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@Ruby7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Thanks Blushy for posting such a deep and thoughtful story, its been great so far,

You have highlighted Suraj pov thoroughly and i can actually visualize alot of this.I do believe while following Chakor to the godown, he would have been filled with many thoughts.wished they had shown us the scene, but maybe they did it to keep suspence, bec when Suraj turned up at the godwon it was twist for the audience too

The memory loss is such a good twist and how i wish they had shown that in the actual show, with Chakor. not only it will get to explore Sukor love story further but it will bring up some very some un shown emotions from Suraj character, which he had bottled up over these 7 yrs

i can imagine Chakor trauma and Suraj pain if such situation even arises, because they were best enemies at one point in their life, it will be not be easy for Chakor to actually even believe in her dreams that they would have married, fell in love and she will give birth to their child.

Good that Suraj is trying to explain to Chakor

waiting to know what happens next

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Shreeti

@Shreeti.sukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

How I can't wait for the next update 😉

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Emotional read.

Loved how you described what both Sukor are going through.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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77nikita

@77nikita

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Waiting waiting!!!!

Fantastic dear... though frankly I can't bear the separation for long😃😃

But loving this reversal when suraj will have to take loads of effort😉

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Krupy

@Krupy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

It's always worth waiting your updates Blushy!

I don't comment very often on ff, os, ss recently.. but I do read them all. And I simply love your way of writing. In your ffs and os, every word has its own importance, that's something writers of ffs can't do always.

I love how you give equal importance to your characters, even side characters have their own importance and hold it like that till last word.

This story is really special.. it's something I wished to happen in serial, and belive me when I read two parts the feeling was not less then if I was watching it on screen.

Second update was very emotional, and I really loved and enjoyed reading it.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update 👏
Sukor's moment at hospital was intense & painful😭
Anjor is so confused😭
Let's see how Sukor's story will start from the scratch
Waiting for next

Thank you Katheriene... to be honest i have no idea how to start the story from scratch... i am going with the flow so i rely on you guys to tell me when i go wrong 😆

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor
I m crying so so badly .
This is just so emotional. I so wish the serial followed you .

Shreeti!!!! Don't cry ❤️ i will not keep them apart for long

the serial followed everything which consisted of IMLI aka *cringey woman*

Anything we write is far more logical than we got in the serial

Sukor are the only ones salvaging it soo far i hope it gets better now

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Ruby7
Thanks Blushy for posting such a deep and thoughtful story, its been great so far,

You have highlighted Suraj pov thoroughly and i can actually visualize alot of this.I do believe while following Chakor to the godown, he would have been filled with many thoughts.wished they had shown us the scene, but maybe they did it to keep suspence, bec when Suraj turned up at the godwon it was twist for the audience too

The memory loss is such a good twist and how i wish they had shown that in the actual show, with Chakor. not only it will get to explore Sukor love story further but it will bring up some very some un shown emotions from Suraj character, which he had bottled up over these 7 yrs

i can imagine Chakor trauma and Suraj pain if such situation even arises, because they were best enemies at one point in their life, it will be not be easy for Chakor to actually even believe in her dreams that they would have married, fell in love and she will give birth to their child.

Good that Suraj is trying to explain to Chakor

waiting to know what happens next

Hailaa Thank you sooo much ruby ... to be honest even i wanted they show some life in Suraj even when he found about Saanvi i thought it was a pretty dull moment... Viji is an awesome actor... they should've had explored his talent way more than showing ghumli during that phase ...i hope to tackle this twist as you guys expect it .. i tend to foil things in a messy way almost gul type no wonder i aint a script writer 😆

posting the next part in a few