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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Feeling sad for chakor😭
Suraj is her support system😊
Chakor remembered murder
Waiting for next



Thank u dear. Yes remembers n he is her support 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Hi thank u so much for the positive response ya Chakor is in bad position but Suraj is there .

Recap; Suraj life is empty... madam x a prostitute gives him sometimes company. Chakor had nightmares of the incident she got flashbacks seeing a car. She also tries to speak n said abt a murder.

Suraj hold her tight. Murder?! he repeat her word. Chakor nod n made again piston . Ajay comes near her but slowly. Chakor u saw someone killing?. Chakor haan. Ajay face changed he gulps. Suraj saw that. He kept Chakor close to his chest with a weird fire in his eyes. Ajay what r u hiding?.

Ajay signals him to come out as he doesn't wanted to scare Chakor. Suraj; Vivaan u take care of her n no pressure. Vivaan; please. He said a bit angry.

Suraj stood up but Chakor held his hand. She pout n had wet eyes. Suraj looked at his wrist he still wore his watch he took it off n gave it her. I will comeback for it. Chakor hold it tight with a cute smile sge was waiting for his return.

Suraj n Ajay were now standing in front of the door. Suraj; say. Don't over use my patience. Ajay; I think I know who is chasing her. Suraj; then go n arrest him. Ajay; look at me do I luck to like I dont want to? Suraj I can't He is no other than Underground Boss Singhania. Suraj hears the name but he didn't fear (past will reveal later). Suraj; n now? He said with a calmed voice that even Ajay was impressed at the same time the silence was frighten him.

Ajay walked to Suraj he puts his hand on his shoulder. A minister was shoot we were looking for a witness n found out that at the area r some orphanage n tried to ask those kids. We heard how someone said a girl is gone missing but she often runs away she is older n her mental state is ... Ajay hold his I was so blind. I'm sorry I couldn't see the connection.

Suraj; so u want to tell me she is the only witness for the murder that's y they chased her raped n tried to kill her? Ajay; I'm sure they thought she is death U don't know how crule Singhania is he also killed his own wife just to have a peaceful life with his mistress.

Suraj couldn't bear it anymore tears were rolling down his cheeks. Ajay was confused he again puts his hand on his shoulder. He moved the broken Suraj out of the view of the others. But Suraj removed his hand n run away into the washroom.

Ajay was confused as we as shocked. He was in an inner conflict with himself should he or shouldn't he follow him... I think he needs time if the right time comes he will share his sorrow.

Suraj was in a washroom he he sat on the ground n blocked the door...

Ajay was back at Chakors patient. Vivaan; where is... Chakor complete the sentence. Suraj?! . Ajay goes near the bed but he kneels. He understood that only Suraj has the permission to sit on the bed.

Ajay; Chakor u have his watch. Chakor nod impatiently. Ajay; he will come for it. But he has a personal problem. U will help me?. Chakor looked at him with a questioning face.

Ajay; the orphanage in the xyz road is it ur home. Chakor made an angry face but nod. Ajay; u don't want to go back? She shook her head. Chakor; Suraj!. She shout his name.

Suraj was feeling his own pain.

Ajay; Chakor u can stay here we r not going to send u back. Chakors face changed . She forwarded her hand as a friendship offer. Ajay smiled n shook it . Vivaan looks like I'm not needed. Ajay; well maybe u r.

Ajay; I have to talk to Vivaan but we r here ok. Chakor nod holding Suraj watch tight.

Vivaan; ok tell me y I'm needed?. Ajay told him abt his presumption. Vivaan; what he is a big underworld don. Ajay; I know we have to save her at any cost but she is weak n immature.
Vivaan; I can't changed this but maybe she has seen someone else show her the pic of Singhania. Ajay nod.

At the same Suraj returned. Chakor jumped up from the bed n gave him his watch. Save!. She hugs him n was hiding under his jacket. Suraj let her his eyes were still red.

