FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Love this Badass Suraj again...
Yeah he become good only for chakor not for everyone...
In Suraj's world it's called tit for tat...
Fantastic update...very nice...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
its too good

cant wait for update.

plzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Hello Mallika...just got to read this one.😊
And I truly loved it...😃
Very well handled Sukor separation...👏

Sounds somewhat blunt,but I am a very critical reader,any ff on Sukor which I read,clicks me and touches me truly only when I feel some similarity in it with the original one...😎
And here also...I was touched😳

The separation,the situations,the plot are totally contrast in with the show,but the core emotions are untampered with...and it did clicked me.😳

HERE ALSO CHAKOR IS MADLY IN LOVE WITH SURAJ.
AND SURAJ LOST CHAKOR OUT OF HIS STUPIDITY...BUT THE INNOCENCE,THE PURITY THAT HIS FEELINGS HOLD FOR CHAKOR ARE EXACTLY LIKE IN THE SHOW...💔
So keep it up...👍🏼

waiting for the next update...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Hi guys I'm back with next part...so without wasting time let's start with


Part 6

Episode starts with Chakor and Arjun sir's conversation

Chakor: So, Arjun sir we are at home where is my price?

Arjun: ok Chakor i have big surprise for you that's more than price come...then Chakor enters at home and gets surprised seeing...

Chakor: ADITIYA!!!...

Chakor runs to him and hugs with happiness...

Chakor: Aditya you here? When you come...omg after long time I'm seeing you...i missed you so much buddy! Where have you been all this time?

Aditya: easy Chakor and smiles i missed you too friend how are you? still continuing your marathon competition?

Arjun: Ok guys lets have dinner your Bhagya di waiting for you in dining table let's go you will continue your talk later
Chakor: But Arjun sir that's not fair... why you didn't informed me about Aditya's coming?

Arjun: How could i? This was my surprise...if i informed you it wouldn't be a surprise...so that's why i didn't informed...

Then they hear Bhagya's voice from kitchen calling them for dinner...

Bhagya: Are you guys coming or should i come to you with dinner?

Aditya, Chakor and Arjun: Coming!...and they goes to have their dinner...

After dinner Aditya and Chakor goes to Chakor's room to have talk...

Aditya: So, Chakor tell me how are you?...how is your life...i heard that you get married to your biggest enemy Suraj instead Vivaan...what happened? Where is your family, Imli, Vivaan?

Chakor: Oh Aditya plz lets leave it i don't want to talk about them...

Aditya: Why Chakor? What happened between you and your family that you left them?...I'm your friend you can share your pain with me...

Chakor gets angry recalling past and says...
Chakor: Ok Aditya if you want to know what happened 1 year ego then i will tell you...and Chakor narrates everything from bride swap to Sukor separation to Aditya...with tears in her eyes...while Aditya listenes everything with shock...

Chakor: That's all what happened in my life since you left...

Aditya: Sorry Chakor, if i hurt you asking about your past...i can't believe that Imli can do anything like this with...it means she snatched your love twice?...first Vivaan, now Suraj...i can't believe that you fall in love with Suraj...how he was your biggest enemy?

Chakor: love is blind Aditya... i don't know how i fall in love with Suraj...we are supported each other when we were in trouble...you know i don't want to remember about my past anymore so let's don't talk about this ok?

Aditya: ok, ok sorry Chakor if you don't want to talk that's ok...by the way how you meet with Arjun sir?

Chakor: i meet him in Mumbai...

Flashback starts

Chakor comes out from bus and goes nearby hotel and receives a room to stay and talks with reception...after receiving she takes key and goes to her room...there she sees Arjun sir coming out from his room and Arjun sir too sees her and they get surprised seeing each other and says in sametime...

Chakor: Arjun sir!

Arjun: Chakor you here and smiles happily...

Chakor seeing him gets teary eyed and hugs him and cries...Arjun sir gets shocked seeing crying Chakor and realizes that she is crying not because of happiness but there is something too...and says

Arjun: Chakor what happen? Are you ok? Why are you crying is everything ok?

Chakor: Yes Arjun sir everything is fine...I'm crying because I'm happy to see you i missed you sir and again cries very badly...
Arjun: oh really and smiles...i think there is something that troubling you...come with me...and takes her to his room and makes her sit...

Arjun: I know you very well Chakor don't try to fool me...I'm your bhay hai na?...old Chakor that i know never cried because of little things...i can see in your eyes that someone hurted you...tell me Chakor maybe i can help you...is kn troubling you?

