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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nov 24, 2019

Shorty shorty… cutie… cutie…. The Sun did rise and shined bright a Mini OS

(just the pic of Meera with her short cute skirt beside the fridge with her innocently sexy (what an oxymoron 😆) face made me remember of the black tetro and my antennas were up. Next comes dudes that pic in brown make me drool... so here is a quick short one to please your Sundays. I know you all must be thinking I rested my pen but .......................😊unable to rest my emotions when I see such pics....................I am sure Niki, Mai and Smita will be smiling.... )

It dawned beautifully with a satisfying night not only for SuKor but for CeSar too…

Celia walked in happily running to SuKor when Suraj naughtily said….hmmmm looks like my little puppy has grown into a beautiful lady…. How is Ceaser he asked…. Celia snuggled his shoulders wagging her tail making sweet noises while Chakor kissed her…

Why can’t Ceaser be here she asked…. Suraj laughed and said well maybe he doesn’t want to be our ghar jamai… What’s that she asked. Ha ha he laughed loud…in house son-in-law. She kicked him with her elbow….Suraj youuu….

You both must be tired… let me bring some hot milk for you both he said kissing them. Mumbling a hindi number he got up and walked towards the kitchen…

Surajjjjj… she called loud.....I don’t understand Hindi… he said better you start seeing some hindi shows with subtitles but please don’t think about logic….as there is nothing like that there.

She smiled wearing his sheer black shirt….looking at the sea through her window…….hugging Celia who was beside her…..

Indeed life is beautiful she said to herself…..looking at the love bites of his on her she smiled saying RAW he is indeed… closing her eyes in peace…. My Suraj…. My Love…..mumbled her lips with a smile…

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Life is not always same………. Not the togetherness to last long as he had to set out for another mission.

During the late noon after the eventful togetherness there were triggers on his monitors and an SOS call from Anil. His expertise was required for the nation.

He kissed her hard, crushing her into him…. I love you and take care of yourself… sleep well was all he said…………I don’t know how long this will be when she said you will be back soon. She put a bold face. Smiling……… cheerful……………..no tears as she did not want to imprint a sad face while he set his foot off..

He kissed Celia and said baby take care of her….Celia snuggled him….

He was off with his Apache…he did not turn to wave, for he never turn when he sets off.

She very quietly went towards the room which had his portrait………

For the oncoming days that was her sleeping place with her cheeks on him and hands on his chest….

She maintained her schedule…. Praying for his welfare and smiling at the green light on the digital clock.

She went around and made friends with the employees of the fisheries and learnt fishing and would blush and shy herself looking at the various fishes reminiscing him and his comparisons.

She would rise early to see the Sunrise and sink in those rays….wishing for his safety..

She would sit at the beach along with Celia and look at the waves….write his name along with hers.

Kirti and Hina took extreme care of her and ensured they never left her alone and said Memzaab you must tell Saab to change his business and be with you more. She would smile at their love and would enjoy their cute romance at the kitchen and also their regular petty fights..

She taught dance to the little ones there just to keep herself busy and also how to draw….

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He was away far away in his mission and seldom remembered for the rigidness he had he would not allow any thing to distract but could not help see her face in the moon above when he would lay on his Apache looking up during the nights if at all he had time..

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Three months passed… she did feel a bit low but managed herself..

It was noon Maldives was reeling under heat. The cute helpers had gone out to meet their family friend after much cohesion by her saying she can manage and stay alone for the day…. They went hesitantly.

Thinking of him she was in front of the fridge with her pink spaghetti tops and short jean skirt… looking at the skirt she blushed of his words black tetro………….. after long time she had worn the skirt… she took the cold water and closed her eyes ……………… Surajjjjjj her lips voiced it….

Yessss……….. Your Suraj……….. My black tetro……….. the strong right hand sneaked from behind her slithering her waist…while his left pushed her hair and kissed on her tattoo behind….…

Suraajjjjjjj emotions were rippling and she smiled……… You are back….. her heart heaved…. That sensation both lost themselves.

He turned her towards him……his eyes got on to her bright sindoor.. full of happiness and love…kissed her forehead. My sweetheart you didn’t jitter….

No!!!! why would I, she said garlanding him crushing her assets on him…while he caressed her skirt behind pushing her into him…. the natural instinct was igniting passion….. no more as none would dare to eye me or touch me only my Suraj can she said…….. few hard crushes of each other…

He was about to whistle as he was surprised when she closed his mouth… ssshhhhh…..

