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needuraj

@needuraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wish suraj has atleast one of this as dream sorry nightmare . He s still soo clueless and taking chakor fir granted . Wen will this stupid chakor understand that sometimes u have to give some attitude to ur husband . If she readily go back to suraj and unite then this will repeat again may be thats wat CVs want

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needuraj

@needuraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

And yaa @ banjaaran this s sooo beautiful
I am fan of ur writing :* :D

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: maithu_
It's simply superb.
Each word reflected clearly the emotion which it should.
Beautifully written. I love how you write these beautiful lines.

Reading this and imagining the scenes made me feel like it is happening.
He is regretting his actions.

I don't know what we get in the show but this one is definitely the best way to show him a mirror of the future.

thank you so much maithu.

such lovely compliments.❤️.

we probably won't get to see Suraj's regrets in the show. but ... hope springs eternal.

thank you so very much once again.

much love.

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aamias

@aamias

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

nimmi sometimes i really feel why i cant bexome a writer why cant i publish y work then i read an masterpeice and then i feel everybody is nt gifted to become a writer

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Fabulous as always👏
You perfectly depict how Suraj's emotions should be

thank you so much amrutha🤗.
too bad we aren't the cvs here.. warna suraj would have been on whole new level.😆.

thanks again dear.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Kaash kaash kaash our suraj also understand this...what was he done...??
Superb OS di...udaan main sukor ki MU kab clear hogi...??

usi din ka intezaar hai khushi.
he STILL doesn't get it does he?

thank you so much dear.
Udaan mein MU.. cvs are karta dharta here. so depends upon their whims and fancies.😊

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
Beautiful!!!I want THIS in the show!

thank you so much KK.
so do i..
hope springs eternal.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Nimmi sissy, beautiful os... U nailed it as usual... Blind folded suraj never get vision for now... I want you to be in creative team... 👍🏼

thank you so much sis🤗.

what we do is just hope and a little prayer. but then again our cvs are udaan cvs.
me and udaan creative team... would be blood bath and cat fights😆. err creative differences.

thanks again sweetie.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: gibbu
A beautiful way to register your return !!
welcome back...

Hope to see suraj reflecting upon his loss in the show but he is very very busy playing the victim card n entertaining his imli

thank you so much gibbu😳.
i am going in and out of the udaan land like a ping pong ball😆. got to be crazy or crazier.

ahhh Suraj and reflecting upon whys and hows and alas's... umeedien.

don't get me started upon his woe be me. poor me. zaalim duniya.. zaalimer Chakor stance. i will roll my eyes and snarl at the same time.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -LumosMaxima-
Awesome!!! Its painful but somehow it satisfied the disappointed viewer in me. This is what should happen in the show but I can't expect such creativity from Colors or Udann Cvs.
Btw Thank you Nimmi for teaching a new word.

thank you so much Meera🤗.
i can write nothing but pain and more pain for Suraj now😈.. and i am glad this story could provide a little solace to you.

welcome buddy.
and thanks again.

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