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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: needuraj
Yaha bhi imli is the third wheel lol .

I love u for writing this yar :*

Hey!

Yep! Imli is always a third wheel and never the main one. LOL.

It's her fate dear!

Thank you!

Glad you like what I wrote.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: KUTUR
Oh...now I knew.why you said that I'll blast on you...😆..come on yaar Maithu...how could you abruptly end it in such a critical position...😈
Such a romantic atmosphere created...two strangers,in the process of being lovebirds...all alone in a quarter,sharing hearty talks,watching a movie...
Awww...
I want much more from it...and you have to satiate me😉

Chakor past was painful,wish that she turns into a strong and independently young woman,standing for herself...
And my Suraj,the abrupt decision maker,not giving a damn to future,not seeking for forgiveness...yet such a sweet person,a completely gentleman with the boyish mischief and charm...just like the original Suraj...

Good update..
Waiting for the next part...👍🏼

P.S-you know what,when the pizza delivery boy had came,I thought it was the tamarind...I was about to throw my phone...😆

You see the evil in me asked for that and I gave in!

But no worries, to compensate that there are a lot of GM activating scenes in CAY! You will find out when you read that!

And I'm trying to make the next part worthy. Wait and read, then blast on me if it's not up to your expectations!

Even now the comparaison between here and there!

Can't believe this girl!

Instead of blasting, you are comparing! LOL

Thanks dear!

It's my pleasure to have you as my dear reader!

Hahaha! Lucky phone!

I think I should have added an imaginary scene with Thorn!

My evil mind is speaking! 😉

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: maithu_

You see the evil in me asked for that and I gave in!
But no worries, to compensate that there are a lot of GM activating scenes in CAY! You will find out when you read that!
And I'm trying to make the next part worthy. Wait and read, then blast on me if it's not up to your expectations!

Even now the comparaison between here and there!
Can't believe this girl!
Instead of blasting, you are comparing! LOL

Thanks dear!
It's my pleasure to have you as my dear reader!

Hahaha! Lucky phone!
I think I should have added an imaginary scene with Thorn!
My evil mind is speaking! 😉

Evil mind???

You have already done with it in CAY😆

I heard that the name of Suraj's wife in CAY is Imli...😈

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: KUTUR

Evil mind???
You have already done with it in CAY😆
I heard that the name of Suraj's wife in CAY is Imli...😈

Oh dear!

I think the evil in me is always activated nowadays! LOL

If only you read CAY!😉

You may even like her or feel pity for her.

Only if you don't imagine the Imli Matha from Soap!😛

Which will never happen! Am I right dear?

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Nahiii Tina and imli chakors sisters keh do ki ye jooth hai...kaha chakor or kaha wo do...billiya
Poor Chakor has bitter past yet she is very strong girl... That why I like her more... And now Suraj by her side so kiska hai gum jab saath hai hum...love sukor romance...wonderful update Maithu...

Thanks dear!

You can't change the fate dear!

Imli is already her sis there and here Tina adds up in the list.

Glad you loved it!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: maithu_

Oh dear!
I think the evil in me is always activated nowadays! LOL

If only you read CAY!😉
You may even like her or feel pity for her.
Only if you don't imagine the Imli Matha from Soap!😛
Which will never happen! Am I right dear?

Me pity on that tamarind???😛

May happen,coz no matter how much I hate anyone,I melt very easily...😳

I am really very excited for CAY...dont know what have you done with it???😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: KUTUR

Me pity on that tamarind???😛
May happen,coz no matter how much I hate anyone,I melt very easily...😳
I am really very excited for CAY...dont know what have you done with it???😉

Suspenses and Secrets!

The key word for that!

LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Hello everyone!

Here goes the last part of TOFM!
Hope you will like it!
Link to previous part: Part 3

Happy reading!

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Part 4

The sound of the explosion broke their moment and brought them back to the earth, making them turn their attention to the sound which came from TV by pulling away from each other.

- The simple touch of her lips was life feathers on mine.
But! Shit! I feel like I messed up everything. Oh No! -

Suraj passed his hand in his hair without knowing what to do.
Chakor felt embarrassed and turned away from him.
Few drops of tears dropped from her eyes as she got up and went to kitchen.
She pushed them away and poked her head out of the kitchen asking:
"I'm going to make tea for me. Do you want coffee or tea?"
He got from his place and switched off the TV saying "Chakor! I'm sorry. I shouldn't"
"You are not the one at fault." without facing him.
"Listen! I was out of"
"Forget it please!"
"How could you"
She smiled making her tea.
"What's the meaning of that smile?" feeling extremely guilty.
"It means nothing." he wasn't convinced "So coffee or tea?" she asked.
"I don't want anything!" he said and left from there.