Chakor looks at Arjun sir and wipes her tears...after thinking so much finally decides to tell him everything and starts narrating...Arjun sir listenes everything with calm expression...Chakor finishes her narrating and looks at Arjun sir who is lost...After some time he comes to his sense and says...

Arjun: So you left your family, husband, sister and even your villagers...or what about kn?

Chakor: he turn mad after all that happened...plz Arjun sir i don't want to talk about them...they always maked fool of me...i don't care about anyone from now...I'm tried of being jagat maata, no one was ready to support me when i needed...now i have hatred for them...they all betrayed me...i just hate them...and cries

Arjun: Chakor look at me stop crying its not suit you...You are free bird...you can fly again...Don't think that you are alone, I'm with you...your Arjun sir is with you...You deserve to be happy...Start new life...BRING BACK OLD STONG, FEARLESS CHAKOR IN YOU...FROM NOW ON I'M YOUR FAMILY...Your Bhagya di will be happy to see you...come with me to Dubai...me and Bhagya shifted to Dubai and living happily with our Little preeti...i come to Mumbai for meeting...

Chakor: oh wow! Arjun sir I'm happy for you and bhagya di i want to see your daughter...Arjun sir thank you so much for your support and hugs him...

Arjun: Ok so you ready to leave your family and start new life?

Chakor: Yes sir I'm ready and smiles looking at him

Arjun: Ok, you take rest, I'm going for meeting, after that i will buy ticket for you...and leaves...

At night Arjun sir comes to pick up Chakor and they go to the airport and waits for theyr flight...while Arjun sir calls Bhagya and informs her about chakor, and she gets happy and talks with Bhagya di through phone...And after some time their flight time comes they leave for Dubai...Chakor with tears looks back recalling every moment she spend here...her childwood times, family, villagers, friends and at last Suraj, their moment her confesson, his betray...all was flashing in front of her eyes...and she left to Dubai in flight...

They comes to Arjun sir's home and sees Bhagya di with preeti and hugs them happily...Chakor tells everything to Bhagya di...while Bhagya di hugs her and consoles her...
Flashback end

Chakor: That's all Aditya thaks to Arjun sir i start new life, continue my career...ok enough about me, what about you?

Aditya: Noting interesting Chakor, everything the same, i come here to see you...Arjun sir informed me about you...so i come here because i missed you and hugs her smiling

Chakor: i missed you too...ok let's sleep tomorrow i have to wake up early...
Aditya: oh yeah sleep now see you tomorrow...good night friend...saying this he leaves room and goes to his room and sleeps...

Morning...

Chakor was sleeping peacefully...suddenly she hears Arjun sir's voice...and wakes up with jerk

Arjun: Wake up Chakor fast we have to practice running...let's go to stadium girl...do you remember about marathon in next week?

Chakor: Coming sir...and she runs torward bathroom...after freshin up she goes with Arjun sir to stadium...

Meanwhile at home Bhagya was preparing break fast...then someone calls her and says...

Pn: Hello. My name is Karan I'm calling from national sport organization, can i talk with Arjun sir?

Bhagya: oh sorry he is not at home now, you can tell me if there is something important, I'm his wife...

Karan: Oh ok i just wanted to inform about upcoming marathon...plz ms tell Arjun sir that marathon will be held in India, In Mumbai after tomorrow not next week so they should come tomorrow...sorry ms i have to go now...plz don't forget to inform ok bye thank you...and cuts the call...

Arjun sir and Chakor comes back to home after practices, Chakor goes to her room while Arjun comes to Bhagya and sees her lost in troughs and says...

Arjun: Where are you lost wifey?
Bhagya comes to her sense and looks at Arjun and says...

Bhagya: Woh Arjun someone called from national sport organization and informed that running marathon will be in Mumbai after tomorrow not next week...what will you do? How to tell Chakor that she should go to Mumbai? She will refuse...

Arjun: Don't worry i will talk with Chakor and inform her about this...then he calls Chakor...Chakor comes downstairs and says...

Chakor: Yes Arjun bhai what happen? Is everything ok?

Arjun: Woh Chakor i want to talk about your next marathon...plz Chakor don't get angry, you can think about this, if you agree you will go...if you don't want to go i will not force you...he didn't knowed how to tell...

Chakor: Arjun sir i don't get you plz say it clearly...

Arjun: Ok then listen...and he tells everything about marathon...

Here Chakor gets chocked and remember how she left Mumbai and after thinking she agrees and says...
Chakor: Ok Arjun sir I'm ready to go to Mumbai...

Arjun: Are you sure Chakor?

