FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#511

Fabulous Chapter

The heart and mind talk never seem to give up

oh I really like that they both spoke

as a friend Suraj could have just hugged Chakor the weather was good 😆

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#512

That was mind blowing

Sukor's bickering was cute, and what did Suraj mean when he said poor me not her? is he sure that Chakor will be his?

Can't believe Suraj told Chakor that he loves her! Was it a spur of the moment? or was it to stop her talking? he knows she isn't ready.

Suraj's heart is cute, already thinking of babies 😆.

So our lady didn't refuse straightaway , that should be a surprise to her.

I wonder what Suraj feels about what happened, is he angry with himself for blurting the truth out? did he get some home from her reaction? or did he expect more?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#513

Maithu😆

My Heart: is Maithu making Suraj tell his heart??

My Mind : You think she will do that so easy for you to enjoy???

he he loving MINART talks more than sukor's talk

ha my dude's heart is fast marriage, honeymoon, babies ha ha

loved the convo and the way he said move on just loved it a signal to move ahead with... naturally Him...

what a jolt she must have had though she is liking...

like our last year holi you made it anti Maithu😭😭 saying joked hmmm

why joke when I am serious!!

nice going and hope they start serious convo

wait a minute he is also tired and that too behind the wheels!!!

oh god nothing serious should happen... is this leading to that accident????

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
OMG mind blowing update...🤪i loved the way she can even read his eyes...❤️waiting for next part...plzzz update soon...😳

Thank you so so much dear!

Happy you loved her ways of dealing with him

Will be back as soon as possible!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was a lovely update sis..
Is the suraj really playing with her..
Once again i just loved the heart and mind fight..
Hope both feel 4 each other soon..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much sis

Well! I can't answer if he was playing with her or not as his mind and heart wants two different things!

Glad you loved the MINART fights

Hope too that they get together soon!

Thank you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update🤗
Loved Sukor's conversation😆
Was Suraj playing with Chakor or he really meant it😉
No words for heart & mind😆
Waiting for next

Thank you Thank you so much buddy

Glad you enjoyed the Sukor scenes!

Weelll Can't reply to your question directly! Sorry!

Thank you once again dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fabulous Chapter

The heart and mind talk never seem to give up
oh I really like that they both spoke
as a friend Suraj could have just hugged Chakor the weather was good 😆

Thank you so much buddy!

Agree yaar!

Heart never leaves LOVE and so Mind never leave Heart

Heee I see that you want a hug! Well I think I can give you something more than hug in the next part!😉

Thank you

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#518

Thank you so much for these lovely words Mai!

These mean a lot to me!

Originally posted by: meshmesh
That was mind blowing

Sukor's bickering was cute, and what did Suraj mean when he said poor me not her? is he sure that Chakor will be his?

What he means may be taken in 2 ways!
1) If it's her also, he will be poor
2) The logic of all men(mostly) Men are poor once married as women dominates and blah blah blah

Can't believe Suraj told Chakor that he loves her! Was it a spur of the moment? or was it to stop her talking? he knows she isn't ready.

Same applies here!
He wanted to stop her(that smirk) and he wanted to see her reaction(I think you got it!)

Suraj's heart is cute, already thinking of babies 😆.

Aww so sweet of you to praise his heart which is so talkative

So our lady didn't refuse straightaway , that should be a surprise to her.

Well!
The hestitaion is because she feels him to be her friend!
So she just can't tell it!
And moreover they are becoming family :-|

I wonder what Suraj feels about what happened, is he angry with himself for blurting the truth out? did he get some home from her reaction? or did he expect more?

I will try to give a small insight of this in the next part for sure!

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so so much Mai!

It was interesting to read your comment!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu😆
My Heart: is Maithu making Suraj tell his heart??
Yup that is the truth!

