Parth Vibha - Creative Story Part XVII **COMPLETE

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Vibha makes sure all the students boarding the train are at the platform as she checks her list once again. Her eyes continue to hover around Parth's name that she crossed over as he left with his Mother, without a proper goodbye, without a chance to talk even if for a few seconds if not minutes. She thinks her happiness from last night was indeed short-lived as the train ride this time would have been significantly different for both of them this time around. But as fate would have it, she was on the train and he was not! The more she keeps thinking about him, the more she misses him and the more she thinks of what she would have told him if he was on the train. Her mind says to herself, "Agar tum yaha hote Parth, toh main tumhe batati, ki main tumse kitna pyar karti hu, aur main tumhe kitna miss karungi. Aur aisa ek lamha nahi beetega, jisme maine tumhe yaad na kiya ho".

Parth meanwhile arrives at the same train station with his Mother and as they walk towards the platform to catch the train to Mumbai, Vibha escorts the students to the train to New Delhi. And just as she is about to enter the train, Parth sees her back and his lips move to say "Vibha" and he keeps looking at her in the hope of her turning around and seeing him. But that does not happen as all the students follow her into the train and she checks everyone again. But just as she is about to sit down, she feels as if Parth may be there on the platform, and tries to look around, but Parth is leaving with his Mother to board their train, and she doesn't see him. And as her train whistle blows, and the train starts to move slowly, she looks at the platform and feels an overwhelming feeling of sadness as she is leaving the place where she spent such beautiful memories with Parth. She knows they we will be back at school after the break is over, but going through an entire vacation period without any means of getting in touch with him seems to be eating her up alive. Its the same story with Parth, who sits on his train with his Mother, and while his physical presence occupies the seat on the train, his mind wanders around his one and only, Vibha!

As both reach their respective destinations, a visibly quiet Parth walks along with his Mother to his house, the places where he never feels welcome, the place that has only given him scars and unpleasant memories. He thinks of Warrior High, a school he didn't want to go, leaving his Mother behind. But as life throws a spin on things, it turned out to be a place he could call his home, he not only made some good friends, but also found a brother in Utkarsh, who would always stand by his side, and most importantly, he found the love of his life, Vibha, who would always be there for him, no matter come what may. A quiet, lonesome Parth is something his Mother has always been used to, so she lets him coil up in his room and do as he pleases while she starts preparing for dinner. Meanwhile Vibha is at her home, sitting and chatting with Dadi, who is immensely happy to see Vibha back for holidays. But she notices that Vibha keeps getting lost in thoughts, but as if that weren't enough, there is also a visible emotion of sadness reflecting in her eyes as she thinks about Parth. Dadi asks her if she is okay and feeling well, to which she responds unconvincingly that she just needs rest. She goes to her room and looks out of the window, gazing at the moon and the stars in the sky. She remembers how one night changed everything, from a moment of magic and pure bliss to a moment of separation and sadness. Parth lies on his bed, thinking of Vibha while looking at the cheap star pattern on his ceiling.

Song plays in the background...

Chaandani raatein, chaandani raatein
Sab jag soye hum jaage, taaron se karein baatein
Ho o o o o chaandani raatein... chaandani raatein...

Takate takate tuti jaaye aas piya na aaye re takate takate
Shaam sabere dard anokhe uthe jiya ghabraaye re shaam sabere
Raaton ne meri nind loot li -2 din ke chain churaaye
Dukhiyaan aankhein dhund rahi hai wahin pyaar ki baate
Ho o o o o chaandani raatein... chaandani raatein...

Parth tries to sleep, but keeps thinking of Vibha. And how she would be missing him as he didn't even get a chance to say goodbye to her. Vibha is unable to sleep as she missed Parth, and simply cannot imagine spending the entire vacation without him. She is so used to seeing him everyday, that the very thought of waking up the next morning and not seeing Parth around is simply not acceptable to her. She tries to reminisce all the moments she had spent with Parth in the school, starting from his grip on her in the train on the very first day, to the beautiful passionate hug they shared on the terrace on the very last day. All the moments were special, some magical, some beautiful and some simply ethereal.

Its the morning the next day. Parth can hear the birds chirping. Parth is sleeping and suddenly someone comes into his room, and opens the curtains. He hides in face under his pillow as he is getting to sleep in after such a long time. But a beautiful voice comes and starts talking to him, trying to move the pillow from his face.

Vibha: Parth... Utho...

Parth realizes its Vibha and he quickly moves the pillow and rubs his eyes and sits upright. His hair is all muffled and his eyes look like they've just been disturbed from a deep peaceful sleep. He opens his eyes to see Vibha's beautiful face, right in front of him, as she's sat right next to him, trying to wake him up.

Parth: Aap yaha?

Vibha looks at his bed and smiles. She runs her fingers through his hair and then she lightly pats his cheeks.

