Forbidden Attractions - -Sukor -Shorty cutie A Mini Bonus. - Page 2

Thanks Sabah for the comments 🙏

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It's a good start! Well built suspense of Chakor's character. Why and how did those two guys die? What's her story? I am so curious to know!!

And suraj's mission alongside pratap...it's like he is taking over ports for something bigger. I can't wait for sukor meet up either. There will be tension and drama esp that Sunil also wants her. Thank you for doing this Sumi 😄

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Awesome Pleaseeeeeee update soon

Sumi🤗

Good one again keeping intact the suspense and intriguing factor..he seeing that eyes on mirror and his previous lines, I dont like anyone laying hands in his property caught my eye - telling future😉, how their encounter will be ,very eager to know. Not an easy guy to deal with and not an easy girl to move with as you wish... they are indeed interesting

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi🤗

Good one again keeping intact the suspense and intriguing factor..he seeing that eyes on mirror and his previous lines, I dont like anyone laying hands in his property caught my eye - telling future😉, how their encounter will be ,very eager to know. Not an easy guy to deal with and not an easy girl to move with as you wish... they are indeed interesting

Uma😉😉😉🤫🤫

Not easy babyyy. Oy a oyaaa

Originally posted by: 77nikita

💃💃💃💃....start ho gaya and woh bhi total dhamaka....kya baat hain👏👏👏

Suraj's description is too too good 🥰🥰🥰👌👌👌me already drooling over it imaging VJ🙈🙈......and chakor reminded me of the Diwali episode but with more oomph factor🔥🔥

And ofcourse suspense is on.....exact gadbad kya hain? Waiting for it to unravel!

Also I hope you remember about atleast twice a week promise😜😜

Niki 😉😉😘🤗🤗🤗

Yes start hogaya mera essay 🤭🤭😆😆😆

What what i cant read the last line 🙈🙈

Thanks 😘😘Smita always love your in depth comments...

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Part 1:

What a great beginning. It's very engaging, suspensive & quite amazing start Sumi 👌👌. Your thoughts & concept is always very interesting. I'm loving this discrete context of totally different background 👍👍. So perfectly & exquisitely you described of Suraj's physique & efficiency in all the way, amazing 😍😍. Suraj Dhopar, I'm fascinated by his dangerous but attractive personality (specially imagining Vj, my heart becoming uncontrollable 😍😍😍). His intelligence, perfection & dexterity, made him favorite of The Don Pratap but were the reason of Sunil's jealousy. I loved his love & affection for his Bike, his angry image, the firm & don't care attitude, his word 'Nobody should lay hands on my Property', so excitant 👌👏👏. Loved Chakor's characteristic description, her seductive attire, the dance moves made all crazy 😮😮. I never imagined her to be a seductive dancer, but you made it possible 😊😉😉. It seems Tanuj had a bad experience with her 😁😁& trying to touch her means sure death 😯😯. Her character is riddled enough 😇😇, waiting for unscramble it. I loved that Suraj met her eyes through the mirror but they yet to come face to face & storm will surely come on that day 😍😍 I'm waiting for that day & for next update as precap is as usual very thrilling & interesting. Thank you.

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Thanks so much Sonia 🤗🤗😍

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Superb beginning with full of suspense Suraj introduction was awesome I imagine Vj sir in that place & Chakor introduction reminded me of diwali episode The mystery about Chakor is intriguing

Just wait for SuKor interaction Eagerly waiting for next update Plz update soon

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Part II

Rough sea

It was dark and very breezy….

The music downed and the troupe walked towards their rooms when few of the guys went behind the other girls to have some fun… she walked to her room.

Sunil followed her………………………

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Suraj walked up to the next tier towards the flag staff looking at the port.

He saw below the guys drunk hugging, laughing and going with the dancers of the group to their rooms.

Tanuj came up to him to say his Apache is in its parking and the petrol is bought for it and kept.

Hmmm he said when he saw Chakor walking towards the temporary tent which had the dancers to change and rest in between.

He saw Sunil following her…. He did not bother much but noticed unlike the other girls though she was sexy but not revealing and had skin tights over her…She must be around 20 or 21..he thought.

Tanuj turned and saw Sunil and was calling out for him….No don’t go….

