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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: appledesire
Ohh... my ..god..

HOw dee how..
HOw could you manage to do this..

Arghhh...

You finished part at such a peak point *sukor kiss*..aawwh... .

I hope . U will update next one asap..

MOreover ... this suraj.. is sensible too..
Chakor..strong in a vulnerable state. .

When bell ring...I actually forgot. . Its pizza delivery..
For a sec I thougt.. oh no.. imli came back..
I like this part... but crave for more..n more..
U know.. lil greedy iam

*thumbs up for ur creativity*

*muaah sis*

Hahaha! You are making me smile with your comment dear!

Sorry to put the break there.

I have to else, how will I make you come back and read my story.

Will try to update on Saturday.😈

You know what I wanted to put an imaginary scene there when the bell rang, but thought why to waste our mood with Thorn's presence.😛

ImliLess part is good for mind.

Yeah! The greedy little sister you are! 😉

I don't know what I'm going to do with your demands! LOL

Thanks a lot!

Love you a lot too!🤗

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Nice update👍🏼
Felt bad for Chakor😭
Suraj is a darling,he will give her all the love she deserves.
Aww ! the end is ❤️
Waiting for next part !

Thank you!

Glad you loved it, especially the end!😉

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

awesome .

a very interesting part.

i am so similar to the chakor in many of ur stories .

when suraj said about english film i so new that something is going to happen for sure 😆

and my guess got true .😛

eagerly waiting for next part ...

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fan of ur stories

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needuraj

@needuraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Yaha bhi imli is the third wheel lol .

I love u for writing this yar :*

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Oh...now I knew.why you said that I'll blast on you...😆..come on yaar Maithu...how could you abruptly end it in such a critical position...😈

Such a romantic atmosphere created...two strangers,in the process of being lovebirds...all alone in a quarter,sharing hearty talks,watching a movie...

Awww...

I want much more from it...and you have to satiate me😉

Chakor past was painful,wish that she turns into a strong and independently young woman,standing for herself...

And my Suraj,the abrupt decision maker,not giving a damn to future,not seeking for forgiveness...yet such a sweet person,a completely gentleman with the boyish mischief and charm...just like the original Suraj...

Good update..

Waiting for the next part...👍🏼

P.S-you know what,when the pizza delivery boy had came,I thought it was the tamarind...I was about to throw my phone...😆

Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Nahiii Tina and imli chakors sisters keh do ki ye jooth hai...kaha chakor or kaha wo do...billiya

Poor Chakor has bitter past yet she is very strong girl... That why I like her more... And now Suraj by her side so kiska hai gum jab saath hai hum...love sukor romance...wonderful update Maithu...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: chasa
Hmm...interesting!..eagerly waiting for next part..

Thanks yaar!

Hope you will like the last part 2!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Superb.
-How desperate Imli must be to pay Suraj to act as her boyfriend.
-Chakor is suffering at the hand of her family: a weak father who can't give his daughter her full rights, and horrible sisters and step mother.
-The questions they asked were well thought and showed how much they care for each other.
-Hmm even this Suraj is stubborn and sometimes rash.
-I love this Suraj so much, he's flirty and fun to be around, but he's so gentle and caring with Chakor.
- The kiss was a very pleasant surprise.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thanks dear!

I agree, Imli is horrible!

However it may sound, she got attached to him few ways: because of Imli, his approches, his help, her heart, her need for affection, her want to be loved.

Stubbornness is something I like in Suraj, the only thing is it must not influence the decision we take.

Hope you like the surprise.

Hey! They din't kissed yet. Their lips just touched.

Thanks once again dear.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Boum! How did you stop there maithu??? I desperately wait for sukor kiss... Please update soon as possible dear...
I felt sad for chakor... I hate imli, she is a horrible person... Chakor deserves to be loved... Suraj is always awesome...😊 love you suraj... and love you maithu for all your beautiful stories...😛 🤗

Sorry dear! You have to wait more!

I mean you will get to read a kiss but after a long way. Except if you do Ctrl+f to search the word 'Kiss'. LOL

Me too hate here and in soap too. Imli is a bitch!

Suraj is always fantastic!

Love you too dear for being here and encouraging me.

Thank you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: pershial
awesome .
a very interesting part.
i am so similar to the chakor in many of ur stories .
when suraj said about english film i so new that something is going to happen for sure 😆
and my guess got true .😛

eagerly waiting for next part ...

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fan of ur stories

Thank you sis!

I would like to know what are the similarities between you and our Chakors? If possible share!

Hey! He didn't do it wantedly!

If you see his thoughts, he is crazy and without power to retain himself.

They didn't kissed yet! Their lips just touched for now.

Let's see in next part if they continue their actions or not!😈