My Mind : You think she will do that so easy for you to enjoy???
I'm not that evil dear!

he he loving MINART talks more than sukor's talk

Heee Happy you enjoyed their Chit chat!

ha my dude's heart is fast marriage, honeymoon, babies ha ha

As always 😛

loved the convo and the way he said move on just loved it a signal to move ahead with... naturally Him...

😊

what a jolt she must have had though she is liking...

Can't say 😛

like our last year holi you made it anti Maithu😭😭 saying joked hmmm

why joke when I am serious!!

Well!
Suraj felt it to be too soon to be sure of his feelings and her reactions!
After all, they are family now!

nice going and hope they start serious convo

Serious convo has started but it will never get too serious between them!
And I feel like I'm taking a short series writing it time to time LOL

wait a minute he is also tired and that too behind the wheels!!!

oh god nothing serious should happen... is this leading to that accident????

I let you think what you want!
As I can assure you I hadn't become that cruel yet in this story!

Thank you so so much Sumi

Hope the next part will be liked by you! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#520

Hola amigos!

How are you all?

Nothing to say or add as I'm getting bored of messages before my stories! OUF

Link to previous part : Part 28 : Long drive talks!

Happy reading!

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Part 29 : If only!

As the talks died, the man in the power of driving the jeep concentrated on his work for the rest of the time.

Starring straight at his destination, he made it in full speed.

"Arrived!" He exclaimed turning off the engine.

As he turned to her side with a smile of being back home, his smile vanished and got replaced by some unknown feelings and emotions.

Seeing her sleeping peacefully in her seat with a simple smile, his face also got adorned with a smile.

"Chakor! Get up!" He climbed down from his vehicle "We are back home!" And made his way around the jeep and stood by her side "Chakor!"

"Nooo" she said in her sleepy voice.

"Are you planning to sleep here?" He shook her a bit "Get up sleepy head!"

"Let me sleeep!" She pushed away his hands.

"I'm leaving you jeep!"

"Hmmm"

"In the cold night!"

"Hmmm"

Shaking his head at his sleepy friend, he unbuckled her seat belt.

"You are getting up now and walking to your room!"

"Shhh"

"Then the only solution is I carry you to your room!"

And she hummed.

With a heavy breath, he lifted her in his hands, with his hand around her shoulders and under her knees, he sighed.

'How romantic!'

'Nothing romantic in this!'

'It is!'

'He is just carrying his friend! A kind of help!'

'Don't you see the emotion in his eyes!'

'I think you are just overthinking!'

'Whatever you say, I'm 110% sure that it's not just friendship!'

He called for the watchman to come and open the door.

"Thank you!" He said as he entered the empty verandah of the mansion "Please bring the bags from jeep!" He asked.

Getting his reply, he moved towards the decorated stairs and climbed it holding her.

As he looked at her face, a sad look crossed his face with him murmuring "If only you felt the same thing as me!" And ended with a heavy breath that touched her face as she stirred in his hand and took hold of his collar in her sleep.

'What was that?'

'What was what?'

'His words?'

'Are you asking me to repeat?" Mind questioned.

'It's just I'm not sure if I heard it right!'

'I heard it too!'

'You see now! I was telling the truth!'

'Hmmm but then his friendship talk!'

'He is trying his best to be her friend but deep down his feeling are same for her!'

'I get it's

"What happened to Didi?" Imli questioned getting out of her sleep, seeing her sister being carried to their room.

"Tiered and slept! I think she is not in a mood to get up now!"

She smiled and moved away to let them in.

Putting her on bed, he whispered "Sweet dreams" while removing her hand from his coat.

"Hmmm" she hummed as she strongly held it in her left hand.

He tried to break free but that wasn't a possible job with her sleeping peaceful.

Giving up, taking care of not waking her, he removed his coat and left it near her.

Chakor who was in deep sleep, turned on the other side, taking it along with her, hugging it as if it's the most precious thing on the earth.

As he turned to go out, he witnessed his new family member to smile widely at them.