- What did I do? -

Chakor came out of the kitchen to find Suraj in couch with his face buried in his hands.
"We can still be friends!"
"But"
"Take this!" passing him one cup "Are we going to finish the film?" she asked.
"How can you take this easily?"
"You know my past." sitting in the other couch.

- Her past and this are not same. Her past is painful but this kiss is. I can't find the word. -

"I'm sorry."
"In that case, I'm too sorry."

Suraj played the rest of the film, once the film finished Chakor went to her room and Suraj slept as always, in the couch.

Morning once Chakor finished the prayer, she turned to the side where she finds him normally to find it empty. She enters Imli's room after knocking and there is no response.
Finally, she comes to the tea table to find a not saying.

"Hi,

I'm really sorry to go like that.
I need to think. And it can't here.
Thank for understanding the situation.

Even if we have become friends, I'm still having feelings for you.
I don't and I can't make it clear.

I informed Imli about my departure through SMS.
Take care of yourself.
I will see you next week."

A tear dropped and the doorbell rang.
Making herself mind free, folding the note in her hands, she opened the door for Imli to enter.

Days started to fly, Suraj came back on Friday.
He was happy to see her, like before.
She was happy to see him relaxed.
They didn't have even a second to talk as the disturbance was always around the corner.

With just few more days in hand, Imli openly flirted with Suraj even after feeling numerous rejections. Chakor felt a pit form seeing her step-sister behave like this.

The last day of their stay arrived.
In the morning, Suraj came to the apartment with an ultimo motive.

"Hey Suraj! What a surprise? I thought you left for your house." inviting him inside motioning her hand.
"I came to say Thank you!"
"Oh! It's not needed. You know that." brushing it away.
"Can I have water please?" taking place in the hall.

- I want to see her. I'm here only for her. -

"Hmm Yeah! Sure!" she turns other side "Chakor!" hitting herself on her head "What a fool am I? I'll go and get it. She went to temple few minutes back."
"Oh!" his face fall down as he caressed his pant pocket.

- I don't think luck is with me today. -

He thanks her for water and left from there after faking smiles when she said they will be meeting again when they get back there.

Approximately 10 minutes later, Chakor arrived with her bag and said sorry for being late as there was a special puja in the temple.

She went directly to her room and put the college documents in the packed bag of hers which will be picked tomorrow by the driver to take them to airport.

Suraj arrived to his house in the evening to find his full family except Vivaan waiting for him at the doorstep with love and his mother tears.

"How was the last 6 months son?"
"Great! New experience! New people! And New feelings." passing his hand over his jacket pocket.

- I will tell you Dad when time comes. -

"Nice to hear that." Suraj smiled "Hope you learned your lesson." he laughed a little for his father's comment.

They all made their way to the center of the mansion where 1000s people can assemble.
They took their place and started to discuss about different subjects until Vivaan arrived with a test result in his hand and wide grin in his face. Tina ran up to him and embraced him when he kissed her cheek thanking her for making him a father.

- Good news! May be I can add one more good news to this. -

The rest of the Rajvanshi clan came there and congratulate them. The brothers did their bizarre handshake combined hug and the talk continued after the couple informed the news to Lal family and confirmed their arrival for dinner the day after tomorrow.

- I will get to see her tomorrow. And will do what I thought of doing. Yupieee! -

The next day afternoon, Chakor and her step-sister arrived to where they belonged.
Kasturi was more than happy to her little daughter back.
Chakor just nodded her head and headed to her room which is next to servants' room with her bag in her hand.
On her way, she crossed her father and he started to move towards her when Kasturi called him making sure of not letting him talk with his first child.

Around the table when Chakor was helping other servants to serve lunch, Kasturi informed everyone, except Bhuvan that Tina's family will be there for tomorrow's dinner and arrange everything according to it.
"Mini! You have a surprise tomorrow. I will say 2 surprises." she informed to Imli and Mini's smile widened imagining what it can be.

On the other side, KN informed Suraj that he has a surprise and he will come to know about it when they be at Tina's house.

- I too have a surprise dad. That too there itself. -

That night, Imli entered her parent's room and tortured them to know the surprises.
With all the attitude and pleadings she got to know that Tina is pregnant and they are going to make the relationship with Rajvanshi stronger than before with her.
Imli hugged her mother and then her father, winking at her mother and left to her room.

Once their daughter was out of vision, Kasturi turned to Bhuvan's side and said:
"I told you she will be the happiest person hearing this news."

Next day, Rajvanshi arrival!

They arrived even before the time and both the families started to talk random things.
The sisters found their joy to be together and the good news brought more happiness for everyone. Suraj was seated opposite to kitchen and his eyes were roaming around everywhere until he saw a form moving in the kitchen which he thought he knew.

