The Forbidden Magic.

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

this girl is either mad or theres much more to her than what she pretends.

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sonal

@Mystique

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

interesting...!
PS:fanta the link in pm doesn't work!

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

really interesting...

liking the way the story is developing...

wanna read further...

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Amazin update hun why is she behaving this way?
cont sooon

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Intresting Update fanta...😃👏
its reallyyy Getting interesting...wanna Know more...😳continue soon...😛
n ya the Link in the PM isn't Working...
Annu...😛

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

interesting update Kinza!

what's up with Maheen?

why is she behaving like this 😕

update the next part soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

P.S. Maheen...nice name!

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

nice update kinzi...whts wrong wid dat gurl...😕

liking dis new writing style of urs...😉

tczzz

loads of love

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

lovely...

but maheen malik!!!!!!!!!

isn't it mayur story!!!!!!!!

ok...y maheen behaving so weired?

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

ONLY ONE WORD KINZU : AMAZING!!!!! I DIDNT EXPECT FOR A MINUTE U WILL TAKE THIS STORY IN THIS WAY!!!! ITS UNEXPECTED AND YET SOOO DAMN CAPTIVATING!!! I WANT TO KNW ABT MEHREEN MALIK AND HER LIFE !!! BUT WHT CAUGHT ME COMPLETELY WAS THE LAST LINE... SHE HAD CHOOSED HELL AS HER COMPANIAN!!! AMAZING KINZU AND VERY WELLL WRITEEN!!!! LOVE U BESTIE!!!! *HUGS*

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Loved the concept...Starting ws interesting...
And the second part made me curious...Something is wrong with maheen...Hey i liked the name coz unknowingly u used my nick name here...😳