Suraj was surprised why and who is she, never seen her before…. He asked Tanuj. Suraj has been there for the past six months and he had seen Helena dance and she was always eyeing Suraj but dude just swims away….

Tanuj said she is Chakor…

Suraj asked … Chakor???Indian? How come? Prathap cruise has not come into the Indian ports as he had a past history so was very careful.

His eyes were watching her going towards the tent and Sunil following her . He could see Sunil advancing and was about to turn his glance as he does not interfere with anyone on the cruise and deal only with Prathap and Tanuj and Helena tries to pushes herself on to him. He was turning towards the port when he saw the shadows of the two. It was like they were arguing and he was trying to hold her. She was pushing him away. Prathap called Tanuj on his phone and he rushed.

Suraj slowly went down the stairs giving time if it was something common within them, may be just an argument and the last he would want to poke into anyone’s affair.

He went towards when he could see them through the tent opening and heard her shouting

Dare touch me, she fired him with her eyes… but she was pushed to the corner…

You are here to please me Sunil said trying to grab her……………………

Awwwwwhhhhhh leave me she yelled.

Suraj was heading towards when Sunil was trying to hold her neck from behind and tried to kiss her cheeks.

One punch Sunil got at his lips… Ouccchhh…..He fell down… hey Suraj get away he said as his lips was bleeding. She is mine…. She is here to dance and please me.

Suraj lifted him…made him stand and very firmly said. Listen Man !! don’t touch a woman even if she is yours without her permission. You got it… He pointed his index at Sunil

She backed off taking her bag…I will kill you…. You B*****d. Never lay even your eyes on me. She just walked away looking at Suraj…Who is he? Why did he come? I would have killed that Sunil…

Suraj… you did wrong…. You keep crossing my path.. I will see to you shouted Sunil in anger.

You stay away from her Suraj warned him.

Oh! is she your property ? why are you bothered Sunil shouted. Suraj just pushed him and walked away.

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New Delhi

The Home office had called for an emergency meeting and Lt. Gen. Pritam Kulkarni was presiding the meeting.

All the high officials of the defence were there. The Navy, Army and the Airforce.

What is happening.? Is that our intelligence are failing? Firstly Mumbai, then Kochi and now Vizag. But Vizag is just indigestible. The Admiral is paralysed that too in his own office and the cctv footage is unable to cover the offender. I just cant believe this.

In Mumbai and Kochi, datas and defense coding have been tried to hacked. Thank god media is still not aware of this inside info else we will be torn apart in all the news channels he said.

For the oncoming International Waters meet the Vice Admiral is most important.

Who is doing all this?? Who is the officer who is working on this he asked to his Exe. Assistant

Mr. Anil Tripati, Sir said the EA . Anil an young officer in his mid twenties walked up to the Panel. He is a very very strict and straight forward officer and he is working on this. He was the one who found that the datas were tried to be hacked and few datas were missing.

But, the way the offender has attacked the three ports is very tricky and its stands a challenge for every prudent officer. Only very few datas are taken but why is that the Vizag Admiral is attacked. All were breaking their heads and checked out that during the time of attack few new cruise liners had been in the international waters but not into the Indian waters.

Anil vowed, who ever it is that person is smart but definetly I will outsmart him he said.

He boarded the chartered plane to Vizag.

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Prathap Rawat office in the Cruise.

Prathap, Suraj, Tanuj and Sunil were in his office. Sunil was extremely angry but Prathap warned him to stay away and not to force on girls. Not that he is a very cultured man but he hates cries, messiness and unnecessary moral binding. He prefers to go easy with those how come to him for his money.

He always maintained his International Image being the Luxury Cruise Liner Owner and runs various business and an undisputable Don of the International Waters. None try to wag with him. He has many international wealthy rich clients who are his regular travel customers. In true sense Luxury Liner is just for breezing dust to the outside world while he was into various illegal activities smuggling and pedling drugs, Human trafficking but this time he is in for a larger mission for grossing multi trillian Dollar deal. A deal which will make him lead a luxurious life throughout seven janams.

Suraj was in front of the map of Indian waters with various Ports drawn. Looking at the topography of the Ports and also hideouts nearby.

