Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: malarmia
When is the next update, yar?
I am interesred to know what happens next 🥱

Next update is on 28th😊

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av131

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Gripping story Mona👍🏼
How many parts r u planning approx ?!

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Krupy
Liking this brother's bond. It's something I wanted to see in show too but... it's ok, looks like now my wishes will be fulfilled in this ff.
Two years in a marriage and Chakor is still not paying attention to Suraj. Wondering why and curious to know what happend 6 months back that everything started to change for Suraj.
Really good update and start of the story.

Thanks krupy😃

Even I badly wanted to see ViRaj bonding in the show,but vivaan is no more😒

Krupy u will come to know about chakor's pov in future updates😉 the reason behind her ignorance

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Gripping story Mona👍🏼
How many parts r u planning approx ?!

Thanks a lot ammu🤗

Currently I'm planning 25-30😛 if readers wish to continue then I may extend it!

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sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Mona

actually I am liking the format. short, quick updates like the show... so we keep remembering the previous one

very interesting

loving the bro bonding... (i wanted this very much in the show... but thanks i enjoy here)

quite interesting what happened and what changed now...

waiting waiting...

thanks

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

WOW dear

It was just superb

A lot of things to know from there past I think!

Was their's a arranged marriage or love one as it seems like they got to know each other slowly and not yet fully.

I don't want to say my guesses but I can see what may come up in future Heee(Marriage, closenes...)

You have written it well dear!

Can't see it's your first attempt! You are misleading us LOL

Keep on going!

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Divya

@ndivyateja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

That's interesting..😃

Always wished to see ViRaj bonding..Happy to see you fill the gap..😳

Chakor is really mysterious..Waiting for the next Update..😊

Enjoyed reading this one 🤗

Your first attempt 😲 That's a wonderful writing 👍🏼

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Malar Mia

@malarmia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Eagerly waiting for Part 2.

Thanks for keeping us intrigued, dear.

😳

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Mona

actually I am liking the format. short, quick updates like the show... so we keep remembering the previous one

very interesting

loving the bro bonding... (i wanted this very much in the show... but thanks i enjoy here)

quite interesting what happened and what changed now...

waiting waiting...

thanks

Thank you summi di🤗

Glad u found this so intresting! I feel I'm successful in keeping up the suspence😉

Di after ViRaj patch up I thought we can look forward to such scenes very often,but who would have expected his death😒

I so loved ViRaj scenes during the camp

@bold I will be reveled soon😆

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: maithu_
WOW dear
It was just superb
A lot of things to know from there past I think!
Was their's a arranged marriage or love one as it seems like they got to know each other slowly and not yet fully.
I don't want to say my guesses but I can see what may come up in future Heee(Marriage, closenes...)

You have written it well dear!
Can't see it's your first attempt! You are misleading us LOL
Keep on going!

Thank you so much maithu🤗

It really means a lot!

@bold no it's not completely true, keep guessing maithu😉anyone could be true😛

@red😆😆😆

Thanks again maithu!