Sukor - an innocent Love (Last Part) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting updates👏

It is very different story
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thank u dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Interesting update

Waiting patiently for the next update



Thank u dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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HI welcome to the Forum
A very nice update

interesting one

Keep it up

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

HI welcome to the Forum

A very nice update

interesting one

Keep it up

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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Nice update please update the next chapter as ap cannot wait anymore
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Nice update please update the next chapter as ap cannot wait anymore



Thank u dear sorry to make u wait Update is coming tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The Hi thank u all for positive response here the next update.

Recap; Vicky Singhania the son of the Mafia Boss Prem Singhania raped Chakor n throw her out. Chakor landed in front of Suraj. Suraj cares for her in hospital she gains consiouse but her mental state seems difficult.

Suraj n Ajay went out of the room. Ajay; ur experience? Suraj; to be honest I think it's her nature. Ajay; that means...? Suraj; I have to do the test but if this is her nature then it could be impossible to find out who did this. Ajay; if his DNA is not saved in our database. Suraj; right!. Ajay; oh my friend where is the DNA sample of her vaginal cervical smear?. Suraj thought for sec. but he shook his head. Ajay; what? y r u shaking ur head? Suraj; I'm sorry but I'm not sure if we took it.

Riya comes out sje had changed Chakors clothes. Suraj; Riya the ... Riya; I need words . Ajay looked at her with big eyes how easily she talks to him. Suraj; we need a.. oh man a vaginal cervical smear u did it?. Riya; please. R u thinking that low of me. She went to the evidences n took all the bags one of them was a test tube. Ajay; Riya... Riya; yuck... She handover him the evidences n left. Ajay; I'm going to Labour n u do the check up. Suraj nod n Ajay left.

Suraj was back in Chakors room. Chakor was looking around she was dreaming. Suraj; knock knock?! . Chakor; haha . Knock knock! she claps . Suraj smiles seeing her innocent. Suraj comes near. Chakor looked at him with big eyes.

Suraj stops in front of her. Chakor; name?. Suraj; my name?. Chakor nod. Suraj; can I sit? Chakor nod . Suraj took a small corner of the bed n sits on it. Suraj; Hi. He gave her his hand to shake. But she didn't understand. Suraj took her hand with care n shake it . Nice to meet u My name is Suraj. Chakor looked out of the window. There... she points to the sun . Suraj nod.

Chakor yawns. Suraj; Chakor sleepy? Chakor nod. Suraj; but... Chakor hold his hand. Suraj; a few test... please?. Chakor pout but agrees to him. Suraj; gud girl. He touched her nose. She shiver but in a positive way. Suraj was abt to leave but Chakor didn't let him. Suraj was stopped by her grip tears were rolling from her eyes. Suraj took her in his embrace n calmed her.

There was a knock on the door. Suraj; come in. Riya comes to take Chakor with her. Chakor sniffs on Suraj white gown. Riya; Chakor come. Dr. Khanna has to make some other work. Suraj; but I will come soon. Ok. Chakor nod.

Riya took her but Suraj. Riya be careful n try to expain her everything. Riya; Suraj what is going on?. Do have a presumption? Suraj; autism maybe or she coukd have suffered a head injury in her young age or even worse it is her nature?. Riya; with the scan n test we will know more. Suraj nod.

Chakor was taken for a head scan. She screamed loud. No!!! she cries. She doesn't wanted to in the tube. Riya; Chakor look I will show u?. Riya went in she lied on the lounger to show her that is not harmful. But shook shake she lost her conscious.

Suraj was called to the mrt station. Suraj starts shouting n yelling. What happen y she faint? ai told u yo be careful with her. Riya; Suraj! Please stop shouting. Suraj; sorry. Riya; we wanted to make the scan but she shout n cried I showed her that there is no danger but she faint. Suraj; oh... maybe she is suffering from
claustrophobia. She can't go in tiny places. Riya; oh...

Ajay comes with a bad news. Suraj; agaya tu. Mujhe fanoty apni suraat dihkane. {U come. Showing me ur curse face}. Ajay; ya I missed u too. Suraj; tell me what u found out?. Ajay; nothing he is not saved in our database. Suraj; but the samples r saved now? Ajay; ya. But do u want to wait till he do the same again with someone else?. Suraj shook his head no way. Ajay; tell me u have a gud news. Suraj; no... Ajay; what u mean by no?. Suraj; we couldn't make the test. Ajay; what y?. Suraj; I think is is suffering from claustrophobia. Ajay; oh no first her mental state n now this. U know how difficult it is to find the culprit it us nearly impossible. Suraj; I can't do anything.

Riya comes informs them Chakor is awake now. They all went in. Ajay; Miss Chakor we want to help u but if u r always running away we won't be able to find them. Suraj holds him back in his anger he throws him out of the patient's room. Riya closed the door. Ajay - what I did now? Ghussa toh iski naak pe lihka hai {the anger is written on their nose} -.

Suraj sits on his place he asked for her allow earlier. Chakor hugs him. Suraj; no autism. Otherwise... Riya; she wouldn't hug. Suraj; nod. Chakor. She looks up. I will check u. I mean ur head of any injuries ok?. Without a machine. She hugs him again. But he couldn't check her properly.

Suraj gave her his stethoscope. Chakor looked at him with questioning eyes. Suraj put the earphones un her ears n put the "micro" on his chest. Chakor; boom boom. Suraj; ya boom boom. She ws busy in listening to his heartbeat. He was checking on her head this time he found an injury mark.

Suraj; call him in. Riya; oh really? is it necassary?. Suraj; get him. Riya; fine. She opens the door n he was still sitting on the floor. Ajay; missed me? . She closed the door in anger n turned to Suraj. Suraj; he is/was ur bf not my u r the reason y he is here. Riya; I am what?. U r the reason y u told him... it's ok neither I can win against u nir him. I'm leaving.

Riya goes out n Ajay enters the room.
Chakor loomed at him in anger. Ajay; sorry sometimes I just forget the situation. Chakor turned her face in anger. Ajay; ok do want to talk to me?. Suraj; if u ask me like this then No. Ajay hits his palm on his head. Suraj; ok I can tell u that this is her state. I foubd an injury on her head. It is an old one. Ajay; it means? Suraj; reality she is like she is now there is no change in her behaviour. Ajay; but if it is true y someone tried to kill hr?. Suraj; I'm the doctor u r the cop go n find it out. Y?.

... Thanks again for ur support happy weekend.
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Edited by _Sukorian_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Awesome update.
Feeling sad for chakor😭
Loved the way suraj took care of chakor😊
Riya & ajay are nice😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome update.

Feeling sad for chakor😭
Loved the way suraj took care of chakor😊
Riya & ajay are nice😊
Waiting for next



Thank u dear happy u liked it.

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