FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
I'm happy that Adi is with Suraj!
Why don't Imli devi come and talk to her sister, and even Vivaan, they are also at fault for the misunderstanding!
Interesting competition and lovely kiss!
Finally they are going to be together!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Wonderful!
It's good that Adi decided to help Suraj.
Loved the shooting competition, Sukor are destined to be together.
The kiss .
Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Amazing update👏
Adi & suraj are friends😊
Loved the competition😊
Suraj won & sukor kissed😛
Finally sukor will marry again😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
It was awesome..
This part is very interesting..
I didn't have a patience to read who won the competition..so i directly scroll to see who is the winner..lol..then only i start to read the full part..
I just loved it..
sukor kissed..Poor adi is he still there?
Adi came to suraj's side..tat was fabulous..
Waiting for ur next update...pls update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Great update 😊

Love Adi and Suraj friendship here

Sukor kissed 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Awesome
The shooting competition and for the first time Suraj prays to god to win... dam his love makes him to do what he has never done.


Winning Chakor awesome!

Hope CVs take cues from the excellent writers of this Forum

and the kiss !!!!

waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
I'm a really big fan of sukor. N I love this sukor ff a lot
Thanks for writing this ff. I read all 8 chap in a single go. N I want to thanks all sukor ff writers for their beautiful stories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Hi guys its me Malika I'm back with next part of my ff...I'm very sorry for not replying to your comments...thank you soo much for your support and liking my story...😊

Lets start witout wasting time...





Part 9



Episode starts with Sukor kissing each other in slow temp enjoining their first kiss...after one year separation...

While Adithya looks at them and smiles...after he gets uncomfortable watching Sukor and leaves from there giving love birds some private time to talk and sort their misunderstanding...on the to the hotel he sees Arjun sir coming to stadium and says...

Adithya: Arjun sir where have you been? Very bad that you didn't see what happened between Sukor...

Arjun smiling: No Adithya i know very well what happened between Sukor..."Shooting competition" right?...


Adithya in confusion looks at Arjun sir and says...

Adithya: Yes, but how...i mean how did you find out aboud this?

Arjun: ok ok don't look at me like that let me clear your confusion...and began to tell him about everything what happened last night...

Flashback is shown...

After Chakor, Adithya and Arjun left from airport Suraj with dull face were going home not knowing what to do...suddenly he remembers about Arjun sir and calls him...while calling he thinks in himself...

" Oh yes ARJUN SIR! My last chance is Arjun sir he only can help me to get back Chakor...i know he will support me...i have to tell him everything what happened...

Suraj: Hello Arjun sir its me Suraj Plz don't refuse to me i have to talk with you...its very important thing for me only you can help me...plz i want to meet with you sir...


Don't say Chakor that i called you plz...i will explain everything...

Arjun: Listen Suraj i think i know what you want to say...and i know what happened between you two from Chakor one year ago...so there is nothing to talk with you...

Suraj: No no sir that all she said was somewhere true and somwhere lie...trust is thati Love Chakor and i can't hurt her...i will die but never ever Hurt my Chakor...


Lie is that I never betrayed her being in relationship with imli...so sir if you think that i can't change and I'm saying lie you can cut the call...saying this Suraj waits for his reply...

Arjun sir gets effected by his words and agrees to meet with him and gives him address where to meet and talk...

Suraj comes to Arjun sir and began to tell him everything what actually happened one year ago and who did this...showing him proves...after some time

Suraj: Arjun sir that's all what actually happened...i come to know about this after Chakor left me i heared Ragini and Ranjana's conversation...and gave them punishment by making him bhandwa...i never talked with Imvaan too...One year i searched Chakor every where...and now when she come back to me...she doesn't want to talk with me...she hates me...and I'm dyeing watching her hatred...plz sir help me to get back my Chakor in my life...saying this Suraj bends down on his knees and cries...

Arjun sir gets emotional by watching Suraj's condition and love for Chakor and keeps hand on his shoulder and helps him to get up and says...

Arjun: Get up Suraj...why are you crying?...It doesn't suit you.. Suraj Rajvanshi that I know never meant to loose...don't give up...I'm with you and will help you...i can see love in your eyes for Chakor...Chakor will forgive you...don't worry She too loves you a lot i know it...don't worry everything will be Ok...saying this he hugs Suraj...then Suraj tells him about his plan and they two shakes hand and smiles...

