VR FF ~~~ Chain Reaction ~~~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's time to unite Poongodi with Gautham...

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Gautham weds Poongodi
Everyone's invited 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character Sketch

Everyone is like their character in VR...
The differences will be mentioned
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Chain Reaction

Episode 1

The Bride's Room

A grand wedding hall is shown. Every chair is full, full of people who are looking forward to witness a regular wedding.

The ayyar: Fetch the groom

Rajesh goes

A minute later, Surya comes wearing a white shirt and a veshthi. He is holding on to Gautham who is also wearing white and white with a big maalai around his neck.

Gautham sits on the groom's spot.

Meanwhile, Devi, Shenba and Selvi are getting Poongodi ready for her wedding.

Poongodi goes to the bathroom

Devi leaves the room too

Selvi: (to Shenba) when's your wedding?

Shenba: Whenever I find the right guy

Selvi: You will soon find him. With a golden heart like yours, anything you require will make its way to you.

Shenba: I didn't do a lot.

Selvi: (sarcastically) yeah, you only saved my life

Shenba: With a father-in-law like yours, you needed to have done what I did. You could have done what I did, you just chose not to.

Selvi: Exactly, I wasn't going to do that all. You did it. You saved my life from being a hell. You deserve all this credit.

Shenba: Great, I did it. Now, let's move on (tenses). I don't like all this (gives a small smile).

Devi comes back

Devi: Saravannan is still not here

Shenba: Well, we need to get him here if Poongodi is going to have a good life.

Shenba picks up her mobile on the table and starts dialling.

Devi: What are you doing?

Shenba: Calling Saravannan

Devi: Let's not

Shenba: What?

Devi: We'll let Poongodi call him

Shenba: You know she's never going to do that

Devi: We have to make her do it. We have to make her realise what's good for her life and make her choose the decision that will do just that.

Shenba: And, you think this will work?

Devi: I'm not stopping until this works like it should. And, neither should you.

Shenba: I'm with you till the end

Devi: Great

Selvi is standing clueless

Selvi: Hmm, (looks blank) what's going on?

Devi: Selvi, my darling. If you have no idea what's going on then you just have to wait until the suspense is broken.

Selvi: Suspense? Well then, I don't want to know any more information if I'm not going to know everything. So, I'll walk out and you can continue with whatever you are doing.

Devi: That's probably for the best

Selvi walks out

The Wedding Hall

Poongodi comes from the bathroom

Devi and Shenba stare at her with their game face on

Poongodi: (Smiles) what?

Shenba hands her the mobile

Poongodi: No (smiles) I'm not calling him.

Devi: Really? I think you should

Poongodi: And I think I shouldn't (smiles)

Shenba: You're going to regret this

Poongodi: I will only regret if I called him

Shenba: Are you scared that if he's here you will follow your heart.

Poongodi: (laughs) No

Shenba: Then what are you scared of?

Poongodi: Nothing

Shenba: We're here, for you. Tell us

Poongodi remains silent

Devi: If you can't accept this wedding in front of his presence, then what is the point of this marriage?

Poongodi: Fine, I'll call him

Poongodi picks up the mobile and dials Saravannan's number

Poongodi: It's switched off

Shenba: No, it's not

Shenba snatches the mobile and dials the number

Shenba: It's switched off

Poongodi: See, even the universe is with me on this. I have (emphasis) made the right choice.

Devi: We just don't you to feel that you made a mistake at a crucial point of your life.

Poongodi: You don't have to feel like that, this is not a mistake.

Shenba: It is a mistake if he's not here.

Devi: Besides, how do you know you changed without him being here?

Shenba: Yeah, what if you haven't?

Devi: What do you mean, what if (laughs)

Poongodi: (Shouts) stop it!

Poongodi sits down

Poongodi: It's my life, my decision and my way. I don't want your input on this. I never asked you two to do anything. All I want you to do is get me up there (pointing at the mandapam) and stand behind me to offer your blessings. Don't talk to me, don't talk to him (pointing at the mandapam, Gautham) and don't talk to him (pointing at the mobile, Saravannan).

Devi: Fine, it's your choice

Poongodi: Damn right, it's my choice and I choose this.

Poongodi thinks to herself: Do I?

Selvi comes

Selvi: It's time

Selvi, Devi and Shenba walk with Poongodi to the manavarai.

The ayyar: Kettimelam, Kettimelam

Saravannan shows himself on the entrance

Shenba shockingly looks at Devi

Devi smiles and nods to signal that she is responsible

Shenba touches Poongodi's shoulders

Poongodi looks up, sees him and smiles.

Edited by Shathirlala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy to read shathir's ff..
Good Going re !!! Suspense.. aww..
I'm waiting :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shahtir i did not know u can write this well!! 😃 Its super!! faster post the new one, suspens tanggeleh 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Damn I wanted to be the first to comment! 😭 Should have reserved! 😒
Shathir Kanna . . . 🤗 Part TWO please! Shree waiting . . . 😎
Edited by incorrigible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Neru , shathir is a good writer ma.. he rocked in deivamagal forum..
Sakash love story.. very impressive..
So here too we can enjoy his ff for sure..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Navetha-

Happy to read shathir's ff..
Good Going re !!! Suspense.. aww..
I'm waiting :P


Nice to see you here Nave 😃
Glad you like it 😃 and hope you like the rest
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nerulala

shahtir i did not know u can write this well!! 😃 Its super!! faster post the new one, suspens tanggeleh 😳


If all goes to plan
Next one will be up tonight, my time 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: incorrigible

Damn I wanted to be the first to comment! 😭 Should have reserved! 😒

Shathir Kanna . . . 🤗 Part TWO please! Shree waiting . . . 😎


Ha 😆😆
Glad to see you here now 😃

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