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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Aradh_27
I love love LOVE this!!
Stuck at a horrid airport in a horrid mood and this just made my morning <3

Will try getting back and editing this, but IDK what to say TBH. Just that this is hands down the best Suraj POV I've read and we'd be lucky to be privy to even a fraction of his thought process on the show.

meri alpha girl.
🤗

glad to be the one to bring in smiles for you.
now keep the beautiful smile on.

best Suraj POV? coming from the one who wrote such a perfect Suraj Pov in her stories that is a high praise indeed.
thank you sweetheart.
love ya.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: nycgal
Beautifully written!!!
Always look fwd to what your thoughts are.Very very nice

Thank you so much Shree.🤗
@bold.. that made me smile. feeling so delighted.
thank you dear.

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Namita-
@Nimmi, you are making me bawl my eyes out. That was beautiful and so sad at the same time.
Loved it. Muuaahh 🤗

aww Nami.
big bear hugs🤗

thank you for finding this story so beautiful. and poignant. and sorry for making you cry.

muah back.
thank you once again.
loads of love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: parboni
Well,what you know! Nimmi di's fantabulous OS brightening up my pre-exam morning.You just summed up the whole SuKor story in one OS.So,nothing more to add.The balance you kept in between Chakor's POV and Suraj's POV was simply endearing.
Love,Paru

Paru.
🤗.

all the very very best for your exams kiddo.
slay them all.

thank you for finding this story so good.
happy for saying that i could maintain that balance and for liking it (since i tend to be partial towards Suraj. (hey i am a Suraj'ian first. guilty*).

once again best of luck paru.
and big thank you.

and love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: gibbu
i just marvel at your talent.
You weave magic through your words n i relish each one of your sentence
You invariably present your Suraj as a colossus. How dear! But i m afraid that reel Suraj will henceforth remain only for biological reasons- no reversion to his former avatar. i have lost all hopes 🥺
Satiation through your fiction only

thank you SO much Gibbu.
generous and wonderful compliment. thank you dear.

Suraj as colossus... any man less than a Titan is not worth my time.. hence i always end up showing him the way i want to see him.

@truer words have never been spoken🥺.
watching Rishtey episodes is such a painful realization as to how much Suraj as a character has been watered down.
and losing him before he could reach his full glory feels like a criminal blasphemy.
yet i hope on. silly me.

once again a big thank you and much love.🤗

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Tabsi

@Tabsi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Argh! Why do you have do be so damn f**kING GOOD AT THIS?
Sorry... erm... Uh, you're just really good, it's... I want to cry :'(

It's just what I needed! how good Sukor are together and how in love they are! You have such a beautiful way of writing words, carving out a sentence with them. Brilliant all around.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie
Hands down this is one of the best and perfectly penned down one shot I've read:') I wad dying to read a one shot on sukor for so long this was totally with the wait 👏

thank you so much for such a lovely compliment.
and for reading this story and finding it so good.
means a lot.

big thank you once again.
and much love.🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
That is one intense, full of the deepest emotions and feelings one can have, awesome-blossom story!
Suraj's monologues were so heart touching and heart breaking, I had tears. When did this once utter selfish man become so damn selfless? Sangat ka asar from his jagatmata biwi?

Whatever the reason, it was really good.

He ain't Suraj Rajvanshi for nothing! And he will keep his Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi to himself for life and every other lifetime to come. Come what may.

Sanu.
🤗.

thank you so much girl for liking this story.
and for loving Suraj's monologues.

Suraj has shown brilliant flashes of loving like no one else. sangat ka asar😆. naay. he is simply built that way. one who truly loves.

@bold.
you said it mate. perfectly!❤️

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: KUTUR
Oh...Nimmi di,you really weave magic with your posts...and this was a gem,I am literally rendered speechless...after reading this...😊

👏...

I don't know if we will ever get to see,something even closer to this one in the show,but whether they show it or not,you have very beautifully penned down,what deep down,within them,the characters actually feel,...that is why my love and liking for the two fictional characters,is increasing day by day,and today ITS YOU,coz of which I am now emotionally connected to them,all the way more...🥺

"KUCH IS LIYE BHI,MUJHE TUMSE ISHQ HAI DILBAR,
MERA TOH KOI NAHI HAI,CHALO TUMHAARA TOH KOI HO..."💔

Nimmi di,it would be very unfair to compare anyone to some other person,but as I cant find any other way to describe your talent,that is why I am saying this, that you are the "Imtiaz Ali",of this forum,coz like him the way you understands human emotions and its conflicting shades,it needs some really hard core talent or DARD,to pen it down,so...deeply,purely and passionately...

This the first time ever,I am teary-eyed after reading something...Your Talent is indeed very precious,keep writing..👍🏼

Love to you...🤗

awww Rabia.
🤗🤗

this got to be one of THE best compliments i have received for my writing.
thank you so very much dearest.

i honestly don't know how to respond. just.. heartfelt THANK YOU.

that shayari was just so damn beautiful. poignantly beautiful.

and your words for me and my stories.. truly precious. and touching. and humbling.

thank you really sounds so inadequate but too overwhelmed to say anything more. such a generous, touching, beautiful comment and compliments.

big hugs rabia.
and loads and loads of love.❤️.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Happy mahashivratri...Nimmi di

Handle this drunk chakor rather than face a pride of hungry lions...And this one to too funny she call vivaan gadha and she is happy ki wo gadhe ki gadhi banne se Bach gayi 😆hilarious...Nimmi di...
Har har mahadev I read this os second time...what a marvellous and superb written...main to aap ki fan bann gayi...lots of points I love love love in this os...can't explain here shayad post bohot lambi ho jayegi...I love this chakor she is so innocent and cute at same time...But suraj wowowo what improvement suraj babu...now he dislike vivaan's name with chakor...And he regret his things he doing in past but now he is chakor's one man army 😛
... but why He is always asking himself what is this...?? What is this...?? Kabhi to samaj liya karo yaar you are a mature man...I think in future chakor ko hi prapose karna padega suraj ko kyuki Inn se kuch nahi bola jayega...last I'll say to you...love youuu Nimmi di...aap sukor pe ek ss kyu nahi likhti...

Samet loonga apni baahon main tuje..,
Tum kabhi meri tarah bikhar ke to dekho...!!!

Har Har Mahadev Khushi.🤗.

thank you so much khushi.
for reading and loving all its shades.
and hey i would love a lamba (and a short post) from you anytime. i always think of Suraj as one man army. for only Chakor.

haha.. i will personally enter the screen and bop chakor on head with my saucepan if she dares to propose Suraj first. have cooked so many khayaali pulavs of 'Suraj first'. noways nohows.

love you back dearest.
SS on Sukor? i prefer AU. who knows i may just do it. thank you khushi. *hugs*.

wow.. that is some gorgeous shayari. i told you before.. will say it again. i really love the beautiful shayaris you pen down.❤️.

once again a big thank you and love.
and hugs.

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