Daddy you are giving too much importance to this 6 months old baby you have forgotten that I had been doing everything at the blink of the eye.

Suraj just threw the map at him. Fine I have no issues you may just release me and mind your own business. I have better things to do and mind you its you go wanted me and not me who came to you. Prathap calmed Suraj and said Sunil we had been trying to crack this for the past two years and we couldnot and you know I cannot step into the Indian waters too and you know how we got hold of Suraj..

Yes said Sunil, my bad luck I know fisted Sunil.

A simple FB

Six months back

The luxury cruise was heading towards Mumbai but was anchoring in the international waters. Daddy we need to get near the port to break it said Sunil.

No Sunil we cannot, though born as a Indian, my ancestors moved to Uganda during the world War and during the time of Idi Amins regime we moved as refugees and could get the UK citizenship. Once I did try to make a drug dealing and was literally caught by the Indian Navy. I had a tough time to get out without getting arrested. Indian’s not easy he said and I have been on their wanted list since then so I cannot maar my image nor get into trouble.. I have to teach India a lesson but he said.

Sunil took the small motor boat and went towards Mumbai port and tried to get into and got to the main server room but was caught by the commandos. He was about to be freezed when a man in complete black suit just immobilized the commandos with his silencer fitted shot gun and grabbed Sunil and climbed through the wired gauze compound and put him on his Apache and drove him off. Hey Hey stop leave me Sunil shouted.

You want to be killed at the hands of them Suraj shouted. He saw the commandos following them. He just rode past the lanes of Mumbai and went to the waters putting him and his Apache on to it and sailed to elephanta Caves.

He went to the deserted side. Who are you Sunil asked and thanks … Suraj’s sharp eyes was scanning him… Who are you he asked? Sunil called Prathap and told him. Prathap Rawat Suraj exclaimed… the international Don… he is here? While he was talking he was suddenly hit from behind and was carried in the same boat to the Cruise.

He was tied when he woke up he laughed. Wah I saved you and you do this to me he said. Prathap came in and said who are you and how come you know about me.?

Arey which hacker will not know you Suraj laughed. So you are a hacker.. Yes Suraj said. He quickly freed himself with his small knife which was within his wrist and stood up. He saw one of Prathap’s guy keeping his feet on the Apache, without a second thought he just drew the trigger and the fellow just fell into the ocean dead. Prathap and Sunil just got frozen… None lay hands on my property, if laid, death is their punishment.

Now tell me why are you here he asked Prathap. Prathap was just amazed at the speed he triggerd the guy who was down somewhere in the lowest deck and was shot so perfectly on his temple.

How do I trust you he said. You need not and I am sure you have come for something big, fine send your fickle son and do it. He was again tried to be hit when he grabbed the man behind saying last time I got hurt because I wanted to so that I will be brought to meet you. But I have eyes around me else I could not have come into the Port and save you. Fine if you don’t want to tell no worries… I leave ….he set his foot to walk out.

Stop!!! Prathap said. so you are hacker he said yes I hack the international bank accounts and have helped out many with datas. Kissing his macbook which he brought out from his tight jacket.

Can you hack and bring the defence data Prathap asked. I shall pay you whatever you want he said. Defence data???? Well I don’t bother whichever data it is as long I am paid a ransom….

Deal he raised his thumb when Sunil was frustrated as the work he had to do has been passed on to a just new comer. I will do my way and none come behind me Suraj said and set off. But he knew that Prathap had sent two snipers behind him as if he fails to take his life.

Suraj smiled… he went through the glazed security hacking the codes of the entrance to the server and quickly hacked the data and copied it into the cloud and zoomed…back to the cruise.

He did it… You did it…. my first step to the two year dream and you did with ease. Prathap was just going frenzy…

Lets celebrate he said…. No first tell me why is your motto of coming here….

Prathap unfolded his motto which would stir the international waters and also the Indian Security and the Economy. This has to be done within the next 6 to one year he said.

Suraj said I shall do it…. but what is the share for me… One Crore.. Prathap said. Am I a fool Suraj asked. 25% of the deal he said. Prathap and Sunil were just gaping at him Whaaat???

Yes your choice deal ya no deal… and you know now you cannot cage me for I will just vanish from here. Knowing his potential Prathap heeded to it for he saw the big treasure in front of him and he wanted a daredevil to make his plan work.

