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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Hi, so I am here with an OS, because I absolutely don't like the way show has been going on. Honestly I wish they'd make her more fiery, and a bit human. So here's something...lemme know if you guys like it.


Fateh looked into mirror as he washed his face... it's weird. What was going on with him... Why was he relieved that Tejo tore the divorce papers. Jasmine was his true love...then how could he have these conflicted feelings...

He was thinking about Tejo when he collided with her in the corridor. He didn't know whether it was his imagination or something else, but he felt a softness in her eyes before they turned into something he didn't recognize. This wasn't his Tejo... he mentally checked himself about 'his'.

Tejo sighed and was about to go away when Fateh blocked her path.

"What is wrong with you... ab tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Tumne divorce papers par sign karke unhe kaise faad diya? bolo...huh?" Fateh was irrationally mad, and now he just wanted a genuine reaction from her. Her cold shoulder, dismissive attitude towards him, as if he was completely irrelevant, was making him mad.

"Eh... man kiya mera...toh faad diye. Meri mazi..." Tejo said nonchalantly.

"Kyon...kyon kiya tumne aisa... tum mujhe pana chahti ho na.... sab kuch hone ke baad bhi...bolo tejo...sach sach bolo..." Fateh took a step closer in her direction, and he saw a flicker of emotion on her face before she composed herself, and took a step closer in his direction, now so close that he's having a hard time even comprehending his own self.

She almost took his breath away as she cupped his face in her hands. He felt his heartbeat going fast as he could feel her breath.

"Fatehhhh...." she said in a voice which was her, but not hers.

"Tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki ye tumhare baare mein hai...? tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki tum relevant ho?" she chuckled coldly and moved away from him, looking straight into his eyes.

"Ye mere aur jassu ke beech ki baat hai. Ye mere baare mein hai... abhi tak tum donon ne jo kiya, wo kiya. Ab jo mujhe karna hai, main wo karungi. Tum...tumhari toh koi aukaat hai hi nahin, ab main jasso ko dikhaungi ki agar main uska har sapna poora kar sakti hoon, toh unhe tod bhi sakti hoon." she said with a smile.

"Tum theek nahin kar rahi ho...tum ye..." fateh was still saying something when she cut him off.

"You know unlike you I did actually study in college...and I actually topped my ethics subject...so pretty sure I don't need them from a jobless spineless man." Tejo said and went.

Fateh wasn't even sure what he was feeling. Tejo wasn't like this...ever. What happened to her. A little voice in his head was saying something along the lines... closest people in her life betrayed her in the worst ways. That's what happened.


This was fun😁😁😁

I like the desperate fateh and fiery tejo

My favourite line.

She studied ETHICS

Good enough to tell him he lacked that area😁😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

I wish they would make a protagonist like this. Kya ye medieval age ki perfect aurtein phenk rakhi hain. Paise toh paise, itni publicly insult karti ki MLA toh kya inki family mein se 100 saal tak koi class monitor bhi na elect ho.

Waahi toh paata nahi Konsa aatma trupti shanti niketan chala rahe hain. Matlab Jaisa ki woh koi mandir ki ghanti ho koi bhi aaye aur baaja ke chale jaaye. 😂😂

I personally don't believe in forgive and forget each time. Those who forget are fools and those who forgive each time are bigger fools as not everthing and everyone deserves forgiveness. Some need to be taught a lesson and be brought down on their knees.

I due to mistofshadow ka ek post saw a few episodes here and there of that shaurya and anokhi wala show. It had such a progressive female lead. I mean hats off for pulling that of whether it was standing up for her dreams or calling out the hypocrisy regarding asking her dreams to be sacrificed. I have never seen a itv female lead choose her dreams and passion over her love and that show did it and I was quiet impressed. The most important thing I love about the show is how they highlighted that often we forget that men too are victims of this misogynistic society forcing and conditioning them to be a certain way for centuries and centuries. That male lead shaurya was flawed as hell but he had it in him to learn and accept them at each step.

But I guess it was to progressive for itv standards hence got pulled off air.

