FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Sad for Sukor😭
Precap is interesting !
Eagerly waiting for next update !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Sad for Sukor😭
Precap is interesting !
Eagerly waiting for next update !!

Thank you! In next updates you'll get to see more interesting twists keep reading dear 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: katheriene

Feeling bad for sukor😭

Happy that suraj knows the truth
Waiting for next


Thank you! Let's see how Suraj will punish them
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
I felt bad for sukor...
I hate this separation...
One year leap omg...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Hii guys I'm back with another part of my story...thank you guys for supporting me...
So, let's start with

Part 5

One year leater...

One man is shown pointing gun at tied upside down person and asking...

Person: So, tell me why you tried to rape that young girl...ha?! Do you have any shame? She is like your daughter...wait i will show what happens with person who tried to harm innocent girls like her in my village...I will kill you with my own hand...AFTER WHAT YOU DID YOU DESERVE TO BE KILLED...saying this he shoots at his leg...that person get scared and pleades him...

Person2: Plz sir don't kill me...i understand my mistake...i will ask forgiveness from that girl...actually i did this for my boss, he ordered to do so...because she slapped my boss...that's why he got angry at her and...

Person: So, this was your boss order?...
He comes torward tied person and holds him by his hair and says...

Person: Tell your boss that if he tries to do something bad with any girl in further I will kill him!...that's my promise...promise of SURAJ RAJVANSHI did you get that? and leaves him...and goes from that place toward home...

In haveli
Vivaan and Imli was talking...

Imli crying: Vivaan i miss my didi we don't know where she is...1 year passed since she left haveli i feel guilty for Suraj and Didi's separation...it was my fault...i don't know how to find her...because of my selfishness she left me, Suraj and all family...you know na? How we tried to find her...Suraj turn mad in searching her everywhere...He changed everything...he too changed a lot...and remember about everything what happened 1 year ego...

Flashback is shown

After Chakor left in bus Suraj comes home heartbroken, he was like lifeless body...and goes torward his room and sits on bed thinking about how Chakor left him...scenes from bus station and Chakor's words was flashing in his mind...and he cries and shouts on top of his voice calling Chakor name...listening Suraj's voice Vivaan and Imli comes to Suraj room and sees heartbroken Suraj and feels guilty and goes near him and keeps hand on his shoulder to console him...

Vivaan: Suraj...

Suraj: Stop it Vivaan! Don't say anything just leave me alone...

Vivaan: Plz suraj listen to me...I'm

Suraj:What? What you want to say ha?...that you are really sorry...for what your mother did right?...You know i think it's all was your and Ranjana's plan to take revange from me for my mother did by giving you drugs...i accept that my mother did big mistake, she shouldn't have to do like this with you...but she understand her mistakes and paying for bad deeds in past...but your mother, she snatched my dad from me...but i didn't say anything...your own mother even killed her own husband that is your father... Now she snatched my life, my happines, my love from me...after all this is happening because of her...she and her daughter should die...with this he get up with jerk and goes torward cupboard and takes gun from it and goes out leaving Imvaan chocked...they realizes what he is going to do and runs after Suraj to stop him, from doing anything wrong...

Suraj with anger goes torward Ranjana and ragini's room and enters by breaking door...there Ranjana and ragini gets chocked looking at angry Suraj with gun in his hand pointed at them...Ranjana and ragini gets scared and starts pleading him realizing their mistakes and what Suraj is going to do...(while Suraj's bg music is playing...)

Ranjana: Su...rr..aj...wha...tt are you...going to do? ...plz SUraj don't do this we are really sorry...please leave us...
From behind Imli and VIvaan comes to suraj and tries to stop him from killing anyone...

Vivaan: Suraj plz put down the gun..i know you are angry now...even me too hate my mother now...but plz don't do anything wrong...I'm really sorry for everything...i can understand your feelings now...believe me we will find Chakor...i know you doing this for Chakor left you...plz we will give them punishment by other way...

Suraj: Vivaan don't try to stop me...i can even kill you too...i don't care about anyone except my Chakor from now on...i'm become good for Chakor only, don't think that Old Suraj is gone...He is still here...and i can become bad Suraj again...ok you want me to leave them right?...i have one condition...wait here...he goes out...after some time he comes with slave seal in hand and goes torward Ragini and Ranjana...all gets chocked seeing stamp...but watching Suraj madness and angry face gets scared and stays silent...Suraj holds Ragini's hand tight and says...

