What happened.... Tejo and Fateh OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi, so I am here with an OS, because I absolutely don't like the way show has been going on. Honestly I wish they'd make her more fiery, and a bit human. So here's something...lemme know if you guys like it.


Fateh looked into mirror as he washed his face... it's weird. What was going on with him... Why was he relieved that Tejo tore the divorce papers. Jasmine was his true love...then how could he have these conflicted feelings...

He was thinking about Tejo when he collided with her in the corridor. He didn't know whether it was his imagination or something else, but he felt a softness in her eyes before they turned into something he didn't recognize. This wasn't his Tejo... he mentally checked himself about 'his'.

Tejo sighed and was about to go away when Fateh blocked her path.

"What is wrong with you... ab tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Tumne divorce papers par sign karke unhe kaise faad diya? bolo...huh?" Fateh was irrationally mad, and now he just wanted a genuine reaction from her. Her cold shoulder, dismissive attitude towards him, as if he was completely irrelevant, was making him mad.

"Eh... man kiya mera...toh faad diye. Meri mazi..." Tejo said nonchalantly.

"Kyon...kyon kiya tumne aisa... tum mujhe pana chahti ho na.... sab kuch hone ke baad bhi...bolo tejo...sach sach bolo..." Fateh took a step closer in her direction, and he saw a flicker of emotion on her face before she composed herself, and took a step closer in his direction, now so close that he's having a hard time even comprehending his own self.

She almost took his breath away as she cupped his face in her hands. He felt his heartbeat going fast as he could feel her breath.

"Fatehhhh...." she said in a voice which was her, but not hers.

"Tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki ye tumhare baare mein hai...? tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki tum relevant ho?" she chuckled coldly and moved away from him, looking straight into his eyes.

"Ye mere aur jassu ke beech ki baat hai. Ye mere baare mein hai... abhi tak tum donon ne jo kiya, wo kiya. Ab jo mujhe karna hai, main wo karungi. Tum...tumhari toh koi aukaat hai hi nahin, ab main jasso ko dikhaungi ki agar main uska har sapna poora kar sakti hoon, toh unhe tod bhi sakti hoon." she said with a smile.

"Tum theek nahin kar rahi ho...tum ye..." fateh was still saying something when she cut him off.

"You know unlike you I did actually study in college...and I actually topped my ethics subject...so pretty sure I don't need them from a jobless spineless man." Tejo said and went.

Fateh wasn't even sure what he was feeling. Tejo wasn't like this...ever. What happened to her. A little voice in his head was saying something along the lines... closest people in her life betrayed her in the worst ways. That's what happened.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow wow so cold and savage

Fasfa with their stupid so called ibadat ka ishq that has no ethics broke a loving caring woman and made her so cold and cynic

My problem with fateh is not his inability to love back Tejo but the cheating

Fateh could have broken all things legally then I would dislike him to the core but not hate.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This Is What I Want Tejo To Be.

Cold And Heartless To Fateh. He Deserves It.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved how this plot of urs turned out to be Cauz right now they are showing Tejo as to be par human. bhai insaan hain dard hota hain, dukh hota hain par Nahi Tejo ko nahi bhai Ussa toh sabh ka messiah bane ka bhoot savar hain. 😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Loved how this plot of urs turned out to be Cauz right now they are showing Tejo as to be par human. bhai insaan hain dard hota hain, dukh hota hain par Nahi Tejo ko nahi bhai Ussa toh sabh ka messiah bane ka bhoot savar hain. 😂😂😂

Lol in my universe women aren't becharis ever. They know how to hit back.

ITV though... Women protagonists are nothing if not complete doormats. You'll either be a complete bitch Or someone who'll lose their self completely for everyone else

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Lol in my universe women aren't becharis ever. They know how to hit back.

ITV though... Women protagonists are nothing if not complete doormats. You'll either be a complete bitch Or someone who'll lose their self completely for everyone else

Exactly I cant imagine being like Tejo. May hoti toh I swear revenge mode pai jaake aabhi tak sandhu aur virk ki izzat aur political career barbaad kar deti .cauz all of them are being idiots now insensitive and dumb to the T. 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Exactly I cant imagine being like Tejo. May hoti toh I swear revenge mode pai jaake aabhi tak sandhu aur virk ki izzat aur political career barbaad kar deti .cauz all of them are being idiots now insensitive and dumb to the T. 😂😂

Same. Ek ek ki aisi taisi karni thi. Alimony mein aadhe se jyada property lekar nikal jati. Phir publicly jo beizzati karti ek ek ki, wo alag. Poori family ko mova se shift hona padta.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Same. Ek ek ki aisi taisi karni thi. Alimony mein aadhe se jyada property lekar nikal jati. Phir publicly jo beizzati karti ek ek ki, wo alag. Poori family ko mova se shift hona padta.

Waahi toh haar hua vishwasghat ki kimat vasool karti. Itna alimony Leti ki Pura parivaar raste paar aata. Phir chahe woh paisa khudh istamal karte yaa ussa jaala deti paar unha barbaad kiya bina Chup nahi Beth ti. 😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Waahi toh haar hua vishwasghat ki kimat vasool karti. Itna alimony Leti ki Pura parivaar raste paar aata. Phir chahe woh paisa khudh istamal karte yaa ussa jaala deti paar unha barbaad kiya bina Chup nahi Beth ti. 😂😂😂

I wish they would make a protagonist like this. Kya ye medieval age ki perfect aurtein phenk rakhi hain. Paise toh paise, itni publicly insult karti ki MLA toh kya inki family mein se 100 saal tak koi class monitor bhi na elect ho.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh yes this is the Tejo I want to see with Fateh

And not the one who is offering him medicine

Tejo's softness towards him irks me😡

I wish to see this fierce Tejo who'll make Fateh die of shame just with her words .

Thanks for writing it kohl 🤗

I loved it...

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