Flashback ends...

Aditya: Omg Arjun sir you too was involved in this plan?...wow and didn't say anything to me? That's not fair...

Arjun: ok ok don't get sad...we will tell our next plan when time comes...And now lets go we have to give Sukor some time to talk and think about our next step...and they goes...

In stadium...

Suraj and Chakor comes to their senses and looks at each other and smiles...but then Chakor realizes what she is doing and steps back saying...

Chakor: No, no, that's not right Suraj...you again trying to trap me with your fake love...with this forced kiss and all but no Suraj you can't make fool of me...i can't forget everything what happened between us and come back to you...i can't forget about that what i saw with my own eyes...your betray and all...and this competition has no means for me...i can't marry you and ruin my life again...You hurted me Suraj...


while Suraj tries to explain and say something but Chakor didn't give any chance to speak...then he gets angry and holds her back of head and pulls torward himself and says...

Suraj: Listen to me carefully Chakor! Enough now! Firstly... I NEVER BETRAYED YOU CHAKOR! Secondly...I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU AND I LOVE YOU DAMN IT! Only you MY LOVE OF MY LIFE...IF YOU STILL THIK THAT I BETRAYED YOU THEN LOOK INTO MY EYES CHAKOR THEY ARE SAYING THAT I LOVE ONLY YOU I NEVER EVER BETRAYED YOU...LOOK INTO MY EYES AND TELL ME WHAT ARE YOU SEEING? Eyes never lie to us...they always says what in our heart...

Chakor looks at his eyes and sees love, Deep love for her, Only her image is shown in his eyes...then she cries badly holding his collar and keeping her head on his shest ...after some time Suraj lifts her head and holds her face and says...

Suraj: What did you see Chakor? Why are you crying? Tell me Chakor?

Chakor: Suraj I saw... I saw...then hugs him and says...

Chakor: I LOVE YOU SURAJ!!! I always loved you...i can't hate you, why i can't hate you Suraj...You are too bad (beating his shest) too bad i hate you...why you make me cry so much? Why you hurted me a lot...

While Suraj cries and gets happy listening her words and says...

Suraj: Sorry Chakor for making you cry...for hurting you...I'm really very sorry...you can beat me, give me punishment for what i did...but don't give me punishment by leaving me Chakor i will die without you...Don't leave me anymore...Give me chance to prove my innocence...

Chakor: I will give you last chance Suraj if you again will break my heart i will leave you forever and smiles...

Suraj: Never! I will never betray or break your heart anymore that's my promise...PROMISE OF SURAJ RAJVANSHI FOR HIS MRS SURAJ RAJVANSHI!

Chakor: wait wait, Suraj i will not marry you!

Suraj gets shocked and looks at Chakor with pouting face and says...

Suraj: that's not fair Chakor you loosed competition and i win so you should accept my condition and marry me...

Chakor: Oh my dear Suraj ok i will marry you by one condition...

Suraj: What condition?

Chakor: Tomorrow there will be marathon if i will win then i will marry you...if i loose i will not marry you and winks at him


Suraj looks at her without getting anything...after some time he realizes what she said and picks her up Gets happy and screams on top of his voice...

Suraj: YEES!!! I LOVE YOU CHAKOR THAK YOU...

CHAKOR: Suraj put me down what are you doing don't scream like that...lets go i have to practice for tomorrow's marathon and win for you...

Suraj: Sorry sorry...don't worry Chakor i know my Chakor will win this marathon...

Suraj puts Chakor down and they go to Hotel to tell Arjun and Aditya about their marriage...




Precap: Chakor comes to meet with Imli and Vivaan...and Imli asks forgivnes from Chakor and stands on her knees and cries hugging Chakor...while Chakor remembers about past and cries too and says..." i can't forget what you did so easily and forgive you...i have to think...give me some time"...




That's all for now guys... i hope you will like it...sorry for any mistakes...see you soon...😊




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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Idk but I had a feeling that you'll update it today.. N see it came true . loved this chapter a lot. Plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Going great!
Finally they came to sense else I would have lost it! LOL
Happy to know Arjun was with Suraj and he is still.
Wishing Chakor to win the race!
Continue soon!

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