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved the way u made Tejo insult him in "ethical" way😂😎

Makers make Tejo like this😡

Sacrificial lamb bohot ho gya, ab aj ki women se pucho, ek se ek revenge ideas hai hamare pas😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Hi, so I am here with an OS, because I absolutely don't like the way show has been going on. Honestly I wish they'd make her more fiery, and a bit human. So here's something...lemme know if you guys like it.


Fateh looked into mirror as he washed his face... it's weird. What was going on with him... Why was he relieved that Tejo tore the divorce papers. Jasmine was his true love...then how could he have these conflicted feelings...

He was thinking about Tejo when he collided with her in the corridor. He didn't know whether it was his imagination or something else, but he felt a softness in her eyes before they turned into something he didn't recognize. This wasn't his Tejo... he mentally checked himself about 'his'.

Tejo sighed and was about to go away when Fateh blocked her path.

"What is wrong with you... ab tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Tumne divorce papers par sign karke unhe kaise faad diya? bolo...huh?" Fateh was irrationally mad, and now he just wanted a genuine reaction from her. Her cold shoulder, dismissive attitude towards him, as if he was completely irrelevant, was making him mad.

"Eh... man kiya mera...toh faad diye. Meri mazi..." Tejo said nonchalantly.

"Kyon...kyon kiya tumne aisa... tum mujhe pana chahti ho na.... sab kuch hone ke baad bhi...bolo tejo...sach sach bolo..." Fateh took a step closer in her direction, and he saw a flicker of emotion on her face before she composed herself, and took a step closer in his direction, now so close that he's having a hard time even comprehending his own self.

She almost took his breath away as she cupped his face in her hands. He felt his heartbeat going fast as he could feel her breath.

"Fatehhhh...." she said in a voice which was her, but not hers.

"Tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki ye tumhare baare mein hai...? tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki tum relevant ho?" she chuckled coldly and moved away from him, looking straight into his eyes.

"Ye mere aur jassu ke beech ki baat hai. Ye mere baare mein hai... abhi tak tum donon ne jo kiya, wo kiya. Ab jo mujhe karna hai, main wo karungi. Tum...tumhari toh koi aukaat hai hi nahin, ab main jasso ko dikhaungi ki agar main uska har sapna poora kar sakti hoon, toh unhe tod bhi sakti hoon." she said with a smile.

"Tum theek nahin kar rahi ho...tum ye..." fateh was still saying something when she cut him off.

"You know unlike you I did actually study in college...and I actually topped my ethics subject...so pretty sure I don't need them from a jobless spineless man." Tejo said and went.

Fateh wasn't even sure what he was feeling. Tejo wasn't like this...ever. What happened to her. A little voice in his head was saying something along the lines... closest people in her life betrayed her in the worst ways. That's what happened.


Very well written👍🏼


I want Tejo to be like this exactly...thodha bhi sympathy nai rehna chahiye is F ke taraf😡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aahrita

Loved the way u made Tejo insult him in "ethical" way😂😎

Makers make Tejo like this😡

Sacrificial lamb bohot ho gya, ab aj ki women se pucho, ek se ek revenge ideas hai hamare pas😎

Women in itv lose all their spark once married. What a shame really!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Women in itv lose all their spark once married. What a shame really!

Yes and u know there are women out there who still believe that this is way to behave once u get married!

ITv is spoiling their minds!😡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aahrita

Yes and u know there are women out there who still believe that this is way to behave once u get married!

ITv is spoiling their minds!😡

It's true. One of my closest friends was in an abusive relationship with an extremely possessive dude with no boundaries, and raped her too a few times, and it took a long time for her to get out and genuinely understand that it's not love.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

It's true. One of my closest friends was in an abusive relationship with an extremely possessive dude with no boundaries, and raped her too a few times, and it took a long time for her to get out and genuinely understand that it's not love.

OMG! I am sorry to hear about ur friend..

Such a disgusting man she had in her life

I am glad that she came out of the abusive relation..

Hope she is leading a good life now🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aahrita

OMG! I am sorry to hear about ur friend..

Such a disgusting man she had in her life

I am glad that she came out of the abusive relation..

Hope she is leading a good life now🤗

Oh yes! Now she's happily married to probably one of the nicest dudes. Still has struggles due to her past, but they're great together.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yessssss.... this is my calm, calculated and cold Tejo, the Sherni. 👏👏

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