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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

That is one intense, full of the deepest emotions and feelings one can have, awesome-blossom story!

Suraj's monologues were so heart touching and heart breaking, I had tears. When did this once utter selfish man become so damn selfless? Sangat ka asar from his jagatmata biwi?

Whatever the reason, it was really good.

He ain't Suraj Rajvanshi for nothing! And he will keep his Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi to himself for life and every other lifetime to come. Come what may.

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Oh...Nimmi di,you really weave magic with your posts...and this was a gem,I am literally rendered speechless...after reading this...😊

👏...

I don't know if we will ever get to see,something even closer to this one in the show,but whether they show it or not,you have very beautifully penned down,what deep down,within them,the characters actually feel,...that is why my love and liking for the two fictional characters,is increasing day by day,and today ITS YOU,coz of which I am now emotionally connected to them,all the way more...🥺

"KUCH IS LIYE BHI,MUJHE TUMSE ISHQ HAI DILBAR,

MERA TOH KOI NAHI HAI,CHALO TUMHAARA TOH KOI HO..."💔

Nimmi di,it would be very unfair to compare anyone to some other person,but as I cant find any other way to describe your talent,that is why I am saying this, that you are the "Imtiaz Ali",of this forum,coz like him the way you understands human emotions and its conflicting shades,it needs some really hard core talent or DARD,to pen it down,so...deeply,purely and passionately...

This the first time ever,I am teary-eyed after reading something...Your Talent is indeed very precious,keep writing..👍🏼

Love to you...🤗

Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Happy mahashivratri...Nimmi di

Handle this drunk chakor rather than face a pride of hungry lions...And this one to too funny she call vivaan gadha and she is happy ki wo gadhe ki gadhi banne se Bach gayi 😆hilarious...Nimmi di...

Har har mahadev I read this os second time...what a marvellous and superb written...main to aap ki fan bann gayi...lots of points I love love love in this os...can't explain here shayad post bohot lambi ho jayegi...I love this chakor she is so innocent and cute at same time...But suraj wowowo what improvement suraj babu...now he dislike vivaan's name with chakor...And he regret his things he doing in past but now he is chakor's one man army 😛

... but why He is always asking himself what is this...?? What is this...?? Kabhi to samaj liya karo yaar you are a mature man...I think in future chakor ko hi prapose karna padega suraj ko kyuki Inn se kuch nahi bola jayega...last I'll say to you...love youuu Nimmi di...aap sukor pe ek ss kyu nahi likhti...

Samet loonga apni baahon main tuje..,

Tum kabhi meri tarah bikhar ke to dekho...!!!

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Gosh feeling SO overwhelmed.

thank you SO so much girls for such beautiful heartfelt heart touching comments.
your love.
your likes.
and your generous gorgeous words.❤️.

will comment in detail soon. (got slight injury in typing finger. terribly sorry about that. absolutely nothing serious. but finding difficult to type. sorry again.).

just had to say big big thank you.
much love.
and gratitude.

and hugs.

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such overwhelmingly beautiful words.
and love.❤️.
bless you.

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geetkumar

@geetkumar

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

You take good care of yourself Nimmi. You are precious to us.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: vinlora
Tears in eyes, raised heartbeat,overwhelm..😭..this is the situation of mine rite now after reading your os. ...👏 fentastic piece of work dear...loveddd it...thank u so much for the wonderful OS. ..really I bcome so emotional. .it touched my heart...😳beautifully potrayed suraj's feelings 👏

lora.
🤗

i should be thanking you. that the story evoked such beautiful emotions in you and you expressed them so beautifully... means a lot.
and truly touched.