Suraj saw the mobile. Whay were u doing? Ajay; woh... we wanted her...to look... at a pic of... Singhania. Suraj hold her hand. Chakor can u really identify the murderer?. Chakor looked at him with an angry face. She left his hand n moved backwards.

Vivaan; that means a yes n she is angry on u for doubting her. Suraj; sarcastically. Really?.

Ajay comes to her with his mobile. He showed her several pictures of different goon. Chakor; aahh. Without any doubt or hesitation she identifies Singhania. Suraj; Show her the pic of his son n goons. Chakor can u also identify ur culprit?. Chakor made a sad face n nod.

Ajay then showed her more pic. She was crying but Suraj stopped himself not to interfere. A pic of Vicky come n she starts to shout loud. She closes her ears n breakdown.

Vivaan; we havr to give her an Injection... he saw Suraj face who refused to give her anything. He slowly moved to her n gave her his watch. Chakors hand was shaking like her body. Suraj; u will keep my watch I will keep u save. Deal?.

Please don't copy my Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Interesting update👏
Suraj was affected by singhanias, is there any connection😲
Chakor identified the killer😊
Loved the bonding of sukor😊
Chakor is now friendly with ajay😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: _Sukorian_

Hi thank u so much for the positive response ya Chakor is in bad position but Suraj is there .

Recap; Suraj life is empty... madam x a prostitute gives him sometimes company. Chakor had nightmares of the incident she got flashbacks seeing a car. She also tries to speak n said abt a murder.

Suraj hold her tight. Murder?! he repeat her word. Chakor nod n made again piston . Ajay comes near her but slowly. Chakor u saw someone killing?. Chakor haan. Ajay face changed he gulps. Suraj saw that. He kept Chakor close to his chest with a weird fire in his eyes. Ajay what r u hiding?.

Ajay signals him to come out as he doesn't wanted to scare Chakor. Suraj; Vivaan u take care of her n no pressure. Vivaan; please. He said a bit angry.

Suraj stood up but Chakor held his hand. She pout n had wet eyes. Suraj looked at his wrist he still wore his watch he took it off n gave it her. I will comeback for it. Chakor hold it tight with a cute smile sge was waiting for his return.

Suraj n Ajay were now standing in front of the door. Suraj; say. Don't over use my patience. Ajay; I think I know who is chasing her. Suraj; then go n arrest him. Ajay; look at me do I luck to like I dont want to? Suraj I can't He is no other than Underground Boss Singhania. Suraj hears the name but he didn't fear (past will reveal later). Suraj; n now? He said with a calmed voice that even Ajay was impressed at the same time the silence was frighten him.

Ajay walked to Suraj he puts his hand on his shoulder. A minister was shoot we were looking for a witness n found out that at the area r some orphanage n tried to ask those kids. We heard how someone said a girl is gone missing but she often runs away she is older n her mental state is ... Ajay hold his I was so blind. I'm sorry I couldn't see the connection.

Suraj; so u want to tell me she is the only witness for the murder that's y they chased her raped n tried to kill her? Ajay; I'm sure they thought she is death U don't know how crule Singhania is he also killed his own wife just to have a peaceful life with his mistress.

Suraj couldn't bear it anymore tears were rolling down his cheeks. Ajay was confused he again puts his hand on his shoulder. He moved the broken Suraj out of the view of the others. But Suraj removed his hand n run away into the washroom.

Ajay was confused as we as shocked. He was in an inner conflict with himself should he or shouldn't he follow him... I think he needs time if the right time comes he will share his sorrow.

Suraj was in a washroom he he sat on the ground n blocked the door...

Ajay was back at Chakors patient. Vivaan; where is... Chakor complete the sentence. Suraj?! . Ajay goes near the bed but he kneels. He understood that only Suraj has the permission to sit on the bed.

Ajay; Chakor u have his watch. Chakor nod impatiently. Ajay; he will come for it. But he has a personal problem. U will help me?. Chakor looked at him with a questioning face.