Baby !first my baby he said…. she smiled…. Said shhhhhh…. Come see your baby…. She held his hands and turned to walk when he pulled her to him and took her lips passionately bringing out all his emotions and she gave in to that while holding his neck behind….sexy you are too seductive he said… literally pulling out her lips she said… I wore this skirt only today after you left… hmmm and isn’t it lucky the naughty winked. She would have given herself to him that moment if he had wanted it but he softened as he was not craving for her body but was happy that she has been bold. She held his cheeks while he made her sit on the dining table with her legs circling him on both sides.. caressing her thighs. I am so happy and proud of you he said… she garlanded him and said Suraj I am not taking any medicines, not even any maintenance dose and am perfectly fine. Her eyes were thanking him…..I love you he said… where is Celia how come she has not run in on me…. He was surprised. Is she ok?

She took him towards the kennel and the moment he was nearing he could hear her squeaking…. Making noise.. wanting to jump on him… he peeped inside and saw…. His eyes were surprised, tearing looking at Celia with her beautiful three puppies sucking her….she couldnot be there in peace she left them and jumped on to him, licking, rolling with him, making happy noises, while the puppies were looking with their glistening eyes the scene in front of them. Chakor went down and lifted them and placed on her lap. My baby is having cute babies… Wow Celia….. I have more mouths to feed he smiled kissing caressing her… Celia was happy to see him and went and nuzzled Chakor who hugged her back…My baby is no more a baby…. Hmmmm …. Celia wagged in shy.

He saw Cesar walking in he laughed arey welcome bhai…. Good you are puppy sitting…. Chakor kicked him with her elbow. Suraj thumbinaaaa…. Cesar acha jamai hai she said……Wow you are speaking hindi….. hmm hmmm thanks to hindi shows… hope you did not fall for any hot dude he winked when she said when I have the best why would I fall for the rest.

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They had dinner together under the moonlight by the pool..

She went to their room to change the spreads when he understood she had not been sleeping there…he soon realised she was sleeping on his portrait… He was all the more emotional.

They were on each other in their room… hugging invading each other’s mouth…he was literally chewing her lips… . kissing her valley and her mounds bringing down her spaghetti straps lowering her tops, while her hands was all over his bare torso… kissing him… All he was saying I love you Chakor……

She cupped him looking into his eyes… Mera Pyaara Pati Parameshwar Hum be thumse bahuth pyaar karthey hai Suraj…. Arey wah wah kya kamaal hai Pyaari Dharam Patniji..he was all smiles…enjoying her cute hindi pronounciation.... did you miss me he asked…. She nodded no… If I, then I would feel sad and cry and I know you don’t like me crying so I used to keep watching at the green light ticking and know you will come to me soon….

Sexy tetro…You don’t want to know If I missed you? he asked…mouthing her katla…. She was moaning…. reeling in the sensations.... N..ooo Su.....raj I will not ask you as I don’t want my love to distract you . He hugged her tight and said thankyou for understanding me and my job fully…caressing her waist and unbuttoning her skirt… creating ripples in her…

But to be honest for the first time in my life I remembered home I wanted to come home soon, to have you in my arms, to love you and Chakor whenever I happened to see the moon I saw you in there my dear… he said pushing her strands cupping her cheeks. He hovered over her and raised himself looking down at her. He was just drinking the beauty lying down who was like the kajuraho seductive sculpture with heaving assets, slender curves, toned abs, sculpted thighs with the treasure in between she was shy but allowed him to admire her the way he wanted to. She too got mesmerized at the Greek Geek with handsome facial features, broad shoulders, strong and toned biceps , the toned packs one would go weak on knees, his slender hips with his prized possession and his strong legs which were balancing on both sides of her without falling on her... she garlanded him while he said Chakorrrr.. looking at her from top to her toes.... you look so beautiful and I love you, just love you... he slowly came down and took her lips very slowly which turned passionate while his hands started drawing patterns on her..... Drawing the juice out of her molly he allowed her to breathe... she heaved....

Surajjjj I love you too much she said…wild passion and lust was taking over. he rolled her over him drawing lines down her spine and crushing her bulge….

