Sukor - an innocent Love (Last Part) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Shar456

Nice story but little for chakor as she hd to go to much pain

Please update d next chapter as ap now only as can't wait anymore



Im on it next update 1 or 2 days
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Hi

Welcome to the forum!
Hope you enjoy your time here.

Shocking start but interesting story!
Suraj admiring himself in the mirror was typical Suraj.
Poor Chakor, she'll be devastated, hope Vicky suffers for what he did to her.

Please update soon.



Thank u but major twist is coming...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm doing Good!
It' nice to see u here!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi baby..
Welcome to the IF dear..
Tis s suni from wattpad..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Friends please help wid d link of wattpad n also help me how to login in
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Friends please help wid d link of wattpad n also help me how to login in


To login, you need to sign up, only an e-mail or facebook account is needed. You don't need to sign up to read most of the stories there, but you'll need the username of the author, you can start by searching for Sukor and related stories will appear to you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Thank you for ur understanding n support. I know I said major twist hope u will see it like me .

Recap; Chakor was running for her life but she runs into the goon who raped her n tried to kill her. Fortunatly she was thrown out of the car in front of Suraj who is a doctor.

Suraj; we got it operation successful. Riya; but who is she? Suraj; I don't know check the police station maybe someone filed a missing report on her. Riya informed the police station but there was no missing file on her description. Suraj was checking her parameters. He looked at her innocent face. A hair strand touched her lips he slowly n with care plugged it behind her ear. He stroke her head with care n concern.

Suraj - how can someone harm a soul like u? -.

The Boss =Singhania; my son today u made me proud. Vicky; dad... Singhania; r u blushing! u r a man not a damn woman. U done a man job. Raped n killed her for ur father. Vicky; Dad I'm sorry. I can't handle it but tell me y u wanted to see her death...

Riya comes in. Suraj there is nothing we can do right now but I informed ur friend. Suraj; my friend?. I don't have friends. Riya; ur inspector friend. Suraj; . He is not a friend he is like a bad dream u think u woke up n it's over but no it isn't. Riya; please. Suraj; fine I'm doing my round inform me if she wakes up n my "friend" arrives. Riya nod mischievously.

Singhania; that girl saw me. Vicky; saw u but what she saw? Singhania; I... Someone disturbed them. A goon enters. Singhania; I hope for u it is important. The goon; Boss the girl... he gulps. Singhania; what is with that girl?. The goon; there is no death report of her. Vicky; so what? Sooner or later they will. Maybe they r trying to findout more abt her name?.

Riya informed Suraj. Ur "friend" is here. Suraj comes to the patient room of Chakor = Jane Do. Suraj; Inspector. He said with tightly pressed lips. Insp.; Suraj we r now working as a team hiw many times should I repeat call me Ajay. Suraj; yeah y me. Y all poluce cases r connected to me?. Ajay; kismat. Suraj made a fist.

Ajay; now tell me what happen?. Suraj; this is Jane Do we have no name n we asked the nearby police station but there r no missing reports to her description. Ajay; what happen to her?. Suraj; Riya close the door. Riya did as said. Suraj; she unconscious bcz of the attack n the morphine against her pain. Ajay; ok.

Suraj slowly took the blanket away n showed her arms which had cigarette burns. Her body was scratched. Ajat2; what the... Suraj; someone torture her n then. Ajay; what?. Suraj; Someone throw her out of a running car after raping n hitting her. Ajay; that is not gud her life is still in danger. When I can talk to her?. Suraj; if we reduce the morphine doze she might wake up but I... Ajay; I understand u but I need to talk to her asap. She is the only witness n unfortunatly also the victim.

Suraj nod he reduces the doze...

Vicky; now leave us alone. The goon left n Singhania told his son Vicky thatthe girl saw him killing a minister. Vicky; what?. She saw u how u killed the home minister. Singhania; yes but when we had her in our clutch she acted well we torture her alot but she stayed quiet. Then she somehow runs away. Vicky; into my arms. Both laughed. Hahaha.

Suraj was checking her vital parameters. Chakor slowly opens her eyes. Suraj n Ajay were standing next to her bed. Suraj; Hi... very low n softly he said. Chakor got a shock seeing the new faces n the new place. Aaahhh... aaahhh. She screams loud. Chakor was trying to stand up from the bed but the machine made a loud sound. She closed her ears.

Suraj looked at Ajay in anger. Ajay; I'm sorry but it is necessary calm her somehow. Suraj sits on the bed n put the medical tube on her body carefully the sound was gone. She smiled at him. Suraj wipes her tears away he had a strenght to care n build a trust to his patients. That is the real reason y Ajay works with him .

Suraj; Riya get some water n food. Someone is hungry. Chakor didn't say a word just looked at him. Ajay tackles Suraj. Suraj looked at him in anger n Chakor do the same she copies him. Ajay; one wasn't enough that I got another pair of eyes looking at me in anger. Riya get some water n food. She put the tray on the table. They were waiting for Chakor to eat but she opens her mouth . Ajay; eat. Suraj n Riya looked at each other.

Riya; Ajay maybe u shoukd give us a minute. Ajay; no way I need to know more abt tge culprits otherwise I can't help her in getting justice. Suraj took the foid n feed her. Ajay saw Chakors reaction while Suraj was feeding her, her concentration devided to the room. Chakor took the glass of water n tried to drink but the water fall on her clothes. She starts crying .

Riya; no no it is ok. Suraj; ya look no one is angry or shouting. Suraj shh. He again wipes her tears away. Chakor looked at him so innocent that it melt Ajay who know understood that this girl won't be able to help him. Suraj; Ajay n me. He shows to both of them. R going out. Riya. He showed on her. Will help u changing. Suraj; ok?. Chakor; nod. Chakor haan.

Suraj; Chakor sweet name . Ajay n Suraj left the room n Riya helped her changing which wasn't that easy if a young woman acts like a child. Ajay; what the hell. What now? Suraj; I have to do some test. Ajay; which tests?. Suraj; her mental test. who knows maybe it is just a shock state?. Ajay; what u think? I mean ur experience?. Suraj; that she is born like that n someone used her but y. Suraj anger was visible. Ajay; whoever did this will try to kill her there must be a reason y they did this n tried to kill her maybe she saw something...? Suraj; but what n y her?. She is so... Ajay; innocent. Suraj nod.

What u think?

Please Do Not Copy my Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update!
Love Suraj-Ajay chemistry, they make a good team, will we get to know how they first met?

Loved how Suraj assured Chakor and took care of her. Poor Chakor, she's in shock.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

PS. can you change the title of the thread to show that you updated the 2nd part? and could you include the page number? it will make it easier for the readers to know that the story has been updated.

You can do this by editing your first post and editing the title.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Interesting updates👏
It is very different story
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update!

Love Suraj-Ajay chemistry, they make a good team, will we get to know how they first met?

Loved how Suraj assured Chakor and took care of her. Poor Chakor, she's in shock.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

PS. can you change the title of the thread to show that you updated the 2nd part? and could you include the page number? it will make it easier for the readers to know that the story has been updated.

You can do this by editing your first post and editing the title.



Thank u yes after a few updates they will know
Sure I will Do that

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