Ajay; the orphanage in the xyz road is it ur home. Chakor made an angry face but nod. Ajay; u don't want to go back? She shook her head. Chakor; Suraj!. She shout his name.

Suraj was feeling his own pain.

Ajay; Chakor u can stay here we r not going to send u back. Chakors face changed . She forwarded her hand as a friendship offer. Ajay smiled n shook it . Vivaan looks like I'm not needed. Ajay; well maybe u r.

Ajay; I have to talk to Vivaan but we r here ok. Chakor nod holding Suraj watch tight.

Vivaan; ok tell me y I'm needed?. Ajay told him abt his presumption. Vivaan; what he is a big underworld don. Ajay; I know we have to save her at any cost but she is weak n immature.
Vivaan; I can't changed this but maybe she has seen someone else show her the pic of Singhania. Ajay nod.

At the same Suraj returned. Chakor jumped up from the bed n gave him his watch. Save!. She hugs him n was hiding under his jacket. Suraj let her his eyes were still red.

Suraj saw the mobile. Whay were u doing? Ajay; woh... we wanted her...to look... at a pic of... Singhania. Suraj hold her hand. Chakor can u really identify the murderer?. Chakor looked at him with an angry face. She left his hand n moved backwards.

Vivaan; that means a yes n she is angry on u for doubting her. Suraj; sarcastically. Really?.

Ajay comes to her with his mobile. He showed her several pictures of different goon. Chakor; aahh. Without any doubt or hesitation she identifies Singhania. Suraj; Show her the pic of his son n goons. Chakor can u also identify ur culprit?. Chakor made a sad face n nod.

Ajay then showed her more pic. She was crying but Suraj stopped himself not to interfere. A pic of Vicky come n she starts to shout loud. She closes her ears n breakdown.

Vivaan; we havr to give her an Injection... he saw Suraj face who refused to give her anything. He slowly moved to her n gave her his watch. Chakors hand was shaking like her body. Suraj; u will keep my watch I will keep u save. Deal?.

Please don't copy my Story

Thanks for the update😊 dear, so we r waiting for Suraj past. N really like how suraj understand chakor 😳.
N ya I read almost ur all stories on Wattpad😳😳
They are really so so good👏, keep writing😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Suraj was affected by singhanias, is there any connection😲
Chakor identified the killer😊
Loved the bonding of sukor😊
Chakor is now friendly with ajay😊
Waiting for next


Thank u yes they have a connection but I'm not sure in which yet. Haan is smart mental state doesn't has to say anything. Haan now Ajay understands it n he is trying his best

Thabk U
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
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Thanks for the update😊dear, so we r waiting for Suraj past. N really like how suraj understand chakor😳.
N ya I read almost ur all stories on Wattpad😳😳
They are really so so good👏, keep writing😛



Thank u I will keep writung
Edited by _Sukorian_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Awesome update
I feel dat Singhania wife was Suraj is mother
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome update

I feel dat Singhania wife was Suraj is mother



Thank u. Well maybr maybr not can't tell u know
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Amazing update!

Love Ajay-Vivaan-Suraj team.

The way Suraj understands Chakor and takes care of her is amazing, leaving the watch with her and his promise was heart touching

Ajay understands that Chakor only trusts Suraj.

Did they notice that Chakor screamed when she saw Vicky's photo?

Is Suraj Singhania's son from his first wife?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update!


Love Ajay-Vivaan-Suraj team.

The way Suraj understands Chakor and takes care of her is amazing, leaving the watch with her and his promise was heart touching

Ajay understands that Chakor only trusts Suraj.

Did they notice that Chakor screamed when she saw Vicky's photo?

Is Suraj Singhania's son from his first wife?

Eagerly waiting for next.



Thank u dear 😳
Haan I'm trying to give him a new shade glad that u appreciate it.
Ajay is a cop n understands fast sometimes he needs time but he is also u derstabding. To Vicky ya they know it that is y Suraj took her close. N maybe or maybe not I can't tell u know 😉

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