Suraj: So, Ragini ji that is your punishment...you enjoyed watching me helpless that time when my father maked me slave right?...now its your turn to become slave and my turn to enjoy watching you helpless...with this you will pay for your bad deeds and He seals her wrist with machine while she screams in pain pleading suraj to leave her...
Ragini: please Suraj bhaya don't do this...i realized my mistake plz forgive me...aaah!

Suraj: done! Welcome to new life as Slave! My dear Sister!

Suraj turns to Ranjana and says...

Suraj: Now its your turn Ranjana ji...and comes to Ranjana and holding her hand makes her slave too...and takes them to cowshed and ties them with chains and says...now you two become slave too...ENJOY YOUR NEW LIFE and goes from there leaving crying and pleading RagRan back of him...
Suraj comes back to haveli and shouts calling Imvaan...

Suraj: Imli! Vivaan! Come down you two i want to talk with you two!

Imvaan comes to suraj running in fear of thinking about what going to do Suraj with them...

Suraj: From today i will announce Good Suraj is no more!...from now on i don't have any relationship with you two...I'm not your brother...Did you get that!...I suffered a lot by becoming good...i lost everything in my life because of you all...Good thing that i found being good is My Chakor only...i can become good again, But not for you...I'm not going to throw you out too from this haveli...you can live here happily...I'm doing this for your child not because of you, there is no fault of unborn child...But with my rules...Oh yes about my father...i will send him in mental asylum soon...

Vivaan holds hand together in front of Suraj and cries feeling guit and says...

Suraj plz forgive us i know because of us you lost Chakor...i mean she left you...i promise...i mean we promise we will find Chakor and bring her back to you...

Suraj: I don't need your help i can find my Wife myself...i will turn world upside down but will find her soon that's Suraj Rajvanshi's promise...

Flashback ends

Imli wipes her tears and says...

Imli: after that Suraj started searching Chakor everywhere like mad every day he wake up with hope finding didi...but he failed finding her... But he didn't gave up...even now he is searching for her...

Vivaan: I know he changed a lot from old Suraj...he send Kn to mental asylum and freed Villagers from slave...and i know why he doing this...because it was Chakor's dream from childhood...

Imli: Looking at Chakor's photo...plz Didi come back to home...Suraj is waiting for you...we all waiting for you...where are you...plz god give us some hope...my child for whom you left us is 1 year old now...he look like Vivaan...he is the father of my child...plz didi come back...let us sort your misunderstanding...saying this she cries collapsing on the floor...while Vivaan consoles her patting her back...

Vivaan: don't worry Imli we will find Chakor and reunite her with Suraj...it was our mistake and we should solve it...

On the other hand Suraj comes back home and without looking at imvaan goes torward his room...in room Suraj goes near Chakor's photo frame and talks with her...

Suraj: 1 year Chakor...1 year passed since you left me...i missed you so much in this one year...i know i hurted you and you punishing me for this...but Chakor i can't take this separation with you anymore...plz come back to me...i can't live without you...you make me lifeless by taking my heart with you...I love you a lot Chakor...you are my life...my everything...I'm saying this words to your photo evereyday...give me chance to clear your misunderstanding...plz come back to me and let me feel your presence with me...Plz god help me finding my Chakor...while tears was falling from his eyes and he prayes to god to find Chakor...
Meanwhile in Dubai

One girl is shown running in stadium with one man near her...

Man:Run , run Fast...good...keep going girl...go,go,go...and she reaches finish line and smiles looking at that man and says...

Girl: Yes! i win your challenge Arjun sir...you have to give me price...

Arjun: Yes, yes you win as always...after all you are the famous marathon runner 501 Chakor...


episode ends with smiling face of Chakor and crying face of Suraj...

Precap: not yet decided


Thats all for now dears thanks for reading my story...see you soon...😉

Edited by Malika1993.06 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
I love this ff it's totally brilliant, keep up the good work, when will u update next 👏😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Thahaanfan

I love this ff it's totally brilliant, keep up the good work, when will u update next 👏😃

Thaks dear i will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Awesome update👏
Loved this changed suraj😊
Ranjhana & ragini deserved the punishment😊
So chakor is in dubai
Waiting for sukor meet
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Awesome update..waiting for ur further updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Loving this Suraj who is determined to get his wife back and his badass avatar to people like Ragini and Ranjana...
Waiting for next update !!

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