Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Happy Republic day everyone!

Here's the 1st part😉

Part-1 :

He settled himself on the couch and closed his eyes,only to get the flashes of happenings in his life since 2 years

Yes it has been two years since they are married but they hardly exchanged smiles,she barely pays any attention to him, they are two strangers under the same roof but everything started to change since 6 months for him that's because he started knowing her, yup that day has certainly managed to change something!

His train of thoughts came to an end when vivaan shook him hard to give the happiest news of his life to his bro "bhai! bhai listen"
Keeping all his emotions aside suraj calmly asked"What happened vivaan"

"Finally I proposed sonal, u know what she accepted my proposal"
A smile peeked on suraj's lips
"And moreover who can reject a handsome like me"

"Achaaa,by the way I'm so happy for you"saying so he hugged vivaan

"Bhai can you do a favor on me"

"Ha tell"

"Plz convince dad for our marriage at any cost"

"Wait What!!"

"Bhai please"he said with an innocent face

"Fine!"he said smiling "I will speak to dad tomorrow"

"Bhai you are always the best"vivaan hugged him tight as he didn't expect suraj to agree this soon

Soon the family had a silent dinner,she was feeling his gaze on her continously but she didn't react, after the dinner Rajvanshi's dispersed to their respective rooms.

Here suraj wasn't sure to enter his room after today's incident,with a lot of courage he entered their room and his eyes were searching her,he found her sitting on the study table and sketching something!

She felt his presence,but na she continued her work.
Without making any noise he left to balcony and settled there,where he skipped back to his past and yup it was the day of their marriage!

Part-2 : pg-6


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Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Interesting update👏
So Suraj has feelings for Chakor😊
What Chakor thinks about Suraj, why she is ignoring him
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Interesting update
Loved the brothers' bond.
So Chakor is aware of Suraj's feelings, has she still not fallen in love with him.
Curious to know what happened six months ago to change Suraj's feelings.

You've ended on suspense, eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Wow!
Interesting 😳

Please continue.

Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
When is the next update, yar?
I am interesred to know what happens next 🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Liking this brother's bond. It's something I wanted to see in show too but... it's ok, looks like now my wishes will be fulfilled in this ff.
Two years in a marriage and Chakor is still not paying attention to Suraj. Wondering why and curious to know what happend 6 months back that everything started to change for Suraj.
Really good update and start of the story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

So Suraj has feelings for Chakor😊
What Chakor thinks about Suraj, why she is ignoring him
Waiting for next

Glad you found this update intresting😊
U need to wait to know the reason behind chakor's ignorance😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
glad u found it interesting😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update

Loved the brothers' bond.
So Chakor is aware of Suraj's feelings, has she still not fallen in love with him.
Curious to know what happened six months ago to change Suraj's feelings.

You've ended on suspense, eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks mai 😃
Glad u found the update intresting
Yup she is well aware of his feelings, @bold u will get to know about it in next updates😛
Next update will be about their past😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: malarmia

Wow!

Interesting 😳

Please continue.

Waiting for the next update.

glad u are liking this story😊
Yup the next part will be posted soon!

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