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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Waiting for the update as ap
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update.
Poor Chakor, she's more like a child than an adult. She already feels safe with Suraj.
Ajay's scenes are funny, so he's Riya's ex.

Looking forward for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome update

Waiting for the update as ap



thank u dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update.

Poor Chakor, she's more like a child than an adult. She already feels safe with Suraj.
Ajay's scenes are funny, so he's Riya's ex.

Looking forward for next.



Thx u r absolutely right with Chakor. Hehe ya Riya n Ajay had something soon it will be revealed
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Hi dear no update it has been 3 days
Waiting patiently for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Nightmare

Hi I just only can thank u all for ur support I know it is sad for Chakor but that is the story with a strong n careing Suraj.

Recap; Chakor is mentally ill she had suffered of an injury in her youth. The DNA result had no match in the database.

Ajay left the hospital to find any clue how Chakors incident can be connected with something else. Suraj stood up from the bed n was abt to leave when Chakor held his hand. Suraj smiled at her. Chakor; play? Suraj; sorry I can't. Tomorrow I will come n play with u ok?. Chakor nod.

Suraj was going but Chakor was holding his stethoscope. Suraj; Chakor give me my stethoscope. Chakor shook her head. Boom boom. Suraj; but I need it u can play with it tomorrow. She shook again.
Suraj; fine keep it. But u will give it me back when I will come tomorrow. Chakor looked at him with big eyes but he had to leave.

Suraj left the room n did his round.
Chakor was looking out of the window. Chand {moon}. She pushed her face on the window n was trying to hold the moon with her hand. Which was on the window front. She smiled n jumped up n down clapping her hands. Then her view changed she looked down. She saw a car n starts shouting... Ahhh!!!. Aaahhh!!!

Riya called Suraj to return asap. Chakor was in a corner holding her knees tight to her body. She was shivering uncontrolled. Riya went in looking Chakor she got scared. Chakor was scratching herself her arms were bleeding. After a while Suraj returned from his round. Riya tried to stop Chakor but she failed.

Suraj looked at the pager - oh shit -. He went into Chakors room n was shocked too. Suraj; Chakor what u did? Y u did this? Chakor cried loud. Car!!!! was all she said. Suraj; oh Gosh. Riya; what? Suraj; She might got a flashback of the incident in the car... Riya; means? Suraj; She was raped n attacked in a car. Riya; I will call a psychiatrist. Suraj; ya do that.

Chakor was still hurting herself Suraj walked to her. He tried to hold back her hands but she was just screaming n shouting then she starts to kick with her legs. But Suraj wasn't angry or shocked he let her instead being angey he took her in his arms to calm her.

Chakor stopped to hit herself n cried in his embrace. Suraj; sshhh Chakor u r a brave girl right? U can fight against everything n everyone. Sshh. Riya was back with the psychiatrist. Riya; Suraj, Vivaan Kapoor is here. Vivaan; no no. I think we should give her the time. She needs support n has an attachment with Suraj. In my opinion Suraj should console her.

Suraj was doing his best. Chakor calmed down. Vivaan n Riya were still there at the door watching at the whole situation. Suraj looked at Vivaan who signals him to take her to the bed. Suraj stood up n carry Chakor in his arms. Chalor was holding his neck n hiding her face in in his shoulder.

Vivaan comes near after Chakor lied on her bed. Vivaan; Hi!... Chakor didn't looked at him. She stares out of the window n starts to shake again. Suraj followd her gaze n closed the curtain. She looked at him. He is the only one who understands her.

In these few moments Vivaan had seen alot. The trust n understanding the bond of a unique friendship of Sukor. Vivaan again tried. But this time he went to Suraj. Make me a friend. Suraj was irritated but agrees.

Both shook hands in the name of friendship. Vivaan walked to Chakor. Friends? He stretched his hand. Chakor was looking at Suraj who just nod. She thought for sec. n took his hand n shook it. Vivaan; how u feel? ? Chakor didn't liked the way of his asking neither did Suraj.

Suraj; Chakor? She looked at him. He was now next to her bed. I have to go. But Vivaan is here he will ask u some questions u gonna answer them ok?. Chakor shook her head. Before he could leave she hold his hand. Suraj; Chakor leave my hand be a gud girl n leave. Chakor did as he requested it. Vivaan; interesting. Suraj; she kust a got a flashback be careful. He warns him n left.