This guy is no easy… he is fire and ruthless. But the evil indeed was weaving his own web for Suraj but waiting for him to crack the deal.

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Suraj was looking at the topography….. so when are they coming? he asked Prathap. In another two weeks but the date will be decided once you are done with it.

But… Sunil said I cant understand, we initially wanted Kolkatta, Mumbai and Chennai why not Chennai why Vizag and Kochi….

Suraj showed him the map and asked him why do you think so….. Kolkatta and Chennai have ports within the city and there are no caves or hideouts unlike Mumbai, Kochi the topography paves it easy for it has the slushy backwaters and Vizag with its caves and the sea is rough and the most important the Vice Admiral is in Vizag which is very important. But he is paralysed shouted Sunil… that’s your bad luck not mine said Suraj with attitude and walked away with his maps alongwith his whisky….

Hell with him banged his fist on the table…Sunil

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Suraj walked towards the flag staff when he saw Chakor looking down.

Searching something.... need help. he asked

I dont need anybody's help... . Just mind your business. she snubbed him

Attitude I helped you yesterday...

I didnot ask for it... you poked she said.

He bend down and was looking at it. it was a ring a big one quite big like a scorpio with sharp fangs. Is this the one you are searching???? he picked it when she came running and grabbed it from his hands... Yes this is it and ran away...

Helena was looking from her room. Whattaaa girl she is ugh the guy whom we all drool and gives a hoot to us is talking to her and she.............. uff always with attitude....

Suraj was looking at the direction of Chakor when Helena made a seductive way to him... Oh Hotshot how is that you even stand and talk to some one... hayeee only if I wasnt sick I would have.... she was trying to caress his front when he just grabbed her and said stay off from me...pushed her aside.

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It was dark in the caves…. He was on the edge looking with his binoculars towards the port and the Cruise…..

I will kill you and others...she said with her knife on his neck.

Just one hit and a twirl she was on the ground and he was on her holding the same knife around her neck.

Her eyes were red and emitting fire but no fear...

His arms was pressing her throat......................

But you don’t kill them with your knife do you?. Lifting his brows he said.…

Whaat??? How does he know????

Your name sounds Indian but …………….

No, I am from…………………………

Not a tear from her she hugged her knees to her chest and spoke with disgust and rage I will kill….. will kill each and everyone…..

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Anil was walking towards the special ward where Mr. Pant was being treated…

This must be only him he said. I will get to you soon…. He told to himself.

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Interesting intriguing update sumi👏👏👏.... full on action packed and I just loved it👍👍.....sunil is as expected... disgusting.... so serves right what suraj did to him...suraj the international hacker😅😅not bad......just imagine VJ in it😍😍 the fights, the non bothered attitude, the swag, the bike ammmmm ahhhhhh

This defence chakkar has a thrill to it....I want to know the exact plan fast🙈🙈

And dancer maidam is also all mystery.... so all in all you have to update soon to give us some peace!!!

Thanks Smita soo much

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Part:2

Superb update Sumi 👍, it's like I'm watching an action thriller movie 😳😳. Niraj's seeking to warn Sunil to save him from the wrath of Chakor 😀. Sukor first interaction but they didn't see each other's face properly, his punch to Sunil's lips & warning to him to stay away from her 😊😉😉, I loved his words to Sunil 'don't touch a woman even if she is yours without her permission ' 👏👏. Delhi portion was good 👍. It seems Anil will play a pivotal role in the entire story. How beautifully you described every portion, you always focused on the small detailing of every update that I like the most 👍👍. The FB was so startling 👌. Love how Suraj saved Sunil, becoming Pratap's trustworthy & gradually made his place in the gang 👌& how freely he shot the man to death for keeping legs on his bike & made all of them stunned. Suraj's firm, daredevil & regardless attitude just killing me 💘💘💘& his deal or no deal (I was visualizing the scene & Vj in it 😍😍😍), Prathap had no option but to concede to his deal 😁😁😉😉. This story has become more & more intriguing . Sukor's 2nd meet was so fiery. No one of them is less than the other. Both have too much attitude 😊😊. I'm curious to know how the relationship between them will develop. Waiting for next. Thank you.

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