big heartfelt thank you dear.❤️.
and love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Give me some time to get my emotions under control. Till then
Res.
Unres.
Kaise kahun ke tum mere liye kya ho.
Kaise samjhaaun kisiko ki tum mere liye kya ho.
Meri hasi, meri khushi, mera rona sab tum hi to ho.
Mere saans lene ki wajah tum ho aur saanse bhi tum ho.
Aur un saanson ke faaslon mein bhi tum ho.
Mera jeena marna tum ho. Aur meri tadap bhi tum ho.
Mera dard tum ho. Us dard ki dava tum ho.
Mera aaina tum, aur aks bhi tum.
Apne aap se anjaan tha main. Tumne mujhe mujhse milaya.
Khud se ek nayi pehchan karvaayi.
Khuli aankhon se sapne dekhna sikhaya.
Jhuthi hasi ko sachi khushi mein badal di.
Khwaabon ko pankh diye aur udna sikhaya.
Chup chap mere dil me chali aayi aur wahin apna ghar bana liya.
Ab tum mere dil mein rahti ho.
Meri soch mein, meri zuban se kaheti ho.
Meri dhadkano mein dadakti ho. Meri ragon mein lahu banke daudti ho.
Mujhe zindagi de kar meri zindagi ban gayi.
Mujhe jeena sikha diya. Ab mujhe marne ka salika bhi sikhaado.
Kyunki tum bin na jiya jata hai aur na hi marte hain.
Aur log kahaten hain ki tum meri nahi ho.
Ab inhe kaise samjhaaun ki jeene ke liye tumhara haath thaamna zaruri hai.
Kaise samjhaaun ki andheron mein ghira huya hoon, Raoshni ki kiran tum ho.
Inhe lagta hai ki tum mera pyaar ho.
Kaise samjhaaun, ki tum mera pyaar nahin mera joonun ho, mera pagalpan ho.
Mera wajood tumse is kadar juda hai ki, aankhon ke bina bhi tumhe dekh sakta hun.
Tumhe mehsoos kar sakta hun.
Khud ki dadkane sunai de ya nahin. Par tumhari dhadkane pehchan leta hun.
Bina kahe, bina sune tumhari aawaz mujh tak pohonch jati hai.
Tum mein is kadar samaaya hu ki khud ko bhul gaya par tumhara ehsaas har pal hai mujhko.
Tumhaara hun. Tumse hun. Tumhare liye hun.
Aur log kahte hain ki tum meri nahi ho.
Nimmi🤗
I wrote this for Vividha, but thought that it will fit for your Suraj as well. He is that beautiful. Heart and soul. Thank you for fulfilling our dream. For I am sure many of us wish see this Suraj on screen.
Yours stories and write ups give such immense pleasure to my heart that sometimes it just leaves me speechless and overwhelmed. I wish I knew how to write more for you.
Love ❤️
Geet

Geet.
🤗

this is PRICELESS.
gosh. SO damn beautifully written. and suits our Suraj SO perfectly.
your Vividha must be a very special girl who must have truly loved like no one.
thank you for sharing this piece of pure beauty and love here. you really really should write more. the way you write is truly beautiful.

and your last lines.. your words give me such immense pleasure... and i so wish i could write more for you.. i say.. the feelings are entirely mutual Geet.❤️.

this write up is just SO so perfect.
and a loving thank you for loving this story. and Suraj.

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SukiDakanya

@SukiDakanya

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Oh my god brilliant! I am undone.

So many beauties to behold. Hilariously just like Suraj to run behind chakor when she is drunk... I havent seen any episodes from Dec 14 so this feels warm and welcoming compared to the sense of overwhelming panic at FOMO in the AT...

This is their pyar ki saffar ... not the pyar ki suffer!

Where do I start... Suraj raw masculine warm tender and hilariously screw vivaan he lost his chance it's mine...

Chakor =) so like her to bravely be the 1st to speak about her feelings in such a way that it upright smacks Suraj in the face... taking him unawares.

What else can i say that others haven't said...

There is one thing I think you must change absolutely and I am PMing you what that is :D :D!

Dont throw your sandals at me... just read what I have to say :D

Glad to be back Suki

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

this was so, so amazing!

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: eshasrk
OMG Nimmi...who are you ????
I just cannot control my emotions after reading this utterly beautiful, emotional OS...damn girl I am speechless !!!!
Crap...why the hell are you not in the creative team of this show???? I am sure we would get excellent storytelling...
How I wish we would get something like this in the show, but I better not keep my hopes up, coz I am getting disappointed everytime...
This is sooo beautiful, this Suraj is sooo perfect...oh man !!!!!
I almost want to DEMAND something like this in Udaan...like seriously !!!!
Perfect storytelling...wow !!!!!

thank you SO so much Esha.🤗.
for reading this story and loving it. and your beautiful comment.

oh i would love to see this in show too girl.
disappointment.. i hear you esha. i do.

thank you for loving this Suraj. feeling really happy and honoured.

and once again a big heartfelt thank you and bigger hugs for your wonderful words for the story and me.
much much love.❤️

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