FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!! Just read your story in one go...it was really amazing...update soon...and can you plz PM whenever you update it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys it's me Malika I'm here with my next part...I'm really sorry for making you all wait...please forgive me...i was busy in this days...thanks for reading my story...I'm really very sorry...😊

Part 7

In Airport

Chakor gets shocked seeing Suraj in front of her with tears in his eyes ...he comes to Chakor and hugs her tight and says...

Suraj: Chakor...i knowed, i believed that you will come back to me one day...and finally you come...plz Chakor don't leave me anymore i will die without you...Chakor you don't know what happened with me in this one year...i died million times, i missed you so much, i lived with hope that you will come back...Plz Chakor don't go anywhere...
Chakor gets emotional listening Suraj and without realizing hugs Suraj and cries...they forgets everything around and stay like this for sometime...then Chakor comes to her sense and pushes Suraj realizing what she was doing...and goes back saying...

Chakor: No, no, no Suraj you can't make fool of me with your fake tears...I'm not going to get into your trap and believe your words and come back to you again...i came there for marathon, not for you or for anyone else so plz Suraj stay away from me...don't come to my way..goeson't want to suffer again thinking about past...leave me in peace I'm begging you and cries remembering past days...

Suraj stands on his knees and pleads her...

Suraj: No, no Chakor don't say like that i can't leave you...I love you a lot...plz Chakor i know that you are angry on me, but Chakor believe me after knowing all truth you will forgive me...for that you have to come with me to home...everything is not like that you think Chakor...plz give me one chance to explain everything and come with me...

Chakor was leaving without listening his words...but Suraj's next step shocks her...

Suraj: Chakor Stop plz i can't loose you again i will kill myself...If you are not in my life then better to be death and takes gun and points to his head and closes his eyes and thinks about good moments with Chakor and smiles...

Suraj in mind " I love you Chakor...and I know that you love me too, i can see it in your eyes, i believe in my love and your love for me...and i will prove it now...and he shots and everyone was in shock listening gun's voice and looks at Suraj's direction and finds Chakor near Suraj...Chakor throws away Suraj's gun and slaps him hard while Suraj holds his face and smiles looking at Chakor...
Chakor in anger holds his collar and says..

Chakor: You stupid Pakhandi what are you trying to do ah? Why you always troubling me...What you think...if you will shot yourself i will pity on you and come back to you?...then listen to me carefully Mr Suraj Rajvanshi i will never come back to you! I don't need you in my life...i don't love you!...saying this she leaves from there with Arjun and Aditya...

Suraj feels bad listening Chakor's words and goes back to home and enters his room and sits in deep think

Suraj in mind "One year ego She left me saying " tumne hame dhoka diya hai Suraj! " and she threw divorce papers at me...she thinks I love Imli and misunderstood me watching fake video edited by Ranjana and Ragini...why my past and someone like imli stands between us...I love only Chakor i never loved Imli...After one year separation She again come back to me...and she still hates me and she doesn't want me in her life...but Enough now if she doesn't want me in her life it's her wish...but I want my Chakor and my wife back in my life...i never singed that divorce papers...so she still my wife...She is still Mrs Chakor... Suraj Rajvanshi and this Suraj Rajvanshi wants her wife back...I Want You Back In My Life Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi...be ready to become my wife again...i will turn world upside down...BUT I never going to loose you again...My war for my Love starts from now on...I Love YOu Chakor...and i will win your trust again...Mr Suraj Rajvanshi never meant to loose...I'm sure You love me too i can see it in your eyes...I love only you...always will love Only you Chakor be ready to fall in love with me again...with this he comes to his sense and smirks then he goes to sleep thinking about new plan...

Next morning i stadium

Chakor and Arjun sir were practicing for marathon then Aditya comes there and smiles watching at Chakor and says...

Run fast Chakor! i know you will win this marathon...after all you are the Famous Marathon runner 501...My best friend Chakor Bhuvan Lal...

WRONG!!!...Chakor suddenly stops running and looks at direction where voice comes and gets angry seeing Suraj...Suraj with big smile comes to Aditya and says...

Suraj: Aditya you said wrong...She is not Chakor Bhuvan Lal...She is Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi!...My MRS CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI! and winks at Chakor...

Chakor comes thorward Suraj with angry face and says...

