Manchester." He declared that so confidently that Aparna couldn't tell anything for a moment. She got shocked to see the person who was standing in front of her. Once he always did everything to make her happy. He always stood for her. And today while he declared about her marriage with him he didn't even need to ask her consent!! She couldn't believe in her ears.

"Champ'you are joking right?" stunned Aparna tried to ask him. But in return he got a glare from Neel which was full of seriousness which he usually gave her when he had to show her the seriousness of any matters. She couldn't understand what to do? But she last time tried to confront him. " Neel you are not listening to me. Look we can't take our marriage decision alone. And I told you na''..I never saw you in that way. How I can think you as my husband? How can I do everything what actually a wife do for her husband? And apart from this I need some time to settle in my life. I want to persue my career''.and" she was stopped by Neel again.

"You will take me your husband after our marriage. And you can see me like your husband just like I can see you as my wife. And don't be afraid. I am completely aware of the duties and responsibilities of mine as your husband. I will make sure that you have no obstacle in your studies. Now just go get ready." He asked firmly.

"N E E L why don't you understand?? I won't marry you?" Finally Aparna shouted on top of her pitch. " I don't want to marry you. Because I see you only as my best friend. A friend who always cares for me. Never judges me. Who always supports me and respects my ability. Who always trusts me, protects me and now he just'..wants to capture me'.." she started crying badly covering her face with her palms.

Neel first time ignored her tears but grabbed her shoulders hard and then removed her hands from her face. " Whatever I have decided is for your own good. You are little disturbed so you can't understand what I am telling to you. But after some time will pass you will realize why I have decided this '" he stared at her eyes longingly. But first time she felt scared and helpless. As she couldn't find love or respect for her in that stare. She only found desire and lust. She moved backward but crashed on the wall. As she walked backward he too advanced to her forward and finally he had cornered in the wall. He arrested her in between his long, strong hands by placing them on the wall of her both side. Then he slowly brought her face to her ear and said, " We have only 6hours from now for our wedding'.you need some sleep. Otherwise you will complain me that I will not give you enough time for sleep. Come." He picked her into his arms and took her to her bedroom. After made her stand on her feet he had handed over her a packet. "As you know ritual wise a groom can't see his bride's wedding gown. So I can't see this. Remember you have always discussed about your marriage attire with me. You told me that you want a Christian wedding where you will wear a white classic gown with lots of frills and your groom will have to wear Morning Suit '.I have bought as your wish Princess. But yes I haven't seen your gown and not my tux either. I have just described the designer what I want and he picked those stuffs for me. So how it will be? I simply don't know. You have to do a trial I think'.." he said grinning.

"No I don't need to." She finally spoke and her voice reflected her helplessness and anger. " I really need some rest. If you excuse me'.." she didn't complete her sentence but she signaled him for leave.

" Oh sure'.sweetheart." He left the room readily. She leaned on the bed and closed her eyes. She couldn't figure out how to handle this matter? Once she thought to go to the police. But then she thought it would be devastating for both of them. Then she thought to call her father but couldn't find what to tell him and how? But finally she decided to call Neel's Kakima. Because only she could calm him down and made him understand about his mistake. But before she did the call Neel stormed into her room'.

"Naughty Girl'.not fair huh. But yes the fault is mine. I have to tell you first. Listen Darling we will give Kakima and your parents a surprise. They will be very happy when they will have our wedding news. But we will tell them together 7 days later after our Honeymoon what say??" he grinned and snatched her mobile from her. She was stunned by his act but couldn't say anything. Actually she had lost her activeness due to this constant argument which she had been doing from the evening. But finally she realized that everything was futile. Nothing could change Neel's decision. So she said to him, " Okay'..Neel. But I have 2 conditions. 1. You will not force me to consummate our marriage by anything. Remember 'no blackmail no anything'.."

"Okay Darling ''you will be with me that is only I want. Nothing else." Neel promised.

"Wait. My second condition is'you and I will stay together under one roof but we will sleep separate. And our marriage news will be kept secret from everyone. Neither you will tell your Kakima and your friends nor I tell this to my family and friend. Clear?" she asked.

"Crystal. And I promise you''." He was interrupted as Aparna raised her hand to stop him. And then she laid on her bed tiredly. And Neel was staring at her with a fixed glance.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh God, didnt expect this. . amazing storyline, desperate to know what happens next. Hats off Rimi for such a creative writing. Thanks for such a unique story. Kepp updating dear.😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Oh God, didnt expect this. . amazing storyline, desperate to know what happens next. Hats off Rimi for such a creative writing. Thanks for such a unique story. Kepp updating dear.😊😊


Sorry didi I know you are shocked and hurt. But I am helpless...cause what I am going to update will make you enraged and sad as well. Please forgive me in advance.😭

@my other readers kahan ho sab ke sab??????????please read and leave your feed back.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

That Night

Aparna was utterly disgusted and enraged on 14th Feb. She had been haunted by the memories where her soul was killed. But she clearly couldn't remember anything about that day and the days after. What she could recall made her mad because that according to Aparna was impossible!!

When she came out form Neel's cottage she was very depressed. After walking some way she found that Neel was right. Gaurav was waiting for her. Gaurav Rathode was one of the billionare of the City. But that was not his true identity'.his true identity was he was a bachelor and his foes talked what about him was he was a well- known womanizer. But in spite of that Aparna got attracted by him. He was very charming and go getter personality which attracted women close to him.

"Hey Aparna'..I am ready see''so" he bent on his knees and stretched his hands.

"Ah''Gaurav'..can we do this later?" Aparna was not in very good mood. She wanted to be alone.

"Come on Babe'.I am waiting for this day since the December and now you are avoiding this.." his voice showed his disgust. He stood up on his feet and tried grab Aparna's hand but she pulled back her hands and turned her face another side.

Now Gaurav got really angry. He never saw any girl like Aparna who didn't allow him to become close to her. They were dating from last 1 month but she didn't allow him to hold her hand within him. And all time she kept chanting about her best friend Neel. Neel was a tough player, he was a brave fighter, he was very supportive etc. These constant praising of Neel sometime got rid on his nerve. But still he smilingly bore everything. He was trying to win her trust. But till now she didn't give him a chance to do so. Even he had been planning to propose Aparna on 14th of February, the Valentine's Day'.but there was no sign of hope. He bit his lips and tightened his fist'.. "I can't let this happen'.she will be mine only." He thought in his mind and asked Aparna'..

"Okay Honey'but what about our celebration? Why didn't we open a bottle of champagne on the night before Valentine's?"

"NO'Gaurav. You know this well that I don't drink as Neel doesn't like." She told as Neel didn't like to consume alcohol and so was Aparna. "Anyways Gaurav I get to go. Bye. I will try to meet you tomorrow morning." Saying this she got into her car and drove away.

aww...aparna loves neel sooo much😉

"Ma'm we are going to land in next 20mins. Please fasten your seatbelt." An airhostess asked her. Aparna opened her eyes and looked at her. She was little stiff as she knew her Boss was very punctual and perfect person. And they were running already 40mins late.

"Okay'.." she nodded and started fasten her seatbelts. The airhostess left little surprisingly as she expected some cold rebuking from her Boss.


Nice upd rimi 🤗
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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