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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Lovely ending. Chakor reminded me of Cindrella, she got her prince charming and defeated her evil step mum and sisters. Their surprise when they found out about her degree was great to read.

It was great how Suraj quickly announced his intentions before the elders could tie him to Imli. Loved how proud he was of Chakor's achievement.

KN and Tejaswini are so nice and kind, loved them.

Thanks maithu, it was a wonderful story.

Thanks buddy!

Never thought it had references to Cinderella!😛

I felt I rushed the story a bit faster but glad you liked it!

It's my pleasure to write stories and have you all as readers!

Hope you will like the upcoming stories too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Ending of another beautiful story...
I like this one...
Love kn and teju never expected this...
yeah Suraj is blessed..
Finally chakor ki life main khushiya aa hi gayi...
No more family drama all is well...
At the end sukor they are the one for each other...
Outstanding writing Maithu...

Thanks a lot buddy!

I always liked KN - Teju pair!

Even when they were evil!

So wanted them back with a positive note!

Thank you for your encouraging words and compliments!

It boosts my need to write something readable!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Wow...amazing end...Maithu...😊

It was really a cindrella kind story,where she the princess,oops sorry,the queen gets her prince charming...❤️

here also,see Suraj is the hasty,on the spot decision maker like the original one...😳

I was giggling imagining the scene of everyone blessing Sukor,,,especially for that tamarind's exprssion..😆

The last part of Sukor in their paradise of love was so beautiful,I was reminded of the original sukor confession...

A heart warming,sweet and simple story...😳

well written...Maithili👍🏼

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful ending of a beautiful story👏
Loved how suraj introduced chakor to everyone🤗
Kn & teju were so nice here😊
Loved the ending part , sukor are made for each other

Thanks dear!

This Suraj is a badas!

I found KN-Teju cooler than what I can ever think of them. LOL

Glad you loved the ending!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer
So beautiful end..❤️ Loved this part and all others so much.. Will you write epilogue?

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you loved the whole story!

In my opinion, this story is better with this end so sorry: no epilog!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: chasa
Aww..such a warm ending..loved this story so much...
Awesome maithu..

Thanks buddy!

It's my pleasure to write and have you all as readers!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Lovely ending👍🏼
Would love to read an epilogue with Suraj,his queen and his princess😉

Thanks yaar!

For sure there will a story with his Queen and Princess but this one ends here! Sorry!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: appledesire
Perfectoo..

The way.. family support them.. *liked it*

Simply. Beautifull.. written dee...

Gracias! I mean Thank you dear!

I'm happy that you liked it!

Hope u will like the upcoming stories too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: KUTUR
Wow...amazing end...Maithu...😊
It was really a cindrella kind story,where she the princess,oops sorry,the queen gets her prince charming...❤️

here also,see Suraj is the hasty,on the spot decision maker like the original one...😳

I was giggling imagining the scene of everyone blessing Sukor,,,especially for that tamarind's exprssion..😆

The last part of Sukor in their paradise of love was so beautiful,I was reminded of the original sukor confession...

A heart warming,sweet and simple story...😳
well written...Maithili👍🏼

Thanks buddy!

You wanted to say: Queen got her King?

I knew you will say that as the common point between here and soap! LOL

Glad it brought a smile!

Thanks once again dear!

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Just read my first FS here on this forum... Wow I am still in daze...It was one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read... THE PLOT WAS SPLENDID... Read all parts in one go... How u shaped the storyline made it so intriguing that I couldn't stop myself from reading.. 😊... Felt like it all happened in front of my eyes...It feels so lively...Coz u add the description of the thoughts of each character, a reader is so well able to connect to each character... Hats off to this kind of your writing... It was an immense pleasure reading this piece of yours...Surely Looking forward to read more of pieces of yours again.. ❤️

Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago

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