Parth: Lekin aap yaha... kaise?
Parth's Mom: Beta, school se chutti ho gayi hai... shayad teri neend khuli nahi ab tak, abhi tu Warrior High nahi, apne ghar main hai...

Parth is stunned to hear his Mother's voice and quickly clears his throat and starts talking again.

Parth: Ma...
Parth's Mom: Ha, tujhe aur thodi der sona hai to so le... Waha toh roz savere jaldi uthna padta hoga?
Parth: Yes Mom.

Parth's Mother leaves and Parth hits his head on his pillow and rustles his hair with his fingers. 'Vibha Maam ka khayal mere dimaag se ja hi nahi raha, lekin main chahta bhi nahi ki ek pal bhi aisa ho jisme maine unhe yaad na kiya ho' and then Parth pauses as he thinks again 'Parth tu pura pagal ho gaya hai, tera kuch nahi ho sakta'. He then smiles and sleeps in for a little longer hoping to see Vibha in his dreams again.

Meanwhile a restless Vibha is awake in her bed, staring out of the window and the birds chirp away and her Dadi comes in. She puts a cup of tea next to Vibha's table and sits next to her.

Dadi: Vibha, tu soyi nahi kya?

Vibha gets up and leans against the headrest of her bed.

Vibha: Dadi, apne kyu takleef ki?
Dadi: Tune mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya?
Vibha: Ha.. woh Dadi...
Dadi: Tere chehre se saaf dikh raha hai, ki tujhe neend nahi ayi.
Vibha: Nahi Dadi...
Dadi: Tujhe koi baat pareshaan kar rahi hai kya?
Vibha: Dadi...
Dadi: Arey, tu bejhijhak mujhe bata sakta hai, bol kya hua?

Vibha wonders how to tell Dadi about Parth. But she ends up telling her everything. How they love one another and how they parted before the vacation started.

Dadi: Arey, to isme kya hai? Phone kar le!
Vibha: Lekin Dadi, phone main kaha se lau?
Dadi: Tere pas uska number nahi hai?
Vibha: Nahi Dadi...
Dadi: Arey, aaj kal ke sabhi bachche toh phone lekar ghumte hai, aur ek tum dono ho... Khair... Ab yeh number kaise dhoonda jay...
Vibha: Dadi aap chinta mat karo...
Dadi: Arey, main kaise chinta na karu?
Vibha: Dadi, koi baat nahi.
Dadi: Arey ha, tu school kyu nahi phone karti, phone karke puch, ki Parth ka number kya hai.
Vibha: Ha, aur agar woh puchenge ke mujhe number kyu chahiye toh main kya kahungi? Ki mujhe usse yuhi baat karni hai?
Dadi: Nahi, tu sach bata dena, ki tu usse pyar karti hai aur usse baat kiye bina nahi rah sakti!
Vibha: Kya Dadi, aap bhi! (she smiles a little)
Dadi: Arey, main to mazaak kar rahi thi, lekin tere chehre pe hasi dekh kar achcha laga.
Vibha: Dadi, main aisa kuch nahi karne wali, agar unhone mujhe job se nikal diya to?
Dadi: Arey, aise kaise nikal denge? Jab pyar kiya to darna kya?
Vibha: Dadi... Aap bahut zyada filmi ho gaye ho.

Vibha smiles and Dadi blesses her.

Dadi: Yuhi hasti reh, tu haste hue kitni pyari lagti hai! Le, chai pee le.
Vibha: Thank you Dadi! Apko world ki sabse best Dadi ho.
Dadi: Ha, mujhe pata hai!

Dadi smiles and then leaves. Vibha sips her tea and wonders what Parth must be doing. If he would be awake or still in bed.


It is afternoon, and while Parth is taking a break from surfing around on his computer, the phone rings in Vibha's house. Dadi answers.

Dadi: Hello...
Parth: Hello Dadi, kaise ho aap?
Dadi: Kaun, Parth?
Parth: Ji Dadi, lekin aapko kaise pata chala?
Dadi: Mujhe sab pata hai... Kaise ho tum beta?
Parth: Main theek hu Dadi, aur aap?
Dadi: Main to theek hu, lekin Vibha ka pata nahi...
Parth: Vibha Maam, kya hua unhe? Woh theek to hai na?
Dadi: Arey, itna bhi pareshan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, woh bas tujhe bahut miss kar rahi hai...
Parth: Oh, toh theek hai... Aur mujhe laga tha ki...
Dadi: Main sab samajhti hu, bahut pyar karta hai na usse?

Parth smiles as he feels shy.

Parth: Ji Dadi.
Dadi: Main bahut khush hu, meri Vibha ko tumse achcha koi mil hi nahi sakta.

Parth smiles again and looks at the floor and then scratches his forehead in a cheeky manner as he wants to speak with Vibha.

