Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

That's interesting..😃

Always wished to see ViRaj bonding..Happy to see you fill the gap..😳
Chakor is really mysterious..Waiting for the next Update..😊
Enjoyed reading this one 🤗

Your first attempt 😲 That's a wonderful writing 👍🏼

Thanks a lot divya🤗
ViRaj had a good chemistry but makers seriously
I'm so glad u are liking my writing style, it really means a lot!
Yup she's a bit mysterious,her charecter says it all😛

Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: malarmia

Eagerly waiting for Part 2.

Thanks for keeping us intrigued, dear.

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My pleasure😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Thank you buddies for the amazing response for the 1st part😃

Here's is the part-2😉

Part-2:

2 years back

It was the talk of the town as the rich and royal Suraj Rajvanshi is getting married to the famous Artist Chakor Rawath!
Suraj was quite nervous than being exited as he was the only man who hadn't met his would be wife before marriage,he heard a lot about her skills and her passion for art, actually chakor couldn't visit his house during their marriage discussions,as she went to paris to recive the honoury for her latest peice of work!

Once their marriage was fixed he wanted to know her opinion about the marriage,is she happy about their relationship,but circumstances didn't favour him to meet her,no their parents were not at fault,they even arranged their first date but his bad fate,on their first date he was hell struck at the meeting.

At times he tried calling her but she never received his calls nor he got any reply for his messages!

on their 'so-called' second date,
"Bhai"
"Ha vivaan"
"Bhai at last my new album is ready,u must listen to this song"
"Vivaan today I've an important work, anytime again"
"Kaam tho hamesha hota hai,plz"
"Vivaan,it's.."
"Its ok,Bhai bhai na raha ab tho"he started leaving
"Fine"
He started playing guitar, guess what his guitar wasn't on his side that day
"damn this guitar"vivaan said

After an hour
"Ooo la..lala..tere liye...
Man not again"

2 hours later
"Shit this guitar"
And the day went off like that!

Finally on their third date though he was on time,chakor hadn't payed visit and within no time the D-day arrived

Chakor has lost her parents at a very young age, her uncle Ishwar Rawath has adopted her,he loved her equally as his son aditya, his happiness knew no bounds that day seeing his elder daughter as a bride
The marriage was a grand affair and concluded with all the rituals, the newly wedded couple took blessings of the elders,soon they reached Rajvanshi mansion, Teju did their gruhpravesh,both kn and teju blessed them.

After the post marriage rituals sukor were about to leave when vivaan stopped them and said

" bhai bhabhi aap log aise kise upar ja rahe ho"there was a naughty smile on his face

"Huh"

He added"aap ko pata nahi ki aap bhabhi ko ghodi me uthakar upar lejana hoga"Making them embarrassed
Kn patted on Vivaan's head,

While teju said"beta it's a part of our ritual"

He slowly picked her in his arms in bridal style,his sudden touch made her to shiver which didn't go unnoticed by him,he chuckled
Soon they reached the room

He carefully placed her on the bed and settled beside her and was about about to tell something when she took the duvet and went to sleep making his heart to sink!

Part-3: pg 9

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Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
This is truly getting interesting ..
Wow getting now why JB is in angry mode !!! Haha

Whatever one is famous, celebrity but the yearning for the attention is always there especially for a woman ...

No wonder dude is having tough time, but he is no less... Waiting for him to break the ice and take charge in his style...
Just lovin this

Lover viraj so cute
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Interesting update👏
Why Chakor is in this indifferent mode😲
Poor Suraj, he is yearning to know about his better half
Lets see how the ice breaks
Viraj moment was nice😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Great going!
Sukor had a bumpy start, no wonder Chakor ignored Suraj on their wedding night.

Vivaan's guitar 😆/

Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
They failed to meet before wedding.. Vivan and his guitar 😆
Chakor building more suspense Mona..Loved the second part..You got me hooked on 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part..Thanx for posting the updates in short intervals otherwise I would have spammed your mail box 😛

P.S : loved that ritual..Suraj carrying Chakor in his arms to their room 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
The story is getting interested with every update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Pity Suraj Babu.
His wife didn't even talk to him & went to sleep.

Chakor must have been very tired.

Eager to know what Suraj Babu will do next.

01/02/2018 is still long way to go, yar 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Soo Sukor didn't meet before marriage and Chakor is angry during first night. Although feel sad for Suraj but Chakor was not completely at wrong.

I swear, while reading about Vivaan and his guitar I was imagining them and it felt so realistic like I'm watching it and it was so much funny. Loved it.

The marriage ritual brought big smile on my face. I was imagining their expressions.

Am already glued to this story, eagerly waiting for next.

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