FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part

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Hi guys I'm Malika I want to start writing about upcoming Sukor separation track in my own way I hope you will like it
So lets start with TEASER:



Suraj prov:
Today is a year since My wife Chakor left me saying " tumne home dokha diya Suraj i hate you! And i hate myself for falling in love with such a person like you. I'm leaving Suraj i sighned divors papers i'm tired of being betrayed and being Jagaat mata! I wish we never meet again" and she left me...
Suraj : why chakor why you left me? I love you chakor plz come back to me...Why when this type of bad thing always hapens with me when i was going to tell about my fellings for chakor always somting like my PAST or SOMEONE like Imli coming between us...i only love you Chakor only You...you are my everyting, my futher...I don't love Imli you are totaly misunerstood me chakor... I never loved Imli i'm not father of Imli's Child Chakor...I want to talk with you feell your presense, Hug you, kiss you, and tell you how much i love you...Enough! If you dont want me in your life its ok But I need you, I want you back in my life...you are still my Wife Chakor i never signed divors paper and i will never do it i will prove my love for you I'm coming Mrs Chakor Rajvanshi be ready to become My wife once again and forever i will turn world upside down but never ever going to leave you... Suraj Rajvanshi wants His Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi with him...My war for my Love stars from now on...
I will win your trust again...I'm coming Chakor


So how was teaser hope you like it plz suport me bye for now dears😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting waiting for ur first part
pls post it soon😊
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I wanted to read an FF on this 'post sukor seperation'.Thanks for writing this😊 ! Waiting for 1st part...
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Thank you so.much for writing this
Waiting for first part

It looks interesting
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Nice Teaser!
Liked Suraj determination.
Hope to see the 1st part soon!
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make it an ff dear 😉 waiting for further updates
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I love my Suraj Rajvanshi...
Who never loose courage...
who always want too win...go suraj go...
Please update first part soon...
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nice teaser

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Nice teaser
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Hi guys I'm back with first part of my story so let's start without wasting time

Part 1

Sukors room was decorated with lights flowers and balloons to welcome Suraj's come back to Haveli...Chakor was very happy and planned big surprise for Suraj and she was talking with Suraj's photo

Chakor: You know Suraj I'm very happy today because you are coming back to Haveli and we will live together... i want to confess my love for you today after party
I don't know what's in your heart for me do you love me or not but I'm sure about my fellings for you...I Love You Suraj and I know that you too love me i can see love for me in your eyes...i want to hear that three magicial words from you...saying this she kisses Suraj's photo and leaves from the room

On the other hand Suraj was thinking the same as Chakor

Suraj: I'm going back to Haveli after so much of troubles created by my Baap Kn we finally win Chakor now everything going to CHANGE in our life for good... i want to confess my love for you i can't wait anymore what if Pakhi's words come true and doosra hero comes to take Chakor away from me then? Nooo! shouts Suraj in the middle of Baasti...and realizing what he did he looks around to find smirking Pakhi

Pakhi: Woah Suraj bhayya! what are you shouting like that if someone going to kill you? Or again thinking about Chakor didi ah? and smiles

Suraj: Pakhi you were right if i will not tell about my love for her Someone like "doosra hero" takes my wife from me i should tell her otherwise she will defiantly leave me I'm planning to remarry Chakor i want to start new life with her forgetting my past

Pakhi: Oohoo Suraj bhayya I'm here na to help you! you go to Haveli Chakor didi is waiting for you

Suraj: ok meri maa I'm leaving saying this Suraj leaves from there


Suraj was coming to Haveli and suddenly he hears Chakor's crying voice

Chakor: Vivaan leave me! Suraaj help me plz...
Suraj was very angry and runs torward Haveli

Suraj: Damn Vivaan again trying to kill my wife i should have to kill you that time itself...VIVAAAN HOW DARE YOU TO TUCH CHA...with so much anger he breaks rooms door and inters room there he sees Smiling Chakor In front of him
he realizes that it was prank played by Chakor

Suraj runs torwards Chakor and pulls her torward him and hugging thight

Suraj: Chakor are you ok? Plz Chakor don't play that type of game with me you scared me to the hell I was going to kill that Vivaan...by the way why you did this?
Chakor breaks hug and says

Chakor: Surprise! Sorry Suraj for my stupid prank look around i changed our room I'm verry happy that you come back to haveli.. I want to show you new things
Chakor turns around and starts showing room

After some time

Chakor: Suraj today i want to tell you something important watch there...
Suraj turns and lights goes off and on the wall he sees I love you letter writing by lights...Suraj was chocked with this surprise and feels happy

Suraj prov:

Suraj: Chakor loves me so much? Am I dreamig plz god make it real and he pinches himself...ouch that's not dream omg i'm very lucky man in the world my Chakor loves me...I LOVE YOU TOO CHAKOR, i really do i too want to confess my love right now...i can't wait anymore...
His troughs was disturbed by Chakor's voice
Chakor: Suraj you know na how we meet first time? From childwood we never liked each other when i was 7 years old i stepped in this house as your father's bhandwa from that time i desided to free my basti people and my parents from bhandwa and live happy, i was biggest enemy of your and your father we always challenged each other...so make your father happy you too was against me and always wanted to show me low in front of your fater
But i wanted to make you good as vivaan and decided to make friendship with you
I knowed that you were not bad as you think...
Do you remember when i called you "bhayya" i wanted to melt you heart with that but you shouted at me saying never call me "bhayya"
Chakor smiles where Suraj was having flashbacks of that time and smiling
So you were knowing that i will become your wife in further
After 10 years we never stopped fighting i hated you for destroying my and my sisters life she was pregnant with your child you married me by cheat you snatched my love from me i hated you to the core for that but when you cared for Imli and her child i understand that you love imli and i helped you to propose imli. But when she rejected you i was felling pitty on you...then Imli lost her child and fall in love with Vivaan so we decided to sacrifice our love for them...we suportted each other from that time, when we was going to get divorced Kn start his game to kill you so i deside to stay with with you for your safety...From that time you start changing for good suportted me every time when i needed... you become bhandwa of your own father...after so many trubles created by your father we never stopped helping, staying by each others side, protect each other... With that you win yourself and become who you are now. Your good side win over your bad side...i don't know from where I fall in love with you Your good nature melted my heard and i forget about post things you did with me and started loving you...Suraj I Love you a lot! I never trough that i will fall in love with my Biggest Enemy...i don't care about your past , i don't care you loved my sister or not, i don't care do you love me or not, But I'm sure about my feelings for you... she shouts on top of her voice saying I LOVE YOU MR SURAJ RAJVANSHI YOUR JUNGLI BILLI, JAAGAT MAATA LOVES HER PAKHANDI HUSBAN...I WANT TO STAY AS MRS SURAJ RAJVANSHI FOREVER!

Saying this she runs and hugs Suraj who was smiling and crying with happiness and he too Hugs her back thinking " I love you too Chakor! I love you a lot" and cries and than he break the hug and says

Suraj: Chakor I'm really sorry for what I did for you i'm really very sorry he starts crying like child and was holding ears asking for forgivness
I'm eally very sorry for everything i want to start my new life with you with new memories you will forget every bad thing that happened in your life. I promise Chakor that i will fill your life with happiness only, i will never make you cry...if someone tries to harm you i will break their faces... I always will protect you from evils...You too promise me that you will never leave me, i can't live without you Chakor...i want to tell you that I Love...
Suddenly Chakor's phone rings

Suraj: Damn who is that person disturbing us?
Chakor: similes and says never mind Suraj continue i want to hear what you want to say

Chakor i mind " I know Suraj that you want to confess your love for me , Say it Suraj i can't wait anymore plz Say I Love you Chakor to me and make me the happiest girl in the world"
Chakor was excitedly waiting for Suraj's confesson

Suraj wiping his tears holds Chakor's hand near his heart and says

Suraj: Chakor do you feel my heartbeat?..my heart beating for you, only for you Chakor, you are my everything...I Lov...

Didi...Imli comes running torward Chakor and Suraj

Didi i was searching for you...actually one unknown person come to meet you, i was calling you but you didn't picked your phone he wants to talk with you about important thing...plz come with me...saying this she takes Chakor with her...
Suraj: Imli plz come after some time i too want to tell very important thing...

Imli: Suraj babu plz try to understand its about kn

Chakor: Ok imli I'm coming you go now

Imli: ok come fast and she leaves
Chakor: Suraj you know i talked with that person over phone and he tells me that he have some docment about Kn and it helps for destroying trimurti so we should use that person to make you and bastiwale free from bhandwa saying this she was leaving
Suddenly Suraj pulls Chakor and she leans on his choulder an they have cute eye lock and in low tone says

Suraj: what about me Chakor? If you will free me from kn will you leave me? I don't want that type of freedom
Chakor feels shy and says

Chakor: I will never leave you Suraj we will continue our talk later and she kisses Suraj's cheek and runs from there leaving stunned Suraj who was holding his cheek with big smile in his face

In Haveli

Chakor talks with that person about kn and his team

So where we will meet?

Person: Come to Mumbay with me i will give you documents and you can help your husband

Chakor: why you helping me?

Person: because he killed my wife and daughter i want take from him, trust me

After thinking some time she says ok and that person leaves from there smirking
On street he talks with someone on the phone

Maam your work is done plz leave my family don't kill them?

Lady: good job don't worry i will leave your family after my plan works...so Chakor you going to have biggest chock in your life, after that your and your husband will hate each other and get separated forever i will destroy your life...

Precap: Chakor gets choked after watching somting and starts crying vey badly...


Who is that mystery lady who want to separate Suraj and Chakor?

What will happen with Sukor in further?
Any guess?

So that was first part of my ff how was it
I hope you liked sorry for gramatical mistakes...sorry if that was very boring if you didn't liked my story i will stop from there ony
Thanks a lot for your support it means a lot for me bye guys for now







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