Parth: Dadi, kya main unse baat kar sakta hu?
Dadi: Ha ha, kyu nahi, zaroor...
Parth: Thank you Dadi.

Dadi went into the kitchen to tell Vibha. She was beaming with excitement, but as she saw Vibha staring out of the window with gloomy eyes, she smiled and went to her.

Dadi: Vibha, beta tera phone hai...
Vibha: Kya? Ghar par... Nahi mujhe baat nahi karni hai...
Dadi: Arey, ye kya baat hui...
Vibha: Kaun hai Dadi?
Dadi: Arey, kitne sawal puchti hai...
Vibha: Kya Dadi...

Vibha leaves and answers the phone with an irritated tone.

Vibha: Hello?
Parth: Hello...

Vibha cannot believe its Parth on the other side of the line. The wind blows her hair and song plays in background.

Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan


Parth doesn't hear anything. So he speaks again.

Parth: Maam...
Vibha: (snaps out of her daze) Parth...
Parth: Ha Maam, aap kaise ho?
Vibha: (smiles) Main theek hu, aur tum?
Parth: Kyun jhooth bol rahi ho aap?
Vibha: Kya? Kaisa jhooth?
Parth: Ahem, maine suna aap kisiko bahut miss kar rahe ho? (smiles and waits for her answer)
Vibha: (smiles) Nahi to...
Parth: Achcha?
Vibha: Lagta hai kisine tumhe galat information di hai...
Parth: Nahi, Dadi kabhi bhi galat nahi keh sakti...
Vibha: Hmm...
Parth: Maine toh aapko bahut miss kiya!
Vibha: Ha Parth, maine bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya... Kitni ajeeb feeling hai, abhi do din pehle hi hum ek saath the, aur ab aisa lagta hai ki jaise kitne dino se hum mile hi na ho.
Parth: Ha, aap bilkul theek keh rahe ho, mujhe kabse itni bechaini ho rahi thi, aur ab jake, aapse baat karke bahut achcha lag raha hai.
Vibha: Lekin Parth, tumhe yeh number...
Parth: Aap bhul gaye, apke Birthday par kaise maine aur Dadi ne plan banaya tha... Bas mujhe yaad aaya ki apke ghar ka number toh hai...
Vibha: Hmm, achcha kiya jo tumne phone kiya.
Parth: Mujhe laga aap mujhse naraz honge...
Vibha: Naraz? Kyun?
Parth: Woh, main kuch bina kahe chala gaya...
Vibha: Arey nahi Parth...
Parth: Mujhe aapse milna hai...
Vibha: Lekin Parth...
Parth: Lekin vekin kuch nahi...
Vibha: Parth, mujhe bhi tumse milna hai, lekin kaise... Hum itne door hai...
Parth: Woh aap mujh par chod dijiye...
Vibha: Parth, tum aisa waisa kuch bhi nahi karoge...
Parth: Maam, don't you trust me?
Vibha: Ha Parth, main tum pe vishwaas karti hu. Acha apna number toh do, mujhe agar tumse baat karni hogi toh?
Parth: Achcha, toh aapko bhi mujhse baat karni thi, aur mujhe lag raha tha ki ek main hi pagalon ki tarah mare jaa raha hu aapse baat karne ke liye...

Vibha smiled as she could hear the playfulness in Parth's voice.

Parth: Number to abhi nahi hai, lekin main apko jald hi bata dunga. Aap apna mobile number de dijiye.
Vibha: Ha, likho.

Parth thanks her for her number and wants to talk to her more.

Parth: Maam, mujhe aur baat kariye na...
Vibha: Parth, Dadi yahi par hai...
Parth: Theek hai, to jane se pehle, ek baar bol dijiye.
Vibha: Kya Parth?
Parth: Wahi, that you love me?
Vibha: Parth, abhi kaha na, Dadi yahi par hai...
Parth: To kya hua, unhe sab kuch pata hai!
Vibha: Parth...
Parth: Maam...
Vibha: Parth, yeh kya bachpana hai?
Parth: Yeh koi bachpana nahi hai, aap jab tak nahi bologe, main phone nahi rakhunga!
Vibha: To mat rakho, main rakh deti hu...
Parth: Par Maam...

Dadi comes close to Vibha and tells her off.

Dadi: Kyu bechare ko itna pareshaan kar rahi hai... Bata de
Vibha: Dadi... Aap... Aap bhi.
Dadi: Aur nahi to kya, Parth, sun le, ye tujhse bahut pyar karti hai, ha!
Vibha: Dadi, aap bhi na...
Parth: Maam... mujhe aapke mooh se sunna hai...
Vibha: Parth tum nahi manoge na?
Parth: Nahi, bas aap ek baar bol dijiye...
Vibha: Theek hai...
Parth: I'm waiting...
Vibha: Wohi, jo Dadi ne kaha...
Parth: Kya kaha Dadi ne?
Vibha: Parth, tumne suna unhone kya kaha...
Parth: Nahi, aapne suna..
Vibha: Ha woh...
Parth: Toh kya kaha unhone?
Vibha: Yahi ki main tumse pyar karti hu!
Parth: Main bhi aapse bahut pyar karta hu...