Chakor: Suraj what are you doing here?...Aditya said right, I'm not your wife anymore...we get divorced 1 year ego if you remember, i don't have any relation with you exept hate, don't start your nonsense and go from there...i have to practice for tomorrow's marathon...saying this she was leaving but Suraj's next word shocks her...

Suraj: No no Chakor, i said it right you are still my wife...and that divorce papers you saying...i burned them and not signed...so you are My wife CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI!

Chakor: oh yeah? Ok that's not big deal i will give you another divorce papers...

Suraj: No way I'm not going to give divorce to you...Actually i come here to take you home...lets go and he takes her hand...but chakor jerks his hand and says...

Chakor: Leave me Suraj! I'm will not come that house...if we didn't divorced last time..we will divorce this time...i will take divorce from you anyhow...

Suraj: oh! I know that you will try to blackmail me again for divorce and take my sign...but why do drama like last time?

Chakor: what do you mean?...what's going on in your mind?...i know you will not give me freedom from you so easily...

Suraj: No no chakor relax i will give you divorce...but you have to do something for me...i have one condition

Chakor: what condition?

Suraj: Shoting competition! And winks at her

Chakor gets shocked and thinks " oh god this Suraj going to ask for kiss as price like last time...i know he will not leave chance to come close to me... But why I'm scared of him...i will win like always... she comes to her sense by Suraj's voice...

Suraj: hey Chakor where you lost?

Chakor: Ok I'm ready...what's your condition?

Aditya looks at them and thinks " Omg i feeling like Old Suraj and Chakor is back...but one difference is they love each other madly...i know Suraj love Chakor i have to find out about everything...

He comes to his sense and says...

Aditya: Ok ok guys relax...Suraj what is your condition?

Suraj If i will win you have to marry me again!

Chakor gets shocked and refuses...

Chakor: What a nonsense? I will not marry you never!!!

Oh you are scared of me right?...you. think that i will win and you will loose...ok chakor it's ok for me i good that you refused...with this you proof that you don't want to get separated from me...you want to stay Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi! FOREVER! And I LOVE THIS CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI and smiles...episode ends with smiling face of Suraj and confused face of chakor...



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That's all for now guys thanks for your support guys...see you later...And Eid Mubarak to all my Allah bless you...😊




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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Loved Suraj's mind voice and confidence.
OMG! Shooting competition! Nice thought Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi!
And the condition: superb!
Happy that you updated!
Waiting for Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi to accept the challenge!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
It was superb..
Tq for updating...
Loved the old suraj swag..
Is adi help to reunite chakor..
Loved it..
Pls update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Finally you updated
Interesting update👏
Loved suraj's attitude & confidence😉
Waiting for chakor to accept the challenge
Waiting for next

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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
So Mr Attitude is back n so as SuKor's cat fight
exciting...
update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Interesting update!
Loved the idea of the shooting competition, hope she agrees.
Looking forward to the next update.
Eid Mubarak to you too!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Awesome 👍🏼
Loved Suraj's attitude and confidence
Waiting for next part !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Hi guys 😊 i'm back with another part...hope you all will like it...sorry for any grammatical mistakes...


Lets start...





Part 8

Episode starts with Suraj and Chakor's conversation...

Chakor: Listen Suraj I'm not scared of you ok, you don't know me, i will win this competition like always be ready to loose!...I'm ready let's start! I want freedom from you forever and i will win this challenge ANYHOW! Watch me! and she goes to get ready for competition...

While Suraj and Aditya talks with each other about Him and Chakor...

Aditya: Suraj i have one question can you answer me?

Suraj: What question? Of course ask me i will answer if i have answer and smiles...

Aditya: I know that you love Chakor madly...i can see it in your eyes, but why you betrayed her, why you hurted her badly? She too loved you...now she hates you...why answer me...

Suraj: Aditya i never betrayed her everything that happened was because of Ragini and Ranjana i will tell you everything what actually happened in that time...and starts narrating everything to Aditya...while Aditya listenes everything with shock...after some time Suraj completes his narration and looks at Aditya waiting for his reaction...

Aditya stands numb not knowing what to say...Suraj jerks him and Aditya comes to his sense and says...

Aditya: Omg Suraj! i can't believe in this that they can fall so low, what chakor do to them that Ranjana and Ragini hurted her...because of them she thinks you are still in love with Imli and betrayed her...Suraj I'm so sorry actually i was thinking that you can't change anymore after Chakor's words about what you did...but i was wrong you love Chakor more than himself i come to know about this yesterday...