- Can it be she who is there?
Why doesn't she come to see me?
We are friends. She can come and talk.
I'm a fool for sure.
How will she come here? With all these bunch of people. -

Suraj again saw that form and recognised it to be her. And his train of thoughts continued until his father's voice brought him back, accompanied by his touch over his hand.

"As we discussed, we are here to make our relation more stronger than before."

- What is he talking about? Why are everyone so happy? More than before? -

"Dad?" with a questioning look.
"We are here to talk about your marriage Son." said KN taking his son's hand in his, smiling at him.
Imli was showing all her teeth.

- This can't happen. I have to take control of the situation.
I have promised to myself. I can't break it. -

"In that case, I have to tell you something important." he said getting serious.
"We are all ears!" KN smiling at his son.
"I'm in love. Annnd she is here."
All smiled listening to him.

- I'm sure they aren't aware of the person I'm talking about. -

"Let me introduce her to you all." he finished.

Suraj got up from where he was, went near Imli who was sitting on sofa's corner.
She got up from her place and moved towards him but Suraj didn't stop there, he moved a little away from her and Imli's smile dropped along with others as they don't know what is happening.

Suraj went inside the kitchen and 2 minutes later came out holding Chakor's hand.
Chakor's head was bent with hesitation and a lot of emotions and feeling overflowing in her heart.

Suraj with a happy smile came in front of the gathering, still Chakor's hand in his.
"Mom! Dad! Meet Chakor Bhuvan Lal. Daughter of Bhuvan uncle and Late Mrs. Sujatha Bhuvan Lal, uncle's first wife." facing his parents.

- She will not hide her identity from anyone.
She is she and that is what makes her the best. -

And then turning to Chakor's side "Chakor! Meet your Mom and Dad! Come let's take their blessings."

- You will not only get a family but parents too. -

He took her near his parents who were studying everyone's reaction and listening carefully what their son was telling them.

When Chakor and Suraj bent to take their blessing, Tejaswini stopped them and glared at Suraj.
Then turning to Chakor's side, she hugged her saying "Welcome to family Chakor!".
Chakor felt blessed that someone is welcoming her to a family for the first time, felt emotional, so tears started to brim in the corner of her eyes.
"Even happy tears are not allowed to make their way in our family Dear." saying this, KN patted her head affectionately.

- That's my Dad. I'm gifted with my parents. -

"You could have talked to us before doing your stunt Son."
"Dad! It's just that I didn't knew you will be coming here to talk about.. you see." passing his free hand in his hair.
KN nodded.

Suraj squeezed her hand a little and moved towards Bhuvan "Bless us Uncle!".
When Bhuvan lift his hand to bless his daughter, Kasturi took hold of his hand and made him move back.

- Let's see until when she can do this. -

Realising the situation there, KN spoke:
"Sorry Bhuvan. Events here didn't turn as we wished. But I'm sure you are happy. We will come back with marriage invitation.
Our relationship will not change based on anything. I think we need to leave taking our daughter today itself to our home.
What do you think Teju?"
Tejaswini smiled at her husband and went near Chakor and Suraj when Chakor was looking at her father to know what she has to do.

Bhuvan lifted his head to make an eye contact with his daughter and nodded his head to make his daughter take the important decision of her life.

All this while Imli, Vivaan and Tina were watching all this family drama as silent viewers without any comments and interruptions.

Imli felt insulted but she can't do anything against her father.
Tina felt a little humiliated to be known as daughter of her father and his second wife.
One step from them, they know that it will be only wrong.
Vivaan wasn't interested in the family drama as all that mattered for him is his family happiness which he know is related to Suraj's happiness, the eye of everyone, including his. His little brother who brought life in him after his parents.

Chakor freeing her hand from Suraj went near Kasturi and Bhuvan and took their blessing even when Kasturi glared at her while moving a step back. Bhuvan freeing Kasturi's hand off from his, made Chakor stand on her feet and hugged his daughter for the second time in his life as the first time was when he saw her and said:
"I could not give you a life of a Princess but god was with you and always will be with you to protect you and to make you a princess.
I know that you learned a lot at young age and I have no rights to tell you or guide you.
My blessing will be always there for you.
Live happily."

"Just one correction Uncle. She will not be my Princess but my life, my Queen. And coming to Princess, I think we will have at least 3 Princesses. What say Chakor?"
Hearing Suraj, Chakor hide her face in her father's embrace shyly when the latter laughed out loud and Tejaswini chided Suraj:
"Don't make my daughter embrace. Shameless."

- What to do Maa? She will make me do whatever things I have never dreamt of doing. My life shines. -

"Chakor go and take your certificates! We will wait for you." Suraj said to divert everyone's attention.

The moment he said this, Bhuvan let his daughter free from his embrace, making Chakor to hurry to her room to get her important things.

Imli turned to her father's side who was smiling and questioned:
"Certificates?"
Chakor was out of sight at that moment.