Song plays in background as Vibha's hair blows.

Halke se yun beh raha
Resha ho jaise ruyi ka
Udta hai dekho kahin aasmaan pe
Dil kaagzi mera..

Mutthi mein bhar bhar ke cheeni ke daane
Jaise hawa mein ghule
Ho.. taaron se khenchi hai roshan sitare
Raahon mein meri chale..


Parth: Maam, will you miss me?
Vibha: Ha Parth, main tumhe har pal yaad karungi!
Parth: That's good.
Vibha: Tum mujhe miss karoge ya nahi?
Parth: No Maam.
Vibha: Achcha, toh main bhi nahi karungi!
Parth: Maam, miss unhe karte hain jo hamare paas nahi hote, aur aap to mere dil ke kitne kareeb ho...
Vibha: Parth, tum bhi na!
Parth: In fact, aap to mere dil main rehte ho!
Vibha: Parth, tum aur itne filmi, mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha.
Parth: Pata nahi Maam, jab bhi aap mere saath hote ho, ya jab bhi main aapse baat karta hu, to pata nahi mujhe kya ho jata hai!
Vibha: Parth, main jaati hu, Dadi shayad khana bana rahi hai, main unki help kar deti hu.
Parth: Okay Maam.
Vibha: Bye, take care.
Parth: Maam, I love you.
Vibha: I love you too Parth (she whispers into the phone).

Parth smiles as he hears her whispering. She smiles as she puts the phone down.

Song continues to play in background.

Kholi.. chanda ne chhatri
Pedo ke peeche kahin
Hum.. tum chhupke se jake
Baithenge neeche wahin
Chal.. phoonko se dhoop udake
Hum thoda sa din churake
Aadha tu aadha
Main tai karke rakh lein
Hissa ho jaise khushi.. ka

(End of this part!)

Edited by rosabelle - 10 years ago

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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me frst..
Hahaha..
So both hv reached dere respective houses
Lets see how dey vl meet now..
Grt going rose
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Posted: 10 years ago
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xvii, corrected! thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

Me frst..
Hahaha..
So both hv reached dere respective houses
Lets see how dey vl meet now..
Grt going rose


yeah, let's see
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So finally they reached to their respective houses...ahaan bt couldn't see not a sec aww😭 beautiful said evrythng abt vibharth parting...
Now wat is next...they will meet naa...
U r running like rajdhani express..just for me go slow 😆
Loved it..awesome...brilliant and I havnt heard this song...do let me know babes😉⭐️👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki01

So finally they reached to their respective houses...ahaan bt couldn't see not a sec aww😭 beautiful said evrythng abt vibharth parting...

Now wat is next...they will meet naa...
U r running like rajdhani express..just for me go slow 😆
Loved it..awesome...brilliant and I havnt heard this song...do let me know babes😉⭐️👏


its a nice song, i like the bally sagoo remix version, i think! ill send the link soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki01

So finally they reached to their respective houses...ahaan bt couldn't see not a sec aww😭 beautiful said evrythng abt vibharth parting...

Now wat is next...they will meet naa...
U r running like rajdhani express..just for me go slow 😆
Loved it..awesome...brilliant and I havnt heard this song...do let me know babes😉⭐️👏


you guys decide, if you want me to go slow or go fast! hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosabelle

will continue this soon...



Thank you thank you thank you. 😃
This page has been a permanent tab on my phone which I keep checking to see if you've updated. So I'm really glad to hear that you'll be continuing soon. Thanks. I love this FF. Please show them in the holidays even though you already wrote one like that. I loved that 5 parter as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aneesa888.



Thank you thank you thank you. 😃
This page has been a permanent tab on my phone which I keep checking to see if you've updated. So I'm really glad to hear that you'll be continuing soon. Thanks. I love this FF. Please show them in the holidays even though you already wrote one like that. I loved that 5 parter as well.


hehe... yeah...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally...
I love this fff ..
Ahan story m twist..
Will be waiting for that..
Vibha ko parth ka no millega ya ni ??
Kya parth or vibha mill payengen ??
Kya dadi is mushkil ko half Jr payengi ??
Jaane k liye paste rahiye...
Creative story.. By rose mam..

PS.. Health is more imp so plz take rest... N aram se updt kijiyega..!! Koi hurry ni h !! Plz plz plz tc !!

N thank u so very much once again..*hugs*

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