Chakor: yes I'm sure...i don't care about my past life, i forget everything and started new life...there is no old Chakor...there is new Chakor the famous marathon runner no. 501...this is about my career and my professional life...This marathon is everything for me...so I'm ready to go...

Arjun: Ok then we have to leave tomorrow morning, i will buy tickets for you, me and Aditya...i know you will ask why Aditya right?...because i promised him before coming and he too want to see you in marathon like before...his home is in Mumbai if you remember...he will stay in Mumbai after Marathon gets over so...
Chakor: oh ok...i will pack my bags...saying this she goes to her room...

In the morning...

Arjun, Chakor, Aditya gets ready to leave...

Bhagya: Ok guys good luck...Chakor plz call me after reaching there ok?

Chakor: Ok di don't worry i will call you...you plz take care of yourself and preeti...then they leave to airport...

Mumbai airport...

There Vivaan was waiting for clients coming...suddenly he sees Chakor with Arjun and Aditya and gets chocked...before Chakor turns her face he hides and thinks...

Vivaan in mind " Chakor! She come back to Mumbai...after long time...i should inform Suraj fast before she goes from there...omg Suraj will be happy seeing Chakor...thank you god for bringing her back...without wasting time he calls suraj...
Vivaan: Suraj...woh i have happy news for you...Chakor is come back...your Chakor is back suraj...are you listening me?

There Suraj gets happy and starts crying happily...he can't belive his ears and says...

Suraj: Vivaan what are you saying is that true? My Chakor came back where is she? I should meet her, plz tell me...

Vivaan: In Mumbai airport come fast or els she will leave now...

Suraj: No, Vivaan she can't leave me...I'm not going to let this happen...and he cuts the call and runs with tears in his eyes...while marjayaan song plays in bg...

Suraj drives his car while thinking about Chakor...Suraj in mind..." Chakor...my Chakor she is back after long separation we will be together again, thank you god for bringing my life to me...I'm coming Chakor, plz don't go anywhere...i will explain everything to her and she forgives me...plz Chakor don't leave me anymore...i can't live without you...plz god help me winning her trust again...and he wipes his tears and goes to airport

On the other hand Chakor feels like Suraj is calling her name and looks around and thinks...in mind " why I'm feeling like Suraj is calling me?...my feelings for him died...but why i'm thinking about him now...Chakor just forget about him...you here for marathon, not for him...she comes to her sense by Aditya's voice and turns to leave with Arjun and Aditya...but she gets chocked seeing suraj with tears in his eyes and with guilty face in front of her eyes...


Precap: suraj stands on his knees with gun in his hand pointed to his head and says...Chakor plz stop, i don't want to lost you again...i will kill myself...because i can't leave without you...and he shots...while everyone stands in chock looking at Suraj...



That's all for now guys...i hope you will like this part too...sorry for gramatical mistakes...😊








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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: KUTUR

Hello Mallika...just got to read this one.😊

And I truly loved it...😃
Very well handled Sukor separation...👏

Sounds somewhat blunt,but I am a very critical reader,any ff on Sukor which I read,clicks me and touches me truly only when I feel some similarity in it with the original one...😎
And here also...I was touched😳

The separation,the situations,the plot are totally contrast in with the show,but the core emotions are untampered with...and it did clicked me.😳

HERE ALSO CHAKOR IS MADLY IN LOVE WITH SURAJ.
AND SURAJ LOST CHAKOR OUT OF HIS STUPIDITY...BUT THE INNOCENCE,THE PURITY THAT HIS FEELINGS HOLD FOR CHAKOR ARE EXACTLY LIKE IN THE SHOW...💔
So keep it up...👍🏼

waiting for the next update...😊

Thank you Kutur for reading my ff..I'm writing first time so i can't write emotional scenes very well but i will try my best...so plz support me😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome update👏
Chakor's flashback was emotional😭
Finally chakor is back😊
The precap is scary😲
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Nice part..precap was so scary..waiting eagerly for ur next updates..update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Nice update👍🏼
Wish cv's bring Aditya,Arjun & Bhagya in serial too
Precap is scary !
Waiting for next update !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Superb!
Part 5:
Loved this Suraj and Chakor!
Happy that the villains got what they deserved.
Waiting to know how they are going to meet again.

Part 6
Glad that Chakor is back in the frame infront of Suraj!
To have ADI back in her life is like a have the strongest support by her side like his father when she was small.
Precap is a terrible!

Waiting!
Continue soon dear!
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
extremely good i'm waiting for next to see how suraj win back chakor and how will chakor react
and sorry for the late comment😊

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