Aditya keeps hand and smiles looking at Suraj and says...

Aditya: ok Mr Suraj I know that you have to win Chakor's love and trust back, and for this you have to face her anger and hatred for you...But don't worry I'm with you Suraj I will help you!

Suraj: Thanks for your support Aditya...Yeah you are right Chakor is angry with me...but don't worry I will do everything for her love and trust...My Chakor will forgive me because she loves me a lot...I will turn world upside down for my Wild Cat Chakor and smiles...

Aditya: Oh, ok ok let's go i think Chakor is waiting for us...and they goes to Chakor...

Shoting competition starts...there Chakor and Suraj stands looking at each other...Suraj with smile and Chakor with irritation...and between them Aditya with gun and smirking at them...

Aditya: Ok guys lets start our Shoting competition...so let me explain rules of competition...

Look at there...there is five bottles with water, you two have to Shot at them and don't miss any bottle...if you miss one bottle then you will loose...and one more thing you two have to shot with blindfolded eyes...

Chakor and Suraj gets shocked and looks at Aditya and says...

Sukor: WHAT!!!

Chakor: what? are you mad Aditya how can we shot with blindfolded eyes

Suraj: Yes Are you out of your mind? That's not fair...

Aditya: What are you two thinked that this competition will be so easy with Shoting bottles...that's not fair, every competition have to be very hard to win, and i added this rule from my side and winks at them...So lets start without wasting time...by the way, Suraj you are the best in Shoting why you so scared of loosing Chakor...

Suraj:what? I'm not scared of anyone...and Suraj Rajvanshi never meant to loose...and looks at Chakor...Hey My wild cat are you ready to loose and be my wife?

Chakor: No never!...in your dreams only!...lets start i can't wait to be free from this betrayer...saying this Chakor gets ready...while Suraj feels bad listening Chakor and he too gets ready...

Aditya: Ok guys, lets start first will shot Chakor then you Suraj...

Then competition starts and Chakor blindfolds her eyes and waits for Aditya's command and thinks in herself...

Chakor in mind " God plz help me to win this challenge from Suraj if i will loose then i have to marry him...but i don't want to loose...help me, God you know what is correct for me, plz help me...she comes to her sense by Aditya's voice...

Aditya: 1.2.3 start!

Then Chakor starts shoting...one by one bottles breaks into pieces...and one bottle left...while Suraj starts praying to god for Chakor loose and for his win...

Suraj in mind " God plz help me to win this challenge...its very important to win Shoting challenge because if i will loose and Chakor wins then I Will lost Chakor forever...I don't want to loose Chakor...She is my Everything i will die without her...


And time coming to the end and last bottle get missed by Chakor...

Watching missed bottle Suraj gets happy and hugs Aditya...

Suraj: Yes! Thank you, thank you,thank you god! I love you Chakor! Be ready to be mine forever!

Chakor unties her eyes and gets shocked watching one missed bottle and looks at Suraj and gets angry...then says...

Chakor: Suraj this is not your win... don't be happy so much in advance...still you have to win by breaking all 5 bottles...who knows maybe you will loose...

Suraj: No darling, Suraj never loosed from shoting competition if you remember and winks...my unconditional love for you will help me in winning...And this time God will help us to be together again...and he too gets ready to shot and ties his eyes...while Aditya comes to him and says...

Aditya: Ok Suraj it's your turn now...don't loose, if you will loose, you very well know what will happen with you...Chakor will left you forever...then looks at Chakor...


So lets start...1.2.3!!! Start!

Then Suraj starts shoting bottles one by one...one bottle is left for Suraj's win and last shot...Chakor and Aditya looks at bottles and gets shocked watching pieses of bottles...This pieces of bottles means Suraj's win, and Chakor's loose,

Suraj unties his eyes and gets happy knowing his win and goes torwad Chakor with wide smile...


Here Chakor stands numb not knowing what to do...Suraj comes running to Chakor with smile and full of love in his eyes...Suraj pulls Chakor torwad himself with force and kisses her...on the other hand Chakor gets shocked by Suraj's this act and tries to free herself from Suraj's hold but all goes in vain...and she gave up and starts responding him with actual passion showing him how much she missed him and how much she get hurt forgetting about past, future and everything...






That's all for now guys thank you for your support...and sorry for any mistakes...see you soon...😳




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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Awesome👍🏼
Suraj & Adi became friends😃
Sukor kiss
Waiting for next !!

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