She was no less… she kissed him and found him fully grown, hard and hot…Just the thought of what was coming made her go into reviere..... he was so lusty, full of red hot desire and held her cheeks saying Chakor ……..sexy…. love me please…..his voice was so hoarse…. She loved it felt proud of the impact she was creating… she went over him pushing him…it did pain her but was prepared to give him the utmost pleasure, happiness……. he moaned aloud with the force she clothed him and slowly took the pace. It was eclectic for both… they synced in pleasure… her splayed hair, her large hardened peaks of her katla and her red molly was driving him crazy.. you are so beautiful and amazing….he said….. the separation and the togetherness of twining only once before was bringing the heat in him… both were equally wanting each other…lusting terribly…..

Her Man…………he brought her down kissed and sucked her assets which were craving for him. He took charge making her moan in pleasure. They ensured they gave the best to each other….he was pulsating, while she arched in pleasure….. Surajjjjj…. I love you…… I too Chakor love you so so much…. they heaved together calling each others name… it took long for them to come down…. he hugged her kissing her forehead on the maang…. while she kissed his torso..…..they were clinging on to each other not worried about the next moment… they wanted to live each and every moment of their togetherness…

It was a long night as they did not sleep…. Kissing each other….laughing looking at the sea which was happily rising its waves like their love which was ebbing…

He kissed her carried her to shower….. they showered together with love… he was amazed at her love which was just overflowing as she had vowed within herself to just love him wherever, whenever, without any time restriction… hugging to each other with the quilt over them they were looking at the sunrise….kissing good morning soon they both drifted into sleep….

They were awake during the night, slept during the day as all they did was to love each other….

He was astonished at the ease she had made friends around and also that she learnt to do the Pooja…religiously garlanding his mom’s photo. They went to the temple… a week passed which was engrossed in love….. He marked her and so did she…..

Soon he had to leave for an assignment again….

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It was three months passed………… Celia and her puppies kept her guard……

She was on the portrait lying on his chest with her hands on him…………………..

Suraajjjjjj she closed her eyes….he came in lay down beside her nuzzling….. hugging… how is my pyaari Dharam Patniji he asked…. Just his nuzzles made her close her eyes….You have come my Pati Parameshwar..... She was blushing red, he snaked his hands through her waist… unusual was her tummy…which used to be flat. surprised he turned her towards him…Chakorrrr ……………….. splurge of emotions…… He sat up bringing her on his lap…. Tears rolling down… Chakorr ………… this……………. Are you ok he asked with various emotions holding her close to his heart.

She nodded yes placing his hands on her little bulge… Yes Suraj…yess…..our love.. she was too emotional…cupping his cheeks she said yes Suraj… our symbol of love is growing in me… you papa and me mummy…. He hugged her to him….kissing her forehead….. How should I thank you he said……thank you for coming into my life… he caressed her tummy …I just cant believe this.. Our family… tears were rolling down his eyes… she soothed his back…. He caressed her tummy and said My little one thank you for making my life more meaningful… he carried her very carefully and preciously to their room. Are you ok? You went alone to Dr? I am so sorry as…. She closed his mouth saying I am so happy that you could come back soon…. I completed three months today….. Suraj she was too emotional … hugged him …She teared going into his chest.. thank you thank you for giving me such a beautiful gift and making me complete…. I love you PP was all she could say…..

He called and shared the good news with Anil who was eclectic and said he is informing the Home Ministry and the PM and giving him sabbatical till the little one hits the ground….. and he should stay with Chakor as it’s the turn of the motherland to ensure her son is there to take care of his life and the life within.

The couple was happy at the sea shore along with Celia and her puppies who were gearing up to take care of them. She was on him, his strong arms hugging her around his eyes closed in peace while her head was on his chest…

She looked at the sun rise and looked at him, caressing her tummy and said indeed The Sun did rise to shine in my Life.

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Thanks for sailing through with all my madness....

C yaaaa...............

With loads of Love

(p.s. I was way too emotional when I wrote that PP and DP..... Sumi really sucker of emotions)

🤗

Edited by sumsukor - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Thanks so so much Smita for the lovely words..always wait for your comment. Means a lot. 😍😍🤗🤗🤗