It was the next morning Suraj was getting ready when... some hugs him from back. Suraj; what?. Madam X; what was wrong with u last night?. Suraj; nothing... X; well should I come again?. Suraj; no... that was the last time. X; last time was the previous time this time nothing happens. Suraj; I will pay u. Wait... He took out his wallet n paid her. X; ok thx . Call me if u need me. Suraj; I don't think so. Bye. X; bye.

Suraj was back at the hospital. Vivaan was waiting for him with Ajay. Suraj: oh com'on what is it now? Is she alright?. Vivaan; relax last night we gave her a sedatives so she could sleep through the night. Suraj; what is he doing here? Vivaan; I had to inform him she got flashbacks maybe she remember something. Suraj; fine but don't put much pressure on her. Both nod.

Suraj enters the room first n wqs shocked he blocked the entrance n pushed the others out. Ajay m Vivaan; what the...? Suraj closed the door in a hurry. He was with the back to her n walked backwards. He take off his jacket n pull it over Chakors naked body. He had closed his eyes n Chakor tight hugged him.

Suraj adjusted his jacket on her. Chakor what happen?. Chakor was shivering... bad dream... she stammers... Suraj; nightmare? Chakor nod in his chest. Suraj; can u describe? Chakor shook in scare. Suraj hold her tight. Chakor showed him her stigmas. Suraj had closed his eyes as she was still naked but makes him to open his eyes to see what had gone through.

Suraj had tears in his eyes he hasn't seen all her wounds but that is done by a monster. Suraj took an antiseptic n sprayed on her wounds he gave her clothes to wear she was shaking but he was holding her. Now Chakor was fully covered. Suraj; Chakor we need to punish the who did this to u!. Chakor was looking at him motionless.

Suraj opens the door n signals them to let him talk. Suraj walked to Chakor he sat on the bed the corner which belongs to him. Chakor felt the difference in the bed n was back out of her trance. Suraj forwarded his hand. Chakor took it n hold it as tight as possible.

Suraj stroke her hair n caresses her back. Chakor look I'm here, Inspector is here n Vivaan is here we r 3 men to save u but to help n save we need ur help. Chakor looked at all then to Suraj n her eyes stucked on him. Suraj; Chakor did u remember? She nod. Chakor did u saw his face? she nod again. Chakor could u identify him. Chakor hugged him nod in pain. She cried n Suraj caresses her. Suraj; sshh Chakor I told u. U r not alone.

Ajay was in civilian clothes. He took out his writing pad that was the moment Chakor looked at him. Aahhh!!!!. Aaahhh!!! She screamed loud. Suraj hold her tight on his chest. Chakor... Chakor... calm down. Vivaan; we need to give her another doze of sedatives. Suraj; No!. Chakor looked at him. He raised hia voice for her. She calmed. Suraj; no more sedatives she got nightmares!.

Chakor was hugging him after a while she said Piton. Suraj; what?.. Chakor formed a pistol with her finger piton. Ajay looked at his waist n understood. Ajay took out his gun n throw it away (carefully it was not loaded). Sorry.

Suraj; did the man who... he couldn't speak it out. Chakor; goons pistol. Suraj; were goons running behind u? Chakor nod n clapped. Ajay smiled but not bcz they got a clue bcz of her smile. Suraj; what else u remember? Chakor; murder!...

Hmm tell me u liked it or not?

Please do not copy my story
Edited by _Sukorian_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Shar456

Hi dear no update it has been 3 days

Waiting patiently for the next update




New update is out
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Interesting update

Feel very sad for Chakor's condition but her bond with Suraj and the way he cares for her is heart warming.

It's good that Chakor remembers the murder. I think it'll make it easier to find her attacker.

Suraj's life seems empty.

The story is going great! Keep it up!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update


Feel very sad for Chakor's condition but her bond with Suraj and the way he cares for her is heart warming.

It's good that Chakor remembers the murder. I think it'll make it easier to find her attacker.

Suraj's life seems empty.

The story is going great! Keep it up!



Thank u dear I'm very haply u liked it. Ya his life is empty but somehow his bonding with Chakor fills the emptiness
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Interesting update👏
Feeling sad for chakor😭
Suraj is her support system😊
Chakor remembered murder
Waiting for next

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