Shrugging his shoulders, with a simple smile adorning his lips, wishing her "Night", he exited the room. And that too not before informing her that all the marriage dresses will be in the room next to theirs, where all the marriage materials are present.

'He seems happy!'

'He is!' his heart stated happily.

'You are too!'

'Heee'

Getting the things from downstairs and keeping them in their place, he made it up to his room to hit his bed to a peaceful slumber.

Next day arrived earlier than wished for the two beings who went for shopping.

Getting up, stretching her arms as far as she can, she removed the quilt to get down from bed but stopped mid-track sensing something stuck under her body weight.

Pulling it out, she eyes widen as she realize all the happening of yesterday.

'He dropped me in room!'

'Yup! He carried you up to here in his arms!'

'He left his jacket!'

'Yeah! Of course! You were holding it as if your life was dependent on it!'

'What he would have thought of me?'

'A crazy sleepy head!' her heart replied!

"Finally you are up Di!" her little sister exclaimed as she entered the room "Oh the jacket! Di! You were so tiered yesterday that Vivaan's bro brought you here!" she continued as she put the bags on bed and opened the first bag which made her eyes widen "This is stunning Di!"

Chakor who was lost in her thoughts came back to earth to witness the excitement in the eyes of her little sister, seeing her bridal dress.

"Thank you so so much Di!" leaving it on bed, she went and hugged her sister who returned the hug.

Once she got to see all the dresses, she put back everything and picked 2 bags and started to move.

"Imli!" the elder one called as she got out of bed with his jacket in her hand "Where are you going?"

"To give them their bags of dresses!"

"Leave it! I will take it to their room! You start to get ready!" as she put the jacket in the nearby table before going to start her day.

He, on the other side who got awaken by his father, started to put the list of things to be done.

"Come in!" he said as he heard a knock on the door.

"Sorry to disturb you!"

"No thank you! No sorry between friends!" he said as he locked his phone and closed the sheet of paper.

She simply smiled as she passed the cleaned and speed dried jacket of his "i think I need to thank"

"Nope!" he cut in "I just did my job!" taking his thing back.

"Here is your dress!" she said and he nodded taking it "See you in few minutes!"

"Yeah!" he passed a smile as she left his room to go to the next room.

And the preparations went in full swing with everyone doing their respective jobs.

Bride and groom are ready, priest arrived and started to prepare everything, the elder of family welcoming the guests and the youngsters running here and there doing their work.

"Suraj uncle!" a little girl of around 6 years old stopped the man who was running to get his brother to the altar.

"Yes Pakhi!" he said, stopping near her.

"Can you please help me put this kumkum mehndi in my right hand pleaseee!" she asked with her sweet voice accompanied with her baby face which will melt anyone.

"Of course dear!" he neared her as he stood taking support of the railing where the small bottle cap with the kumkum liquid was placed "Why kumkum? Wait! I will get you mehndi!" he started to move but stopped hearing the little girl.

"No uncle!" he looked at her as she continued "This will dry easily! I heard Maa once say when she was helping Rachi di for her dance competition!"

"Oh I see!" he said as he dipped the cotton bud in it and started to apply "I see that you have applied on the other hand!"

"Yup!" she grinned "I did it all alone! So easy!" as she showed him his hand while he was filling her last finger "Do you like it?"

"It is lovely!" he said as he pulled her cheek which made her giggle with her hand hitting the bottle cap, making it fall on the other side.

Seeing it falling, Suraj tried his best to catch it but ended up pulling the flower garlands under him, which was connected to the flower garlands over him.

"Oh no!" he exclaimed as he witnessed what happened downstairs! Just to see a lady to be adorned with the garland as the bottle cap hit her forehead before falling on the ground.

"I'm sorry!" Paakhi said as she ran away hearing her mother call her.

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Thank you buddies for reading this!

Hope you all liked it!

Any guess who the lady can be!

See you all with the next part!

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Next part : Part 30 : Mariage

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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