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Wow....Sumi, this bonus is actually a sweetest treat for us, so enjoyable & pleasant ❤❤. You have just made our Sunday so beautiful. Sukor emotional moment on the eve of Suraj setting off to the mission to serve the country was very touching & emotive. I can understand that keeping the smiles in face by suppressing the pain & anxiety of your heart is a very difficult task, which Chakor did 👏👏. I realized & was thinking about the personnel who serve for country as a RAW officer or part of an intelligence bureau, have to hide their identity from everyone, they don't have any liberty to disclose their true identity, even to express their feelings to anyone. Their lives are enigmatic that they don't have the right to uncover it even by themselves. Their families also have to face so many difficulties, so much joy they have to sacrifice for the sake of security of County. Really hats off to those patriots 👏👏👏👏 . You have very well described Chakor's time spent in solitude by remembering him & praying for his well-being, keeping busy herself in various activities. Then his sudden arrival, their loving moment, his getting lost seeing her boldness & her seductive attire 😍😍😮😮 & I loved the Sukor - CeSar moment , wow.. Celia wagged in shy & Chakor's saying Cesar is a good son in law, it was lovely & amusing moment 😁😁. I loved Chakor's word "when I have the best why would I fall for the rest" while Suraj teased her saying that if she fell for any handsome actor 😉😉 & then his realization that she was sleeping on his portrait, everything was so perfectly done 👍👍. Then the romantic night, their longingness to each other after 3 months separation, their overflowing love & passion, the pleasure of being in love with each other's embrace all night long. It was so fiery, so luscious, so passionate ..🔥 🔥🔥🔥😍😍. I was visualizing Meejay & was blushing throughout the part 🙈🙈. You are amazing in writing such hot, sensual scenario 👌. Then their emotional happy moment at the news of her getting pregnant & the imminent arrival of their symbol of love 💕💕 , the flicker of happiness in their eyes & were filled with tears of joy, loved the DP -PP moment. Finally he got the sabbatical leave & the opportunity to be with her until the baby is born & loved the line "It’s the turn of the motherland to ensure her son is there to take care of his life and the life within" ❤❤. How could you think about all this?? Thank you for this steamy hot romantic write up with the emotional touch, which is your forte & I love that ❤❤.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Awwwwww such a fab one😍😍😍❤❤😘😘👍thank you for making our weekend so special and yes I am smiling....wide...😍😍

I don't want to say anything much....its so fab its beyond words....I am just going to enjoy as if I am also reading after 3 months 😜😜

Uffff you make me miss MEEJAY more and more with each and every OS.

KEEP WRITING ALWAYS

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Thanks Mai for sharing your comment on insta.. means a lot.😊

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It was lovely, especially how she slept on his photo while away and the way she was thinking of him when he came back.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Holaaa


Wow what a lovely way to wind my year. Thank you so much Sabah for your lovely words.


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Sumi Sumi Simi!! My goodness I just read the remaining chapters and till chapter 5. What a story 👏👏 thank you so much. I thought I was watching a suspense thriller based on revenge and how swiftly you merged the ideas. Hackers and backdrop of Indian Navy. Sarah being the aggressive yet gentle hero. Loved the thrills in his chase. The best part was Chakor training herself to take revenge from culprits.


I mean taking venom out of snakes and attacking through it is a brilliant idea! The way Suraj promised her that she will end their lives and makes her do it ufff. I could imagine her emotions and how she was still in state of shock with no reactions. Bravo Sumi Bravo 🙏👍


I love how easily you made the characters so likeable. Be it Suraj, Chakor, Anil or even Celia hahaha! Chair running towards that apache has to be one of my favorite parts. Their marriage, Suraj explaining facets of his life to her, showing her around in Thailand and her painting him on canvass. Wow! What love moments right there. It was so beautiful!


And then chapter 5 OMG! 💞😊😂 I just couldn't read further so I have decided to read chapter 6 later tonight. The way Chakor gave herself to Suraj with so much confidence and honesty and conviction. That naughty factor in Suraj's love making was so so so incredible 👍his references to types of fish describing Chakor was damn creative. I felt like it was all real. Didn't feel like I was reading a story but watching a bold film. A beautiful film. Thank you Sumi! For this wonderful present


I know I took a lot of time to respond and I am sorry but I can't tell you how happy I am with your work. The way you write love scenes and romance and suspense and emotions is brilliant! Kudos to Smita too for suggesting a tantanaa 🤗 it was the best one haha. I wouldn't mind two or three bonus chapters of the same. I mean our sukor are in Thailand. A beautiful exotic destination with much to explore. Suraj already knows the place inside out so that's even better


Finally I loved the aspect of Suraj showing Chakor the hidden place underground in his home. It was an interesting relevation showing how important and risky Surajs work is. The threat involved is very real and now that Chakor knows about it it's a sign that she will always be on alert to look out for him


Thank you for your writing my dear


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