- Proud moment! -

Suraj turned to her side and said proudly:
"98.6% MBA degree holder from the best university of Delhi."

- That day when I came to see you, I wanted to congratulate you but didn't got chance for it. -

Imli, Tina and Kasturi faced Bhuvan with accusing gazes but it was too late as Chakor came back with a bag.

Tina and Vivaan stayed there.
The rest of the family thanked Lals and left from there.
KN and Tejaswini left in their car and Suraj took Chakor in his jeep.

He put the bag in the back seat and held her hand and caressed the back of her hand while asking to take her seat. She smiled and climbed on it.

He started the jeep and took hold of her hand which was on her thighs and kissed it.

******* BACK TO KITCHEN *******

Suraj made his way to kitchen where he found her alone and one servant outside of the kitchen, near the door leading to backyard.

"Chakor!"
"Suraj! You! Here?" turning to the side of sound and finding the familiar face she thought she will never see again.
"Shocked or Surprised?" shooting up his brows.
"Happy!" she smiled.

- Good to hear that Honey. -

"Come with me!"
"Where?"
"I want to introduce you to my parents."
"What?"
"What what? You trust me?"
She nodded her head.
"You trust that I will never leave you." locking eyes with hers.
"I" she started.

- This is the moment. -

He went on his knee and took the box he had in his jacket pocket, opened it to get the simple ring out of it. And she stopped seeing his action.

"Will you marry me Chakor?"
She palmed her mouth not knowing what to say.
"You can say no." he said with a sad expression.
"Papa" is the only word she said after few seconds of reflection.

- I knew she likes me. I saw that in her eyes when she was asking question and after too. -

"Then come!" he got up on his feet, put the ring back in it's place.
Taking hold of her hand and he brought her outside the kitchen.

******* BACK TO CAR *******

Chakor put her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.
"Can I have my answer Honey?"
"Heun?" she lifted her head.
"What? Now I have rights to call you Honey and even Beauty. More than that I will not need to praise you and your beauty in my mind."
She went back to her previous position and bent her head a little to hide the blush.

"You look more than beautiful with this." he kissed her cheek.
"Concentration on road please." she said hiding her crimson coloured face.

- OMG! I can't believe I'm having this effect on her. -

The drive arrived to an end and Suraj asked her to be seated.
He got down and went to other side laying his hand for her to take and she did.

- Only Princess treatment. Sorry Queen's treatment for my Beauty. -

He took the bag in his free hand and made their way to the small beautiful house near the beach.

"Do you know that I came to see you on the day of the result? Were you in college?"
"No and Yes."
He smiled "So what do you want to do?" opening the door.
"Work." she answered entering the house.

- She isn't as she seems to show. -

"Our company will be grateful if you can grace your presence there as one of the managing director along with me." making their way to the sofa after switching on the light.
"Uncle and"
"They will be happy if you decide what you want." he interrupted her.
She smiled and sat.

"Why are we here?"
"Mom wanted her daughter to enter our home in a grand way so we are here in our guest house."

- It would be the best way to start our life. -

"Oh!" is all she could manage to say at that moment.
"Aren't you happy?" with a studded change in his expression.
"No it's not like that." she smiled and he reciprocated "Why 'Paradise of Love'?" she asked.
"My parents, I mean our parents gift for me when I entered college."
"Nice."

- She is happy. So I'm. -

Suraj pulls Chakor into an embrace while taking the ring in his hand and she cuddled into him.

"Are you sure I'm The One For You?" she asked.
"You were The One For Me!
You are The One For Me!
You will always be The One For Me!
From the moment I saw you, I knew I wanted you." he made her face him "Will you marry me?" he added.
She nodded shyly with her cheeks turning red as she bent her head.

- Lucky man of this world! Yahooo! -

He took her left hand in his and slid the ring he got for her and kissed her hand. Guiding her hand behind his neck, he lifted her face by his chin and held his face in his hands, claiming her lips for a passionate kiss.

First she frozen with the sudden action of Suraj's but seconds later, she responded to it with equal love and both made the kiss last for almost 2 minutes.

- Completed the started task after few works with more sparkles than before. -

With forehead touching after breaking the kiss, with still his hands over her cheeks, and her face in the colour of tomato, she said:
"I don't know if I can love you as much as you love me.
I don't know if I can make you happy as much as you make me happy.
I don't know if I can complete you as much as you complete me.

But I'm sure about one thing.

You Are The One For Me!"

END!

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- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Vanshika Singh

@vk1nonly

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Awww so cute.i loved it.matlab Maza aagaya.
Sukor is always awesome,so no need to write it specifically.
I would like to write about imli 😛 .I loved her here.She wasn't able to come between our sukor.Hope this happens in show also.
Loved it and waiting for more cute stories like this. 😊